2024届高三英语二轮复习作文专项读后续写助人类 面试途中帮助一位孕妇 讲义
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（2023·湖北模拟预测）
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完善的短文。
Mark grabbed his keys. He needed to get out of the house quickly. He had been trying to save as much money as possible from the government assistance he received due to his disability, but it was harder and harder with prices rising daily.
马克抓过他的钥匙。他需要尽快离开房子。他一直在努力从因残疾而获得的政府援助中节省尽可能多的钱，但随着物价每天上涨，这变得越来越困难。
Unfortunately, he lost half his right arm in a car accident several years ago, and it was hard to find a new job in his town in Tampa, Florida. He lost his previous job recently when the company went bankrupt (破产). For now, he only had those government checks keeping him fed, but he was tapping into his savings for everything else, and they were running out fast.
不幸的是，他在几年前的一次车祸中失去了半只右臂，在佛罗里达州坦帕市的小镇上很难找到新工作。最近公司破产，他失去了以前的工作(破产). 目前，他只有那些政府支票来维持生计，但他正在动用自己的积蓄来做其他事情，而且这些钱很快就用完了。
One of his friends had gotten him an interview and he was on his way. But after closing and locking his door, Mark turned around and got the shock of his life. A pregnant (怀孕的) woman was lying on his lawn, and/he had no idea how long she had been there.
他的一个朋友给他面试了，他就在路上。但在关上门并锁上门后，马克转过身来，受到了人生的震撼。一个怀孕的(怀孕的) 那个女人躺在他的草坪上，他不知道她在那个里呆了多久。
He grabbed his phone and called 911 quickly, and suddenly, it started to rain. Finally, it came, and he explained to the doctors that he had to move her because of the rain.
他抓起手机迅速拨打了911，突然，天开始下雨了。最后，雨来了，他向医生解释说，因为下雨，他不得不把她移走。
“Don’t worry, sir. She’s cold, so it was good that you moved her. Do you know this woman ” asked the doctor. Mark shook his head.
“别担心，先生。她很冷，所以你把她移走是件好事。你认识这个女人吗？”医生问道。马克摇了摇头。
“Can I give you my phone number If you don’t find her family or anyone, can you call me My name is Mark Higgins.”
“我能给你我的电话号码吗？如果你找不到她的家人或任何人，你能给我打电话吗？我叫马克·希金斯。”
“I’ll see what I can do,” the doctor said, noting down his number and leaving with the woman.
“我会看看我能做些什么，”医生说，记下他的电话号码，然后和那个女人一起离开。
Mark closed his door and sat down on his couch, hoping his heart would stop beating so fast. Suddenly, he remembered his interview and looked at the clock. He was late for it. He dashed to his car, praying they would wait for him.
马克关上门，坐在沙发上，希望自己的心跳不要那么快。突然，他想起了自己的采访，看了看时钟。他迟到了。他冲向自己的车，祈祷他们能等他。
注意: 1, 续写词数应为150左右；2, 请按如下格式作答。
He got no calls, which meant his interviewers probably didn’t like him due to his being late.
Seeing his lost right arm, David came up with an idea to reward Mark.
【范文模板】
He got no calls, which meant his interviewers probably didn’t like him due to his being late. The following day, Mark checked his phone and saw no calls, which meant that his interviewers probably didn’t like him due to his tardiness. But on the bright side, they hadn’t called from the hospital either, so they must have found the pregnant woman’s family. He sat down at his kitchen table and started browsing his phone for possible job openings when his doorbell rang. He opened the door and saw a man smiling widely at him. He is the husband of the pregnant woman, David, and they live next door to Mark. He came over to express great gratitude to Mark for what he had done and offered to repay him.
Seeing his lost right arm, David came up with an idea to reward Mark. David is a biomedical engineer. He has been working in the hospital to make artificial limbs. He wants to provide Mark with a prosthetic limb for free as a thank-you gift. They went back and forth for a while until David told him it would help him test these new designs on someone. In the end, Mark agreed because it was a generous offer and could help him get a new job at some point. Mark helped the unconscious woman in his yard, even though it made him late for his job interview. But in the end, it was the best decision of his life.
【情节分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了马克因为救助自己院子中的一个孕妇，导致他面试迟到，但是孕妇的丈夫是个生物医学工程师，作为感谢为他提供了一幅免费假肢，帮助孕妇成为了马克一生中最正确的决定。
【写作步骤】
1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“他没有接到任何电话，这意味着面试官可能不喜欢他，因为他迟到了。”可知，第一段可描写马克需要重新寻找工作，这时孕妇的丈夫大卫来感谢他。由第二段首句内容“看到自己失去的右臂，大卫想出了一个奖励马克的主意。”可知，第二段可描写大卫免费为他提供了一幅假肢。
2.续写线索：准备去面试——看到孕妇——帮助孕妇——面试迟到——大卫来感谢他——提供假肢作为感谢
【高分词汇】
行为类
①浏览：browse/look through
②提供：offer/provide
③测试：test/examine
情绪类
①感谢：gratitude/appreciation/gratefulness
②无意识的：unconscious/comatose/senseless
【高分句型1】
The following day, Mark checked his phone and saw no calls, which meant that his interviewers probably didn’t like him due to his tardiness.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】
Mark helped the unconscious woman in his yard, even though it made him late for his job interview.(even though引导的状语从句)
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完善的短文。
Mark grabbed his keys. He needed to get out of the house quickly. He had been trying to save as much money as possible from the government assistance he received due to his disability, but it was harder and harder with prices rising daily.
马克抓过他的钥匙。他需要尽快离开房子。他一直在努力从因残疾而获得的政府援助中节省尽可能多的钱，但随着物价每天上涨，这变得越来越困难。
Unfortunately, he lost half his right arm in a car accident several years ago, and it was hard to find a new job in his town in Tampa, Florida. He lost his previous job recently when the company went bankrupt (破产). For now, he only had those government checks keeping him fed, but he was tapping into his savings for everything else, and they were running out fast.
不幸的是，他在几年前的一次车祸中失去了半只右臂，在佛罗里达州坦帕市的小镇上很难找到新工作。最近公司破产，他失去了以前的工作(破产). 目前，他只有那些政府支票来维持生计，但他正在动用自己的积蓄来做其他事情，而且这些钱很快就用完了。
One of his friends had gotten him an interview and he was on his way. But after closing and locking his door, Mark turned around and got the shock of his life. A pregnant (怀孕的) woman was lying on his lawn, and/he had no idea how long she had been there.
他的一个朋友给他面试了，他就在路上。但在关上门并锁上门后，马克转过身来，受到了人生的震撼。一个怀孕的(怀孕的) 那个女人躺在他的草坪上，他不知道她在那个里呆了多久。
He grabbed his phone and called 911 quickly, and suddenly, it started to rain. Finally, it came, and he explained to the doctors that he had to move her because of the rain.
他抓起手机迅速拨打了911，突然，天开始下雨了。最后，雨来了，他向医生解释说，因为下雨，他不得不把她移走。
“Don’t worry, sir. She’s cold, so it was good that you moved her. Do you know this woman ” asked the doctor. Mark shook his head.
“别担心，先生。她很冷，所以你把她移走是件好事。你认识这个女人吗？”医生问道。马克摇了摇头。
“Can I give you my phone number If you don’t find her family or anyone, can you call me My name is Mark Higgins.”
“我能给你我的电话号码吗？如果你找不到她的家人或任何人，你能给我打电话吗？我叫马克·希金斯。”
“I’ll see what I can do,” the doctor said, noting down his number and leaving with the woman.
“我会看看我能做些什么，”医生说，记下他的电话号码，然后和那个女人一起离开。
Mark closed his door and sat down on his couch, hoping his heart would stop beating so fast. Suddenly, he remembered his interview and looked at the clock. He was late for it. He dashed to his car, praying they would wait for him.
马克关上门，坐在沙发上，希望自己的心跳不要那么快。突然，他想起了自己的采访，看了看时钟。他迟到了。他冲向自己的车，祈祷他们能等他。
注意: 1, 续写词数应为150左右；2, 请按如下格式作答。
He got no calls, which meant his interviewers probably didn’t like him due to his being late.
Seeing his lost right arm, David came up with an idea to reward Mark.
【范文模板】
He got no calls, which meant his interviewers probably didn’t like him due to his being late. The following day, Mark checked his phone and saw no calls, which meant that his interviewers probably didn’t like him due to his tardiness. But on the bright side, they hadn’t called from the hospital either, so they must have found the pregnant woman’s family. He sat down at his kitchen table and started browsing his phone for possible job openings when his doorbell rang. He opened the door and saw a man smiling widely at him. He is the husband of the pregnant woman, David, and they live next door to Mark. He came over to express great gratitude to Mark for what he had done and offered to repay him.
Seeing his lost right arm, David came up with an idea to reward Mark. David is a biomedical engineer. He has been working in the hospital to make artificial limbs. He wants to provide Mark with a prosthetic limb for free as a thank-you gift. They went back and forth for a while until David told him it would help him test these new designs on someone. In the end, Mark agreed because it was a generous offer and could help him get a new job at some point. Mark helped the unconscious woman in his yard, even though it made him late for his job interview. But in the end, it was the best decision of his life.
【情节分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了马克因为救助自己院子中的一个孕妇，导致他面试迟到，但是孕妇的丈夫是个生物医学工程师，作为感谢为他提供了一幅免费假肢，帮助孕妇成为了马克一生中最正确的决定。
【写作步骤】
1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“他没有接到任何电话，这意味着面试官可能不喜欢他，因为他迟到了。”可知，第一段可描写马克需要重新寻找工作，这时孕妇的丈夫大卫来感谢他。由第二段首句内容“看到自己失去的右臂，大卫想出了一个奖励马克的主意。”可知，第二段可描写大卫免费为他提供了一幅假肢。
2.续写线索：准备去面试——看到孕妇——帮助孕妇——面试迟到——大卫来感谢他——提供假肢作为感谢
【高分词汇】
行为类
①浏览：browse/look through
②提供：offer/provide
③测试：test/examine
情绪类
①感谢：gratitude/appreciation/gratefulness
②无意识的：unconscious/comatose/senseless
【高分句型1】
The following day, Mark checked his phone and saw no calls, which meant that his interviewers probably didn’t like him due to his tardiness.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】
Mark helped the unconscious woman in his yard, even though it made him late for his job interview.(even though引导的状语从句)