(共20张PPT)
读后续写:
篮球的荣耀
(体育与竞技)
主题语境 人与社会
话题 体育与竞技
教学步骤
1.研读原文,找出文章的背景信息
2.运用“三幕剧”结构对原文进行分析
3.对续写首句进行分析和构思
4.赏析学生习作以及GPT范文
5.渗透同话题表达
学生收获
1.懂得如何分析原文
2.懂得赏析和评价学生习作
3.懂得应该如何写相同话题续写
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中文背诵:
语料默写:
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目录
绿蓓私家英语
01.理论指导
03.习作赏析
02.原文分析
04.话题表达
“三幕式”故事分析结构
Plots
(Key narrative events)
Inciting Incident
诱因事件
(引发主要冲突或情节的事件)
PlotPointl
情节节点一
迫使主角进入未知新环境或情境的事件或情境
Midpoint
中点
主角面临最大障碍或挑战的重要转折点
PlotPoint2
情节节点二
主角发现新方法、策略或理念来解决面临问题
或挑战的事件或情境
Crisis
最终危机
故事冲突达到最高点
Climax
高潮阶段
关键的戏剧性问题得到解答
Realization
顿悟时刻
主角身体或情感或道德上的成长
George had his eye on a scoring record.He took a deep breath as he stood in the doorway,
looking in at the basketball court.The gym was old and small,but it held a long hi:
Maybe today I'll make history,George thought.
His basketball league was celebrating.Today's championship game marked its 50
anniversary()since the league's first championship.
绿私家英
George looked over the brochure for the anniversary.It listed the winners of each
championship game and the top scorers.He stopped suddenly when he read the name of
the top scorer from a game 30 years before.He quickly went through the rest of the list.
"Look!he said to his teammate David,showing him the brochure."You see who has the all-
time record My dad!He never told me that."
“24 points,,”David said.“That's awesome!"
George's best record was 19 points.He was the Badgers'top scorer."It seems that
my dad never showed off something like that,"George said.
When his parents arrived,George brought the brochure over to them.His dad laughed."I
didn't miss a shot in that game.But look at the score.I would have traded every shot for a
win,"he said with regret.George hadn't noticed that his dad's team had lost the game just
by one point."That was a great group of teammates,"his dad added."You have great
teammates in the Badgers,too."
As George warmed up,he was still digesting his father's words."This will be a struggle
every second,"the coach emphasized before they got on court to play."I want to see tough
defense,sharp passing,and,above all,smart play as a team."
George was confident he could lead the Badgers to victory,just as he did in their previous
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