Units 4-6单元主题写作（制度、动物、家庭生活）（满分范文20篇）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、书面表达
1．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Jim来信询问中国家规的情况，请你根据所给提示，给他写封信，谈谈你家都有哪些家规，你对这些家规有什么看法，并讲一讲原因。
提示：1. 饭后要洗碗；
2. 九点之前必须上床睡觉；
3. 不能看电视或玩电脑游戏。
要求：1. 内容要包括所有提示，并可适当发挥；
2. 不少于60词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Jim,
How is it going I have some rules at home.
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【答案】
例文
Dear Jim,
How is it going I have some rules at home. For example, I should do the dishes after dinner. I must go to bed before 9 o’clock. I can’t watch TV or play computer games. I think some rules are useful, but some are too strict. I agree that I should do the dishes after dinner and it’s good for me to go to bed before 9 o’clock.
However, I don’t agree that I can’t watch TV or play computer games, because I really want to have a more relaxing life. I hope I will be allowed to watch TV or listen to music for a while on weekends.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇信件；
② 时态：时态为一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作内容提示已给出，考生要注意不要遗漏内容提示中的信息，并且要在内容提示的基础上适当发挥，使文章内容更加丰满。
[写作步骤]
第一步：陈述在家里有哪些家规；
第二步：陈述自己对于这些家规的看法；
第三步：讲述自己同意或不同意具体某项家规的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①for example例如
②be good for...对……有好处
③be allowed to do sth.被允许做某事
[高分句型]
①I think some rules are useful, but some are too strict.（but引导的并列句）
②I agree that I should do the dishes after dinner and it’s good for me to go to bed before 9 o’clock.（that引导的宾语从句及and引导的并列句）
2．现在是晚上七点钟，假如你是Grace，请根据表格内容，以“What are my family doing ”为题，用英文写一篇短文，描述你的一家人正在做的活动。
Who What
Father Drink tea
Mother Clean the room
I Listen to music
Brother Play games
Grandparents Watch TV
◎学法指导: 不要直接罗列人物正在做的活动，可用It’s seven o’clock开头引出。
What are my family doing
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【答案】例文：
What are my family doing
It’s seven o’clock. My family finished dinner just now. Now we all do our own things.
My father is drinking tea. He likes drinking tea. My mother is cleaning the room. She is a tidy woman. My brother is playing games in his room. And my grandparents are watching TV. They like watching the news. Guess what I am doing. I am listening to music because I think music can make me relaxed.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍家人正在做的活动，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用现在进行时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
3．假设你所在的城市有一个大动物园，周末你常去那儿。那里有很多动物，如大象、 老虎、熊猫、狮子和长颈鹿。你认为这些动物不快乐，它们应该生活在森林中，应该享受自由。
参考词汇：in the cages在笼子里，in the forest在森林里。80词左右
Animals in the Zoo
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【答案】例文：
Animals in the Zoo
There is a big zoo in our city. It isn’t far from my home. On weekends, my father often takes me to the zoo. There I can see many kinds of animals like elephants, tigers, pandas, monkeys, lions and giraffes. They are from different places. Because some of them are dangerous, they have to live in the cages. I think they aren’t happy because they aren’t free. They should live in the forest.
【详解】1、题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时应先介绍你所在的城市有一个大动物园，然后介绍动物园里的动物，最后介绍你对这些动物生活在动物园的看法，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍动物园动物时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
4．在你家附近的动物园里，有一头小象叫Larry。请根据以下内容提示介绍一下Larry。
内容提示：
1. 来自非洲；
2. 喜欢吃水果；
3. 喜欢玩水；
4. ……
要求：
1. 语句通顺、连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 词数60左右。
提示词：tall 高；nose 鼻子；ear 耳朵；teeth 牙齿
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【答案】参考范文
There is a baby elephant in the zoo near my home. Its name is Larry. It comes from Africa. It’s seven years old. It likes eating fruit. It’s friendly to people and it likes playing with water. It also likes playing with the children.
It is tall and has a long nose and four legs. It has two long teeth, too. It has two big ears. I like it very much.
【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生根据提示的内容要点，写一篇短文介绍动物园里的小象Larry，属于给材料作文。
2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应该用第三人称，以一般现在时为主，以第一人称为辅进行叙述。写作中紧扣要点提示，写清楚小象的名字、喜欢的食物和活动以及性格特点，最后表达喜爱之情。行文注意主谓一致和上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。
5．现在是晚上七点钟，格林夫人的四个孩子都在家里。你想知道他们在做什么吗？请看图，然后写一篇60词左右的短文介绍一下他们正在做的事情。
Simon Maria
Tony Sonia
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【答案】例文：
What Are They Doing
Now it’s 7 o’clock in the evening. Mrs. Green’s four children Simon, Maria, Tony and Sonia are all at home. What are they doing Well, Simon is watching TV in the living room. Maria is also in the living room. She’s reading a book. Tony is playing with his dog. Look! He is having a good time. What’s Sonia doing Oh, she is washing the dishes. They are all happy.
【详解】1. 题干解读：现在是晚上七点，根据图片提示，分别介绍格林夫人的四个孩子正在做的事情：Simon在看电视；Maria在读书；Tony在跟狗玩；Sonia在洗碗。题目自拟。
2. 写作指导：本文应采用第三人称来叙述，时态应采用现在进行时为主，一般现在时为辅。可以用一段来介绍。注意语句连贯，不要有语法错误。
6．星期天，天气晴朗。上午，Tom和父母来到公园（park），他们看到很多人，有的在喝茶，有的在唱歌，有的在跳舞，有的孩子在一起嬉戏，有的……。
请你展开想象的翅膀，根据情景写一篇短文。
要求：1. 语句通顺、连贯；
2. 词数50左右。
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【答案】参考范文
It’s Sunday today. The weather is sunny. On this morning, Tom is having fun with his parents in the park. There are many people in the park. Some children are playing games. Some boys are playing soccer. What about the girls Look! They are singing and dancing under a big tree. Some women are drinking tea together. All of them look happy.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，内容是根据所给的材料，介绍一下Tom和父母在公园里所看到的情况，然后展开想象，根据情景写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述作文内容；时态采用现在进行时为主；首先介绍今天的天气；然后介绍人们的活动情况；最后描述人们的心情。
7．假如你是Jim，现在是晚上7点钟，请根据下列表格介绍一下你和你的家人正在做什么。
爷爷和爸爸 下国际象棋 在起居室
奶奶 看电视 在沙发上
妈妈 听音乐 在她的床上
姐姐 打电话 在她的卧室
哥哥 看书 在他的房间里
妹妹 玩玩具 在地上
你 做家庭作业 在课桌旁
要求：1. 语句通顺，连贯。
2. 词数60左右。
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【答案】例文：
Hi, I’m Jim. Look! This is my family. It’s seven o’clock in the evening. Let’s see what we are doing. My grandpa and my father are playing chess in the living room. My grandma is watching TV on the sofa. My mother is listening to music on her bed. My sister is talking to her friend on the phone. She is in her bedroom. Where is my brother He is reading a book in his room. My sister is only three years old. She is playing with toys on the floor. What about me I am doing my homework at the desk. Everyone is busy.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据题目要求介绍吉姆及其家人正在做的事情。
2.写作指导：本文时态以现在进行时为主，第三人称为主，介绍吉姆及其家人正在做的事情要叙述完整，条理清晰。
8．今天是星期天，史密斯一家人都在家。现在是下午4点，他们正在做不同的事情。请你根据下面表格中的内容，写一篇不少于60词的短文。
史密斯先生 看报纸
史密斯夫人 做蛋糕
珍妮 和朋友琳达一起看电视
弗兰克 和朋友吉姆一起打电脑游戏
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【答案】例文
It is Sunday today. The Smiths are all at home. It’s 4:00 in the afternoon. Mr. Smith is sitting on a chair and reading a newspaper. Mrs. Smith is making a cake. Jenny and her friend Linda are watching TV in her room. Frank and his friend Jim are playing computer games. They are having a good time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“现在进行时”为主；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍史密斯一家人在周日下午四点的活动，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍史密斯一家人在周日下午四点的活动；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①at home在家
②have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①Mr. Smith is sitting on a chair and reading a newspaper. (现在进行时)
9．每个人都有自己所喜爱的宠物，那你的宠物是什么呢？请把它介绍给老师和同学们。注意：写出它的特征及你所喜爱的原因，60词左右。
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【答案】例文
My favorite animal is the dog. There are two dogs in my house. They are Qiangqiang and Zhuangzhuang. Qiangqiang is white, and Zhuangzhuang is black. They are very cute. I like them very much. When I come home from school, they will come to welcome me. Every day, my parents and I go out for a walk with them. They like going out. They like to eat meat. They are my good friends.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文，描写自己喜爱的动物；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据题干，考生注意不要遗漏“它的特征及你所喜爱的原因”这一点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体介绍自己喜欢的动物；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，分点描述该动物的特点和喜欢的原因；
第三步，书写结语，表达对该动物的喜爱之情。
[亮点词汇]
① come home 来自
② go out for a walk 散步
③ like to do 喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
① When I come home from school, they will come to welcome me. （when引导的时间状语从句）
② Every day, my parents and I go out for a walk with them. （go out for a walk散步的短语）
10．请根据下面的提示，以“My Favorite Animal”为题写一篇 60 词左右的短文。参考词汇：elephant, from Africa, cute, food, banana, relax, 4 hours
My Favorite Animal
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【答案】例文：
My Favorite Animal
I like all the animals, and they are our friends. But elephants are my favorite among all animals.
There is an elephant in the city zoo. It is from Africa. It is cute because it has a long nose. Its favorite food is bananas. It spends 4 hours relaxing every day. Elephants are endangered animals. We all should protect them.
Do you like elephants What kind of animals do you like best
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“My Favorite Animal”为题介绍自己最喜欢的动物，根据提示词可知要介绍的是大象。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己最喜欢大象；
第二步，具体介绍大象；
第三步，简单收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①among 在……之中
②be from 来自
③spend time doing sth. 花费时间做某事
[高分句型]
①There is an elephant in the city zoo.（There be句型）
②It is cute because it has a long nose.（because引导原因状语从句）
11．我们生活在一个大家庭里，遵守公共场所里的规章制度很重要。请以“I went to___________”为题，并根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
1. 要点：1）你去了哪里；2）那里有哪些规章制度，你在那里做了些什么；3）你的感受。
2. 要求：1）补全题目；2）文中不要出现真实姓名和学校名称；3）词数70左右。
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【答案】
I went to the zoo
Last Sunday, I went to the zoo with my friends. It was hot and sunny that day. It took us about two hours to get there by bus. There were thousands of people in the zoo. We saw lots of animals, such as pandas, kangaroos, giraffes, elephants, tigers and so on. But there were a lot of rules for visiting the zoo. We were not allowed to feed animals, because it might be bad for their health. Besides, taking photos with the flash on was banned, for this can make animals afraid. We didn’t go home until 5:00 in the afternoon. I was tired but I felt happy.
【详解】题干解读：本题属于半命题作文，依据要点介绍自己去了哪里，那里有哪些规章制度，自己做了什么以及感受。
写作指导：时态用一般过去时，人称用第一人称；写作首先要补全题目，然后根据要点提示介绍去了哪里和做了什么；然后是介绍那里的规章制度；最后谈自己的感受。注意语句通顺、语法正确、内容完整、条理清晰。
12．假如你是李华，交换生Mary下周要来你们学校学习。请你给她发一封邮件，向她介绍一下你们学校的校规。
要求：不少于40词。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。）
Dear Mary,
How’s it going I’m very glad to hear you are coming to our school.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope to see you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mary,
How’s it going I’m very glad to hear you are coming to our school. My name is Li Hua. I want to tell you something about our school rules. You can’t arrive late for class. Don’t fight with others. You have to keep the classroom clean and tidy. Keep quiet in the library. You can’t eat in the classroom, but you can eat in the dining hall. Don’t listen to music in the hallways. And you have to go home on time after school. School rules are helpful to us. I hope you will like our school.
I hope to see you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头；内容是给交换生Mary发一封邮件，向她介绍一下你们学校的校规。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第二人称来叙述邮件内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，描写校规部分要具体详细。可适当发挥使行文连贯，最后确保语句通顺，条理清晰，无单词语法错误。
13． 假如你是张佩，请根据提示内容，给你的网友Julie写一封电子邮件，告诉她你们学校的校规。
提示：按时到校；不得在走廊里乱跑；见到老师要问好；不得在课堂上吃东西或吵闹；不得把音乐播放器带到学校；每天要打扫教室。
要求：70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Julie,
Thanks for your letter. You want to know about my school rules. Well, let me tell you._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Zhang Pei
【答案】例文
Dear Julie,
Thanks for your letter. You want to know about my school rules. Well, let me tell you.
There are many rules in my school. We must get to school on time. We can’t run in the hallways. When we see our teachers, we must say hello to them. We can’t talk or eat in class. And we can’t bring music players to school. We also have to clean our classroom every day. I don’t like these rules, but I have to follow them. I know they can help me a lot.
What about you Do you have so many rules
Yours,
Zhang Pei
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍学校有很多规则；
第二步，具体叙述这些规则；
第三步，最后询问对方学校的规则。
[亮点词汇]
① get to school到校
② on time准时
③ have to必须
[高分句型]
When we see our teachers, we must say hello to them. （when引导的时间状语从句）
14．假如你是Alice，请你根据下面的提示介绍一下你们班的班规，并说明你对这些班规的看法。不少于60词，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
要点提示：
①before class: don’t be late for class; be on time
②in class: don’t talk loudly; don’t eat or drink in class; don’t play games or listen to music
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【答案】例文
My name is Alice. There are too many rules in our class. We can’t be late for class. We must get to school on time. In class, we can’t talk loudly. We can’t eat or drink in class. We can’t play games or listen to music in class. Some of the rules are strict, but I think they are useful. So we must follow them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题；
第二步，具体介绍班规；
第三步，表达自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①too many太多
②be late for迟到
③listen to music听音乐
[高分句型]
Some of the rules are strict, but I think they are useful.（并列句）
15．近来，为了进一步加强学生在校的管理，许多学校制定了新的校规。假如你是李华，请你根据下面表格的内容提示，用英文给你的笔友Mark写一封信，介绍你校的新校规，并谈谈你对新校规的看法。
作业 按时完成 手机 禁止进校
睡眠 约9小时 阅读 一周一本好书
锻炼 一天1小时 安全 1.不打架 2.……（至少补充一点）
你的看法 ……
写作要求：
1.内容必须包含所给要点，并适当发挥；
2.词数70左右。开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Mark,
How’s it going I’m glad to share my new school rules with you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
What about your school rules Please write soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One Possible Version：
Dear Mark,
How’s it going I’m glad to share my new school rules with you.
We must finish our homework on time. We can’t bring mobile phones to school. We had better get about 9 hours’ sleep a day. We must read a good book once a week. Doing exercise is also important. We must do exercise an hour a day. We must keep safe first. Don’t fight with each other and never go swimming alone. I think these school rules are good for us. We must follow them.
What about your school rules Please write soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出对校规的介绍；
第二步，具体介绍有哪些校规以及对校规的看法；
第三步，书写结语，询问对方的校规。
[亮点词汇]
①on time准时
②had better最好
③keep safe保证安全
[高分句型]
①Don’t fight with each other and never go swimming alone.（祈使句）
②I think these school rules are good for us.（省略that的宾语从句）
16．俗话说的好，“没有规矩，不成方圆。”日常生活中我们有家规，有班规。请你从健康、学习、生活等方面用英语写一篇60词左右的班规小短文，内容需包括以下要点：
1.What are the rules
2.Why do you make these rules
Rules are everywhere.
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【答案】例文
School Rules
Rules are everywhere. There are many rules in my school. We must wear school uniforms to school . We must go to school on time. In class, We can’t talk or eat, so we have to be quiet and listen to the teachers carefully. After class, we can’t run in the hallway or fight with classmates, and we should get on well with others. Also, we have to take exercise every day to keep healthy.
School rules are good for our study. We must follow the rules.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求根据所给的问题提示要点，写一篇作文介绍下日常生活中的规矩。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第一人称为主。写作时需从健康、学习、生活等方面来介绍什么是规矩，为什么有这些规矩。行文时力求语句通顺，无单词语法错误，逻辑清晰。
17．今天是周六，王涛在家做作业。他的爸爸、妈妈、妹妹和爷爷都在家。请根据图片写一篇英文小短文介绍一下这一家人在做什么，可以适当发挥想像，词数70以上。
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【答案】例文
It’s Saturday today. Wang Tao and his family are all at home. Wang Tao is doing his homework. His father is reading newspapers. His grandfather likes watching TV very much. He is watching the NBA now. Wang Tao’s mother is cooking lunch in the kitchen. Where is Wang Tao’s sister Oh, she is painting in the garden!
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时要根据图片提示的内容，叙述这一家人都在干什么，包括王涛、爸爸、爷爷、妈妈和妹妹。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述图画内容；时态采用现在进行时；在叙述内容时，语言要精练，内容要完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
18．请根据下面提示写一篇英语短文，介绍一下北京动物园（Beijing Zoo)。
提示：
1．北京动物园在北京西城区（Xicheng District），每天7:30开馆；
2．园内大约有15,000只动物，有来自南非的狮子、澳大利亚的树袋熊、中国的大熊猫等；
3．每年大约有600万名游客到此参观。
要求：1．语句通顺，语意连贯，无语法错误；
2．60词左右。
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【答案】例文
Beijing Zoo is a very big zoo. It's in the Xicheng District. It is open at 7:30 every morning. The tickets sell at a good price. There are about 15,000 animals in the zoo. There are lions from South Africa, koalas from Australia, pandas from China and so on. They are very cute. Every year about 6,000,000 people visit the zoo. If you have time, please come and visit it.
【详解】1.题干解读：根据提示内容，介绍一下北京动物园。介绍北京动物园的位置、开放时间、园内动物的种类以及数量、每年到此地参观的游客数量等。
2.写作指导：本文是对北京动物园的介绍，时态采用一般现在时；写作时，句型上可采用there be句型来写，写作中，注意名词单复数的运用、主语是否是第三人称单数等，使文章通顺、连贯、无语法错误。
19．憨态可掬的熊猫是中国的国宝，人们都喜欢它们。请你根据表格中的信息写一篇英语短文，把这只熊猫介绍给你的好朋友。
要求：不少于60词。
Name Xiaoxiao
Age Six
Appearance (外表) Black and white Two big eyes Gentle (温和的) and cute
Favorite food Bamboo
Hobbies Climb (爬) trees and swim
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【答案】参考例文
There is a zoo in our city. I often go there on weekends. There is a panda in the zoo. I like her very much, because she is kind of interesting. Her name is Xiaoxiao. She is six years old. She is black and white. She has two big eyes. She is very gentle and cute, so people all like her very much. Her favorite food is bamboo. She likes climbing trees and swimming in the water. Isn’t she interesting
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容介绍熊猫Xiaoxiao，注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时主要以第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。要分别介绍熊猫的姓名、年龄、外表、最喜欢的食物和爱好。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
20．根据下列提示写一篇60词左右的英语短文，介绍一下广州动物园（Guangzhou Zoo）。
广州动物园
位置 广州市中心（in the center of…）
动物 1. 大约5000只； 2. 有熊猫、猴子、树袋熊、老虎、狮子、长颈鹿、大象等； 3. 动物来自世界各地，如大象和狮子来自非洲，熊猫来自中国，树袋熊来自澳大利亚。
参观人数 每天大约一万人
门票 20元
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【答案】例文
Guangzhou Zoo is in the center of the city of Guangzhou. There are about 5,000 animals in the zoo. There are pandas, monkeys, koalas, tigers, lions, giraffes, elephants and many other animals in the zoo. The animals are from all around the world. The elephants and the lions are from Africa. The pandas are from China and the koalas are from Australia. About 10,000 people visit the zoo every day. The price of the ticket is 20 yuan.
【详解】1.题干解析：本文是一篇材料作文。要求写一篇60字左右的英语短文，介绍广州动物园的相关信息，表格中的内容需要全部写在文章中，不要遗漏。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时，人称采用第三人称，文章的行文顺序可以按照表格给出的顺序来写，注意逻辑通顺；注意句型和短语的运用，增加文章亮点，不要出现单词拼写和语法错误。Units 4-6单元主题写作（制度、动物、家庭生活）（满分范文20篇）（原卷版）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、书面表达
1．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Jim来信询问中国家规的情况，请你根据所给提示，给他写封信，谈谈你家都有哪些家规，你对这些家规有什么看法，并讲一讲原因。
提示：1. 饭后要洗碗；
2. 九点之前必须上床睡觉；
3. 不能看电视或玩电脑游戏。
要求：1. 内容要包括所有提示，并可适当发挥；
2. 不少于60词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Jim,
How is it going I have some rules at home.
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2．现在是晚上七点钟，假如你是Grace，请根据表格内容，以“What are my family doing ”为题，用英文写一篇短文，描述你的一家人正在做的活动。
Who What
Father Drink tea
Mother Clean the room
I Listen to music
Brother Play games
Grandparents Watch TV
◎学法指导: 不要直接罗列人物正在做的活动，可用It’s seven o’clock开头引出。
What are my family doing
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3．假设你所在的城市有一个大动物园，周末你常去那儿。那里有很多动物，如大象、 老虎、熊猫、狮子和长颈鹿。你认为这些动物不快乐，它们应该生活在森林中，应该享受自由。
参考词汇：in the cages在笼子里，in the forest在森林里。80词左右
Animals in the Zoo
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4．在你家附近的动物园里，有一头小象叫Larry。请根据以下内容提示介绍一下Larry。
内容提示：
1. 来自非洲；
2. 喜欢吃水果；
3. 喜欢玩水；
4. ……
要求：
1. 语句通顺、连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 词数60左右。
提示词：tall 高；nose 鼻子；ear 耳朵；teeth 牙齿
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5．现在是晚上七点钟，格林夫人的四个孩子都在家里。你想知道他们在做什么吗？请看图，然后写一篇60词左右的短文介绍一下他们正在做的事情。
Simon Maria
Tony Sonia
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6．星期天，天气晴朗。上午，Tom和父母来到公园（park），他们看到很多人，有的在喝茶，有的在唱歌，有的在跳舞，有的孩子在一起嬉戏，有的……。
请你展开想象的翅膀，根据情景写一篇短文。
要求：1. 语句通顺、连贯；
2. 词数50左右。
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7．假如你是Jim，现在是晚上7点钟，请根据下列表格介绍一下你和你的家人正在做什么。
爷爷和爸爸 下国际象棋 在起居室
奶奶 看电视 在沙发上
妈妈 听音乐 在她的床上
姐姐 打电话 在她的卧室
哥哥 看书 在他的房间里
妹妹 玩玩具 在地上
你 做家庭作业 在课桌旁
要求：1. 语句通顺，连贯。
2. 词数60左右。
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8．今天是星期天，史密斯一家人都在家。现在是下午4点，他们正在做不同的事情。请你根据下面表格中的内容，写一篇不少于60词的短文。
史密斯先生 看报纸
史密斯夫人 做蛋糕
珍妮 和朋友琳达一起看电视
弗兰克 和朋友吉姆一起打电脑游戏
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9．每个人都有自己所喜爱的宠物，那你的宠物是什么呢？请把它介绍给老师和同学们。注意：写出它的特征及你所喜爱的原因，60词左右。
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10．请根据下面的提示，以“My Favorite Animal”为题写一篇 60 词左右的短文。参考词汇：elephant, from Africa, cute, food, banana, relax, 4 hours
My Favorite Animal
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11．我们生活在一个大家庭里，遵守公共场所里的规章制度很重要。请以“I went to___________”为题，并根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
1. 要点：1）你去了哪里；2）那里有哪些规章制度，你在那里做了些什么；3）你的感受。
2. 要求：1）补全题目；2）文中不要出现真实姓名和学校名称；3）词数70左右。
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12．假如你是李华，交换生Mary下周要来你们学校学习。请你给她发一封邮件，向她介绍一下你们学校的校规。
要求：不少于40词。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。）
Dear Mary,
How’s it going I’m very glad to hear you are coming to our school.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope to see you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
13． 假如你是张佩，请根据提示内容，给你的网友Julie写一封电子邮件，告诉她你们学校的校规。
提示：按时到校；不得在走廊里乱跑；见到老师要问好；不得在课堂上吃东西或吵闹；不得把音乐播放器带到学校；每天要打扫教室。
要求：70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Julie,
Thanks for your letter. You want to know about my school rules. Well, let me tell you._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Zhang Pei
14．假如你是Alice，请你根据下面的提示介绍一下你们班的班规，并说明你对这些班规的看法。不少于60词，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
要点提示：
①before class: don’t be late for class; be on time
②in class: don’t talk loudly; don’t eat or drink in class; don’t play games or listen to music
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15．近来，为了进一步加强学生在校的管理，许多学校制定了新的校规。假如你是李华，请你根据下面表格的内容提示，用英文给你的笔友Mark写一封信，介绍你校的新校规，并谈谈你对新校规的看法。
作业 按时完成 手机 禁止进校
睡眠 约9小时 阅读 一周一本好书
锻炼 一天1小时 安全 1.不打架 2.……（至少补充一点）
你的看法 ……
写作要求：
1.内容必须包含所给要点，并适当发挥；
2.词数70左右。开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Mark,
How’s it going I’m glad to share my new school rules with you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
What about your school rules Please write soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
16．俗话说的好，“没有规矩，不成方圆。”日常生活中我们有家规，有班规。请你从健康、学习、生活等方面用英语写一篇60词左右的班规小短文，内容需包括以下要点：
1.What are the rules
2.Why do you make these rules
Rules are everywhere.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
17．今天是周六，王涛在家做作业。他的爸爸、妈妈、妹妹和爷爷都在家。请根据图片写一篇英文小短文介绍一下这一家人在做什么，可以适当发挥想像，词数70以上。
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18．请根据下面提示写一篇英语短文，介绍一下北京动物园（Beijing Zoo)。
提示：
1．北京动物园在北京西城区（Xicheng District），每天7:30开馆；
2．园内大约有15,000只动物，有来自南非的狮子、澳大利亚的树袋熊、中国的大熊猫等；
3．每年大约有600万名游客到此参观。
要求：1．语句通顺，语意连贯，无语法错误；
2．60词左右。
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19．憨态可掬的熊猫是中国的国宝，人们都喜欢它们。请你根据表格中的信息写一篇英语短文，把这只熊猫介绍给你的好朋友。
要求：不少于60词。
Name Xiaoxiao
Age Six
Appearance (外表) Black and white Two big eyes Gentle (温和的) and cute
Favorite food Bamboo
Hobbies Climb (爬) trees and swim
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20．根据下列提示写一篇60词左右的英语短文，介绍一下广州动物园（Guangzhou Zoo）。
广州动物园
位置 广州市中心（in the center of…）
动物 1. 大约5000只； 2. 有熊猫、猴子、树袋熊、老虎、狮子、长颈鹿、大象等； 3. 动物来自世界各地，如大象和狮子来自非洲，熊猫来自中国，树袋熊来自澳大利亚。
参观人数 每天大约一万人
门票 20元
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