Unit 5 Good manners
单元写作指导与演练
近三年考情分析
话题 考查热度
介绍特定场合的礼仪
介绍日常礼仪
本单元写作要求同学们能用所学的词语和句型简单地介绍良好的礼仪。介绍的内容主要为礼仪的目的、时间场合、列举不良礼仪以及提出合理化建议等。在具体的写作中，学生应做到以下几点：
1. 能用一般现在时等正确的时态；
2. 能正确使用祈使句或者情态动词；
3. 能利用逻辑连接词等突出逻辑和层次；
4. 能有意识地使用多种句式丰富内容。
【词汇积累】
①餐桌文化_____________________
②不礼貌的_____________________
③握手_____________________
④制定计划_____________________
⑤ 最后但不是最不重要的_____________________
⑥ 记住去做某事_____________________
⑦就……发表讲话_____________________
⑧最好做某事_____________________
⑨眼神交流_____________________
⑩代替_____________________
对某人有礼貌_____________________
注意……_____________________
【参考答案】
①table manners
②impolite
③shake hands
④make plans
⑤ last but not least
⑥remember to do sth
⑦give a speech on
⑧had better do sth.
⑨make eye contact
⑩instead of
be polite to sb
pay attention to ...
【句式积累】
※ 开头句
1.我很高兴你能在寒假期间来看我。让我告诉你一些中国的餐桌礼仪。
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2.今天，我代表全班同学做一个题为“礼貌造就最好的学校”的演讲。
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3.我们将举行一次关于图书馆礼仪的讲座。
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4.在我们的日常生活中，做一个有礼貌的人是非常重要的。
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5.作为一名中学生，我们应该有礼貌。
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6.作为学生，我们有责任做一个有礼貌的人。
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【参考答案】
1.I’m happy that you can come to see me during the winter holiday. Let me tell you some Chinese table manners.
2.Today, on behalf of my class, I will give a speech on “Good manners make the nicest school”.
3.We are going to hold a talk on library manners.
4.It’s very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
5.As a middle school student, we should have good manners.
6.As students, it is our duty to be a person with good manners.
※ 中间句
1.为了表示尊敬，在老人动手之前，你不能用筷子。
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2.让别人久等并非不礼貌。
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3.至于家庭规则，你最好计划在朋友家里见他们。
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4.吃饭的时候，我们需要一只手拿着碗，另一只手夹着筷子。
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5.不用筷子的时候，我们可以把筷子放在桌子上，但不能玩筷子，也不能把筷子指向别人。
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6.在课堂上，我们认真听老师讲课并做一些笔记是非常重要的。
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7.更重要的是，为了打造一所最好的学校，我们应该避免一些不礼貌的行为，比如不小心扔垃圾和在课间休息时制造太多噪音。
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【参考答案】
1.To show respect, you mustn’t use your chopsticks before the old man starts.
2.Keeping others waiting is not impolite.
3.As for house rules, you’d better make plans to meet some friends at their home.
4.When we eat, we need to hold the bowl in one hand and chopsticks in the other.
5.When chopsticks are not in use, we can put them on the table, but we cannot play with them or point them at others.
6.In class, it’s very important for us to listen to the teachers carefully and take some notes.
7.What’s more, to make the nicest school, we should avoid some bad manners, such as throwing rubbish carelessly and making too much noise at the break.
※ 结尾句
1.希望这些东西对你有帮助，希望你在这里度过一个美好的学年！
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2.我期待着很快见到你。我会告诉你更多关于中国餐桌礼仪的知识。
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3.从现在起，如果我们每个人都尽自己的一份力量，我们的学校将成为最好的学校。
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4.这些规则很重要，因为它们能确保每个人在图书馆都感到舒适。
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5.只有这样，我们进步，成为有礼貌的人。
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6.总之，良好的礼貌可以带来改变，并带来更美好的未来。
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7.我希望每个人都知道一些餐桌礼仪，这样我们才能表现得更好。
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8.如果每个人都尽力做一个有礼貌的人，我们的社会就会变得和平，世界就会变得越来越美丽。
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【参考答案】
1.Hope these things will help you and hope you will have a good school year here!
2.I’m looking forward to meeting you soon. And I’ll tell you more about Chinese table manners.
3.If each of us does our part from now on, our school will become the nicest one.
4.These rules are important because they make sure that everyone feels comfortable in the library.
5.Only in this way can we be improved to be persons with good manners.
6.In a word, good manners can make a difference and lead to a better future.
7.I hope everyone knows some table manners so that we can behave better.
8.If everyone tries his best to be a person with good manners, our society will become peaceful and the world will be more and more beautiful.
【谚语积累】
1.Without learning manners, one cannot stand firm.
2.A person cannot live well without manners, things cannot be achieved without etiquette, and a country cannot be peaceful without etiquette
3.Manners are all about calming things down.
4.The most appetizing thing at a banquet is the host's manners.
5.If there are manners, it is safe; if not, it is dangerous
1.不学礼，无以立
2.人无礼则不生，事无礼则不成，国家无礼则不宁
3.礼仪周全能息事宁人。
4.在宴席上最让人开胃的就是主人的礼节。
5.有礼则安，无礼则危
【万能写作模板】
We will have a talk on good manners in __________（引出地点）. The purpose of the talk is to （引出目的）.
It will take place at （引出发言的时间和地点）.
There will be a lot of examples of what is right and wrong. You should always （引出礼仪的具体内容）. You should not （介绍不良礼仪）.
When you , you should . When you , remember to . Also, do nor forget to .
These rules are important because they will help everyone in feel comfortable.
请根据下列提示,以"Good Manners, Our Duty"为题,写一篇短文。提示：
(1) 遵守校纪，不乱扔废弃物，保持校园清洁；
(2)爱护花草树木，让校园充满绿色；
(3)不追逐哄闹，举止文明；
(4)关爱他人，让校园充满爱。
要求:
1)文中不得出现你的真实姓名和班级；
2)语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3)包含以上要点，并适当发挥，词数不少于80。
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【审题思路】
1、题干解读：题目要求以“Good Manners, Our Duty”为题,写一篇短文。要求包含所给提示，详细具体的写出作为学生应该有的礼貌和职责。
2、写作指导：本文应该以第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；描述学生的职责时，应详细具体，并且保证条理清晰。
【佳作欣赏】
Good Manners, Our Duty
As students, it is our duty to be a person with good manners. Good manners are very important in our lives. They help us to get on well with each other.
A person with good manners is kind and polite, and he does not laugh at people who are in trouble. Instead, he tries to help them. He knows to help others means to help himself. He doesn't throw rubbish everywhere and does what he can to keep the school clean and tidy. He takes care of trees and grass and makes the school full of green plants. He doesn't run after others and he acts politely.
If everyone tries his best to be a person with good manners, our society will become peaceful and the world will be more and more beautiful. Let's be a person with good manners.
一、选词填空
用方框中所给单词或短语的适当形式填空，使短文通顺、正确、连贯，每个单词或短语限用一次。
quiet, early, rule, make sure, until, with, advice, twelve, follow, polite
We are going to hold a talk on good table manners. The purpose of the talk is to teach students some 1 for eating.
It will take place at 10 a.m. on the 2 of May at the school hall. There will be a lot of 3 on table manners. We hope you will find the importance of them. Above all, you should sit 4 at the table. And you should not start eating 5 everyone is ready. Even when eating with families and close friends, it is 6 to make noise while eating or drinking. You should not eat loudly 7 your mouth open. Also do not reach over someone’s plate for something. If you finish eating 8 than others, wait for others to finish.
I think we’d better 9 these. They warn us against rude behavior. We should 10 that both guests and hosts are comfortable at the table.
【答案】
rules 2．twelfth 3．advice 4．quietly 5．until
6．impolite 7．with 8．earlier 9．follow 10．make sure
二、完成句子
11．在公共场合不要大声讲话。
Don’t talk aloud .
【答案】 in public
12．当你去国外时，知道如何礼貌求助是很重要的。
When you visit a foreign country, it is important to know how to for help .
【答案】 ask politely
13．到处扔垃圾是一个不好的习惯。(throw)
is a bad habit.
【答案】Throwing litter around
14．你的房间太乱了，你要保持整洁！
Your room is in a mess and you should .
【答案】keep tidy
三、翻译
15．作为一个学生，我们千万不要吸烟。
【答案】As a student, we mustn’t smoke.
16．眼神交流可以表达情感，例如友善、兴趣和理解。
【答案】Eye contact can express emotions such as friendliness, interest and understanding.
17．在公共场所我们必须排队依次等候。（place）
【答案】We must stand in a line and wait our turn in public place.
18．总之，过马路的时候你必须遵守交通规则。（in short）
【答案】In short, you must obey the traffic rules when crossing the road.
19．正如谚语所说，“入乡随俗”。
【答案】Just as the saying goes, “When in Rome, do as the Romans do.”
1．假如你是李华，你的笔友Paul明年就要作为交换生来中国交流学习了，他发来邮件想向你了解一些中国的习俗和礼仪，请你参考所给提示给Paul回一封邮件，帮助他更好地适应中国生活。
Dear,
How is it going
I am coming to China on an exchange program. I want to know more about Chinese customs(习俗) and what I should do or not. Can you help me
I’m looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Paul
提示：
table manners(礼仪) where to put the food, respect(尊重) the old
meeting people time, ways of greeting(问候)
house rules gifts, make plans
Dear Paul,
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【思路解读】
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，表明写作目的；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“餐桌礼仪、问候方式以及家规”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，表达期待。
【满分作文】
Dear Paul,
I’m glad to hear that news! Now I will tell you some customs in China.
In China, we have some table manners. For example, we always put our food on a plate or in a bowl. We never put our food on the table. And to show respect, you mustn’t use your chopsticks before the old man starts. Then, when you meet someone for the first time, it’s important to be on time. Keeping others waiting is not impolite. And it’s better to shake hands for greeting. As for house rules, you’d better make plans to meet some friends at their home. If you bring a gift, please remember, in China, we open a gift later!
Hope these things will help you and hope you will have a good school year here!
Yours,
Li Hua
【高分句型】
①Then, when you meet someone for the first time, it’s important to be on time.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②If you bring a gift, please remember, in China, we open a gift later!（If引导的条件状语从句）
2．寒假里，张琳的加拿大笔友Cindy将来中国旅游。应张琳之邀，她将去张琳家里做客。Cindy昨晚发邮件询问张琳中国的餐桌礼仪。假如你是张琳，请根据以下提示，用英语写一封不少于80词的邮件回复Cindy。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
中国的餐桌礼仪
用筷子吃饭 吃米饭时，一只手托碗，另一只手拿筷子
吃鸡腿时，可以用手或筷子 不用筷子时，可以放在桌上，但不能玩筷子或用筷子指着他人
尽量吃完自己碗中的食物 可以在桌上的盘里留一些食物
Dear Cindy,
I’m happy that you can come to see me during the winter holiday. Let me tell you some Chinese table manners.
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I’m looking forward to meeting you soon. And I’ll tell you more about Chinese table manners.
Yours,
Zhang Lin
【思路解读】
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰，无语法错误。
【写作步骤】
第一步，开门见山，将告诉对方中国的餐桌礼仪；
第二步，根据表格提示，具体介绍中国的一些餐桌礼仪；
第三步，表达希望。
【满分作文】
Dear Cindy,
I’m happy that you can come to see me during the winter holiday. Let me tell you some Chinese table manners.
We usually eat with chopsticks. When we eat, we need to hold the bowl in one hand and chopsticks in the other. While eating chicken legs, we can either use our hands or chopsticks. When chopsticks are not in use, we can put them on the table, but we cannot play with them or point them at others. In addition, we should try to finish the food in the bowl, but it is acceptable to leave some food on the plate on the table.
I’m looking forward to meeting you soon. And I’ll tell you more about Chinese table manners.
Yours,
Zhang Lin
【亮点词汇】
① in use 在使用中
② point at 指着
③ in addition 此外
【高分句型】
① While eating chicken legs, we can either use our hands or chopsticks.（either ... or 要么……要么……）
② but it is acceptable to leave some food on the plate on the table.（it固定句型）
3．本周学校将举行英语演讲比赛，主题为“践行文明礼仪，创设最美校园”。你将代表班级参赛，请你根据以下信息写一篇英文演讲稿。
Good manners at the school gate...
in the dinning hall...
in class...
...
Bad manners throw rubbish, make too much noise...
Advice ...
要求：
1. 演讲稿内容包含表格中所有要点，省略部分适当发挥。
2. 词数90词左右，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 语义通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，字迹工整。
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名，校名及地名。
Dear teachers and classmates,
Today, on behalf of my class, I will give a speech on “Good manners make the nicest school”. As a student,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【思路解读】
题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”的提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，表明写作意图。今天，我将代表全班同学做一个关于“礼貌造就最好的学校”的演讲（文章已给出）。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从好的行为、坏的行为等方面介绍文明礼仪，创设最美校园。
第三步，给出建议，结束全文。
【满分作文】
Dear teachers and classmates,
Today, on behalf of my class, I will give a speech on “Good manners make the nicest school”.
As a student, we should behave politely and properly. In the morning, when we meet our teachers and classmates at the school gate, we should greet them warmly. In class, it’s very important for us to listen to the teachers carefully and take some notes. At noon, when we go to the dining hall, we should queue for our turn. Moreover, if you go to the library, you’d better keep quiet and obey the rules.
What’s more, to make the nicest school, we should avoid some bad manners, such as throwing rubbish carelessly and making too much noise at the break. We shouldn’t step on the grass either when we play games.
We should try our best to do something for our school. If each of us does our part from now on, our school will become the nicest one.
【高分句型】
①In the morning, when we meet our teachers and classmates at the school gate, we should greet them warmly.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②If each of us does our part from now on, our school will become the nicest one.（if引导的条件状语从句）
4．请根据下面提示内容，以Good Manners in the Library为讲座话题，写一篇80词左右的讲座发言稿。
话题 图书馆礼仪 目的 教育学生在图书馆要举止得当
时间 下周五下午3点 地点 学校礼堂
内容 1. 保持安静 2. 不能在馆内吃东西 3. 不乱扔垃圾 4. 不涂画书籍 5. 离开前，椅子放回原处 6. 按时还书
结论 这些规则很重要，可以帮助在图书馆里的每个人感觉舒服
注意：1. 内容必须包含表格中的所有信息；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不得透露个人信息；4. 词数80左右。
Good Manners in the Library
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【思路解读】
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
【写作步骤】
第一步，介绍讲座的话题，目的，时间与地点；
第二步，分享讲座的内容；
第三步，发表对这些评价的看法。
【满分作文】
Good Manners in the Library
We are going to hold a talk on library manners. It will take place at 3 p.m. next Friday at the school hall. The purpose of the talk is to give you some advice on library manners. Above all, you should keep quiet in the library. You can’t eat or drink. Second, if you want to borrow books, you should queue for your turn. It’s rude to push in before others. Also, you shouldn’t write in the books. Remember to keep the library clean. Remember to return the book on time. At last, don’t forget to put the chair back when you leave the room.
These rules are important because they make sure that everyone feels comfortable in the library.
【亮点词汇】
①take place举行
②above all尤其是
③on time按时
【高分句型】
①The purpose of the talk is to give you some advice on library manners.（动词不定式作表语）
② Second, if you want to borrow books, you should queue for your turn.（if引导条件状语从句）
5．我们经常看到一些不好的肢体语言，请你根据下列表格里的提示，写一篇80词左右的作文，谈谈如何改进肢体语言。
Bad body language How to improve it
talk with one’s mouth full (unpleasant) learn table manners (餐桌礼仪)
cross one’s arms (not confident) relax and be confident/smile at others/make eye contact
touch another person on the head (rude) learn more about different cultures
In our daily life, people sometimes talk with their mouth full. That is unpleasant.
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【思路解读】
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中如何改进自己的餐桌礼仪等肢体语言的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，开门见山直接介绍不好的餐桌礼仪以及改进的方法。
第二步，具体阐述如何通过肢体语言表现自己的自信。
第三步，提倡人们要了解更多不同的文化。改善我们的肢体语言很有必要。
【满分作文】
How to improve body language
In our daily life, people sometimes talk with their mouth full. Talking with one’s mouth full is unpleasant to look at and rude. We had better keep silent while eating. We should learn some table manners. For example, don’t stick your chopsticks upright in the rice bowl. Instead, lay them on your dish.
When you cross one’s arms, it shows that you are not confident. You are supposed to relax and be confident. You can smile at others or make eye contact with people when you are talking to someone.
It’s rude to touch another person on the head. We should learn more about different cultures. For example, the French kiss each other when they meet, but people in China shake hands instead of kissing.
In a word, body language is one of the most useful ways of communication. It’s necessary for us to improve our body language.
【高分句型】
① Talking with one’s mouth full is unpleasant to look at and rude.（动名词作主语）
② You are supposed to relax and be confident. （be supposed to do sth.用于提建议）
③ It’s necessary for us to improve our body language.（it作形式主语，不定式是真正的主语）
6．践行文明礼仪从我做起。作为一名学生，我们应该不断提升文明素养，做文明礼仪的倡导者。请以“Be a student with good manners”为题， 写一篇短文。内容必须包括以下要点：
1. What kind of bad manners have you seen
2. What’s your opinion about it
3. How can you be a student with good manners
注意：
1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名；
2.词数在80-100之间，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Be a student with good manners
It’s very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
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【思路解读】
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：采用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥。
【写作步骤】
第一步：开门见山，阐述文明礼仪的好处；
第二步：阐述自己的观点；
第三步：阐述如何做一名文明礼仪的倡导者。
【满分作文】
Be a student with good manners
It’s very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
Last Saturday evening, all my family were enjoying dinner in a restaurant when a group of young people came into it. While they were eating their food, they talked loudly and smoked. I tried to stop them doing so, but they refused to listen to me. Instead, they said it was none of my business and laughed at me.
In fact, what they did upset me deeply, but I was proud of what I did. In my opinion, we should keep quiet in public. Also, we should be polite to others. Only in this way can we be improved to be persons with good manners.
【高分句型】
①While they were eating their food, they talked loudly and smoked.（时间状语从句）
②what they did upset me deeply, but I was proud of what I did.（主语从句）
③Only in this way can we be improved to be persons with good manners.（倒装句）
7．为了实践社会主义核心价值观，你校学生会决定举办以“文明礼仪伴我行”为主题的征文比赛。请你根据以下要点提示及要求，写一篇英语短文参赛。
要点提示：
1. 尊敬（respect）父母，帮助他们做家务；
2. 对人有礼貌，诚实友好，帮助他人；
3. 不在公共场合大声讲话，不乱扔垃圾；
4. 节约粮食，节约用水；
……
要求：
1. 短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息（不要逐字翻译），并在此基础上适当发挥；
2. 80词左右（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
As a middle school student, we should have good manners.
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In a word, good manners can make a difference and lead to a better future.
【思路解读】
① 题材：本文是一篇参赛作文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点提示中的所有信息（不要逐字翻译），适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山，直接点题，短文已给出；
第二步，具体描述写作内容。从“对待父母和别人的态度、帮助他人、公共场合注意事项、不乱扔垃圾、节约等”几个方面重点介绍中国文明礼仪；
第三步，书写结语。表达文明礼仪的重要性，文章已给出。
【满分作文】
As a middle school student, we should have good manners.
Firstly, it’s necessary for us to respect our parents, and we can help them do some housework. Secondly, we should be polite and friendly to others. Everyone should be honest. It’s good to help others when they are in trouble. It can also make ourselves happy. Thirdly, we should pay more attention to our behaviour in public. Don’t speak loudly, and never throw litter around. Last but not least, we should save food and water. Don’t take more food than we need and always remember to turn off the tap.
In a word, good manners can make a difference and lead to a better future.
【高分句型】
① it’s necessary for us to respect our parents.（It’s + 形容词 + for sb to do sth. it形式主语句型）
② It’s good to help others when they are in trouble.（when引导时间状语从句）
③ Don’t speak loudly.（祈使句否定句）
8．《论语》中说：“不学礼，无以立。”文明礼仪是我们学习、生活的根基，伴随我们成长。作为一名中学生，应将文明礼仪的种子厚植在内心深处，不断提升自身的文明素养。近期，你校将以“Be a student with good manners”为题，组织学生开展讨论。请根据以下提示要点，用英语写一篇短文，表达观点。
在学校 尊重老师；对同学友善，互相帮助。
在家里 尊敬长辈；爱家人，自己事情自己做。
言谈举止 礼貌语言、餐桌礼仪……（各举一例）
行走或者骑车时遵守交通规则。
不在公共场所大声喧哗。
不乱扔垃圾，保持环境干净。
参考词汇：尊重、尊敬respect
注意：
1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、和地名；
2.词数80左右，已给出的文字不计入总词数。
Be a student with good manners
It is very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
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Take action now. Behave well!
【思路解读】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据表格提示要点，以“Be a student with good manners”为题，表达自己的观点。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称采用第一人称。文章叙述时从三个方面展开：在学校；在家里以及言谈举止。行文时注意要有层次感，可适当使用短语句型使文章有亮点，确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
【满分作文】
Be a student with good manners
It is very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
At school, we should respect our teachers. We should also be kind/friendly to our classmates and help each other.
At home, we should respect the elderly/our parents/our grandparents. Also, we should love family members and do things by ourselves/alone.
Then, we should say “please” and “thank you” all the time. As for table manners, we shouldn’t talk with food in our mouth. Besides, we should obey traffic rules when walking or riding. In public, don’t shout loudly. What’s more, to keep the environment clean, don’t drop litter everywhere.
Take action now. Behave well!
9．为普及餐桌礼仪，增强大家的礼貌用餐意识，请你以“Table Manners”为题，写一篇英文短文。
内容包括：
1. 吃饭时不喜欢的食物可以不用管它，但是不要大声说出来(speak…out)；
2. 如果你喜欢的食物离你很远(be far away from)，你够不着，可以叫别人帮你夹菜而不是(instead of)自己站起来夹；
3. 如果你忍不住要打喷嚏(sneeze)，最好不要对着餐桌。
要求：
1. 语言通顺，内容完整，可适当发挥，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
2. 80词左右。
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【思路解读】
题干解读：题目要求以“Table Manners”为题，写一篇有关餐桌礼仪的英语短文；要求包含所有提示内容。
写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时为主，采用第二人称口吻。此作文可采用3段落格式，第一段：开门见山，引出话题；第二段：具体描述餐桌礼仪；第三段：呼吁大家一起注重餐桌礼仪。
【满分作文】
Table Manners
Table manners are very important. Now let me introduce them to you.
When you eat, there may be something you don’t like on the table. If so, leave it alone, but don’t speak it out. If the food you like is too far away for you to reach, you can ask someone else to help you instead of standing up to help yourself. Besides, if you can’t stop sneezing, you had better not to sneeze at the dinner table. It’s very impolite.
I hope everyone knows some table manners so that we can behave better.
1．（2023·甘肃兰州·中考真题）现如今外出旅游备受欢迎，但在旅游中我们也时常会看到一些不文明行为。某英文报旅游专栏正以“Traveling in Good Manners”为题，向广大学生征稿，倡导大家文明旅游。假设你是李华，请结合表格内的信息，用英文写一篇短文去投稿。
Impolite behaviors Opinions Advice
throw rubbish everywhere impolite ... put ... into dustbins ...
pick flowers in a park ... put up signs ...
speak loudly in public places ... make rules ...
内容包括：
1. 简述表格中的不文明行为（任选其中两个）；
2. 提出个人观点及建议；
3. 倡导文明旅游。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、地名等信息；
4. 文章标题和开头已给出，请抄写在答题卡的相应位置（不计入总词数）。
提示词：tourist attractions（景区）
Traveling in Good Manners
Nowadays traveling is getting more and more popular.
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【思路解读】
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，选择表格中的两个不文明的行为进行介绍；
第二步，介绍自己对不文明行为的看法并给出改正建议；
第三步，号召大家文明旅行。
【满分作文】
Traveling in Good Manners
Nowadays traveling is getting more and more popular. However, some people don’t behave themselves in tourist attractions when traveling. For example, some of the travelers throw rubbish everywhere. It’s not only impolite but also harmful to the environment around us. We should put rubbish into dustbins. Some of the travelers like picking flowers in a park. It should also be stopped because flowers are beautiful and we should protect them. We can put up signs beside the flowers to remind travelers not to pick them.
Let’s take action right now and travel in good manners.
【亮点词汇】
①behave themselves文明举止
②put rubbish into dustbins把垃圾扔进垃圾桶
【高分句型】
①It’s not only impolite but also harmful to the environment around us.（not only...but also...不仅……而且……）
②We can put up signs beside the flowers to remind travelers not to pick them.（不定式作宾补）
2．（2022·北京·中考真题）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris对中国文化很感兴趣，他给你发来邮件，询问中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪，如待人接物、餐桌礼仪等。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍你所知道的相关礼仪。
提示词语：manners, shake hands, polite, gift, chopsticks
提示问题：· What do we do when we meet people for the first time
· How do we behave properly at table
Dear Chris, I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information. Yours, Li Hua
【思路解读】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示问题，给Chris介绍中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第二人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段从待人接物、餐桌礼仪方面给出建议；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
【满分作文】
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners. China is a country with a long history, so there are many customs here. Let me tell you some of them.
Firstly, you are supposed to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. Secondly, you should bring a gift when you are invited to a party and be sure to arrive on time or a few minutes earlier. Thirdly, when you eat meals with others, it’s rude to point at others with your chopsticks. And don’t make noise when you have your soup.
I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information.
Yours,
Li Hua
3．（2022·山东枣庄·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的笔友Mark将要来你家做客，向你寻问如何在中国举止得当。请根据下面的提示，给Mark写一封80~100词的回信。把答案写在答题卡上相应位置。（可能用到的单词：chopsticks筷子）
1. 见面礼仪。 2. 餐桌礼仪。 3. 外出礼仪。
Dear Mark,
I am glad to hear that you are coming to China soon. I’d like to give you some suggestions on how to behave properly in China.
When you come to my house, __________________________________________________________
When you are eating with us, __________________________________________________________
Before you go outside, __________________________________________________________
A safe trip to you and I hope to meet you soon!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【思路解读】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。根据提示内容，给Mark一封信，告诉他如何在中国举止得当。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第二人称为主。写作时需包含三个要点：见面礼仪；餐桌礼仪；外出礼仪。承接作文每段开头，展开叙述，确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
【满分作文】
Dear Mark,
I am glad to hear that you are coming to China soon. I’d like to give you some suggestions on how to behave properly in China.
When you come to my house, you need to buy some small gifts, such as some fruit. This is the basic etiquette for Chinese guests when they visit others.
When you are eating with us, you should let the elders move their chopsticks first before we eat. Don’t make too much noise while eating. It’s impolite to point at others with your chopsticks or stick your chopsticks into the food.
Before you go outside, you need to say goodbye to others. It’s polite.
A safe trip to you and I hope to meet you soon!
Best wishes,
Li HuaUnit 5 Good manners
单元写作指导与演练
近三年考情分析
话题 考查热度
介绍特定场合的礼仪
介绍日常礼仪
本单元写作要求同学们能用所学的词语和句型简单地介绍良好的礼仪。介绍的内容主要为礼仪的目的、时间场合、列举不良礼仪以及提出合理化建议等。在具体的写作中，学生应做到以下几点：
1. 能用一般现在时等正确的时态；
2. 能正确使用祈使句或者情态动词；
3. 能利用逻辑连接词等突出逻辑和层次；
4. 能有意识地使用多种句式丰富内容。
【词汇积累】
①餐桌文化_____________________
②不礼貌的_____________________
③握手_____________________
④制定计划_____________________
⑤ 最后但不是最不重要的_____________________
⑥ 记住去做某事_____________________
⑦就……发表讲话_____________________
⑧最好做某事_____________________
⑨眼神交流_____________________
⑩代替_____________________
对某人有礼貌_____________________
注意……_____________________
【句式积累】
※ 开头句
1.我很高兴你能在寒假期间来看我。让我告诉你一些中国的餐桌礼仪。
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2.今天，我代表全班同学做一个题为“礼貌造就最好的学校”的演讲。
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3.我们将举行一次关于图书馆礼仪的讲座。
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4.在我们的日常生活中，做一个有礼貌的人是非常重要的。
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5.作为一名中学生，我们应该有礼貌。
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6.作为学生，我们有责任做一个有礼貌的人。
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※ 中间句
1.为了表示尊敬，在老人动手之前，你不能用筷子。
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2.让别人久等并非不礼貌。
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3.至于家庭规则，你最好计划在朋友家里见他们。
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4.吃饭的时候，我们需要一只手拿着碗，另一只手夹着筷子。
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5.不用筷子的时候，我们可以把筷子放在桌子上，但不能玩筷子，也不能把筷子指向别人。
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6.在课堂上，我们认真听老师讲课并做一些笔记是非常重要的。
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7.更重要的是，为了打造一所最好的学校，我们应该避免一些不礼貌的行为，比如不小心扔垃圾和在课间休息时制造太多噪音。
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※ 结尾句
1.希望这些东西对你有帮助，希望你在这里度过一个美好的学年！
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2.我期待着很快见到你。我会告诉你更多关于中国餐桌礼仪的知识。
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3.从现在起，如果我们每个人都尽自己的一份力量，我们的学校将成为最好的学校。
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4.这些规则很重要，因为它们能确保每个人在图书馆都感到舒适。
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5.只有这样，我们进步，成为有礼貌的人。
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6.总之，良好的礼貌可以带来改变，并带来更美好的未来。
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7.我希望每个人都知道一些餐桌礼仪，这样我们才能表现得更好。
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8.如果每个人都尽力做一个有礼貌的人，我们的社会就会变得和平，世界就会变得越来越美丽。
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【谚语积累】
1.Without learning manners, one cannot stand firm.
2.A person cannot live well without manners, things cannot be achieved without etiquette, and a country cannot be peaceful without etiquette
3.Manners are all about calming things down.
4.The most appetizing thing at a banquet is the host's manners.
5.If there are manners, it is safe; if not, it is dangerous
【万能写作模板】
We will have a talk on good manners in __________（引出地点）. The purpose of the talk is to （引出目的）.
It will take place at （引出发言的时间和地点）.
There will be a lot of examples of what is right and wrong. You should always （引出礼仪的具体内容）. You should not （介绍不良礼仪）.
When you , you should . When you , remember to . Also, do nor forget to .
These rules are important because they will help everyone in feel comfortable.
请根据下列提示,以"Good Manners, Our Duty"为题,写一篇短文。提示：
(1) 遵守校纪，不乱扔废弃物，保持校园清洁；
(2)爱护花草树木，让校园充满绿色；
(3)不追逐哄闹，举止文明；
(4)关爱他人，让校园充满爱。
要求:
1)文中不得出现你的真实姓名和班级；
2)语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3)包含以上要点，并适当发挥，词数不少于80。
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一、选词填空
用方框中所给单词或短语的适当形式填空，使短文通顺、正确、连贯，每个单词或短语限用一次。
quiet, early, rule, make sure, until, with, advice, twelve, follow, polite
We are going to hold a talk on good table manners. The purpose of the talk is to teach students some 1 for eating.
It will take place at 10 a.m. on the 2 of May at the school hall. There will be a lot of 3 on table manners. We hope you will find the importance of them. Above all, you should sit 4 at the table. And you should not start eating 5 everyone is ready. Even when eating with families and close friends, it is 6 to make noise while eating or drinking. You should not eat loudly 7 your mouth open. Also do not reach over someone’s plate for something. If you finish eating 8 than others, wait for others to finish.
I think we’d better 9 these. They warn us against rude behavior. We should 10 that both guests and hosts are comfortable at the table.
二、完成句子
11．在公共场合不要大声讲话。
Don’t talk aloud .
12．当你去国外时，知道如何礼貌求助是很重要的。
When you visit a foreign country, it is important to know how to for help .
13．到处扔垃圾是一个不好的习惯。(throw)
is a bad habit.
14．你的房间太乱了，你要保持整洁！
Your room is in a mess and you should .
三、翻译
15．作为一个学生，我们千万不要吸烟。
16．眼神交流可以表达情感，例如友善、兴趣和理解。
17．在公共场所我们必须排队依次等候。（place）
18．总之，过马路的时候你必须遵守交通规则。（in short）
19．正如谚语所说，“入乡随俗”。
1．假如你是李华，你的笔友Paul明年就要作为交换生来中国交流学习了，他发来邮件想向你了解一些中国的习俗和礼仪，请你参考所给提示给Paul回一封邮件，帮助他更好地适应中国生活。
Dear,
How is it going
I am coming to China on an exchange program. I want to know more about Chinese customs(习俗) and what I should do or not. Can you help me
I’m looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Paul
提示：
table manners(礼仪) where to put the food, respect(尊重) the old
meeting people time, ways of greeting(问候)
house rules gifts, make plans
Dear Paul,
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2．寒假里，张琳的加拿大笔友Cindy将来中国旅游。应张琳之邀，她将去张琳家里做客。Cindy昨晚发邮件询问张琳中国的餐桌礼仪。假如你是张琳，请根据以下提示，用英语写一封不少于80词的邮件回复Cindy。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
中国的餐桌礼仪
用筷子吃饭 吃米饭时，一只手托碗，另一只手拿筷子
吃鸡腿时，可以用手或筷子 不用筷子时，可以放在桌上，但不能玩筷子或用筷子指着他人
尽量吃完自己碗中的食物 可以在桌上的盘里留一些食物
Dear Cindy,
I’m happy that you can come to see me during the winter holiday. Let me tell you some Chinese table manners.
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I’m looking forward to meeting you soon. And I’ll tell you more about Chinese table manners.
Yours,
Zhang Lin
3．本周学校将举行英语演讲比赛，主题为“践行文明礼仪，创设最美校园”。你将代表班级参赛，请你根据以下信息写一篇英文演讲稿。
Good manners at the school gate...
in the dinning hall...
in class...
...
Bad manners throw rubbish, make too much noise...
Advice ...
要求：
1. 演讲稿内容包含表格中所有要点，省略部分适当发挥。
2. 词数90词左右，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 语义通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，字迹工整。
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名，校名及地名。
Dear teachers and classmates,
Today, on behalf of my class, I will give a speech on “Good manners make the nicest school”. As a student,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．请根据下面提示内容，以Good Manners in the Library为讲座话题，写一篇80词左右的讲座发言稿。
话题 图书馆礼仪 目的 教育学生在图书馆要举止得当
时间 下周五下午3点 地点 学校礼堂
内容 1. 保持安静 2. 不能在馆内吃东西 3. 不乱扔垃圾 4. 不涂画书籍 5. 离开前，椅子放回原处 6. 按时还书
结论 这些规则很重要，可以帮助在图书馆里的每个人感觉舒服
注意：1. 内容必须包含表格中的所有信息；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不得透露个人信息；4. 词数80左右。
Good Manners in the Library
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5．我们经常看到一些不好的肢体语言，请你根据下列表格里的提示，写一篇80词左右的作文，谈谈如何改进肢体语言。
Bad body language How to improve it
talk with one’s mouth full (unpleasant) learn table manners (餐桌礼仪)
cross one’s arms (not confident) relax and be confident/smile at others/make eye contact
touch another person on the head (rude) learn more about different cultures
In our daily life, people sometimes talk with their mouth full. That is unpleasant.
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6．践行文明礼仪从我做起。作为一名学生，我们应该不断提升文明素养，做文明礼仪的倡导者。请以“Be a student with good manners”为题， 写一篇短文。内容必须包括以下要点：
1. What kind of bad manners have you seen
2. What’s your opinion about it
3. How can you be a student with good manners
注意：
1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名；
2.词数在80-100之间，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Be a student with good manners
It’s very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
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7．为了实践社会主义核心价值观，你校学生会决定举办以“文明礼仪伴我行”为主题的征文比赛。请你根据以下要点提示及要求，写一篇英语短文参赛。
要点提示：
1. 尊敬（respect）父母，帮助他们做家务；
2. 对人有礼貌，诚实友好，帮助他人；
3. 不在公共场合大声讲话，不乱扔垃圾；
4. 节约粮食，节约用水；
……
要求：
1. 短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息（不要逐字翻译），并在此基础上适当发挥；
2. 80词左右（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
As a middle school student, we should have good manners.
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In a word, good manners can make a difference and lead to a better future.
8．《论语》中说：“不学礼，无以立。”文明礼仪是我们学习、生活的根基，伴随我们成长。作为一名中学生，应将文明礼仪的种子厚植在内心深处，不断提升自身的文明素养。近期，你校将以“Be a student with good manners”为题，组织学生开展讨论。请根据以下提示要点，用英语写一篇短文，表达观点。
在学校 尊重老师；对同学友善，互相帮助。
在家里 尊敬长辈；爱家人，自己事情自己做。
言谈举止 礼貌语言、餐桌礼仪……（各举一例）
行走或者骑车时遵守交通规则。
不在公共场所大声喧哗。
不乱扔垃圾，保持环境干净。
参考词汇：尊重、尊敬respect
注意：
1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、和地名；
2.词数80左右，已给出的文字不计入总词数。
Be a student with good manners
It is very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
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Take action now. Behave well!
9．为普及餐桌礼仪，增强大家的礼貌用餐意识，请你以“Table Manners”为题，写一篇英文短文。
内容包括：
1. 吃饭时不喜欢的食物可以不用管它，但是不要大声说出来(speak…out)；
2. 如果你喜欢的食物离你很远(be far away from)，你够不着，可以叫别人帮你夹菜而不是(instead of)自己站起来夹；
3. 如果你忍不住要打喷嚏(sneeze)，最好不要对着餐桌。
要求：
1. 语言通顺，内容完整，可适当发挥，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
2. 80词左右。
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1．（2023·甘肃兰州·中考真题）现如今外出旅游备受欢迎，但在旅游中我们也时常会看到一些不文明行为。某英文报旅游专栏正以“Traveling in Good Manners”为题，向广大学生征稿，倡导大家文明旅游。假设你是李华，请结合表格内的信息，用英文写一篇短文去投稿。
Impolite behaviors Opinions Advice
throw rubbish everywhere impolite ... put ... into dustbins ...
pick flowers in a park ... put up signs ...
speak loudly in public places ... make rules ...
内容包括：
1. 简述表格中的不文明行为（任选其中两个）；
2. 提出个人观点及建议；
3. 倡导文明旅游。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、地名等信息；
4. 文章标题和开头已给出，请抄写在答题卡的相应位置（不计入总词数）。
提示词：tourist attractions（景区）
Traveling in Good Manners
Nowadays traveling is getting more and more popular.
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2．（2022·北京·中考真题）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris对中国文化很感兴趣，他给你发来邮件，询问中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪，如待人接物、餐桌礼仪等。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍你所知道的相关礼仪。
提示词语：manners, shake hands, polite, gift, chopsticks
提示问题：· What do we do when we meet people for the first time
· How do we behave properly at table
Dear Chris, I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information. Yours, Li Hua
3．（2022·山东枣庄·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的笔友Mark将要来你家做客，向你寻问如何在中国举止得当。请根据下面的提示，给Mark写一封80~100词的回信。把答案写在答题卡上相应位置。（可能用到的单词：chopsticks筷子）
1. 见面礼仪。 2. 餐桌礼仪。 3. 外出礼仪。
Dear Mark,
I am glad to hear that you are coming to China soon. I’d like to give you some suggestions on how to behave properly in China.
When you come to my house, __________________________________________________________
When you are eating with us, __________________________________________________________
Before you go outside, __________________________________________________________
A safe trip to you and I hope to meet you soon!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
