高中英语译林版(2019)必修第一册应用文学案:建议信 及拓展(含答案)

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名称 高中英语译林版(2019)必修第一册应用文学案:建议信 及拓展(含答案)
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应用文(一)建议信
一、建议信写作
1. 写信原因及目的
Knowing that you are faced with the dilemma of ..., I am writing to offer some advice. 知道你面临着... ,的困境,我写信是为了提供一些建议。
You have asked me for advice with regard to/concerning...., and I’ll make some suggestions here. 你已经问了我关于.... ,的建议,我将在这里提出一些建议
2. 提出具体建议并说明原因;
To begin with, it would be wiser to do...
首先,这样做更明智。
Furthermore, you might as well give priority to what you are really interested in.
此外,你不妨优先考虑你真正感兴趣的东西。
Additionally, it's highly recommended to have brief conversations with close friends or trustworthy teachers, from whom you are bound to get confidence.
此外,强烈建议与亲密的朋友或值得信赖的老师进行简短的交谈,你一定会从他们那里获得信心。
Last but not least, seeking advice from your parents makes sense.
最后但同样重要的是,向你的父母寻求建议是有道理的。
3. 希望采纳建议,表达美好祝愿。
I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you and may you succeed.
我真诚地希望我的建议能对你有所帮助。祝你成功。
例 1 、假定你是李华, 你的英国好友 Jim 在申请大学过程中, 就专业选择产生了困惑, 写信向你求助。 请根据以下要点提示, 给 Jim 写一封回信:
1. 对Jim 的困惑表示理解; 2.给Jim 提出建议(至少两条); 3.表达祝福。 Dear Jim,
Knowing that you are faced with the dilemma of deciding on a proper college major, I am writing to offer some advice. 【写信目的】
You must feel as if you were all at sea, which I can, definitely, relate to. Calm down and clear your head. To begin with, list your possible choices and give priority to what you are really interested in. Furthermore, never should you ignore career prospects, which will affect your future employment. Last but not least, seeking advice from your parents makes sense. 【提出具体建议(并说明原因)】
I hope my advice will be of help and you will choose a desired major. 【希望采纳建议,表达美好祝 愿】
例 2 、假如你是李华,你的朋友 James 来信说,随着高考的临近,学习和心理压力日益加大,正常的学 习和生活受到了影响。请你用英文给他写一封回信。
内容要点如下: 1.表示理解并给予安慰 2.提出建议并说明理由。
Dear James,
I am _________________________________________________________________(你的压力太大,影 响 了 你 的 学 习 和 生 活 , 我 很 难 过 ) . However, the situation can't be unchangeable if you ______________________________(采纳下列建议) .
To begin with, ______________________________________( 学 习 和 休 息 之 间 保 持 平 衡 ). __________________________________________________________( 只 工 作 不 玩 耍 聪 明孩 子 也变 傻). Additionally, ______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________ (强烈建议与亲密的朋友或值得信赖的老师进行简短的交谈), _____________________________________________________________(从他们那里你一定会增加信心). Most importantly, you’ll be ___________________________ (更有条理)and __________________________ ________________________________________(不太可能受到压力的影响) ifyou __________________________________________________(制定一个有规律的学习计划).
Please _______________________________( 考 虑 我 的 建 议 ). I ____________________( 我 深 信 ) everything _____________________________(一切最后都会好的) and may you succeed this summer.
例 3 、为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的 编辑 Jamie ,收到一封署名为 Worried 的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰: 近日容易发脾气, 使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容要点: 1. 表示理解并给予安慰; 2. 提出建议并说明理由。
1. 很遗憾得知你现在很难控制住自己的脾气。这样的问题很正常,可能下面的建议会有帮助。
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______________________________________________________________________________________2. 首先,跟你信任的人谈你的感受。这样能释放你的愤怒,又不伤害到别人或自己。
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3. 另外,多和朋友进行户外运动也是一种有效的方式。
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4. 最重要的是, 对你的未来保持积极的心态, 这对提升你的情绪很有好处。
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5. 希望你不久就能冷静下来,恢复正常。
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例 4 、 假如你是李华,你的美国朋友 Jamie 发邮件告诉你他对中国传统文学非常感兴趣,但是在阅读时遇 到了很多困难, 比如很多汉字不认识, 读不懂文章的意思等, 他希望得到你的帮助。请用英文给 Jamie 回 邮件。内容要点如下: 1. 表示理解并给予安慰; 2. 提出建议并说明理由。
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整理词汇:
答案
例 2 、
1. awfully sorry that you are so stressed that it has affected your study and life
2. take the following suggestions
3. keep a balance between study and rest
4. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy
5. it's highly recommended to have brief conversations with close friends or trustworthy teachers(被动语态)
6. you are bound to get confidence (固定搭配优先)
7. more organized
8. less likely to be affected by pressure
9. make a regular learning schedule
10. take my suggestions into account
11. am convinced
12. everything will turn out all right in the end
例 3 、
1. 很遗憾得知你现在很难控制住自己的脾气。这样的问题很正常,这是一些建议能帮助你。 I’m sorry to know that you’re having trouble controlling your temper. Such problems are quite normal.
Here are some tips to help you.
2. 首先,跟你信任的人谈你的感受。这样能释放你的愤怒,又不伤害到别人或自己。
To begin with, talk to someone you trust about how you feel,which is a wise way to let your anger out without hurting others or yourself.
3. 另外,多和朋友进行户外运动也行得通。如果你身体上保持健康,它也有助于你改善心理健康。
Additionally, go outdoor activities with your friends makes sense. If you keep healthy physically, it will improve your mental health as well.
4. 最重要的是,建议对你的未来保持积极的心态,这对提升你的情绪很有好处。
Most importantly, remain a positive attitude towards life, which is of great benefit to lifting your spirits.
5. 希望你不久就能冷静下来,恢复正常。
Hopefully, you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.
例 4 、
Dear Jamie,
Glad to know that you’re interested in traditional Chinese literature. As a non-native speaker, such problems are quite normal, so there’s no need to feel upset. Here are some useful tips.
To begin with, turn to the Internet when in trouble, where you can learn how to read and write the characters. Additionally, you can learn from Chinese around and I'm always here to help. Most importantly, you should keep on learning and reading, in which case, you’ll surely make progress.
Hopefully, my advice will of benefit to you. Looking forward to your improvement.
Yours,
Li Hua
建议信拓展
关于亲子关系给出建议
P1:写作意图
得知你做某事遇到了困难,我很难过。这儿有些建议可以帮助你。
我想你能够成功,如果你能遵循如下建议。
P2: 提出建议(后接结果或解释)
首先,为什么不...
其次,我建议你...。那样的话...。
第三/最后但同样重要的是,做某事是个好主意。通过这么做,....。
P3:希望采纳(期盼回复,祝愿对方达成想要的结果,再次点题)
我希望你觉得这些建议是有用的。
我相信,有了你的努力,你会设法克服掉这些困难的。期盼收到你的回复。
补充句型:
8.你不妨做...
9.强烈推荐去做某事。(被动语态)
10.向你父母咨询意见也行得通。(动名词做主语)
三、 范文学习
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友汤姆来信告诉你他在学习汉语的过程中遇到一些困难并希望你给他提出建议。请你用英语给他写一封回信,提出你的建议和理由。
注意:
1.词数120左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
I've received your letter and ________________________________________________ (很高兴就如何学汉语给你提出建议).
First, you should ______________________ (对自己有信心). As is known to all, ________________________________________ (信心是做好任何事情的关键). Second, __________________ (为何不找一个朋友) to learn with you ____________________ (这样), you can practise speaking Chinese together. ____________________________ (你使用汉语越多), the better you will master it. Thirdly, ____________________ (这也许是个好主意) to do more reading. By doing so, you can ____________________ (扩大你的词汇量) and broaden your view, which is necessary to language learning.
____________________________ (我真心希望你会发现这些建议对你有用). With your efforts, I'm sure you will ____________________________ (取得进步).
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Tom,
I've received your letter and I'm_glad_to_give_you_some_advice_on_how_to_learn_Chinese.
First, you should have_confidence_in_yourself. As is known to all, confidence_is_the_key_to_doing_anything_well. Second, why_not_find_a_friend to learn with you In_this_way, you can practise speaking Chinese together. The_more_you_use_Chinese, the better you will master it. Thirdly, it_might_be_a_good_idea to do more reading. By doing so, you can enlarge_your_vocabulary and broaden your view, which is necessary to language learning.
I_do_hope_you_will_find_these_suggestions_useful_to_you. With your efforts, I'm sure you will make_progress.
Yours,
Li Hua
四、 即练即悟
假定你是李华,请根据晓东来信所反映的情况给他提出一些建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Hua,
I'm a student from Shuguang Senior High School. I have a problem. Although I try to talk to my classmates, I still find it hard to make good friends with them. So, I feel quite lonely sometimes. I do want to change the situation, but I don't know how. I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.
Yours,
Xiaodong
Dear Xiaodong,
I’m sorry you are having trouble making friends. Here are some tips to help you.
Firstly, why not take an active part in the discussions By doing this, you can show your own opinions and meanwhile learn to listen to other people’s views.
Secondly, it’s highly recommended to (I suggest that you should) learn about your classmates’ interests/hobbies/ what your classmates are interested in. Then you can have much in common with them/you can have a lot to share. In this way, you can get to know more different people and show them that you are just as friendly.
Thirdly, it would be a good idea to keep smiling every day, which can help you keep a positive attitude.
Follow my advice, and I believe you will get along well with others and make more friends.(结尾的“希望和祝福”不要用千篇一律的套话,而应该具体且有针对性。书信内容谈论的是什么——交友,就祝愿对方达成想要的结果——走出孤单,交到朋友,也就是再次点题)
易错:
Secondly, It’s highly ...
I suggest you to learn about ...
smile
Take an active part in...
增强句子逻辑性(在内容要点后,+结果、解释、补充说明)
常用技巧:in this way.../ by doing so../ which can.../ as a result.../ so that...
首先,跟你信任的人谈谈你的感受。+这样。。。
这样能释放你的愤怒,又不伤害到别人或自己。
To begin with, talk about how you feel with someone you trust. In this way, you can let your anger out without hurting others or yourself.
另外,和朋友户外锻炼也行得通。+ 。。。
通过身体上保持健康,你的心理健康也会得到改善。
What’s more, taking exercise outdoors with your friends makes sense. By keeping healthy physically, your mental health will be improved as well.
3. 最重要的是,建议对你的未来保持积极的心态。+ 。。。
这对提升你的情绪很有好处。
Most importantly, it’s recommended to remain a positive attitude towards life, which is of great benefit to lifting your spirits.