专题16 传统文化-常用话题写作-2024年初中英语中考高分作文全解

2024年初中英语中考高分作文全解
专题16 传统文化-常用话题写作
传统文化是一个国家或民族历史、习俗、信仰、价值观以及艺术形式的总和,它代表了一个民族的文化遗产和民族精神.在初中英语作文中,传统文化是一个重要的话题,它属于《义务教育英语课程标准(2022版)》主题中“人与社会”的范畴,具体涉及“传统节日,文化体验”“跨文化沟通与交流”“文化习俗与文化景观、节假日与庆祝活动”“身份认同与文化自信”等.该话题旨在引导学生认识、学习、继承并弘扬中华优秀传统文化.
分析近几年全国中考真题中的书面表达题可知,本话题主要从以下几个角度进行考查
1.介绍中国传统文化,如向外国友人介绍传统艺术、饮食文化、茶文化、风俗习惯等;
2.介绍中国传统节日,如春节、端午节、中秋节等;
3.弘扬中华传统美德,如勤劳、尊老敬老、孝亲敬长、诚实守信等.
该话题的文体类型主要为说明文或应用文.在写作过程中,学生需要注意使用正确的英语表达来介绍传统文化,要注意避免语法和拼写错误.此外,学生还应掌握相关的文化背景知识,以便更好地理解和表达主题内容.
真题实战
(2023·江苏扬州)为丰富校园生活,弘扬中华优秀传统文化,近期你校校报英语专栏举行了 Getting close to traditional Chinese culture征文活动,请根据表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文,向此专栏投稿,介绍中国传统手工艺(handicraft)风筝的历史、特征及其文化重要性,并分享你的看法.
Kites
History Mozi, in the Warring States period
Characteristics materials for making kites: ··· shapes of kites:...
Cultural importance kites: ·a traditional Chinese handicraft ·... kite flying: ·a popular outdoor activity... ·the World Kite Capital: Weifang, Shandong Province...
Your ideas …
要求:
(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;
(3)词数:100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等.
Kites
Kites have a history of about 2,300 years in China._______________________________________________
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参考范文1
Kites
Kites have a history of about 2,300 years in China. It was invented by Mozi, who lived in the Warring States period.
We can use materials such as paper, bamboo, thread and glue to make kites. And there are various kinds of shapes of kites, such as birds and cartoon characters. Making kites is a traditional Chinese handicraft. And different shapes and patterns on kites also show our splendid culture. Besides,kite flying is a very popular outdoor activity for families. Weifang,Shandong Province,is famous for its wonderful kites and is regarded as the World Kite Capital.
In my opinion, kites not only carry the essence of traditional Chinese culture, but also carry people's good wishes for happiness.
【名师点评】
本文作者详细介绍了风筝的多个方面,包括历史、制作材料、形状、文化意义以及与风筝相关的活动等.内容丰富,要点齐全,让读者能够全面了解中国的风筝文化.作者不仅介绍了风筝的基本信息,还深入探讨了风筝所承载的文化内涵,从中体现了作者对文化的深入理解.本篇范文内容丰富,逻辑清晰,语言流畅,是一篇优秀的作文.
【参考译文】
风筝
风筝在中国有大约2300年的历史.它是由生活在战国时期的墨子发明的.
我们可以用像纸、竹子、线和胶水等材料制作风筝.有各种形状的风筝,比如小鸟和卡通人物.制作风筝是中国的传统手工艺.风筝上不同的形状和图案也展示了我们灿烂的文化.此外,放风筝是一项非常受家庭欢迎的户外活动.山东省潍坊市以其精美的风筝而闻名,被誉为世界风筝之都.
在我看来,风筝不仅承载了中国传统文化的精髓,也承载了人们对幸福的美好祝愿.
参考范文2
Kites
Kites have a history of about 2,300 years in China. The kite was invented by a man called Mozi in the Warring States period. He made a bird out of wood in a legend. It was the first kite in history. Many materials can be used to make different shapes of kites today.
The World Kite Capital is Weifang, Shandong Province. There are many grand kite competitions held there every year. People all over the world want to go there. Flying kites is a very popular outdoor activity. Every weekend,I can see many people flying kites in the park. But the kites we fly now are all bought from stores. Few people make their own kites.
I believe that as a traditional Chinese handicraft, kites should continue to be passed down.
【名师点评】
作者开篇介绍了风筝的历史和特点.接下来介绍了风筝之都潍坊和放风筝这一活动.通过描述现在人们在公园放风筝的场景,与前面提到的历史和文化背景形成了对比.这有助于展示风筝从古至今的变迁.在作文的结尾部分,作者强调了作为中国传统手工艺品的风筝应当继续传承下去的观点,这体现了作者对传统文化的认识.整体来看,本篇作文内容丰富,观点明确,体现了作者的独立思考.
【参考译文】
风筝
风筝在中国有大约2300年的历史.风筝是战国时期一个叫墨子的人发明的.传说中他用木头做了一只鸟.这是历史上第一只风筝.今天许多材料都可以被用于制作不同形状的风筝.
世界风筝之都是山东省潍坊市.那里每年都举行许多盛大的风筝比赛.全世界的人都想去那里.放风筝是一项非常受欢迎的户外活动.每个周末,我都能看到很多人在公园里放风筝.但是我们现在放的风筝都是从商店买的.很少有人自己制作风筝.
我认为风筝作为一种传统的中国手工艺品,应该继续传承下去.
模拟演练1
(2022·河北唐山八年级期中)在即将举行的网络中学生国际文化交流活动中,你将代表学校介绍中国的传统节日－中秋节.请根据以下提示,用英语写一篇发言稿,介绍该节日.
Mid-Autumn Festival
☆Time:in September or October
☆ Activities: wish, have mooncakes, enjoy the moon...
☆ Meaning: get together,miss family members far away...
注意:
1.发言稿中必须包含以上信息,并适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
3.80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
Dear friends,
Welcome to the Chinese culture tour. Today I will introduce a traditional Chinese festival-Mid-Autumn Festival._____________________________________________________________________________________
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That's all. Thanks for listening.
参考范文
Dear friends,
Welcome to the Chinese culture tour. Today I will introduce a traditional Chinese festival-Mid-Autumn Festival.
The Mid-Autumn Festival usually falls on a day in September or October because people think the moon appears the biggest and brightest on the day.
During the festival, Chinese people sit around a table with their family members and have mooncakes while enjoying the beautiful moon,People think that round mooncakes and a full moon are symbols of getting together. When seeing them, people will miss their family members far away. At the same time,they will express wishes to them. Does it sound interesting
That's all. Thanks for listening.
【名师点评】
本文巧妙地将所给信息连贯起来,句子之间过渡自然、逻辑连贯,非常值得学习.同时,作者也运用了一些修辞手法,如象征和设问,增加了文章的可读性和吸引力.文章表达准确、内容完整,而且揭示了中秋节的传统文化内涵,如团圆、思乡等,有助于更好地实现文化交流.
【参考译文】
亲爱的朋友们,
欢迎参加中国文化之旅.今天我要介绍一个中国的传统节日－中秋节.中秋节通常在九月或十月的一天,因为人们认为那时的月亮是一年中最大、最亮的.
在节日期间,中国人与家人围坐在桌旁,吃着月饼,欣赏美丽的月亮.人们认为圆圆的月饼和满月是团圆的象征.当看到它们的时候,人们会想念远方的家人.同时,他们会表达对他们的祝愿.听起来有趣吗
就到这了.谢谢你的聆听.
模拟演练2
(2023·吉林省实验校考模拟)你校英语俱乐部正在举办“弘扬中华传统美德”的征文活动.中华传统美德包括:热爱祖国、尊敬师长、乐于助人、勤学好问、诚实礼貌等很多内容.请你从中挑选一项内容,以“We Should...”为题,写一篇短文参加征文活动.
内容:
1.叙述你奉行美德的事例;
2.谈谈作为中学生应该怎样传承和弘扬中华传统美德.
要求:
1.把题目补充完整;
2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
4.不少于80词.
提示词:respect v.&n.尊敬
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参考范文
We Should Love Our Country
As a student, I firmly believe that one of the highest virtues is loving our country.
During the National Day holiday, I visited the local History Museum and participated in an activity about history. The opportunity to express my love for my country through such an activity was meaningful and exciting.
As students, we should not only study hard to achieve good grades, but also cultivate our sense of responsibility and love of our country. First and foremost, we should be proud of our country. In addition, we should actively participate in public welfare activities and social practice activities to enhance our sense of social responsibility.
【名师点评】
本文开头明确提出了将“热爱祖国”这一传统美德作为主题.接下来,文章以作者自己参加的活动为例,体
现了作者对爱国的理解.最后,分点介绍了学生应该如何传承和弘扬爱国这一传统美德.整篇文章主题内容丰
富,紧扣要求,表达流畅.
【参考译文】
我们应该热爱我们的祖国
作为一名学生,我坚信最崇高的美德之一就是热爱我们的祖国.
国庆节期间,我参观了当地的历史博物馆,并参加了一个关于历史的活动.有机会通过这样的活动来表达我对祖国的热爱是有意义和令人激动的.
作为学生,我们不仅要努力学习取得好成绩,还要培养我们对国家的责任感和对祖国的热爱.首先,我们应该为我们的国家感到骄傲.另外,我们应该积极参加公益活动和社会实践活动,增强社会责任感.
必背词汇
一、传统文化
1.calligraphy n.书法
2.cuisine n.烹饪;菜肴
3.mythology n.神话
4.etiquette n.礼仪
5.dragon dance 舞龙
6.lion dance 舞狮
7.Chinese kot 中国结
8.Beijing Opera京剧
9.folk customs 民俗
10.the 24 solar terms 二十四节气
二、节日
1.the Spring Festival 春节
2.the Lantern Festival元宵节
3.the Dragon Boat Festival 端午节
4.the Mid-Autumn Festival 中秋节
5.the Double Ninth Festival 重阳节
6.the Tomb-Sweeping Day清明节
7.the National Day 国庆节
8.May Day 劳动节
三、实用表达
1.conventional adj.传统的
2.preserve v.保护
3.in memory of 为了纪念
4.in honor of 为了纪念
5.come into being 开始存在
6.date back to 追溯到
7.stand for代表
8.family reunion 家庭团聚
9.celebrate the festival 庆祝节日
10.the origin of...···..·的起源
必背句型
1. Traditional Chinese culture has a long history and rich contents.
中国传统文化有着悠久的历史和丰富的内涵.
2.In my opinion, kites not only carry the essence of traditional Chinese culture, but also carry people's good wishes for happiness.
在我看来,风筝不仅承载了中国传统文化的精髓,也承载了人们对幸福的美好祝愿.
3.Chinese knots are often used to express good wishes, because they stand for friendship, love and good luck.
中国结常被用来表达美好的祝愿,因为它们象征着友谊、爱和好运.
4.A single flower does not make spring, while one hundred flowers in full blossom bring spring to the garden.
一花独放不是春,百花齐放春满园.
5.Traditional Chinese festivals, as a cultural heritage, are an important way to inherit cultural values.
中国传统节日作为一种文化遗产,是传承文化价值的重要途径.
6.The study of Chinese literature can help us better understand the profound cultural heritage of China.
研究中国文学可以帮助我们更好地了解中国的深厚文化遗产.
7.Traditional Chinese culture is rich and diverse, including poetry, painting, music, dance and so on.
中国的传统文化丰富多样,包括诗歌、绘画、音乐、舞蹈等.
8. We should keep the traditional culture alive in our hearts.
我们应该让传统文化活在我们心中.
小试牛刀
假设你是李华,你的英国朋友 Tony来信说他对中国传统手工艺品(traditional Chinese handicrafts)如剪纸(paper-cutting)、孔明灯(sky lantern)、泥塑(Chinese clay sculpture)等很感兴趣,请你给他写一封回信,介绍一种手工艺品帮助他了解中国传统文化.
内容要点:
1.传统手工艺品的名称;
2.介绍相关内容(历史、流行状况、图案、用途等);
3.你对中国传统手工艺品的看法.
注意事项:
1.必须包含所有内容要点,可适当发挥;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名等;
4.词数不少于80,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
Dear Tony,
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Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Tony,
I'm glad to know that you're interested in traditional Chinese handicrafts. Now let me introduce something about paper-cutting.
Paper-cutting has a long history. It was liked by many people in the past. People cut red paper into different shapes to make paper-cuttings. Especially during the Spring Festival, beautiful paper-cuttings may be put up on walls or windows. Now it is also very popular, and even some young people want to learn the art of paper-cutting.
Traditional Chinese handicrafts are an important part of traditional Chinese culture. Welcome to China to learn more about traditional Chinese culture.
Yours,
Li Hua