-2024届高考英语作文复习专项读后续写欣赏创意服装展 讲义
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读后续写欣赏创意服装展
阅读下面的材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The school festival was buzzing with excitement, all because of a new contest called "Innovate Your Way. " This contest was all about making a costume that was as unique and creative as possible, showcasing what one loves the most.
Lily Adams was surrounded by classmates with cool ideas. One classmate said excitedly, "I'm going to be the whole solar system, with planets circling around me!" One boasted （吹嘘）, "I'll redefine innovation. I will become a walking smartphone from the future, showing the digital age with interactive apps and games. "
Meanwhile, another one came up with the idea to dress up as a live weather forecast. He planned to attach LED screens to his outfit, displaying different weather patterns. This costume would not just show the weather but also change with real-time updates, combining technology and creativity in a way the festival had never seen.
Feeling overwhelmed, Lily wasn't sure what to do. Her friends had such amazing ideas, and she hadn't even picked a costume yet. She shared her worries with her friend Noah, saying, "I can't make up my mind. Every idea seems too hard to do or just not exciting enough. "
Noah, always wise, had a great suggestion. "Why don't you make a costume about gardening You love it, and it's something unique to you, "he said. Lily was unsure because the contest was just a few days away. "I don't know if there's enough time to make something like that from the beginning, " she worried. But Noah encouraged her, "You have a special talent for making something wonderful out of simple things. Use what's around you. "
Inspired by Noah's words, Lily thought over her collection of plants and flowers. Arriving home, she noticed the pile of old gardening magazines and a forgotten green tarp（防水布） in the garage.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As Lily looked through the magazines, an idea began to take root.
The day of the contest finally arrived.
【答案】
As Lily looked through the magazines, an idea began to take root. She would create a costume that showcased her love for gardening! She quickly gathered all the materials she needed—leaves, flowers, and even some small plants. With Noah’s advice in mind, she started to work on her costume, carefully arranging the plants and flowers to create a beautiful garden scene. It was hard work, but Lily loved every minute of it. She spent hours perfecting her creation, adding little details here and there until it was just right.
The day of the contest finally arrived. Lily was nervous as she walked onto the stage, but as soon as she saw the look of amazement on the judges’ faces, she knew she had made the right choice. Her costume was unlike anything anyone had ever seen before. It was a living, breathing garden, complete with real plants and flowers. The judges were blown away by her creativity and originality, and Lily won first place in the contest!From that day on, Lily felt more confident in herself and her abilities. She realized that it’s important to follow your passions and do what you love.
续写翻译
当莉莉翻阅杂志时，一个想法开始生根发芽。她会制作一套服装来展示她对园艺的热爱！她很快收集了所有她需要的材料——叶子、花，甚至一些小植物。考虑到诺亚的建议，她开始制作自己的服装，仔细地布置植物和花朵，创造出一个美丽的花园场景。这是一项艰苦的工作，但莉莉喜欢它的每一分钟。她花了几个小时完善自己的创作，在这里和那里添加一些小细节，直到它恰到好处。
比赛的日子终于到了。莉莉走上舞台时很紧张，但当她看到评委们脸上惊讶的表情时，她就知道自己做出了正确的选择。她的服装和任何人以前见过的都不一样。这是一个充满活力的花园，有真正的植物和鲜花。评委们被她的创造力和独创性惊呆了，莉莉在比赛中获得了第一名！从那天起，莉莉对自己和自己的能力更加自信。她意识到追随自己的激情，做自己喜欢的事是很重要的。
【导语】本文以人物为线索，讲述了Lily Adams的学校要举办一项名为“创新你的方式”的新比赛。这项比赛的目的是制作一种尽可能独特和有创意的服装，展示一个人最喜欢的东西。Lily觉得她周围同学的想法都非常的酷，所以有点不知所措，不知道要选择什么样主题的服装。就在这时，她的朋友Noah给了她一个建议，让她准备关于园艺的服装。她不知道能不能按时完成，但是她决定尝试一下。
【详解】
段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当莉莉翻阅杂志时，一个想法开始生根发芽。”可知，第一段可描写Lily认真准备服装，并顺利完成。
②由第二段首句内容“比赛的日子终于到了。”可知，在比赛中，LiLy的创意服装得到了评委的认可，获得了一等奖。这件事让她对自己更加自信。
续写线索：
建议——准备的过程——顺利完成——得到评委的认可——获得一等奖——获得自信
3.词汇激活
行为类：①收集：gather/collect ②增添：add/extend ③赢得：win/gain
情绪类：①紧张的：nervous/anxious ②惊讶：amazement/astonishment
【点睛】
【高分句型1】 She would create a costume that showcased her love for gardening!
（运用了that引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】She realized that it’s important to follow your passions and do what you love.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型3】With Noah’s advice in mind, she started to work on her costume, carefully arranging the plants and flowers to create a beautiful garden scene.
（运用了现在分词短语作状语）
【高分句型4】She spent hours perfecting her creation, adding little details here and there until it was just right.
（运用了现在分词短语作状语）
【高分句型5】The judges were blown away by her creativity and originality, and Lily won first place in the contest!
运用了被动语态。
阅读下面的材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The school festival was buzzing with excitement, all because of a new contest called "Innovate Your Way. " This contest was all about making a costume that was as unique and creative as possible, showcasing what one loves the most.
Lily Adams was surrounded by classmates with cool ideas. One classmate said excitedly, "I'm going to be the whole solar system, with planets circling around me!" One boasted （吹嘘）, "I'll redefine innovation. I will become a walking smartphone from the future, showing the digital age with interactive apps and games. "
Meanwhile, another one came up with the idea to dress up as a live weather forecast. He planned to attach LED screens to his outfit, displaying different weather patterns. This costume would not just show the weather but also change with real-time updates, combining technology and creativity in a way the festival had never seen.
Feeling overwhelmed, Lily wasn't sure what to do. Her friends had such amazing ideas, and she hadn't even picked a costume yet. She shared her worries with her friend Noah, saying, "I can't make up my mind. Every idea seems too hard to do or just not exciting enough. "
Noah, always wise, had a great suggestion. "Why don't you make a costume about gardening You love it, and it's something unique to you, "he said. Lily was unsure because the contest was just a few days away. "I don't know if there's enough time to make something like that from the beginning, " she worried. But Noah encouraged her, "You have a special talent for making something wonderful out of simple things. Use what's around you. "
Inspired by Noah's words, Lily thought over her collection of plants and flowers. Arriving home, she noticed the pile of old gardening magazines and a forgotten green tarp（防水布） in the garage.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As Lily looked through the magazines, an idea began to take root.
The day of the contest finally arrived.
【答案】
As Lily looked through the magazines, an idea began to take root. She would create a costume that showcased her love for gardening! She quickly gathered all the materials she needed—leaves, flowers, and even some small plants. With Noah’s advice in mind, she started to work on her costume, carefully arranging the plants and flowers to create a beautiful garden scene. It was hard work, but Lily loved every minute of it. She spent hours perfecting her creation, adding little details here and there until it was just right.
The day of the contest finally arrived. Lily was nervous as she walked onto the stage, but as soon as she saw the look of amazement on the judges’ faces, she knew she had made the right choice. Her costume was unlike anything anyone had ever seen before. It was a living, breathing garden, complete with real plants and flowers. The judges were blown away by her creativity and originality, and Lily won first place in the contest!From that day on, Lily felt more confident in herself and her abilities. She realized that it’s important to follow your passions and do what you love.
续写翻译
当莉莉翻阅杂志时，一个想法开始生根发芽。她会制作一套服装来展示她对园艺的热爱！她很快收集了所有她需要的材料——叶子、花，甚至一些小植物。考虑到诺亚的建议，她开始制作自己的服装，仔细地布置植物和花朵，创造出一个美丽的花园场景。这是一项艰苦的工作，但莉莉喜欢它的每一分钟。她花了几个小时完善自己的创作，在这里和那里添加一些小细节，直到它恰到好处。
比赛的日子终于到了。莉莉走上舞台时很紧张，但当她看到评委们脸上惊讶的表情时，她就知道自己做出了正确的选择。她的服装和任何人以前见过的都不一样。这是一个充满活力的花园，有真正的植物和鲜花。评委们被她的创造力和独创性惊呆了，莉莉在比赛中获得了第一名！从那天起，莉莉对自己和自己的能力更加自信。她意识到追随自己的激情，做自己喜欢的事是很重要的。
【导语】本文以人物为线索，讲述了Lily Adams的学校要举办一项名为“创新你的方式”的新比赛。这项比赛的目的是制作一种尽可能独特和有创意的服装，展示一个人最喜欢的东西。Lily觉得她周围同学的想法都非常的酷，所以有点不知所措，不知道要选择什么样主题的服装。就在这时，她的朋友Noah给了她一个建议，让她准备关于园艺的服装。她不知道能不能按时完成，但是她决定尝试一下。
【详解】
段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当莉莉翻阅杂志时，一个想法开始生根发芽。”可知，第一段可描写Lily认真准备服装，并顺利完成。
②由第二段首句内容“比赛的日子终于到了。”可知，在比赛中，LiLy的创意服装得到了评委的认可，获得了一等奖。这件事让她对自己更加自信。
续写线索：
建议——准备的过程——顺利完成——得到评委的认可——获得一等奖——获得自信
3.词汇激活
行为类：①收集：gather/collect ②增添：add/extend ③赢得：win/gain
情绪类：①紧张的：nervous/anxious ②惊讶：amazement/astonishment
【点睛】
【高分句型1】 She would create a costume that showcased her love for gardening!
（运用了that引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】She realized that it’s important to follow your passions and do what you love.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型3】With Noah’s advice in mind, she started to work on her costume, carefully arranging the plants and flowers to create a beautiful garden scene.
（运用了现在分词短语作状语）
【高分句型4】She spent hours perfecting her creation, adding little details here and there until it was just right.
（运用了现在分词短语作状语）
【高分句型5】The judges were blown away by her creativity and originality, and Lily won first place in the contest!
运用了被动语态。