invitation letter
一、范例展示
假定你是学生会主席李华,近日你校将为欢迎新同学举办一场晚会活动,你想邀请外教Tom一起参加该活动。请你给他写一封邀请信,内容包括:
1.活动的时间、地点;
2.活动的具体内容。
注意:1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
How are you doing Currently, in order to welcome the new students, an evening party will be held in our school. As chairman of the Students’ Union, I’m writing to invite you to join us.
Here are some details about this activity. First, it will be held in the school meeting hall from 7:00 to 9:00 p.m. next Sunday. Additionally, there will be many wonderful performances presented by the teachers and students, such as singing, dancing, performing plays and so on. Everyone is longing for your coming and it would be more cheerful if you could give a performance.
I sincerely hope that you can accept our invitation and I have the confidence that we students would be extremely delighted to see you. Please let me know your decision if it is convenient for you. Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
二、审题思维导图
人称
时态
段落 布局 段1:
段2:
段3:
三、【好词】
1.邀请某人做某事 2.参加
3.将被举行 4.一场活动/比赛
5.一个音乐节 6.丰富学校生活
7.拓宽视野 8. 展示才艺
9.提高文化意识 10.在...有天赋
11.代表 12.做某事感到荣幸
13.在某人方便的时候 14.表演,演出
15.计划做某事 16.目的是,旨在
17.期望,盼望
四、文段构思具体写作
1.段1构思写作背景+写信意图:“邀请”(要有邀请二字)
(1)开头方式第①句:寒暄+自我介绍
写作目的
基础版:
进阶版:
高阶版:
2.段2的构思:介绍活动的目的、时间、内容为固定的话术
过渡句:
(1)活动的目的时间、地点介绍
时间地点模板
时间的表达
周日下午5点:
9月26日上午8点开始:
按计划大约持续3小时,从几点到几点:
地点表达
演讲厅 报告厅
礼堂 艺术楼
体育场 体育馆
操场
(2)活动目的
表达模板
吸引某人对...的兴趣
丰富某人的校园生活
提高某人的能力
提供一个机会给某人去...
提高学生...的意识
(3)活动内容
表达模板
翻译:艺术展览不急包括了许多艺术作品,而且也展示了中国传统文化的发展。
Varieties of activities, ranging from visiting exhibition of scientific achievements to watching films about space, will be organized.
注:校园活动内容通常有这样几个:看展览(必考)、看电影、搞比赛(演讲、合唱等等)、搞派对,所有校园活动都围绕这5个展开,挑两个出来略说。
(详说)办讲座最好说,讲座一定要取名,否则给人很假,取名为可以说A lecture named “going into××(走进...)”,是自然的话题用go nature,艺术就用art等,连接成第
A lecture named going into×× will enable students to get a closer at the universe. (作用好处意义)
3.段3构思(段尾句)固定话术
I'd appreciate it that you could confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.
Looking forward to your reply.
I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.
I have the ground to guarantee that you’ll have a good time.
If you are interested in it,you can send an email to...before this Sunday morning.
(不一定有,根据实际情况确定,也是结尾常用的句子)
范文模板
Dear_______,
Knowing you are fascinated by _________ (非谓语解释说明背景), I am extremely delighted to invite you to _________ (邀请事宜).
Here are some details concerning it/The details are as follows. As scheduled, the_______ (活动) will be held in_______ (地点) on ________(举办日期), which will last for __________(定语从句进一步说明持续时间). During the exhibition, a wide range of activities will be held, enabling you to have a better understanding of Chinese traditional culture. To begin with, it will provide you with a platform to ________(具体活动1). In addition, what you will also enjoy is ________ (具体活动2). I’m confident/sure that you will have a wonderful time.
I sincerely hope that you can attend the_______ (活动) . Please contact me to let me know your decision as soon as possible. Your early reply will be highly appreciated. Yours,
Li Hua
Homwork
假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友
Allen参加,内容包括:
1.时间; 2.活动的目的和安排; 3.欢迎他表演节目。
注意: 1. 词数100左右。
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【好句】(首段:自我介绍+写信意图—邀请)
1.Knowing that you are fond of Chinese culture, I'm writing to advise you to participate in a Chinese Reading Contest.
2.There's a live concert this Saturday evening at Xinhua Concert Hall. I'm writing to invite you to go with me.
3.I am writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest.
4.I think it would be a great idea if you could participate in Tom’s birthday party.
【好句】(中段:邀请内容+原因+分条)
1.Here are some details about this activity.
2.Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance.
3.Participants will gather in the English corner where they can communicate with each other in English, sharing a knowledge of brilliant English cultures and interesting customs.
4.It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well prepared contestants will deliver their speeches.
【好句】(尾段:照应主题表示感谢+期待回复)
We would appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your early convenience.
I sincerely hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you.
3.Would you please drop me a line to let me know if you can come to the dinner party this evening
4.My family and I would feel much honored if you could come.
5.We would be looking forward to your coming with great pleasure.
6.I would like to meet you there and please let me know your decision soon.