2024届4月浙江省二模英语读后续写--音乐的神奇力量(女孩也可以打鼓)任务单(含答案)

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名称 2024届4月浙江省二模英语读后续写--音乐的神奇力量(女孩也可以打鼓)任务单(含答案)
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2024年杭州二模英语读后续写:
“'I 'll bet Anjali knows. Right, Anjali Why don't you show us since you're the star student," Deepak taunted(奚落).
Anjali was confused. She wasn't trying to show off. She was just playing tabla(印度塔不拉鼓), like everyone else.And why was Deepak being so mean lately ls it because tabla is a boy's thing She didn't care that people thought it was a boys’ instrument. Anjali knew there was no such thing. She danced her fingers across the tabla to perform the composition in confusion. “Ugh!” Anjali heard someone groan and she stopped playing.
“'I guess I don't know it that well after all." Anjali said sheepishly to the teacher, Mr, Zakir. Her stomach was doing flip-flops. That wasn't true. Not even a little. Mr. Zakir's eyes narrowed. He looked like he was about to say something but changed his mind. “The recital(演奏会) is next week, everyone. Keep practicing. I will be announcing who will get to perform onstage with me at my next concert!” Anjali had dreamed of a moment like that. She wanted to win the opportunity, but she needed to sort things straight with Deepak first.
As the class was dismissed, Anjali hurried over to Deepak, When she finally made eye contact with him, he purposely looked away and walked off. The next day at school, Anjali overheard Deepak whispering to Mary, “People are onlinterested because she's the only girl in tabla class and they want her to feel special. She's not that good” Aniali was furious. She excused herself and went to the bathroom. She took some deep breaths but couldn't relax, Her heart was pounding
“It's not my fault that people make a big deal about a girl playing tabla. I make mistakes too, but I work really hardMaybe he should too. He should be less mean and practice more.’
“If I play in this concert, no one will talk to me again. He will turn everyone against me.”
“I don't want to see a tabla or hear a tabla or play a tabla EVER AGAIN!!" Anjali yelled at the mirror. It was quiet for a moment. She believed it was one of her darkest days ever.
P1: Stepping out of the bathroom, Anjali saw some inspiring posters on the wall.
P2: After the recital, Deepak walked up to Anjali.
Anjali:女生喜欢打塔布拉鼓,谦虚而且勤奋。认真准备演奏会,因为她非常想喝老师同台表演参加老师的下一个音乐会
Deepak:男生,对 Anjali 非常刻薄,当众奚落她。
Mr. Zakir:塔布拉鼓老师,也认可 Anali 的实力,但是没有说太多
时间和地点细节:演奏会前,课堂上
重要物品意象:塔布拉鼓,通常被认为是男孩子玩的乐器
故事大意梳理:
女生 Aniali 打塔布拉鼓打得很好,但是塔布拉鼓通常被认为是男生的乐器,所以男生 Deepak总出言伤害 Aniali,让 Aniali 很受伤。与此同时,Aniali 还想参加老师下周的演奏会,和老师同台演奏。
原文词语积累:
show off 炫耀
she danced her fingers across the tabla 手指在手鼓上跳舞
composition n.乐曲
groan v. 呻吟、叹息、嘟哝
sheepishly adv.羞怯地,愚蠢地
Her stomach was doing flip-flops.她的胃在翻腾
sort things straight with Deepak 和迪帕克好好谈谈
the class was dismissed 下课
hurried over to Deepak 匆匆向迪帕克走去
made eye contact with him 和他眼神交流
walk off 走开
overheard 偶然听到,无意中听到
furious 气愤的
people make a big deal about a girl playing table 人们把一个女孩子打塔布拉鼓看得很严重
需要回答的问题:
1.根据原文和两段段首句思考,Aniali的选择是放弃还是坚持
Aniai 不会放弃,相反她会坚持参加演奏会选拔
2根据第一段段首句,分析在第一段续写中的句一需要写的衔接元素:
解释 some inspiring posters 的内容
3根据两句段首句,分析第一段的结尾衔接句内容:
Aniali 表演结束,演出非常成功
4根据第二段段首句,思考在第二段中 Deepak 为什么向 Anjali 走去
Deepak 被 Aniali 的实力折服,向她道歉
5请尝试总结本文主旨:
人与自我:勤奋努力地练习热爱的事物,相信自己,坚持自己的梦想:女孩子可以做成功自己想做的任何事情。
续写框架构建:
Paragraph 1: Stepping out of the bathroom, Anjali saw some inspiring posters on the wall some inspiring posters]的内容
[Aniali]看到之后的反应
[Aniali]态度转变,在演奏会上的表演非常成功
Paragraph 2: After the recital, Deepak walked up to Anjali.
[Deepak]道歉,表达钦佩
[Anjali]的反应
[主旨升华]相信自己,保持勤奋练习;女孩子可以做成功自己想做的任何事情。
参考范文:
Stepping out of the bathroom, Anjali saw some inspiring posters on the wall. One of them illustrated with several instruments and a quote “Never dim your light," For that very moment, Anjali thought about how she was mesmerized the first time she saw someone playing tabla, by the beautiful sounds he was creating with his hands. She knew that tabla was meant for her. When the day of the recital finally arrived, Anjali was determined to do her very best, regardless of the outcome. She was not going to let anyone make her feel bad, whether it was for being good at something or for being a girl. And as expected, she delivered a flawless performance.
After the recital, Deepak walked up to Anjali. “Very impressive." He remarked awkwardly that he was just jealous because tabla should be a boy's instrument. Anjali shrugged, “You know there is no such thing." As Anjali took one last look at the stage, she felt such a relief. Under the spotlight was the set of tabla, glittering on the stage just as she did a few minutes earlier. Among countless compliments and congratulations from the audience, Anjali heard a little sweet voice, “Bravo, Anjali!" She turned to find a little girl looking up at her, “I didn't know girls could play tabla," she said. “Girls can do everything boys do," Anjali beamed, “Never dim your light!"
默写版:
Stepping out of the bathroom, Anjali saw some inspiring posters on the wall. ____________________________________________________________________
_______________其中一张图片上有几件乐器和一句名言“永远不要调暗你的灯光” For that very moment, Anjali thought about how she was mesmerized ____________________________________________________________她第一次看到有人在演奏tabla时,他用手发出美妙的声音. She knew that tabla was meant for her. When the day of the recital finally arrived, Anjali was determined to do her very best, regardless of the outcome. ______________________________________
________________________________________________她不会让任何人让她感觉不好,无论是因为她擅长某件事还是因为她是个女孩. And as expected, she delivered a flawless performance.
After the recital, Deepak walked up to Anjali. “Very impressive." ________________
_____________________________________________他尴尬地说,他只是嫉妒,因为塔布拉应该是男孩的乐器. Anjali shrugged, “You know there is no such thing." As Anjali took one last look at the stage, she felt such a relief. __________________
_____________________________________________________________聚光灯下是塔布拉的布景,和几分钟前一样在舞台上闪闪发光. Among countless compliments and congratulations from the audience, Anjali heard a little sweet voice, “Bravo, Anjali!" She turned to find a little girl looking up at her, “I didn't know girls could play tabla," she said. ____________________________________________
_____________________________________________________“女孩可以做男孩做的任何事情,”安贾利笑着说,“永远不要把你的灯调暗!”