高考英语应用文---征文
一、语料储备
词汇:
引言;引用quote 坚持perseverance
观点perspective, view, opinion 污染pollute (v.), pollution (n.)
呼吁advocate (v.), advocacy (n.) 保护protect, conserve (v.), protection, conservation (n.)
建议suggest(v.), suggestion(n.) 促进promote, improve
重要性importance, significance 反思reflect
例子;实例example, illustration 多样性diversity
短语:
1.随着海洋污染日益严重,联合国正式将六月八日定为世界海洋日,旨在提高人们的海洋保护意识。
With the ocean pollution becoming more serious,Jane 8th is officially named by the UN as the
World Oceans Day,which is aimed at ____________________________ ocean conservation.
2.现在是我们应该采取行动保护大自然的时候了。
It's high time that we should ____________________________ to protect our mother nature.
3.显然,实现一个可持续发展的海洋需要我们的共同努力。
Obviously, the achievement of sustainable ocean ____________________________.
4.首先,海洋在我们的地球上发挥着重要作用。
To begin with, the ocean ____________________________ on our blue planet.
5.海洋大约占地球表面的70%,是各种生物的摇篮,丰富了生物多样性,平衡了生态系统。
Accounting for approximately 70% of the Earth's surface, the ocean is a cradle for diverse creatures, which ____________________________ and balances ecosystem.
6.海洋拥有宝贵而丰富的自然资源,促进了当地渔业和旅游业的发展。
The oceans boasts valuable and abundant natural resources, ____________________________ of
local fishing and travelling industries.
7.海洋是不可或缺的,我们应当肩负起保护它的责任。
So indispensable is the ocean that we should ____________________________ to conserve it.
句子:
1.It's high time that ____________________________ to protect our mother nature.
是时候我们采取行动保护大自然了。
2.There are multiple methods, ranging from enhancing the awareness of marine protection to ____________________________.
有多种方法,如提高海洋保护意识和规范人类活动。
3.At no time ____________________________ the power of oceans.
任何时候我们都不应该低估海洋的力量。
4.____________________________ than words.
事实胜于雄辩。
5.Every drop of water ____________________________.
每一滴水都很重要。
名言警句:
Earth provides enough to satisfy every man's needs, but not every man's greed.
地球能满足人类的需要,但满足不了人类的贪婪。
They (oceans)provide a breeding ground for life, connect the world and promote development.
海洋孕育了生命,联通了世界,促进了发展。
二、重温真题
(2022年全国甲卷)你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主,举办英语征文比赛,请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.海洋的重要性; 2.保护海洋的倡议。
注意:
1.词数80左右; 2.请在相应位置作答。
Our Oceans,Our Responsibility
June 8 was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Ocean Day.
审题与构思:
此次书面表达设定的情景为:你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主,举办英语征文比赛,写一篇短文投稿。征文应该采用正式的书面用语,以第一人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主。
内容结构方面,可分为三段:
第一段:以目前存在的海洋污染现象严重引入,呼吁大家重视海洋的保护。
第二段:介绍海洋的重要性,可从不同的角度下笔,如海洋蕴育了多样的生命,海洋拥有丰富的资源,海洋为人类提供了生计和旅游资源等。
第三段:提出保护海洋的建议、措施,并在文章最后进行呼吁。
注意:第二段和第三段的比重相当。
经典范文:
Our Oceans,Our Responsibility
June 8 was named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day. Admittedly, at no time should we underestimate the power of oceans.
To begin with, the ocean plays a significant role on our blue planet. On one hand, accounting for approximately 70% of the Earth's surface, it is a cradle for diverse creatures. On the other hand, the ocean boasts valuable and abundant natural resources, promoting the development of local fishing and travelling industries.
Therefore, it is our responsibility to conserve it. Each individual should strive to become an Ocean Guardian dedicated to advancing marine conservation. This can be achieved by saying NO to single-use plastics, participating in beach clean-up campaigns, and purchasing only sustainable sea products.
Action speaks louder than words. It is crucial that we take measures now for the prosperous future of our generations!
三、实战演练
(2022届广东深圳二模)你校英文报正在征稿。请你结合下面的名人名言(famous quote),写一篇题为 “My Understanding of Failure” 的征文。
“A man can fail many times, but he isn't a failure until he begins to blame somebody else.”---J.Burroughs
内容包括:
1.你对该名言的理解; 2.生活中的例子; 3.你的感悟。
注意:
1.词数80左右; 2.请在相应位置作答。
参考答案:
短语
1.raising people's awareness of
2.take action/measures
3.requires our joint effort
4.plays a significant role
5.enriches the biodiversity
6.promoting the development
7.shoulder our responsibility
句子
1.we took action
2.regulating human activities
3.should we underestimate
4.Action speaks louder
5.counts
实战演练:
My Understanding of Failure
As J.Burroughs put it, “A man can fail many times, but he isn't a failure until he begins to blame somebody else.” From my perspective, this quote suggests that we should engage in self-examination after experiencing a defeat and take corresponding measures instead of blaming others.
When learning English, many of us may face the embarrassment of putting in efforts but preforming poorly in exam. I was no exception. However, instead of blaming my teacher ridiculously, I analyzed my English-learning condition and adjusted my learning method. For grammar, I compiled typical mistakes, reviewed basic concepts in time and actively worked through them.
Regarding memory intensive aspects such as vocabulary and writing. I practiced regularly to keep my mind clear and sharp, which proved beneficial for recitation. Eventually, my efforts paid off.
In a nutshell, blaming others won't relieve you from failure, but self-examination will. Hard work coupled with a positive mindset, will lead to great success.