Unit 2 Section Ⅳ Reading for Writing
【学习目标】
1.通过分析课文,理解并能够自主运用重要语言点。(语言能力)
2.了解课文大意,培养略读和查读等阅读能力。(语言能力,学习能力)
3.通过阅读熟悉有关旅行计划的电子邮件的文体特征,并掌握其写作方法及策略。(学习能力)
【合作探究】
语篇研读
细读课文,明确教材细节
阅读教材第30页课文内容,选择最佳答案。
1.What is the main purpose for the trip of the Richards
A.To see the Terracotta Army in Xi'an.
B.To go to the Shaanxi History Museum.
C.To go to the Xi'an City Wall.
D.To go to a “Chinese treasure house”.
2.When are they planning to leave for Xi'an according to the passage
A.On October 1st. B.On September 30th.
C.On October 2nd. D.On September 29th.
3.Which of the following statements is TRUE according to the passage
A.People didn't know about the Terracotta Army until the 1980s.
B.Richard has seen the amazing sight of Terracotta Army before.
C.Richard wants Xiao Li to travel to Xi'an with them together.
D.Richard will write to Xiao Li again and send him photos.
答案 1~3 ABD
新知探究
核 心 单 词
知识点1 sight n.景象;视野;视力
(P30)I've heard that it is an amazing sight, and I can't wait to go.我听说那是一处令人惊叹的景象,我迫不及待地想去看看。
知识拓展
in sight 看得见;在视力范围之内
out of sight 看不见;在视力范围之外
at first sight 初看时;乍一看
at the sight of... 一看见……
catch sight of 看见
lose sight of 看不见;忽视
come into sight 进入视野;出现
经典佳句
As soon as you enter the university gate, you will catch sight of many old trees and buildings.一踏进这所大学的校门,你就会看见许多古老的大树和建筑物。
融会应用
Ⅰ.用sight的相关短语填空
(1)Every time I myself in the mirror,I feel so disappointed.
(2)I him but could still hear his footsteps.
(3)He looked at the street, but there was no one .
Ⅱ.同义句改写
(4)The boy began to run as soon as he saw the teacher.
→ ,the boy began to run.
答案 (1)catch sight of (2)lost sight of
(3)in sight (4)At the sight of the teacher
知识点2 comment n.议论;评论 vi.& vt.发表意见;评论
(P31)Revise your draft according to your partner's comments.根据你搭档的意见修改草稿。
知识拓展
No comment!无可奉告!
make comments/a comment about/on...对……加以评论
comment on...对……发表评论
经典佳句
Don't offer comments if you can't understand its real meaning.如果你不明白它的真正意思,你就不要发表意见。
融会应用
Ⅰ.单句填空
(1)The teacher often makes comments how different the two boys are.
(2)To enable us to further improve our service, please feel free to make (comment) and suggestions.
Ⅱ.一句多译
他是个直言不讳的人,喜欢对周围的事情发表意见。
(3)He is an outspoken man and prefers to around him.(comment n.)
(4)He is an outspoken man and prefers to around him.(comment v.)
答案 (1)on/about (2)comments (3)make comments on the things (4)comment on the things
短 语 句 式
知识点3 It be+形容词+that从句
(P30)It's amazing that there are more than 8,000 statues, and no one in modern times knew about them until the 1970s.令人惊奇的是,这里有8000多座雕像,直到20世纪70年代,现代才有人知道它们。
知识拓展
本句结构为“It be+形容词+that从句”,其中it为形式主语, that从句为真正的主语。
it作形式主语的常用句式:
(1)It be+形容词(obvious、possible、strange、natural、important、amazing...)+that从句
It is important that everyone (should) learn to get along well with others in a new environment.在新的环境中每个人学会和他人相处很重要。
It is surprising that my little son should have got used to a new environment.真神奇,我的小儿子竟然已经
习惯了新的环境。
(2)It be+名词短语(a pity、a fact、an honour、no wonder...)+that从句
It is a pity that we lost a chance to taste Sichuan cuisine.真是可惜,我们错过了一次品尝四川美食的机会。
融会应用
一句多译
这个小男孩去年竟然辍学了,真令人吃惊。
(1) the little boy should have dropped out of school last year.
(2) the little boy should have dropped out of school last year.
答案 (1)It was amazing/surprising that (2)It was a surprise that
写作探究
有关旅行计划的电子邮件
本单元的写作任务是应用文类别中的电子邮件。电子邮件的格式和普通信件一样,通常包括五个部分,即信头、称呼、正文、结束语和签名。高考中邮件的信头通常不用写出,只需写出其他部分即可。其中,邮件的正文是重中之重。本单元的邮件正文是关于旅行计划的,需要熟练掌握相关的词汇及句式。
探究点1 教材范例提炼
Ⅰ.常用词汇
1.pack up 整理;把……打包
2.around the corner 即将来临
3.take a bus/train 乘公共汽车/火车
4.go on a tour/sightseeing 旅行/观光
5.book a ticket 订票
6.make arrangements for 为……安排
7.in advance/ahead of time 提前
8.broaden one's view/horizons 开阔眼界
9.take advantage of/make use of 利用
10.as follows 如下
11.set out/off 出发
12.leave for 动身去某地
13.enjoy the scenery 欣赏风景
Ⅱ.话题句式
1.旅行计划的开头:交代时间和目的地。
(1)This month, I will travel to Changsha and Zhangjiajie with my two friends, which is supposed to be a seven-day trip.这个月,我要和两个朋友去长沙和张家界旅游,这是一次七日之旅。
(2)I'm planning to travel to Suzhou, a city called Eastern Venice.我计划去苏州旅游——一个被人们称为“东方威尼斯”的城市。
(3)The May Day is coming, and I am going to travel to Shanghai to see its beautiful scenery.五一劳动节要来了,我打算去上海欣赏美景。
2.主体段落:交代动身时间、所乘坐的交通工具及停留的时间等。
(1)We will set out on 10 June.我们6月10日出发。
(2)I will stay there for about three days.我要在那儿待大约三天。
(3)I'm planning to go there by train and come back by bus.我计划乘火车去那儿,然后乘公共汽车回来。
3.旅行计划的结尾:自己的想法和对对方的期待或要求。
(1)Do you have any plans for the coming May Day holiday 对于即将到来的五一假期,你有计划吗
(2)Look forward to hearing from you soon.盼望着尽快收到你的回信。
探究点2 写作应用体验
写作典例
假定你是李华,你计划期末考试结束后去英国旅行。请给你的英国网友Harry写一封信,告诉他你的计划并就相关问题向他询问。内容包括:
1.考试结束后和父母一起去英国旅行;
2.计划在伦敦停留5天;
3.旅行计划:
(1)第一天参观伦敦塔桥(Tower Bridge)和海德公园(Hyde Park);
(2)第二天参观大本钟(Big Ben)和白金汉宫(Buckingham Palace);
(3)第三天参观大英博物馆(British Museum);
(4)去购物。
4.向他询问英国的风俗习惯。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
To: harry@
From: lihua@
Subject: Travel plan __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________
分步推进
Step 1 审题谋篇
电子邮件一般由以下五部分组成:
(1)收件人地址: 在标题栏的 “收件人(To)”框中输入收信人的电子邮件地址。
(2)主题:“主题(Subject)”框的内容应概括电子邮件的内容,可以是一个单词,可以是一个名词性短语,也可以是一个完整的句子。
(3)称呼:电子邮件一般使用非正式的文体,因此正文前的称呼通常无须使用Dear Mr Johnson之类的表达。在同辈的亲朋好友或同事间可以直呼其名,如:Hi Tom;但对长辈或上级最好使用头衔并使用姓,如:Dear Doctor Li。
(4)主体: 写电子邮件和写英文书信相差不大。
(5)结尾语:结尾语一般有Sincerely yours、Best regards等。
Step 2 要点翻译
1.词汇翻译
(1)打算做某事
(2)玩得开心
(3)文化习俗
(4)名胜
答案 (1)plan/intend to do sth (2)enjoy oneself (3)cultures and customs (4)places of interest
2.句子翻译
(1)期末考试结束后,我要和父母一起去英国旅行。
(2)由于第一次去那里,我希望你能给我提供一些有关英国的文化习俗的信息。
答案
(1)I am going to travel to England with my parents after finishing the final exam.
(2)Because of going there for the first time, I hope you can provide me with some information about the cultures and customs of England.
Step 3 连句成篇
利用以上几个句子,加上恰当的连接词和过渡句,必要时可以改变句式,使之成为一篇连贯的文章。
参考范文
Dear Harry,
How is everything I am going to travel to England with my parents after finishing the final exam. We plan to stay in London for about five days. During the trip, we will visit Tower Bridge and Hyde Park on the first day. On the second day, we will see Big Ben and Buckingham Palace, which are the places of interest I am crazy about. On the third day, we will enjoy ourselves at British Museum. And then we will go shopping.
Because of going there for the first time, I hope you can provide me with some information about the cultures and customs of England.
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【随堂检测】
主题写作
假定你是李华,你打算和妈妈一起去度假。请给你的新西兰笔友John写一封电子邮件,告诉他你们的度假方案并征求意见。内容包括:
1.出行时间;
2.目的地及选择此处的原因;
3.拟定的活动安排;
4.费用问题。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考范文
Dear John,
I've looked at several possible places where I can go on holiday together with my mom.We prefer to go to Auckland because both of us have never been there before.We can explore the forests and walk along the beach, enjoying the natural beauty.We also plan to taste the traditional food.
We intend to take the trip during the first week of October.The 7-day trip costs about 30,000 yuan per person.But my mom only wants to spend 20,000 yuan for each.Anyhow, I think this trip sounds really exciting and my mom likes it very much!
Do you have any better advice I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2(共28张PPT)
UNIT 2 TRAVELLING AROUND
Section Ⅳ Reading for Writing
1.通过分析课文，理解并能够自主运用重要语言点。（语言能力）
2.了解课文大意，培养略读和查读等阅读能力。（语言能力，学习能力）
3.通过阅读熟悉有关旅行计划的电子邮件的文体特征,并掌握其写作方法及策略。（学习能力）
细读课文，明确教材细节
阅读教材第30页课文内容,选择最佳答案。
1.What is the main purpose for the trip of the Richards ( )
A
A.To see the Terracotta Army in Xi'an. B.To go to the Shaanxi History Museum.
C.To go to the Xi'an City Wall. D.To go to a “Chinese treasure house”.
2.When are they planning to leave for Xi'an according to the passage ( )
B
A.On October 1st. B.On September 30th.
C.On October 2nd. D.On September 29th.
3.Which of the following statements is TRUE according to the passage ( )
D
A.People didn't know about the Terracotta Army until the 1980s.
B.Richard has seen the amazing sight of Terracotta Army before.
C.Richard wants Xiao Li to travel to Xi'an with them together.
D.Richard will write to Xiao Li again and send him photos.
核心单词
知识点1 sight n．景象；视野；视力
（P30）I've heard that it is an amazing sight, and I can't wait to go.我听说那是一处令人惊叹的景象，我迫不及待地想去看看。
知识拓展
in sight 看得见；在视力范围之内
out of sight 看不见；在视力范围之外
at first sight 初看时；乍一看
at the sight of... 一看见……
catch sight of 看见
lose sight of 看不见；忽视
come into sight 进入视野；出现
经典佳句
As soon as you enter the university gate, you will catch sight of many old trees and buildings.一踏进这所大学的校门，你就会看见许多古老的大树和建筑物。
融会应用
Ⅰ.用sight的相关短语填空
（1）Every time I _____________ myself in the mirror,I feel so disappointed.
catch sight of
（2）I ____________him but could still hear his footsteps.
lost sight of
（3）He looked at the street, but there was no one________.
in sight
Ⅱ.同义句改写
（4）The boy began to run as soon as he saw the teacher.
→_________________________，the boy began to run.
At the sight of the teacher
知识点2 comment n.议论；评论 vi.& vt.发表意见；评论
（P31）Revise your draft according to your partner's comments.根据你搭档的意见修改草稿。
知识拓展
No comment！无可奉告！
make comments/a comment about/on...对……加以评论
comment on...对……发表评论
经典佳句
Don't offer comments if you can't understand its real meaning.如果你不明白它的真正意思，你就不要发表意见。
融会应用
Ⅰ.单句填空
（1）The teacher often makes comments_________how different the two boys are.
on/about
（2）To enable us to further improve our service, please feel free to make
__________（comment） and suggestions.
comments
Ⅱ.一句多译
他是个直言不讳的人，喜欢对周围的事情发表意见。
（3）He is an outspoken man and prefers to ____________________________ around
him.（comment n.）
make comments on the things
（4）He is an outspoken man and prefers to _____________________ around him.
（comment v.）
comment on the things
短语句式
知识点3 It be+形容词+that从句
（P30）It's amazing that there are more than 8，000 statues, and no one in modern times knew about them until the 1970s.令人惊奇的是，这里有8000多座雕像，直到20世纪70年代，现代才有人知道它们。
知识拓展
本句结构为“It be+形容词+that从句”，其中it为形式主语， that从句为真正的主语。
it作形式主语的常用句式：
（1）It be+形容词（obvious、possible、strange、natural、important、amazing...）+that从句
It is important that everyone （should） learn to get along well with others in a new environment.在新的环境中每个人学会和他人相处很重要。
It is surprising that my little son should have got used to a new environment.真神奇，我的小儿子竟然已经
习惯了新的环境。
（2）It be+名词短语（a pity、a fact、an honour、no wonder...）+that从句
It is a pity that we lost a chance to taste Sichuan cuisine.真是可惜，我们错过了一次品尝四川美食的机会。
融会应用 一句多译
这个小男孩去年竟然辍学了，真令人吃惊。
（1）___________________________ the little boy should have dropped out of school
last year.
It was amazing/surprising that
（2）____________________ the little boy should have dropped out of school last
year.
It was a surprise that
有关旅行计划的电子邮件
本单元的写作任务是应用文类别中的电子邮件。电子邮件的格式和普通信件一样，通常包括五个部分，即信头、称呼、正文、结束语和签名。高考中邮件的信头通常不用写出，只需写出其他部分即可。其中，邮件的正文是重中之重。本单元的邮件正文是关于旅行计划的，需要熟练掌握相关的词汇及句式。
探究点1 教材范例提炼
课文范例
素材积累
Ⅰ.常用词汇
1.pack up 整理；把……打包
2.around the corner 即将来临
3.take a bus/train 乘公共汽车/火车
4.go on a tour/sightseeing 旅行/观光
5.book a ticket 订票
6.make arrangements for 为……安排
7.in advance/ahead of time 提前
8.broaden one's view/horizons 开阔眼界
9.take advantage of/make use of 利用
10.as follows 如下
11.set out/off 出发
12.leave for 动身去某地
13.enjoy the scenery 欣赏风景
Ⅱ.话题句式
1.旅行计划的开头：交代时间和目的地。
（1）This month, I will travel to Changsha and Zhangjiajie with my two friends, which is supposed to be a seven-day trip.这个月，我要和两个朋友去长沙和张家界旅游，这是一次七日之旅。
（2）I'm planning to travel to Suzhou, a city called Eastern Venice.我计划去苏州旅游——一个被人们称为“东方威尼斯”的城市。
（3）The May Day is coming, and I am going to travel to Shanghai to see its beautiful scenery.五一劳动节要来了，我打算去上海欣赏美景。
2.主体段落：交代动身时间、所乘坐的交通工具及停留的时间等。
（1）We will set out on 10 June.我们6月10日出发。
（2）I will stay there for about three days.我要在那儿待大约三天。
（3）I'm planning to go there by train and come back by bus.我计划乘火车去那儿，然后乘公共汽车回来。
3.旅行计划的结尾：自己的想法和对对方的期待或要求。
（1）Do you have any plans for the coming May Day holiday？对于即将到来的五一假期，你有计划吗？
（2）Look forward to hearing from you soon.盼望着尽快收到你的回信。
探究点2 写作应用体验
写作典例
假定你是李华，你计划期末考试结束后去英国旅行。请给你的英国网友Harry写一封信，告诉他你的计划并就相关问题向他询问。内容包括：
1.考试结束后和父母一起去英国旅行；
2.计划在伦敦停留5天；
3.旅行计划：
（1）第一天参观伦敦塔桥（Tower Bridge）和海德公园（Hyde Park）；
（2）第二天参观大本钟（Big Ben）和白金汉宫（Buckingham Palace）；
（3）第三天参观大英博物馆（British Museum）；
（4）去购物。
4.向他询问英国的风俗习惯。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
To: harry@
From: lihua@
Subject: Travel plan
___
分步推进
Step 1 审题谋篇
电子邮件一般由以下五部分组成：
（1）收件人地址: 在标题栏的 “收件人（To）”框中输入收信人的电子邮件地址。
（2）主题：“主题（Subject）”框的内容应概括电子邮件的内容，可以是一个单词，可以是一个名词性短语，也可以是一个完整的句子。
（3）称呼:电子邮件一般使用非正式的文体，因此正文前的称呼通常无须使用Dear Mr Johnson之类的表达。在同辈的亲朋好友或同事间可以直呼其名，如：Hi Tom；但对长辈或上级最好使用头衔并使用姓，如：Dear Doctor Li。
（4）主体: 写电子邮件和写英文书信相差不大。
（5）结尾语:结尾语一般有Sincerely yours、Best regards等。
Step 2 要点翻译
1.词汇翻译
（1）打算做某事____________________
plan/intend to do sth
（2）玩得开心_____________
enjoy oneself
（3）文化习俗___________________
cultures and customs
（4）名胜________________
places of interest
2.句子翻译
（1）期末考试结束后，我要和父母一起去英国旅行。
_______________________________________________________________________
I am going to travel to England with my parents after finishing the final exam.
（2）由于第一次去那里，我希望你能给我提供一些有关英国的文化习俗的信息。
___________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________
Because of going there for the first time, I hope you can provide me with some information about the cultures and customs of England.
Step 3 连句成篇
利用以上几个句子,加上恰当的连接词和过渡句,必要时可以改变句式,使之成为一篇连贯的文章。
Dear Harry,
How is everything I am going to travel to England with my parents after finishing the final exam. We plan to stay in London for about five days. During the trip, we will visit Tower Bridge and Hyde Park on the first day. On the second day, we will see Big Ben and Buckingham Palace, which are the places of interest I am
crazy about. On the third day, we will enjoy ourselves at British Museum. And then we will go shopping.
Because of going there for the first time, I hope you can provide me with some information about the cultures and customs of England.
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
主题写作
假定你是李华，你打算和妈妈一起去度假。请给你的新西兰笔友John写一封电子邮件，告诉他你们的度假方案并征求意见。内容包括：
1.出行时间；
2.目的地及选择此处的原因；
3.拟定的活动安排；
4.费用问题。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear John，
I've looked at several possible places where I can go on holiday together with my mom. We prefer to go to Auckland because both of us have never been there before. We can explore the forests and walk along the beach, enjoying the natural beauty. We also plan to taste the traditional food.
We intend to take the trip during the first week of October. The 7-day trip costs about 30,000 yuan per person. But my mom only wants to spend 20,000 yuan for each. Anyhow, I think this trip sounds really exciting and my mom likes it very much!
Do you have any better advice I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
