专题15 社会现象-常用话题写作-2024年初中英语中考高分作文全解（含答案）

2024年初中英语中考高分作文全解
专题15 社会现象-常用话题写作
社会现象是指在社会中普遍存在的现象,这些现象受到社会因素的影响和制约,具体包括人们的言行举止、社会风气、文化传统和价值观念等.社会现象话题属于《义务教育英语课程标准(2022版)》中“人与社会”范畴,其子主题有“社会热点和国际事务”.一些社会现象因为其重要性或紧迫性,引起了广泛的关注和讨论,从而成为社会热点.
了解社会现象旨在提高学生分析问题和解决问题的能力,增强他们的社会责任感,提升他们的公民意识.通过对社会问题进行思考和分析,学生可以更好地认识自己、了解社会,为未来的职业选择奠定基础.同时也有助于他们更好地适应社会的变化.
社会现象根据性质可以分为正面现象和负面现象.正面现象是指有益于社会进步和人类发展的现象,如慈善事业、志愿服务等.负面现象则是指有害于社会进步和人类发展的现象,如环境污染等.根据现象发生的领域,社会现象可以分为经济现象、文化现象、教育现象、政治现象等.根据现象涉及的范围,社会现象还可以分为局部现象和全局现象.局部现象是指存在在某个地区或某个群体的特殊现象,如方言、少数民族文化等.全局现象则是指普遍存在于整个社会或全球的现象,如气候变化、人口老龄化等.
分析近几年全国中考真题中的书面表达题可知,此话题下常见的要求是介绍并分析某一社会现象,总结其优缺点并提出自己的观点.在写作社会现象类作文时,需要注意以下几点:
1.观察和分析社会现象
写作的第一步是要对所提到的社会现象进行观察和分析,只有真正了解了该现象的成因、影响等,才能在分析中切中要点.
2.运用实例说明社会现象
在写作时最好通过举例具体介绍社会现象的表现和影响,可以运用数据和事实支持自己的观点.
3.客观地评价社会现象
在写作时要坚守客观公正的态度,避免过于主观或偏激的言论.在写作时使用的数据、事实和例子等应力求来源可靠,内容真实.
真题实战
(2022·内蒙古赤峰)近年来中国发生了翻天覆地的变化,取得了很多世界瞩目的成就,例如航空航天技术的一步步突破、杂交水稻的成功培育、两届奥运会的成功举办······
某英文网站正在开展以“厉害了,我的国！”为主题的征文活动.请你以 “China makes me feel surprised”为题目,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文投稿.
要求:
1.选择中国发展中一个让你感到惊讶的事件进行简单叙述,并写出你的感受;
2.书写规范,要点齐全,条理清晰,可合理发挥;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名,否则不予赋分.
参考词汇:aerospace industry 航空航天工业;spaceship 宇宙飞船;develop hybrid rice 培育杂交水稻;Beijing 2008 Olympics 北京2008奥运会;Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics 北京2022冬奥会
China makes me feelsurprised
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参考范文1
China makes me feel surprised
In recent years, great changes have taken place in China and many achieveme. have attracted the attention of the world. For example, China has successfully held two Olympic Games. It really surprised me. China successfully hosted the 2008 Summer Olympics, which introduced the country to the world. Since then, China has developed rapidly. The Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics was also a success. And many Chinese athletes won gold medals. As a Chinese person,I am very proud. I feel excited about the strength of the motherland.
【名师点评】
本文首先总体概括了中国近年来取得了巨变和成就,然后以中国成功举办的两次奥运会为例,表达了作者的惊讶和自豪.本文语言简洁明了,结构清晰.按照时间顺序将两次奥运会以不同的表达方式成功结合,使内容连贯.结尾扣题,感情真挚,值得学习.
【参考译文】
中国使我感到惊讶
近年来,中国发生了巨大的变化,并取得了许多举世瞩目的成就.例如,中国成功举办了两届奥运会.这真的让我很惊讶.中国成功举办了2008年夏季奥运会,这场奥运会向世界介绍了中国.从那时起,中国发展迅速.2022年北京冬季奥运会也取得了成功.许多中国运动员赢得了金牌.作为一个中国人,我很自豪.我为祖国的强大感到兴奋.
参考范文2
China makes me feel surprised
In recent years, China has undergone huge changes and achieved many remarkable achievements. One of the surprising events that have caught my attention is the development of China's aerospace technology. I was particularly amazed when China successfully launched its first Mars probe, the Tianwen-1. Its successful landing on the surface of Mars made China the third country in the world to achieve such success. This accomplishment not only shows China's scientific and technological power, but also strengthens my belief in the country's ability to achieve more in the future.
【名师点评】
本文内容丰富,语言流畅,逻辑清晰,表达了作者对中国近年来取得的巨大变化和成就的惊讶与肯定.作者详细描述了中国航空航天技术的成功,并强调这一成就的意义.结尾表达了作者对中国未来发展的信心,深化了主题.
【参考译文】
中国使我感到惊讶
近年来,中国经历了翻天覆地的变化,并取得了许多举世瞩目的成就.其中引起我注意的令人惊讶的事件之一是中国航空航天技术的发展.当中国成功发射首个火星探测器“天问一号”时,我感到特别惊讶.它在火星表面的成功着陆使中国成为世界上第三个取得这种成功的国家.这一成就不仅展示了中国的科技实力,也增强了我对中国未来有能力取得更大成就的信心.
模拟演练1
(2023·四川广安二模)现如今很多人喜欢在网上点餐,请根据下面表格中的提示写一篇100词左右的英语短文,谈谈网上点餐的利与弊并阐述你的观点.可适当发挥,不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息.开头不计入总词数.
Ordering food online
优点 1.方便快捷,节约时间; 2.品种多样,美味可口; 3.减少外出,规避风险······ 缺点 1.塑料包装污染环境; 2.饮食习惯不够健康; 3.食品安全令人担忧······
你的建议 联系实际,给出自己合理的建议.
参考词汇:takeaway 外卖食物;avoid risks 规避风险;plastic packages 塑料包装
Ordering food online
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参考范文
Ordering food online
Nowadays, many people like ordering food online. They think that ordering food online has many advantages. First of all, ordering food online is more convenient and easier than cooking at home. Besides, there are many kinds of takeaways and most of them are delicious. What's more, ordering food online can reduce the risk of going out.
However, other people hold a different opinion. They believe some restaurants may have food safety problems, and plastic packages are bad for our environment and health. In addition, this kind of eating habit is unhealthy.
In my opinion, home-cooked food is safer than takeaways. I believe ordering food online should only be used when necessary.
【名师点评】
本文内容全面,语言流畅,逻辑清晰.第一段说明网上点餐的优点,第二段介绍缺点,最后一段作者结合生活经验给出了自己的建议.本文多处使用了复合句和从句,使得文章更有层次感,值得学习.
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网上点餐
如今,许多人喜欢在网上点餐.他们认为网上点餐有很多优点.首先,网上点餐比在家做饭更方便,更容易.此外,有很多种类的外卖食物,它们大多数都很美味.而且,网上点餐可以减少外出的风险.
然而,其他人持不同意见.他们认为一些餐馆可能存在食品安全问题,塑料包装对我们的环境和健康有害.此外,这种饮食习惯是不健康的.
在我看来,家里做的食物比外卖食物更安全.我认为网上点餐应该只在必要的时候使用.
模拟演练2
(2023·四川攀枝花二模)百善孝为先,孝敬父母是中华民族的传统美德,但是,在当今社会,还存在一些不孝敬父母的现象.作为中学生,我们应该怎样孝敬父母 请根据下列提示词,并结合自身实际适当发挥,以“Show Filial Piety to Our Parents”为题,写一篇关于孝敬父母的英语倡议书.
注意:
1.词数80-100左右;
2.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校和地名.
提示词:filial piety(孝敬),duty,happy, understand, be thankful for,stay with,communicate,housework, look after, save money,study...
Show Filial Piety to Our Parents
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As we know, parents are the most important people in our lives.____________________________________
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参考范文
Show Filial Piety to Our Parents
Dear fellow students,
As we know, parents are the most important people in our lives. While in our society, some people often behave rudely to their parents, especially teenagers. How can we show filial piety to our parents There is some advice for you.
First of all, we are supposed to communicate with them as much as possible because communication is the best way to understand each other. Besides, staying with them is a good choice. We can help parents do the housework. When they are sick, we should look after them with patience. Last but not least, it's necessary for us to study hard. Good grades can make them happy and proud.
【名师点评】
本文开篇通过指出社会中有些人对父母不敬的现象,提出了“我们该如何孝顺父母”的问题,引发读者的思考.同时作者给出了展现孝顺的几点建议,包括与父母多沟通、陪伴他们、帮助做家务、照顾他们以及努力学习取得好成绩.这些建议既实用又具有可操作性,值得学习.
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孝顺父母
亲爱的同学们,
众所周知,父母是我们生命中最重要的人.然而在我们的社会中,有些人经常对父母无礼,尤其是青少年.我们怎样才能孝顺父母呢 这里有一些建议给你.
首先,我们应该尽可能多地与他们交流,因为交流是相互理解的最好方式.此外,和他们待在一起是一个很好的选择.我们可以帮助父母做家务.当他们生病时,我们应该耐心地照顾他们.最后但同样重要的是,我们有必要努力学习.好成绩可以让他们快乐和自豪.
必背词汇
1.urbanization n.城市化
2.popular culture 流行文化
3.social phenomenon 社会现象
4.fast food culture 快餐文化
5. environmental pollution 环境污染
6.traffic jams交通堵塞
7.electronic payment(e-payment)电子支付
8.medical reform 医疗改革
9.population aging 人口老龄化
10.gender equality 性别平等
11.work overload工作超负荷
12.talent show选秀节目
必背句型
1. There is a growing concern in society about...
社会对······的关注度不断提高.
2.More and more people are realizing the importance of...
越来越多的人认识到了······的重要性.
3.A common phenomenon in society is...
社会上的一个普遍现象是······
4.A controversial issue is...
一个备受人们争议的问题是······
5.Some people believe that..., while others argue that...
一些人相信······,而另一些人则认为······
6.One of the reasons why this issue is so controversial is that...
这个问题如此有争议的原因之一是·······
7.According to a recent study/survey,...
根据最近的一项研究／调查,······
8.It is not uncommon to...
······并不罕见.
9.In recent years, there has been a surge in the number of people who...
近年来,·····的人数激增.
10.Some people attribute this phenomenon to...
一些人将这种现象归因于······
11.One possible reason for this is that...
一个可能的原因是······
12.Another factor that contributes to this trend is that...
另一个导致这一趋势的因素是······
小试牛刀
信息化时代抖音(TikTok)越来越受到人们的欢迎.假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom想了解下抖音在中国的流行情况,写信向你询问.请你回信向他介绍抖音的特点,并谈谈你对抖音的看法.内容如下:
1.优点:制作方便;内容多样;······
2.缺点:容易着迷;影响视力;······
3.你的观点:······
注意:
1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息.
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to talk about TikTok. TikTok is very popular in China now. But what's special about it ___________
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Yours,
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参考范文
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to talk about TikTok. TikTok is very popular in China now. But what's special about it Here is my opinion.
People of all ages can make their own short videos with TikTok. These videos show different kinds of daily activities. What's more, TikTok can share interesting things with people, and make them happy and relaxed. However, every coin has two sides. It's easy for people to be crazy about it. They spend too much time watching it. It's bad for their eyes. People may pay less attention to their work or studies than to TikTok.
I think watching TikTok can be relaxing, but it might be wise for us to limit the time we spend on it every day.
Yours,
Li Hua