2024届高三英语二轮复习读后续写 Guardian Angel 导学案-（含答案）

Guardian Angel2024届江苏南附天一海门海安续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
We met at the Leeds Grenville SPCA. We were here to find the best fit for our little family of three. In my heart, however, I think I already knew which one was the right cat. Portia, a quiet brown tabby(斑猫), watched us with partially closed eyes, seemingly saying, “Take your time… and I know it’s going to be me.” As I neared her cage, one paw extended. Finally we decided to bring home a cat that day.
After a day or two of settling in, Portia became a sort of small and furry nanny to my kids. She would travel from room to room with us during the day, usually staying closest to my son. She wanted to sit where he sat, look out the windows from which he peered, and make courageous attempts to share whatever he was eating. At night, she would sprawl onto his lap during story time. We nicknamed her “Guardian Kitten”for the way she always wanted to be where he was, watching over him as if he were her own.
One day, I was gathering leaves while my child delighted in disturbing the piles. Portia was dozing on the porch, her ears sometimes shifting toward the sound of our voices. Then suddenly, from down the street, a desperate voice cried, “No! Come back here!” The phrase was repeated and the volume increased as the speaker drew closer. A Golden Retrieverignored his owner and reached my property first. In a split second it leaped over the low fence surrounding the front yard.
The dog rushed toward my son with boundless energy and body language that expressed that it wanted to play. “Puppy!” my son exclaimed, spreading his arms apart in a welcoming gesture. Unlike me, he was not aware that this dog would, at the very least, knock him down with its uncontained enthusiasm. And I wasn’t going to be able to close the space between us in time.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Para1: When I was wondering how to protect my son，a scream erupted behind me.
Para2: After a while, the owner arrived out of breath.
二、微情节设计
根据第一段段首句和第二段段首句确定第一段的故事发展阶段
角色 触发事件 情绪 动作/语言/心理
我 身后传来一声尖叫
猫
狗
我
根据第二段段首句和续写主题确定第二段的故事发展走向
角色 触发事件 情绪 动作/语言/心理
狗主人 来了
我
猫
三、连词成篇
Para1: When I was wondering how to protect my son，a scream erupted behind me.
(1)我吃了一惊，惊讶地瞪大了眼睛，因为Portia像一道闪电一样冲向我的儿子 （形容词作状语+主句+时间状语从句）
____________________________________________like a bolt of lightning.
(2)安静的棕色虎斑变成了愤怒的保护者，发出高亢的嘶嘶声，向入侵者伸出爪子。（主句+ and并列非谓语）
The quiet brown tabby transformed into a furious protector, ____________________________________________the invader.
(3)狗被这个小家伙突如其来的愤怒吓得目瞪口呆，停下了脚步，向院子里退了几步。（and并列谓语+形容词作状语）
______________________the sudden fury of______________________ , the Golden Retriver halted in its tracks and withdrew a few steps to the yard.
(4)我松了一口气，把儿子抱在怀里，谢天谢地，他安然无恙（形容词作状语+主句+定语从句）
______________________________________________________________thankfully .
(5)然而，Portia仍然把她警觉的目光锁定在那只正在撤退的狗身上。
Nevertheless, Portia still locked her alert gaze onto the retreating dog.
Para2: After a while, the owner arrived out of breath.
(6)狗主人对狗的骚扰感到非常羞愧，并向狗主人表示了深深的歉意，并在狗的项圈上系上了一条绳子。（and并列谓语+形容词作状语）
__________________________________________________________________disturbance, ____________________________________________was profusely apologetic and secured a leash onto the dog's collar.
(7)我向他保证没有造成伤害，他发誓要采取一切必要的预防措施，防止这一事件再次发生。（and并列两个谓语）
I reassured the owner that no harm was done, and he swore to take all necessary precautions to prevent a recurrence of this incident.
(8)他们刚离开，我就转向Portia，蹲在我们心爱的四条腿的家庭成员旁边。(一就倒装，非谓语）
_____________________________________________________________________
(9)我深情地抚摸着她，深深地感谢她的勇敢精神。（主句+形容词作状语）
__________________________________________________________________
(10)这只毛茸茸的猫依偎在我儿子身上，心满意足地摇着尾巴，就在那一刻，我突然意识到波西亚不仅仅是一只宠物。她是真正意义上的守护天使。（非谓语+强调句）
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________in the truest sense.
空格画横线的就是老师上课需要学生根据语料库进行填空的，这节课结束，学生可以掌握：用独立主格表达情绪，用分词作状语表达情绪，用形容词作状语表达情绪，以及“震惊，羞愧，感激，舒口气，开心”这些情绪固定的表达。这些句型是一篇续写的基石，学生要确保高级词汇、无语法错误精准地再考场中写出来。
Paral:When I was wondering how to protect my son,a scream erupted behind me.
(1)我吃了一惊，惊讶地瞪大了眼睛，因为Portia像一道闪电一样冲向我的儿子(形容词作状语+主句+时间状语从句)
Taken aback,my eyes widened in amazement as Portia darted towards my son like a bolt of lightning.
(2)安静的棕色虎斑变成了愤怒的保护者，发出高亢的嘶嘶声，向入侵者伸出爪子。(主句+and并列非谓语)
The quiet brown tabby transformed into a furious protector,emitting a high-pitched hiss and extending his outstretched paws towards the invader.
(3)狗被这个小家伙突如其来的愤怒吓得目瞪口呆，停下了脚步，向院子里退了几步。(and并列谓语+形容词作状语)
The dog,dumbfounded by the sudden fury of this tiny creature,halted in its tracks and withdrew a few steps to the yard.
我松了一口气，把儿子抱在怀里，谢天谢地，他安然无恙(形容词作状语+主句+定语从句)
Immensely relieved ,I scooped my son up in my arms,who was thankfully safe and sound.
然而，Portia仍然把她警觉的目光锁定在那只正在撤退的狗身上。
Nevertheless,Portia still locked her alert gaze onto the retreating dog.
Para2:After a while,the owner arrived out of breath.
(6)狗主人对狗的骚扰感到非常羞愧，并向狗主人表示了深深的歉意，并在狗的项圈上系上了一条绳子。
(and并列谓语+形容词作状语)
Incredibly ashamed of the disturbance,the owner was profusely apologetic and secured a leash onto the dog's collar.
(7)我向他保证没有造成伤害，他发誓要采取一切必要的预防措施，防止这一事件再次发生。(and并列两个谓语)
I reassured the owner that no harm was done,and he swore to take all necessary precautions to prevent are ocurrence of this incident.
(8)他们刚离开，我就转向Portia,蹲在我们心爱的四条腿的家庭成员旁边。(一就倒装，非谓语)Scarcely had they departed when I turned to Portia,crouching down beside our beloved four-leg family member.
(9)我深情地抚摸着她，深深地感谢她的勇敢精神。(主句+形容词作状语)
I stroked her affectionately,profoundly indebted for her courageous spirit.
(10)这只毛茸茸的猫依偎在我儿子身上，心满意足地摇着尾巴，就在那一刻，我突然意识到波西亚不仅仅是一只宠物。她是真正意义上的守护天使。(非谓语+强调句)
Snuggling against my son,the furry cat wagged her tail with contentment and it was at that very instant that it suddenly dawned on me that Portia more than a pet.She was a guardian angel in the truest sense.
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