专题09 学校教育-常用话题写作-2024年初中英语中考高分作文全解（含答案）

2024年初中英语中考高分作文全解
专题09 学校教育-常用话题写作
学校教育是每个人成长中不可或缺的一部分.在学校,我们不仅学习知识,还学习如何与人相处,如何处理问题,以及如何发展自己的个性和兴趣等.以下是一些关于学校教育的常考主题:
1.学习方法
描述你自己的学习方法和经验，如何提高学习效率，或者分享一些有效的学习技巧.
2.学习态度
讨论积极和消极的学习态度,以及如何培养积极的学习态度,克服消极情绪.
3.教育方式
讨论学校教育的不同方式,如传统教育、素质教育、创新教育等,以及它们的优点和缺点.学生可以探讨哪种教育方式最适合学校教育,以及如何平衡各种教育方式以获得更好的效果.
4.师生关系
探讨良好的师生关系对学生的影响,包括信任、沟通、尊重等方面.学生可以讨论如何建立和维护良好的师生关系,以及如何处理师生之间的冲突.
5.学习压力分析学习压力对学生的影响,包括心理健康、学业成绩和兴趣爱好等方面.学生可以讨论如何减轻学生的学习压力,以及如何平衡学习和休闲活动的关系.
6.学校规章制度讨论学校的规则和纪律对学生的影响,以及如何制定和执行合理的规章制度.
以上只是关于学校教育的一些常见主题,学生写作时应根据题目给出的信息要点进行探讨.在写作时,要注意观点明确、论据充分、逻辑严密,并尽量结合自己的经历和见闻进行分析和阐述.
真题实战
(2023·黑龙江齐齐哈尔)为了调动同学们的学习积极性、提高学生的创造力,你的学校正在开展“师生同携手,作业我创新”主题活动,号召同学们设计出自己喜欢的,兼具趣味性、实效性、创新性的课后作业.请你结合英语学科的学习体验,设计三项作业.下面是你的“创新作业设计表”,请根据你自己的完整设计,以“My Homework,My Idea”为题,写一篇短文,阐述你设计的英语作业内容、设计意图和作用.
作业内容-设计意图-作用
Learn an English song To sing it in class Learn more words
Draw a mind map To review one's English notes …
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要求:
1.字迹工整,段落清晰,表达清楚,语法正确,行文连贯;
2.要点必须包含所有相关信息,并适当发挥;
3.首段已给出,不计入总词数;
4.词数:80-100词.
My Homework,My Idea
As students, we sometimes feel it boring to do homework every day,so doing creative homework can make us happier and more interested in English.
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参考范文1
My Homework,My Idea
As students, we sometimes feel it boring to do homework every day,so doing creative homework can make us happier and more interested in Englsh.
I have many good ideas about. creative English homework because English is my favorite subject. Firstly, we can learn to sing an English song and sing it in class. In this way, we can learn more words. Secondly, if we draw mind maps to review our English notes, we will remember them well. Thirdly,we're also proud to make a video to introduce our traditional Chinese culture in English. We can post it online so that more foreigners can know our country better.
I hope we can have more creative English homework in the future.
【名师点评】
本文结构清晰,涵盖了所有题干中的内容要点.过渡词的使用使文章条理更加清楚,逻辑性更强.同时作者准确地运用了多种高级表达,如in this way和post it online 等短语,既提升了文章的档次,又增强了文章的可读性.总之,本文是一篇值得借鉴的佳作.
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我的作业,我的想法
作为学生,我们有时觉得每天做作业很无聊,所以做创意型作业能够让我们更快乐,对英语更感兴趣.
关于创意型英语作业,我有很多好主意,因为英语是我最喜欢的科目.首先,我们可以学唱一首英文歌,并在课堂上演唱.这样的话,我们可以学到更多的单词.其次,如果我们画思维导图来复习我们的英语笔记,我们会牢记它们的.第三,我们也很自豪能制作一个用英语介绍中国传统文化的视频.我们可以把它发布在网上,这样更多的外国人就可以更好地了解我们国家.
我希望将来我们能有更多创意型英语作业.
参考范文2
My Homework, My Idea
As students, we sometimes feel it boring to do homework every day, so doing creative homework can make us happier and more interested in English.
First of all, I want to design homework that can help us learn more words. Learning an English song is a good way. When we sing an English song in class,we can learn more words. In addition, I want to design homework that can help us review our English notes. After we draw the mind maps of English notes, we can understand our notes better. At last, we can make a poster to call on our family members to do a yard sale. In this way, we can develop our creative thinking.
I hope we can increase our interest in learning English through creative English homework!
【名师点评】
作者将题干中的要点全部体现出来并加入了一项自己构思的创意型家庭作业.整篇文章主题明确,思路清晰.作者能够使用准确的词汇和语法来表达自己的意思,这表明作者具有较好的英语写作能力.同时,本篇作文也具有一定的实用性和启发性,对于其他学生和教师都有一定的参考价值.
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我的作业,我的想法
作为学生,我们有时觉得每天做作业很无聊,所以做创意型作业能够让我们更快乐,对英语更感兴趣.
首先,我想设计可以帮助我们学习更多单词的作业.学习一首英语歌曲是一个好方法.当我们在课堂上唱英文歌时,我们可以学到更多的单词.除此之外,我想设计可以帮助我们复习英语笔记的作业.在我们画出英语笔记的思维导图后,我们可以更好地理解我们的笔记.最后,我们可以做一张海报来号召家庭成员进行一次庭院拍卖会.通过这种方式,我们可以提升我们的创造性思维.
我希望大家可以通过创意型英语作业提升我们对英语学习的兴趣！
模拟演练1
(2023·山东日照田家炳实验中学校考一模)你的初中生活马上就要结束了,请根据以下要点,以“My English Study”为题谈一下三年来学习英语的心得体会,和学弟学妹们分享你的经验.
要点提示:
1.刚入学时学英语很费劲,记不住单词,无法理解老师课上所讲的;
2.失去信心,曾想放弃;
3.后来向同学和老师寻求帮助;
4.目前,取得了很大的进步;
5.个人感悟.·····
注意:
1.短文须包括所给内容要点,要求语句通顺,意思连贯;
2.第5点请作1-2句合理的想象发挥;
3.词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数.
My English Study
My three-year middle school life will be over. Looking back, I want to share my English study with you.____
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参考范文
My English Study
My three-year middle school life will be over. Looking back, I want to share my English study with you. When I entered middle school, I had great difficulty in learning English.I couldn't remember English words and I couldn't understand what my English teacher said in class. I lost heart and wanted to give up. Later, I asked my teachers and classmates for help. I kept on learning English,listened to my teacher carefully and spoke English as much as possible. So far, I have made great progress in English.
I believe if we can show great interest in learning English and keep trying, we can learn English well.
【名师点评】
本文表达了作者对英语学习的反思和经验分享.作者通过自己的经历和困难,给出了解决问题的方法和建议,对于读者有一定的参考价值.同时,本篇作文也展示了作者对英语学习的态度和看法,具有一定的启示作用.整篇文章语言准确,结构清晰,表达多样化,没有冗杂之处,值得借鉴和学习.
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我的英语学习
我三年的中学生活就要结束了.回顾过去,我想和你分享我的英语学习.当我进入中学时,我在学习英语方面遇到了很大的困难.我记不住英语单词,也听不懂我的英语老师在课堂上说的话.我失去了信心,想要放弃.后来,我向老师和同学求助.我坚持学习英语,认真听老师讲课,尽可能多地说英语.到目前为止,我在英语方面取得了很大的进步.
我相信如果我们能对学习英语表现出极大的兴趣并不断努力,我们就能学好英语.
模拟演练2
(2023·湖南永州三模)假如你叫李华,你即将初中毕业,在当今的“双减教育政策”之下,如何在有限的时间之内高效学习好初中英语,请你写一篇发言稿,给母校的初一初二同学们谈谈你的一些正确建议和看法.
参考词汇:preview 预习;put up one's hand;review
复习;knowledge;on the same day;read aloud;improve;make mistakes;as long as...
注意:
1.语句通顺,意思连贯,表达正确;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、校名和地名;
4.不少于80词(短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数).
Hello, boys and girls! I'm happy to share some learning ways and feelings about English here._____________
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Above are my suggestions for you. That's all. Thank you!
参考范文
Hello, boys and girls! I'm happy to share some learning ways and feelings about English here.
First,we should preview English that the teacher will teach us the next day. Second, we have to listen to the teacher carefully in class. Third, we should finish our homework carefully in time after class. Fourth, we had better read aloud or listen to English in the morning and evening for at least half an hour. At last, don't be afraid of making mistakes when using English and so on. All in all, we will learn English well as long as we keep on listening, speaking, reading and writing English every day.
Above are my suggestions for you. That's all. Thank you!
【名师点评】
本篇演讲稿采用了总分总结构,层次分明,结构严谨.文章的重点是第二段,作者列举了一些高效学习英语的方法,最后做出总结.内容紧扣主题,逻辑清晰,提出的建议也具有很强的实用性.语言句式丰富,表达地道,使用了状语从句、定语从句等复合句,体现了作者扎实的语言功底.
【参考译文】
大家好,很高兴在这里与大家分享一些关于英语的学习方法和感受.
首先,我们应该预习老师第二天要教我们的英语.其次,我们必须在课堂上认真听讲.第三,我们应该在课后及时认真完成家庭作业.第四,我们最好每天在早上和晚上大声朗读或听英语至少半小时.最后,在使用英语时不要害怕犯错误等.总的来说,只要我们每天坚持听说读写英语,我们就会学好英语.
以上是我给你的建议.就到这里了.谢谢！
必背词汇
1.study v.&n.学习
2.subject n.学科
3.effort n.努力
4.interest n.兴趣
5.goal n.目标
6.encouragement n.鼓励
7.growth n.成长
8.determination n.决心
9.suggestion n.建议
10.teamwork n.团队合作
11.efficient adj.有效率的
12.stressed adj.焦虑不安的
13.education n.教育
14.entertainment n.娱乐
15.learning skill学习技巧
16.learning method 学习方法
17.achieve one's dream 实现某人的梦想
必背句型
1.I think it's important to...
我认为······很重要.
2.It's a good idea to...
······是一个好主意.
3.It's a waste of time to...
······是浪费时间.
4.It's necessary to...
······是有必要的.
5.It's helpful to...
······是有帮助的.
6. It's worthwhile to...
······是值得的.
7.It's important to have a good attitude towards learning.
对学习有积极的态度很重要.
8. It's better to spend more time on study than on entertainment.
把更多的时间花在学习上比花在娱乐上更好.
9.It's essential to have a good knowledge foundation.
拥有良好的知识基础是至关重要的.
10. It's advisable to listen to the teacher carefully in class.
在课堂上认真听老师讲课是明智的.
11. The best way to learn English well is to use it all the time.
学好英语的最好方法就是一直使用它.
12. It's crucial to find a balance between study and rest.
在学习和休息之间找到平衡是至关重要的.
13. It's of great importance to stay motivated while studying.
在学习时保持动力是很重要的.
小试牛刀
学校英语报社针对学生的学习方式展开讨论,假如你是李华,请根据表格里提供的信息,选择一种你喜欢的学习方式进行阐述并提出不足之处.
Study in a group Study alone
Advantages ·fixed learning plans ·learn faster · develop students' teamwork spirit ·support each other ·personal learning plans ·learn more quietly ·improve the abilities of selfcontrol ·form the habit of thinking
Disadvantages ... …
要求:
1.所写内容必须包括一种学习方式的所有信息并提出不足之处;
2.文章不少于90词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.语意通顺,意思连贯,条理清晰,书写规范;
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息.
Different students like different ways to study. But personally, I would rather__________________________
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参考范文
Different students like different ways to study. But personally, I would rather study alone.
First, when I study alone, I can make a personal learning plan so that I know what to learn. Second, I will learn more quietly without other people disturbing me. In this way, I can put my heart into study. Third, it can help me improve my self-control ability because I have to depend on myself. What's more, it can also help me form the habit of thinking. However, it also has disadvantages. When I don't understand a question, I can't discuss the answer with my classmates.
I hope everyone can find the best way to study.