专题14 人际交往-常用话题写作-2024年初中英语中考高分作文全解

2024年初中英语中考高分作文全解
专题14 人际交往-常用话题写作
人际交往是指人与人之间的交流和互动.通过人际交往,人们可以交流思想、分享经验、表达情感、增进了解,从而促进个人和社会的发展进步.同时,人际交往也是人们获得社会支持和保持心理健康的重要途径.
人际交往话题属于《义务教育英语课程标准(2022版)》中“人与社会”范畴,主要涉及“良好的人际关系与人际交往”这一内容,旨在引导学生学会有效沟通、建立健康良好的人际关系,从而形成积极乐观的生活态度.交往的对象可分为朋友、同学、家人和陌生人.该话题通常围绕沟通技巧、友谊关系、家庭关系、社交场合等展开.
分析近几年全国中考真题中的书面表达题可知,该话题主要考查角度如下:1.谈论如何应对人际交往中产生的问题,例如要求根据他人或自己遇到的人际交往问题,给出建议;2.结合自己的经历,谈谈在人际交往中如何更好地实现沟通交流,例如如何更好地倾听、怎样实现团队合作等.
在写这类作文时,首先要明确写作主题、写作目的以及文章的目标读者.其次,在针对主题提出中心观点后,要从个人经历出发,结合自己的感受和想法,运用实例和细节来支持自己的观点.同时,语言表达应力求流畅准确.
【注意】
1.要根据文章的目的和读者,选择适当的语言和风格.
2.要保持客观.在描述人际交往时,要尽量避免主观臆断和偏见,保持客观公正的态度.
3.特别是与外国友人交流时要注意文化差异,避免误导或冒犯.
真题实战
(2022·四川自贡)假定你是李华.你的英国朋友Mike来信说他在人际交往方面感到迷茫,希望得到你的帮助.请写封回信,内容包括:
1.表示理解和安慰;
2.建议:正确认识自己的不足;处理好和父母的关系;处理好与同学、朋友之间的关系;
3.表达祝愿.
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
Dear Mike,
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Li Hua
参考范文1
Dear Mike,
How's everything going I'm sorry to hear that you have difficulty getting along with others. It's common to have this feeling. Take it easy. I'll give you some advice.
First,you should get a thorough understanding of yourself: be aware of your strengths and weaknesses. Second, you should communicate with your parents. Tell them how you feel so they can understand you better. Third,you can take part in some activities with your classmates. This will not only help you know more about your classmates but also help them get to know you better. Then you can become friends.
I hope these suggestions can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
本文首段表达了同情和安慰,体现了作者对迈克的理解和关心.第二段涵盖了题中建议的全部要点,将建议按顺序依次介绍,并对部分建议进行了细化.最后一段表达祝愿.文章结构清晰,语言流畅,很好地完成了题目要求的内容.
【参考译文】
亲爱的迈克,
一切都好吗 听说你与人相处有困难,我很难过.有这种感觉是很常见的.别紧张.我给你一些建议.
首先,你应该对自己有深入的了解:意识到自己的长处和短处.第二,你应该和你的父母沟通.告诉他们你的感受,这样他们才能更好地理解你.第三,你可以和你的同学一起参加一些活动.这不仅能帮助你更多地了解你的同学,也能帮助他们更好地了解你.然后你们就可以成为朋友了.
我希望这些建议能帮助到你.
你的,
李华
参考范文2
Dear Mike,
How's everything going I'm sorry to hear that you are feeling confused about your relationships. I can understand and want you to know that it is normal to feel this way.
Firstly, it's okay to have imperfections. We all have shortcomings, and it's important to accept these as part of ourselves. Secondly, try to build a positive relationship with your munication is the key, so talk to them often and let them know what you think. Finally, building strong relationships with your classmates and friends will help you.
I hope my suggestions will help you. I really want you to be happy, so please take my advice seriously. If you need more help, don't hesitate to ask me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
本文要点齐全,条理清晰,情感真挚.在语言方面,不同表达方式的运用体现出作者较强的语言表达能力,文中多处使用宾语从句和it作形式主语等.同时,补充的细节使文章整体思路连贯,衔接流畅,是一篇值得学习的佳作.
【参考译文】
亲爱的迈克,
一切都好吗 听说你对人际关系感到困惑,我很难过.我能理解,也想让你知道,有这种感觉很正常.
首先,有缺点是可以的.我们都有缺点,重要的是要接受它们是我们自己的一部分.其次,试着与父母建立积极的关系.沟通是关键,所以要经常和他们交谈,让他们知道你的想法.最后,与你的同学和朋友建立牢固的关系会对你有所帮助.
我希望我的建议能帮到你.我真的希望你快乐,所以请认真考虑下我的建议.如果你需要更多的帮助,尽管问我.
你的,
李华
模拟演练1
(2023·海南儋州一模)人具有社会性,所以我们聚族而居,有社交需求.因此,在生活中,我们要学会理解别人.学会与他人友好相处是人生的必修课之一.请你根据以下要求,以“How can we get on well with others ”为题,写一篇英语短文,分享给你的朋友.
要求:
1.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名;
3.80词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数).
How can we get on well with others
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How can we get on well with others
In our daily life, we can't avoid communicating with others. However, how to get on well with others Here are my opinions about it.
First of all, we should respect others. Everyone has their own way of doing things,so we should treat others with respect and value their opinions. Moreover, it's also very important for us to communicate with each other and share our joys and sorrows. What's more,we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble. Helping others is a reward in itself. Furthermore, we should treat others in an honest way.
Only in this way can we get on well with others and feel happy.
【名师点评】
本文紧扣题目,围绕如何与他人友好相处这一话题列出多项具体的建议,最后一段点题并总结全文.本文中的建议不仅提到了尊重他人、帮助他人等,还强调了与他人沟通、诚实待人的重要性,丰富了文章内容.
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怎样与他人和睦相处
在我们的日常生活中,我们无法避免与他人交流.然而,如何与他人和睦相处呢 以下是我的看法.
首先,我们应该尊重他人.每个人都有自己的做事方式,所以我们应该尊重别人,重视他们的意见.此外,彼此沟通并分享我们的喜怒哀乐也是很重要的.而且,我们应该善待他人,为那些有困难的人提供必要的帮助.帮助别人本身就是一种回报.我们还应该以诚待人.
只有这样,我们才能与他人相处融洽并感到快乐.
模拟演练2
(2022·江苏苏州八年级期中)阳光中学正在开展对于“What makes good friends ”的讨论,请你用英语写一篇短文,内容包括:
1.你对于好朋友的理解;
2.你生活中的一个好朋友以及你们成为朋友的原因;
3.友谊在你生活中或学习上的帮助.
注意:
1.词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.内容需涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥;
3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息.
What makes good friends
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参考范文
What makes good friends
Everyone has different opinions on “What makes good friends ” To me, good friends should be some people who can understand and support each other.
One of my good friends is Mary. She is kind and thoughtful. We become friends because we have similar hobbies. We both enjoy reading and listening to music. What's more, we can always count on each other. Whenever I face difficulties or feel sad, Mary is always there and offers advice.
Friendship has played an important role in my life. It can bring me happiness and support when I'm feeling down or facing challenges. In addition, good friends can introduce new things which broaden my horizons.
【名师点评】
本文语言流畅,结构清晰,观点明确.文中涵盖了全部的内容要点,在介绍自己的好朋友的同时,也强调了友谊在生活中的重要性.在最后一段中也呼应了第一段中提到的对好朋友的理解,即好朋友能够相互理解和支持.
【参考译文】
什么是好朋友
每个人对“什么是好朋友”都有不同的看法.对我来说,好朋友应该是能够相互理解和支持的人.
我的一个好朋友是玛丽.她既善良又体贴.我们成为朋友是因为我们有相似的爱好.我们都喜欢读书和听音乐.而且,我们总是可以依靠彼此.每当我遇到困难或感到悲伤时,玛丽总是在那里并提供建议.
友谊在我的生活中扮演了重要的角色.当我情绪低落或面临挑战时,它能给我带来快乐和支持.此外,好朋友可以介绍新事物,开阔我的视野.
必背词汇
1.friendship n.友谊
2.communication n.交流
3.understanding n.理解
4.confidence n.信心
5.support n.支持;鼓励
6.forgiveness n.宽恕
7.relationship n.关系;联系
8.interpersonal adj.人际关系的
9.respectful adj.尊敬的
10.polite adj.有礼貌的
11.reliable adj.可靠的
12.trustworthy adj.值得信任的
13.open-minded adj.思想开明的
14.positive attitude 积极的态度
15.accept criticism 接受批评
16.show concern 表现出关心
17.broaden one's horizons 开阔眼界
18.joys and sorrows 欢乐与悲伤
必背句型
1. There is no doubt that interpersonal communication plays a vital role in our daily lives.
毫无疑问,人际交往在我们的日常生活中扮演着至关重要的角色.
2. People often find it difficult to express their thoughts and feelings adequately.
人们经常发现很难充分地表达自己的想法和感受.
3.It is a well-known fact that effective communication skills are essential for success in today's fast-paced world.
众所周知,在当今快节奏的世界中,有效的沟通技巧对成功至关重要.
4.Listening actively is a crucial skill for successful communication.
积极倾听是成功沟通的一项关键技能.
5.We need to be mindful of our words and facial expressions to convey the right message.
我们需要注意自己的言语和面部表情,以传达正确的信息.
6. Body language can often provide additional information that words alone cannot convey.
肢体语言通常可以提供额外的信息,这些信息仅凭言语无法传达.
7. We can take steps to improve our communication skills by being more careful about how we express ourselves.
我们可以采取措施,通过更加注意如何表达自己来提高我们的沟通技巧.
小试牛刀
父母时刻保护我们成长,他们关爱我们,但也会严格要求我们.我们长大的同时,难免和父母存在意见相左的时候.那父母能和我们成为亲近的朋友吗 学校就此展开了一次调查.调查结果显示60%的学生认同“能和父母做朋友”这个观点,另外40%的学生则持相反意见.请你以“Can Parents Be Our Friends ”为题,谈谈你对这个话题的看法,并分享你的关于同父母融洽相处的建议.
要求:
1.80-120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称.
参考信息:
1.谈谈你对这个话题的观点及理由;
2.分享同父母融洽相处的建议;
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参考词汇:be willing to 愿意做;familiar adj.熟悉的;support v.支持
Can Parents Be Our Friends
This term our school did a survey about whether parents can be our friends. Students in our school shared different ideas.________________________________________________________________________________
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参考范文
Can Parents Be Our Friends
This term our school did a survey about whether parents can be our friends. Students in our school shared different ideas. Here are the results.
40 percent of students think it is impossible because their parents are busy and have no time to care about them. 60 percent of students think they can be friends with their parents. Because their parents usually communicate with them and care about them.
In my opinion, parents can be our friends because they always love us selflessly. To get along well with parents, we should communicate with them when we meet something unhappy. Our parents will try their best to help us. If we have some disagreements with our parents, we should communicate with them.