专题07 读后续写
1.【2024届广西柳州高中、南宁三中高三联考试题】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语段续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数为150左右。
As an independent, self-reliant person who always handled everything by myself, I didn’t expect parenting to be hard. Oh, sure, it’s difficult for other people. I heard parents complaining all the time — kids are challenging; nothing is ever clean; there’s not enough time in the day to do everything. But that was “other people” and I knew I could handle it. How complicated could it be
I’d always dreamed of adopting a child, and finally my dream came true one summer afternoon. Even though we had requested only one child, the worker asked, “Could you take another baby and his eleven-year-old brother ” Of course, we could. We had room to have all three boys together.
The first week after they moved in, I spent my days rushing from task to task, cleaning and making sure they had all they needed. I constantly organized our living room, which was suddenly full of toys, and picked up the path of destruction left in the boys’ wake. Cooking and cleaning after meals and snacks seemed to take half of my day. I hardly ever sat; something always needed to be done.
“I think we need a break,” my husband told me one evening as I was falling asleep on the couch as usual.
“No,” I refused. The idea of sending them to a stranger sickened me. However, with each passing day, I was growing more and more exhausted. Besides meeting the physical needs of the boys, there were medical and emotional needs. Both the little ones constantly clung (黏住) to me. It was never quiet in our house; I felt overwhelmed.
One night, my husband said firmly that he needed a break. Whether I “needed” one or not, we were going to take one. With tears rolling down my cheeks, I nodded, knowing it was true, although I didn’t want to admit my weakness.
I called my parents.
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Asking for help is something I must keep re-learning as time goes on, but it’s getting easier.
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2.【2024届江西省九江十校高三二联试题】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Barry is a middle-aged man who is going through a very difficult time in his life. His wife recently passed away. She and Barry had many happy years together, sharing their free time and even starting a business together. Without his wife, Barry is full of sorrow and feels that life is pointless. He even decides to close their business because working there makes him miss her too much.
Even months later, Barry sits around in his house all day feeling gloomy. His friends and family try to get him out of the house and encourage him to start doing new things and enjoy life, but they are not successful.
Barry’s neighbor, a very old woman named Gertrude, sees him from her yard one day as he steps out onto his porch. She has not seen him outside in days! She asks him to come closer. Irritated, he walks to the fence that protects the front of her house.
“Hello, Barry! Just look at this fence. I only had it put in two years ago, but it is falling apart. You are a strong man, and you have some free time. I want you to fix this fence for me,” Gertrude says.
Barry is angry. She knows the situation he is in. He is the one who needs help and support. He thinks the old lady is being very selfish. Still, he knows she is too old to fix the fence herself, and they have been neighbors for years. She is a nice woman, and he respects her. He agrees to fix her fence because it is really not safe for her to have it broken like that.
Barry works on the fence for days. Gertrude brings him lemonade while he works. When he finishes, she is very grateful. Barry smiles for the first time in months.
“Now that you did such a wonderful job fixing my fence, do you think you could paint it for me ” Gertrude smiles at him.
注意:1.续写词数应为 150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Barry cannot believe she is asking for more help.
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Barry no longer feels that life is pointless.
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3.【2024届河南省开封市高三二测试题】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My daughter and I were fans of Mister Rogers’ Neighborhood, an educational children’s television series that was created and hosted by Fred Rogers, more commonly known as Mister Rogers.
Around my daughter’s second birthday, I had a Mister Rogers-inspired idea. Why not invite one key person in my daughter’s world to dinner each month The local children’s librarian could visit one evening, and perhaps the borough mayor (区长) could drop by a few weeks later.
But I wanted to start at the top.
“Let’s invite Mister Rogers himself, ” I said to my wife. “After all, he lives just a few neighborhoods away. I bet he’d come.”
She looked at me as if I wanted to invite the President. “You really think Mister Rogers would come to our house for dinner Fat chance.”
Undeterred (不气馁的), I sent a letter to Mister Rogers that fall, telling him of my newfound delight in his show and my idea for inviting neighborhood people over to talk about their lives, and asking him and Mrs. Rogers to be our guests.
I told my daughter about the letter. Her eyes glistened (发光). “Mister Rogers coming Really, Daddy ”
One month later, no reply. My daughter hadn’t forgotten and periodically asked when Mister Rogers would be visiting. I always told her that he hadn’t called yet and that it was a good opportunity to learn about patience.
Two months later, no response. At the three-month mark, my wife simply rolled her eyes when I raised the topic. I was beginning to lose optimism. Mister Rogers had let me down.
Sadly, Mister Rogers passed away in late February of the following year. I was unaware of his illness and now understood why our invitation had gone unanswered. Mister Rogers would not be coming to dinner after all. Yet, even after his passing, Mister Rogers gave us a far greater gift than I ever could have imagined.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A week later, I was surprised to find a letter in our mailbox from Mister Rogers.
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The letter is a treasured gift and his kind words touched my life and my daughter.
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4.【2024届安徽省安庆市高三下学期二模试题】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的文章。
I was eleven years old. This was my first soccer game. With little knowledge of the rules of the game, I was nervous and uneasy, but still excited. With kids running at me from all directions, I observed the skills that many of my teammates possessed. Their motions appeared so suggest hand effortless, while their faces revealed their attachment to the game. I, however, lacked the spirit of playing aggressively that many of the other kids had.
To my knowledge, this game turned out to be an intense one. My team was falling behind the entire game, but toward the end, we tied it up. I watched as parents yelled and screamed, find to excitement and emotion. Many of the parents, with their waving arms and cheerful eyes, seemed more involved in the game than their children.
Suddenly, it was my turn to kick the ball. This was my chance to reveal that J was as good as everyone else. I brought my leg back and was ready to kick with all my strength. I gave a good, hard kick-one of my better—but unfortunately, I had kicked the ball in the wrong direction. Seeing the disappointed faces of the members of my team, I felt my face go from pale white to bright red; I wanted to run home, faster than I ever ran in a soccer practice.
Over the next few years, I continued to participate in a variety of sports, trying to find the one where I would be the center of attention for the right reasons. That never happened. Very often my father couldn’t wait to practise playing soccer around the backyard with me. Each time I somehow managed to trip on a shoelace (鞋带) or trip over a rock. My father continued to push me, and during my elementary-school years it seemed that I might become quite the athlete. At the same time, my little brother was suddenly not so little and began to control the family athletic field. His ability and passion for sports made me wonder why I was so different.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Eventually, I understood something all of a sudden.
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It suddenly occurred to me what I should do with it next.
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5.【2024届黑龙江省部分学校高三二模试题】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a Saturday in May. It was my third Mother’s Day. The air was warm, the sun was bright, and I spent the morning leisurely drinking coffee and getting ready with my daughter. My husband returned home from his shopping trip, giving me a Mother’s Day gift.
Afterward, I needed to head out and go to the grocery store. But I decided to take my daughter to play at the park first. She ran and played until she grew sticky with sweat and exhaustion (筋疲力尽). At that moment, I realized I had forgotten to pack any snacks. So I promised her I would buy her snacks at the store.
Thirty minutes later, we parked and headed in. I kept thinking about the gift my husband had given me, a dress for my cousin’s wedding the following month. My daughter was going to be the flower girl, and we still didn’t have a dress picked out for her. So I decided to check out the children’s clothes next door before buying groceries. In my excitement, I’d forgotten about the promised snacks. However, my daughter hadn’t.
We just spent two minutes looking at the girl’s section before my daughter began to scream. It felt as if her lungs could break glass and puncture (刺穿) the eardrums of everyone inside. I tried to help her calm down and allow us to look a little longer, but her scream deepened in volume.
We quickly made our way out of the store, with eyes following us as my daughter proved her vocal strength. We stopped just outside of the doors because my daughter began to lie on the floor and scream her heart out as the rest of the world looked on. Really, it was embarrassing and frustrating (令人沮丧的).
Just then, a grandma approached us. She wanted to pick up my sad daughter and comfort her. I had done that before, but at this point, my daughter was too far gone. She didn’t want anyone when she was angry. The grandma offered to hug her, but she refused and cried harder.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
That’s when another young mother approached.
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My daughter finally got tired of crying after a while.
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6.【2024届甘肃省白银市名校高三二模试题】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Acts of kindness have the power to not only brighten our day but also restore our faith in humanity. While young children are often reminded to be kind, real-life examples of young people showing charity prove that kindness knows no age limit.
In the busy city of Detroit, 14-year-old twin sisters, Makhia and Makyla Vincent, were on their usual route to school when something caught their attention. On the snow-covered ground lay a wallet, seemingly out of place. “What do you think we should do ” Makyla whispered, her voice low.Makhia bit her lip, her eyes locked on the wallet. “I don’t know, but we can’t just leave it here. What if the owner needs it desperately ” Finally, worry and curiosity got the better of them, and they decided to take a look inside.
Slowly, Makhia reached out and picked it up. As she opened it, the sisters gasped at the same time. To their surprise, they discovered a large amount of cash, bank cards, and a military ID.It was clear that whoever owned this wallet held great value for these possessions. Instantly, the girls knew exactly what they had to ing from a family with a veteran (退伍军人) grandfather, the sisters felt a deep sense of empathy for the person who had lost the wallet.
The girls looked closer to inspect the military ID.It belonged to a Marc Walsh, a middle- aged man who looked serious. “We have to find this Marc Walsh,” Makhia declared, her voice filled with determination. “But how ” Makyla asked. Makhia thought for a moment, “Maybe there’s an address on one of these cards. Let’s see if we can find any clues.”
They carefully examined the bank cards and discovered that one of them had an address on it. It was located not far from where they stood. With a sense of purpose, the twins decided to make their way to the address, wallet in hand.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The address led them to an old apartment building.
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Upon returning home, Marc’s roommate informed him of the discovery.
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7.【2024届贵州省黔东南州高三下学期二模试题】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Being a train driver, I must concentrate on my driving when working. And on that particular day, I was glad for my outstanding attention.
From a distance, I spotted a small figure like a thin kid on the train tracks. Immediately, I rang the alarm, but no response. Observing carefully, I saw a boy lying on the tracks, unable to escape from my train, as his foot was stuck. I pulled the brakes with all my might as soon as I could. Luckily, the train stopped a few inches from the boy, who was crying loudly in fear.
I approached him, asking how he felt and whether I could give a hand. After getting his permission, I cautiously checked how his foot was stuck in the tracks. And after a few pulls, the boy's foot came out finally. Hugging him and making sure everything was okay, I asked whether I needed to call his parents. To my astonishment, the child said nothing, just looking at me with his tearful eyes. Considering it was dangerous to leave the boy alone, I decided to take him to my home after work.
Arriving at my home, I introduced him to my wife, Amelia. She looked at the child in surprise for a while, but she calmed down quickly and asked whether the boy remembered her. The boy nodded. Amelia explained to me that she had just walked out of the supermarket with some bread and vegetables the other day, when a group of bad guys blocked her way. Just then, a little boy ran toward them and screamed to attract the police, which at last saved her. Here stood the brave boy.
In the following hours, we chatted with each other, and thus we knew that the kid was named Tom and he was abandoned by his parents and became an orphan who had been alone on the streets for years. As we didn’t have any children, we were determined to adopt Tom.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I told Tom our decision, waiting for his answer.
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The next morning, we opened our bedroom door and saw Tom standing there.
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8.【2024届甘肃省天水市麦积区高三二检试题】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Acts of kindness have the power to not only brighten our day but also restore our faith in humanity. While young children are often reminded to be kind, real-life examples of young people showing charity prove that kindness knows no age limit.
In the busy city of Detroit, 14-year-old twin sisters, Makhia and Makyla Vincent, were on their usual route to school when something caught their attention. On the snow-covered ground lay a wallet, seemingly out of place. “What do you think we should do ” Makyla whispered, her voice low.Makhia bit her lip, her eyes locked on the wallet. “I don’t know, but we can’t just leave it here. What if the owner needs it desperately ” Finally, worry and curiosity got the better of them, and they decided to take a look inside.
Slowly, Makhia reached out and picked it up. As she opened it, the sisters gasped at the same time. To their surprise, they discovered a large amount of cash, bank cards, and a military ID.It was clear that whoever owned this wallet held great value for these possessions. Instantly, the girls knew exactly what they had to ing from a family with a veteran (退伍军人) grandfather, the sisters felt a deep sense of empathy for the person who had lost the wallet.
The girls looked closer to inspect the military ID.It belonged to a Marc Walsh, a middle- aged man who looked serious. “We have to find this Marc Walsh,” Makhia declared, her voice filled with determination. “But how ” Makyla asked. Makhia thought for a moment, “Maybe there’s an address on one of these cards. Let’s see if we can find any clues.”
They carefully examined the bank cards and discovered that one of them had an address on it. It was located not far from where they stood. With a sense of purpose, the twins decided to make their way to the address, wallet in hand.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The address led them to an old apartment building.
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Upon returning home, Marc’s roommate informed him of the discovery.
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9.【2024届新疆维吾尔自治区塔城地区二模试题】
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July,Jane and her husband,Tom,had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest.Unfortunately,on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel.By the time they reached the lake,Jane was so angry that she said to Tom,“I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away.
With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time.After she had climbed to a high place,she turned around,hoping to see the lake.To her surprise,she saw nothing but forest and,far beyond,a snow-capped mountain top.She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom!”she cried.“Help!”
No reply.If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom.Jane kept moving,but the farther she walked,the more confused she became.As night was beginning to fall,Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night.Lying awake in the dark,Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family.She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day,hungry and thirsty.She could hear water trickling(滴落)somewhere at a distance.Quickly she followed the sound to a stream.To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes.She drank and ate a few berries.Never in her life had she tasted anything better.Feeling stronger now,Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream,Jane heard a helicopter.Is that for me?Unfortunately,the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above.A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead.Jane took off her yellow blouse,thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
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Paragraph 2:
It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
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10.【2024届吉林省吉林市高三二模试题】
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Role Change
It was a Friday night, and I was just picked up from school by my uncle. He told me that my mother had been in a terrible car crash and had been taken to a nearby hospital.When we got to the hospital, my grandmother pulled me aside and said whatever I did, I mustn’t cry in front of my mother.
My mother’s room was right next to the nurses' station. As I turned into the room, I saw her lying on her side, with her tiny back to me and a pillow between her bandaged legs. She struggled to turn around but couldn’t. I slowly inched to the other side of the bed and said “hi” in a calm voice, containing my urge to cry out.
Gently holding my mother’s cold swollen hands, I tried to keep calm. She kept looking straight into my eyes as if trying to tell me how much pain she was in. I turned my face away from her, trying to hide the tears that were rolling down my face. Eventually I had to leave her for a moment because I couldn’t take it anymore. That was when it struck me that I really might lose my mother. Then I went home and cried myself to sleep.
From that night on, my life completely changed. Up to that point, I'd had the luxury of just being a kid, having to deal with my “messy” teenage life and enjoying my mother’s care. My concept of crisis was now forever changed. As my mother struggled first to stay alive and then to relearn to walk, my sense of priorities in life changed completely. My mother needed me. The trials and hardships of my daily life at school, which had seemed so important before, now appeared insignificant. My mother and I had faced death together, and life took on new meaning for both of us.
I visited my mother in the hospital as often as I could for the next two months. Finally, a sort of hospital suite (房间) was set up in our family room, and to my relief and joy, she was allowed to come home.
注意: 续写词数应为150 左右。
Her returning home was a blessing, but it meant some unfamiliar duties for me.
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My mother’s dependence on me changed our relationship.
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1.【2024届广西柳州高中、南宁三中高三联考试题】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语段续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数为150左右。
As an independent, self-reliant person who always handled everything by myself, I didn’t expect parenting to be hard. Oh, sure, it’s difficult for other people. I heard parents complaining all the time — kids are challenging; nothing is ever clean; there’s not enough time in the day to do everything. But that was “other people” and I knew I could handle it. How complicated could it be
I’d always dreamed of adopting a child, and finally my dream came true one summer afternoon. Even though we had requested only one child, the worker asked, “Could you take another baby and his eleven-year-old brother ” Of course, we could. We had room to have all three boys together.
The first week after they moved in, I spent my days rushing from task to task, cleaning and making sure they had all they needed. I constantly organized our living room, which was suddenly full of toys, and picked up the path of destruction left in the boys’ wake. Cooking and cleaning after meals and snacks seemed to take half of my day. I hardly ever sat; something always needed to be done.
“I think we need a break,” my husband told me one evening as I was falling asleep on the couch as usual.
“No,” I refused. The idea of sending them to a stranger sickened me. However, with each passing day, I was growing more and more exhausted. Besides meeting the physical needs of the boys, there were medical and emotional needs. Both the little ones constantly clung (黏住) to me. It was never quiet in our house; I felt overwhelmed.
One night, my husband said firmly that he needed a break. Whether I “needed” one or not, we were going to take one. With tears rolling down my cheeks, I nodded, knowing it was true, although I didn’t want to admit my weakness.
I called my parents.
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Asking for help is something I must keep re-learning as time goes on, but it’s getting easier.
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【答案】
I called my parents. Hearing what happened, they agreed to come immediately. When seeing my parents with toys, both little boys let go of my hands and reach to touch them. Within a few moments, our kids were thrilled to play with their grandparents. Watching them play with smiles on their faces, I felt a sudden wave of relief wash over me. My husband I and spent the evening relaxing and spending time together. I slept late the next morning and spent the day enjoying the sunshine as I worked in my garden.
Asking for help is something I must keep re-learning as time goes on, but it’s getting easier. Now we regularly ask our parents to take care of the kids so we can take date nights or even quick trips as a couple. I’ve learned to embrace rest. I don’t need to work every second of the day; things don’t have to be perfect. My house is not always as clean as I would like, and sometimes we eat frozen pizza for dinner. But embracing self-care and asking for help allow each day to be filled with love and laughter instead of anxiety and frustration.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者作为一个独立、自立、凡事都亲力亲为的人,没想到养育孩子会如此艰难。在领养了三个男孩之后,作者和丈夫倍感疲惫,把孩子们送给陌生人又让作者十分不忍。在这种情况下作者不知所措。后来作者承认了自己软弱的地方,给父母打了电话,诉说了状况,同时得到了父母的帮助。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我给我父母打了电话。”可知,第一段可描写作者向父母诉说当前的状况以及自己的疲惫,同时作者的父母愿意来看望孩子们以帮助作者,还要描述父母与孩子们的互动及被帮助后作者和丈夫的感受。
②由第二段首句内容“随着时间的推移,我必须不断地重新学习,但这越来越容易了。”可知,第二段可描写作者承认自己的弱点,需要寻求帮助,不断学习,学会包容一些不完美才能快乐度过每一天。
2.续写线索:收养三个孩子——忙于照顾他们——倍感疲惫不知所措——向父母寻求帮助——父母前来帮忙——作者感到轻松——经常要求父母照顾孩子——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①放开:let go of / release
②涌向我:wash over me / surge towards me
③照顾:take care of /look after
情绪类
①突然松了一口气:a sudden wave of relief / a sigh of relief
②沮丧:frustration / dismay
【点睛】【高分句型1】Hearing what happened, they agreed to come immediately. (使用了现在分词作状语和what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I slept late the next morning and spent the day enjoying the sunshine as I worked in my garden. (使用了as引导的时间状语从句)
2.【2024届江西省九江十校高三二联试题】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Barry is a middle-aged man who is going through a very difficult time in his life. His wife recently passed away. She and Barry had many happy years together, sharing their free time and even starting a business together. Without his wife, Barry is full of sorrow and feels that life is pointless. He even decides to close their business because working there makes him miss her too much.
Even months later, Barry sits around in his house all day feeling gloomy. His friends and family try to get him out of the house and encourage him to start doing new things and enjoy life, but they are not successful.
Barry’s neighbor, a very old woman named Gertrude, sees him from her yard one day as he steps out onto his porch. She has not seen him outside in days! She asks him to come closer. Irritated, he walks to the fence that protects the front of her house.
“Hello, Barry! Just look at this fence. I only had it put in two years ago, but it is falling apart. You are a strong man, and you have some free time. I want you to fix this fence for me,” Gertrude says.
Barry is angry. She knows the situation he is in. He is the one who needs help and support. He thinks the old lady is being very selfish. Still, he knows she is too old to fix the fence herself, and they have been neighbors for years. She is a nice woman, and he respects her. He agrees to fix her fence because it is really not safe for her to have it broken like that.
Barry works on the fence for days. Gertrude brings him lemonade while he works. When he finishes, she is very grateful. Barry smiles for the first time in months.
“Now that you did such a wonderful job fixing my fence, do you think you could paint it for me ” Gertrude smiles at him.
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Barry cannot believe she is asking for more help.
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Barry no longer feels that life is pointless.
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【答案】
Barry cannot believe she is asking for more help. Doesn’t she know how sad he is But because he respects her so much, Barry agrees. He works hard painting the fence in the hot sun, but Gertrude’s lemonade and encouragement are wonderful. He feels proud of the beautiful fence he is making. Over the next few weeks, Gertrude keeps giving Barry jobs. He repairs her door and even builds a beautiful patio with wooden furniture for her. As they sit there and drink lemonade, all the neighbors pass by and tell Berry what a beautiful job he has done. He and Gertrude cannot stop smiling.
Barry no longer feels that life is pointless. He feels proud of his work and useful to Gertrude. And he is still young, he thinks. Barry decides he will become a carpenter! He thanks Gertrude. He finally realizes that she was never being rude, and that actually she is really very wise. She knew that sorrow can be eased by simply getting busy at something. He helped her, but she truly saved him.
【导语】本文以故事发展的顺序为线索展开,描述了一个名叫Barry的中年男子经历了妻子去世后的悲伤和迷茫,邻居Gertrude请求他帮忙,他渐渐从悲伤中走出来,得到了赞许后的Barry决定改变自己的职业方向成为一名木匠,整个故事展示了互相帮助和关心能够改变一个人的生活态度。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“Barry不敢相信她在寻求更多的帮助。”可知,第一段可描写Barry内心的矛盾,自己已经很伤心了但Gertrude还是让他帮忙,出于尊重Gertrude他同意了,漂亮地完成所有工作后他得到了很多人的赞美,Barry感到了开心的经过及相关细节。
②由第二段首句内容“Barry不再觉得生活毫无意义。”可知,第二段可描写Barry为自己的工作感到自豪,他不再沉沦和堕落,决定成为一名木匠,通过邻居请求他的帮助,Barry在内心中感谢Gertrude真正救了自己的过程及相关细节。
2.续写线索:Barry不想帮忙——改变主意——得到赞美——Barry感到开心——觉得生活有意义——决心做木匠——感谢Gertrude的拯救
3.词汇激活
行为类
① 修理:repair/fix/mend
② 经过:pass by/go off
③ 缓解:ease/relieve
情绪类
① 因……感到自豪:be proud of/take pride in
② 悲伤:sorrow/sadness
【点睛】[高分句型1]As they sit there and drink lemonade, all the neighbors pass by and tell Berry what a beautiful job he has done.(使用了as引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] He finally realizes that she was never being rude, and that actually she is really very wise.(使用了that引导的并列的宾语从句)
3.【2024届河南省开封市高三二测试题】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My daughter and I were fans of Mister Rogers’ Neighborhood, an educational children’s television series that was created and hosted by Fred Rogers, more commonly known as Mister Rogers.
Around my daughter’s second birthday, I had a Mister Rogers-inspired idea. Why not invite one key person in my daughter’s world to dinner each month The local children’s librarian could visit one evening, and perhaps the borough mayor (区长) could drop by a few weeks later.
But I wanted to start at the top.
“Let’s invite Mister Rogers himself, ” I said to my wife. “After all, he lives just a few neighborhoods away. I bet he’d come.”
She looked at me as if I wanted to invite the President. “You really think Mister Rogers would come to our house for dinner Fat chance.”
Undeterred (不气馁的), I sent a letter to Mister Rogers that fall, telling him of my newfound delight in his show and my idea for inviting neighborhood people over to talk about their lives, and asking him and Mrs. Rogers to be our guests.
I told my daughter about the letter. Her eyes glistened (发光). “Mister Rogers coming Really, Daddy ”
One month later, no reply. My daughter hadn’t forgotten and periodically asked when Mister Rogers would be visiting. I always told her that he hadn’t called yet and that it was a good opportunity to learn about patience.
Two months later, no response. At the three-month mark, my wife simply rolled her eyes when I raised the topic. I was beginning to lose optimism. Mister Rogers had let me down.
Sadly, Mister Rogers passed away in late February of the following year. I was unaware of his illness and now understood why our invitation had gone unanswered. Mister Rogers would not be coming to dinner after all. Yet, even after his passing, Mister Rogers gave us a far greater gift than I ever could have imagined.
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A week later, I was surprised to find a letter in our mailbox from Mister Rogers.
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The letter is a treasured gift and his kind words touched my life and my daughter.
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【答案】
A week later, I was surprised to find a letter in our mailbox from Mister Rogers. With my trembling hands, I fingered the letter and read it word for word. He appreciated my daughter’s enjoyment of his program and thanked us for our invitation, adding that he was much honored to be our “guest” . But he apologized for not responding sooner and not being able to make it to our dinner party then due to his stomach cancer treatment. In a delightful tone he expressed his wish to meet some day. The one-page typed letter was like something from an old friend: personal and caring.
The letter is a treasured gift and his kind words touched my life and my daughter. We could never imagine it was written when he was then suffering great pains. Mister Rogers is gone, but his remarkable talents are left behind. Rogers never came for dinner, but his belief in the importance of being good neighbors is passed on. His spirits will never die: caring for people including the unknown, hoping for the future, and most importantly, posing a positive attitude to life whatever happens. When least expected, sometimes the best presents in life come from a special neighbor.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者为了庆祝女儿的两岁生日,临时想到了一个主意:邀请著名的儿童节目主持人罗杰斯先生参加女儿的生日晚宴。经过了漫长的等待,还是未能等到罗杰斯先生的到来,最后作者和家人们才得知,原来是罗杰斯先生去世了。但是让他们意想不到的是,虽然他终究不会来吃晚饭,但是罗杰斯先生还是给了他们一份比作者所能想象的更大的礼物——原来是他亲自写了一封信解释了未能到来的原因,以及用愉快的语气表示希望有一天能见面。亲切的话语感动了作者和家人。通过此事,作者明白了:罗杰斯的精神永不会消亡,他关心包括未知的人,对未来充满希望,最重要的是,无论发生什么,都要向罗杰斯先生一样,对生活都保持积极的态度。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“一周后,我惊奇地在信箱里发现了一封罗杰斯先生的信。”可知,第一段可描写作者收到罗杰斯先生手写信件的激动和惊讶。同时也需要讲述到罗杰斯在信中交代为什么不能来参加作者女儿的生日晚宴的原因,以及表达对作者女儿的祝福。
②由第二段首句内容“这封信是一份珍贵的礼物,他亲切的话语感动了我和我的女儿。”可知,第二段可描写作者读到罗杰斯先生的信后深深的感动,并且表达了对罗杰斯先生的崇拜和尊敬,以及感悟。
2.续写线索:打开信箱——惊讶——信件内容——感动——赞美——学习——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.感谢:thank/appreciate/gratitude
②.道歉:say sorry/apologize
③.期待:expect/hope/wish
情绪类
①.感谢:showing his appreciation/show his gratitude/be grateful
②.关心他人的:caring/considerate
[高分句型1]. With my trembling hands, I fingered the letter and read it word for word.(使用复合结构)
[高分句型2]. When least expected, sometimes the best presents in life come from a special neighbor.(由when引导的时间状语从句,同时使用的非谓语动词过去分词expected做伴随状语)
4.【2024届安徽省安庆市高三下学期二模试题】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的文章。
I was eleven years old. This was my first soccer game. With little knowledge of the rules of the game, I was nervous and uneasy, but still excited. With kids running at me from all directions, I observed the skills that many of my teammates possessed. Their motions appeared so suggest hand effortless, while their faces revealed their attachment to the game. I, however, lacked the spirit of playing aggressively that many of the other kids had.
To my knowledge, this game turned out to be an intense one. My team was falling behind the entire game, but toward the end, we tied it up. I watched as parents yelled and screamed, find to excitement and emotion. Many of the parents, with their waving arms and cheerful eyes, seemed more involved in the game than their children.
Suddenly, it was my turn to kick the ball. This was my chance to reveal that J was as good as everyone else. I brought my leg back and was ready to kick with all my strength. I gave a good, hard kick-one of my better—but unfortunately, I had kicked the ball in the wrong direction. Seeing the disappointed faces of the members of my team, I felt my face go from pale white to bright red; I wanted to run home, faster than I ever ran in a soccer practice.
Over the next few years, I continued to participate in a variety of sports, trying to find the one where I would be the center of attention for the right reasons. That never happened. Very often my father couldn’t wait to practise playing soccer around the backyard with me. Each time I somehow managed to trip on a shoelace (鞋带) or trip over a rock. My father continued to push me, and during my elementary-school years it seemed that I might become quite the athlete. At the same time, my little brother was suddenly not so little and began to control the family athletic field. His ability and passion for sports made me wonder why I was so different.
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Eventually, I understood something all of a sudden.
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It suddenly occurred to me what I should do with it next.
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【答案】
Eventually, I understood something all of a sudden. I began to integrate the opponents’ play and team work into my soccer practice and games. I felt that it was a great moment for me to learn from other better skilled soccer players. As an old saying goes, experience is the best teacher. I spent my time in working out hard. I was aware that I had to figure the lessons out on my own. Obviously, I needed to improve myself in a sense. Therefore, I gave a lot of thought to it.
It suddenly occurred to me what I should do with it next. I knew that my lack of ability for sports was something that separated me from many people. In that case, I would never give up. I participated to the best of my ability in whatever I was doing. My father once told me, “Be yourself and you will not be looked down on.” Keeping it in mind, I became a top soccer player with my strong determination and hard work. I hold the belief that nothing is difficult if I put my heart into it.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者年少时第一次参加足球比赛,就发现自己缺乏队友们的那种对比赛的热情和积极进取的精神,多年来,作者参加各种各样的体育活动,却始终没能找到一个让他成为人们关注焦点的运动。但是在爸爸不断的鼓励和推动下,作者始终没有放弃,终于开窍了,他向优秀队员和对手学习技术,不断提升自我,终于成长成为一个顶级的足球队员,作者坚信“世上无难事,只怕有心人”。
【详解】1. 段落续写。
①由第一段首句内容“最后,我突然开窍了。”可知,第一段可描写作者开始认真思考,总结经验,寻求措施以提升自我。
②由第二段首句内容“我突然想到下一步该怎么应对了。”可知,第二段可描写作者接下来无论做什么都全力以赴,决不放弃,最终成长成为一名顶级的足球队员。
2. 续写线索:开窍——向优秀队员和对手学习——思考并寻求提升自我的方法——突然明白——全力以赴、不放弃——成为顶级球员——信仰
3. 词汇激活:
行为类:
①锻炼:work out/exercise
②意识到:realize/be aware
③放弃:give up/abandon
④记住:keep...in mind/remember
情绪类:
①坚定的:strong/firm
②困难的:difficult/hard
【点睛】【高分句型1】 I felt that it was a great moment for me to learn from other better skilled soccer players. (运用了以连接词that引导的表语从句,以及it作形式主语,动词不定式作真正的主语的句式。)
【高分句型2】I hold the belief that nothing is difficult if I put my heart into it.(运用了以连接词that引导的同位语从句和连词if引导的条件状语从句。)
5.【2024届黑龙江省部分学校高三二模试题】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a Saturday in May. It was my third Mother’s Day. The air was warm, the sun was bright, and I spent the morning leisurely drinking coffee and getting ready with my daughter. My husband returned home from his shopping trip, giving me a Mother’s Day gift.
Afterward, I needed to head out and go to the grocery store. But I decided to take my daughter to play at the park first. She ran and played until she grew sticky with sweat and exhaustion (筋疲力尽). At that moment, I realized I had forgotten to pack any snacks. So I promised her I would buy her snacks at the store.
Thirty minutes later, we parked and headed in. I kept thinking about the gift my husband had given me, a dress for my cousin’s wedding the following month. My daughter was going to be the flower girl, and we still didn’t have a dress picked out for her. So I decided to check out the children’s clothes next door before buying groceries. In my excitement, I’d forgotten about the promised snacks. However, my daughter hadn’t.
We just spent two minutes looking at the girl’s section before my daughter began to scream. It felt as if her lungs could break glass and puncture (刺穿) the eardrums of everyone inside. I tried to help her calm down and allow us to look a little longer, but her scream deepened in volume.
We quickly made our way out of the store, with eyes following us as my daughter proved her vocal strength. We stopped just outside of the doors because my daughter began to lie on the floor and scream her heart out as the rest of the world looked on. Really, it was embarrassing and frustrating (令人沮丧的).
Just then, a grandma approached us. She wanted to pick up my sad daughter and comfort her. I had done that before, but at this point, my daughter was too far gone. She didn’t want anyone when she was angry. The grandma offered to hug her, but she refused and cried harder.
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That’s when another young mother approached.
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My daughter finally got tired of crying after a while.
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【答案】
That’s when another young mother approached. Her son sat quietly in her cart, and she held a cup of coffee in one hand. I looked up as she said, “Would you like me to buy you a coffee ” Although I politely declined her offer, she still went to buy me a cup of coffee. We had coffee together and as new mothers, we talked a lot about our children. She suggested that I let my daughter cry for a while until she stopped crying, and it turned out to be effective.
My daughter finally got tired of crying after a while. I placed her into the cart and promised to get her snacks first. Saying goodbye to the young mother, I went to the grocery store with my daughter. I bought the snacks for her. It was as if my daughter forgot what had happened when she saw the snacks. Then we went to choose a dress for her. Anyway, our shopping outing came to a successful end, and I was also very grateful to the young mother for her help.
【导语】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者带女儿去买零食时想起了要给女儿买当花童的礼服,结果忘记了自己承诺的零食,女儿开始哭喊,作者把女儿带出商店后依然无法让女儿安静下来。这时一位年轻妈妈过来给作者买了咖啡,和作者聊天并建议让孩子哭一会,最终女儿哭累了冷静下来,作者带着女儿一起去买了零食并挑选了衣服。
【详解】1. 段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“这时另一位年轻的母亲走过来了。”以及第二段首句内容“过了一会儿,我女儿终于哭烦了。”可知,第一段可描写年轻妈妈过来提供帮助,和作者聊天并建议让女儿自己哭一会。
②由第二段首句内容“过了一会儿,我女儿终于哭烦了。”可知,第二段可描写和年轻妈妈告别并带女儿买零食,挑选衣服。
2. 续写线索:一位年轻妈妈走近——为作者买咖啡——喝咖啡聊天让女儿哭一会——女儿停止哭泣——和年轻妈妈告别——买零食挑选衣服——感激年轻妈妈的帮助
3. 词汇激活:
行为类:
①拒绝:decline/refuse
②购买:buy/purchase
③建议:suggest/advise
情绪类:
①安静的坐着:sit quietly in her cart/sit in her cart, as quite as a mouse
②感谢:grateful/thankful
【点睛】【高分句型1】She suggested that I let my daughter cry for a while until she stopped crying, and it turned out to be effective. (运用了that引导的宾语从句以及until引导的时间状语从句 )
【高分句型2】 Saying goodbye to the young mother, I went to the grocery store with my daughter. (运用了现在分词短语作状语)
6.【2024届甘肃省白银市名校高三二模试题】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Acts of kindness have the power to not only brighten our day but also restore our faith in humanity. While young children are often reminded to be kind, real-life examples of young people showing charity prove that kindness knows no age limit.
In the busy city of Detroit, 14-year-old twin sisters, Makhia and Makyla Vincent, were on their usual route to school when something caught their attention. On the snow-covered ground lay a wallet, seemingly out of place. “What do you think we should do ” Makyla whispered, her voice low.Makhia bit her lip, her eyes locked on the wallet. “I don’t know, but we can’t just leave it here. What if the owner needs it desperately ” Finally, worry and curiosity got the better of them, and they decided to take a look inside.
Slowly, Makhia reached out and picked it up. As she opened it, the sisters gasped at the same time. To their surprise, they discovered a large amount of cash, bank cards, and a military ID.It was clear that whoever owned this wallet held great value for these possessions. Instantly, the girls knew exactly what they had to ing from a family with a veteran (退伍军人) grandfather, the sisters felt a deep sense of empathy for the person who had lost the wallet.
The girls looked closer to inspect the military ID.It belonged to a Marc Walsh, a middle- aged man who looked serious. “We have to find this Marc Walsh,” Makhia declared, her voice filled with determination. “But how ” Makyla asked. Makhia thought for a moment, “Maybe there’s an address on one of these cards. Let’s see if we can find any clues.”
They carefully examined the bank cards and discovered that one of them had an address on it. It was located not far from where they stood. With a sense of purpose, the twins decided to make their way to the address, wallet in hand.
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The address led them to an old apartment building.
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Upon returning home, Marc’s roommate informed him of the discovery.
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【答案】
The address led them to an old apartment building. Upon arriving, Makhia knocked on the door. However, a few moments later, there was still no response. Obviously, the owner of the house was not there at the time. Unwilling to leave in vain, they decided to find a way out and came up with a good idea. Makyla held up the wallet to the home security system, placing it on his front porch before departing.
Upon returning home, Marc’s roommate informed him of the discovery. He found it on their porch—an unexpected return of Marc’s wallet. Curious, Marc quickly reviewed the security video recording and was amazed to witness the act of kindness performed by two young girls. Deeply moved, Marc was eager to thank the two kind girls in person. With this in mind, he posted the video online, which gained wide attention, resulting in a meeting between Marc and the teenage twins. Marc expressed his profound gratitude and emphasized just how much their act of kindness meant to him.
【导语】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了两个14岁的双胞胎姐妹发现、处理并归还一个丢失的钱包的过程,展示了她们善良、有责任感和同情心的品质。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“这个地址把她们引到了一栋旧公寓楼。”以及第二段首句内容“一回到家,马克的室友就把这个发现告诉了他。”可知,第一段可描写她们根据钱包中一张卡上的地址来到了马克家。
②由第二段首句内容“一回到家,马克的室友就把这个发现告诉了他。”可知,第二段可描写马克和自己的室友非常惊讶也充满了感激。
2.续写线索:14岁的双胞胎姐妹在上学的路上看到了一个钱包——她们俩决定将钱包归还给主人——根据钱包中一张卡上提到的地址,她们来到了一个公寓楼——可是敲门后没有人,于是她们决定将钱包放在门口——主人回来后,看到失而复得的钱包非常感动
3.词汇激活
行为类
①决定:decide/make a decision/determine
②提出:come up with/put forward
③放置:place/put
情绪类
①惊叹的:amazed/astonished
②感激:gratitude/thankfulness
【点睛】
【高分句型1】With this in mind, he posted the video online, which gained wide attention, resulting in a meeting between Marc and the teenage twins.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Marc expressed his profound gratitude and emphasized just how much their act of kindness meant to him.(运用了how much引导的宾语从句)
7.【2024届贵州省黔东南州高三下学期二模试题】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Being a train driver, I must concentrate on my driving when working. And on that particular day, I was glad for my outstanding attention.
From a distance, I spotted a small figure like a thin kid on the train tracks. Immediately, I rang the alarm, but no response. Observing carefully, I saw a boy lying on the tracks, unable to escape from my train, as his foot was stuck. I pulled the brakes with all my might as soon as I could. Luckily, the train stopped a few inches from the boy, who was crying loudly in fear.
I approached him, asking how he felt and whether I could give a hand. After getting his permission, I cautiously checked how his foot was stuck in the tracks. And after a few pulls, the boy's foot came out finally. Hugging him and making sure everything was okay, I asked whether I needed to call his parents. To my astonishment, the child said nothing, just looking at me with his tearful eyes. Considering it was dangerous to leave the boy alone, I decided to take him to my home after work.
Arriving at my home, I introduced him to my wife, Amelia. She looked at the child in surprise for a while, but she calmed down quickly and asked whether the boy remembered her. The boy nodded. Amelia explained to me that she had just walked out of the supermarket with some bread and vegetables the other day, when a group of bad guys blocked her way. Just then, a little boy ran toward them and screamed to attract the police, which at last saved her. Here stood the brave boy.
In the following hours, we chatted with each other, and thus we knew that the kid was named Tom and he was abandoned by his parents and became an orphan who had been alone on the streets for years. As we didn’t have any children, we were determined to adopt Tom.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I told Tom our decision, waiting for his answer.
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The next morning, we opened our bedroom door and saw Tom standing there.
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【答案】
I told Tom our decision, waiting for his answer. Tom stared at me, with a mix of feelings — shock, delight, or something else. Amelia couldn’t wait to say in a soft and sweet voice, “Tom, I love you and I need you.” I could feel his struggle, so I smiled at him and hugged him gently. Knowing it was hard for him to accept the whole thing in a flash, I suggested a good night to think it over.
The next morning, we opened our bedroom door and saw Tom standing there. Being somewhat embarrassed, he took one of my hands, “You won’t abandon me, right ” I nodded firmly and promised that we would treat him as our own, without cheating or abandonment. On hearing this, he hugged both of us tightly, saying affectionately, “Dad! Mom!” Later, he jumped and ran full of joy, “I have a new family! I have Dad and Mom! I am no longer an orphan.” You see, love can not only make someone a day, but also make strangers a new family.
【导语】
文章以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者在开火车的时候,看到一个小男孩躺在铁轨上。作者尽最大努力刹车,幸运的是,火车最终停了下来。救下小男孩后,作者询问是否要联系他的父母,小男孩什么话都没说,作者把小男孩带回了家。碰巧小男孩之前帮助过他的妻子Amelia。经过了解,小男孩名叫Tom,他被父母遗弃,成为了一个孤儿,在街上流浪了很多年。由于作者和妻子没有孩子,他们决定收养Tom。
【详解】1.段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“我告诉Tom我们的决定,等着他的回答。”可知,第一段可描写听到作者夫妻要收养自己后Tom的反应,作者和妻子跟Tom的交流,Tom要考虑一番。
②有第二段首句内容“第二天早上,我们打开卧室的门,看见Tom站在那里。”可知,第二段可描写Tom接受了作者的提议,成为他们的孩子,作者保证不会遗弃Tom,Tom感到高兴。
2.续写线索:Tom听到要被作者收养——Tom情绪复杂——作者妻子竭力说服Tom——作者建议Tom好好思考——Tom接受提议——作者承诺不会遗弃Tom——Tom感到高兴
3.词汇激活
行为类
①拥抱:hug/embrace
②考虑:think over/consider
③抛弃:abandon/discard
④迫不及待做某事:can’t wait to do sth./be eager for doing sth.
情绪类
①震惊:shock/amazement
②尴尬的:embarrassed/awkward
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Knowing it was hard for him to accept the whole thing in a flash, I suggested a good night to think it over. (运用了现在分词作状语,省略了that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]
I nodded firmly and promised that we would treat him as our own, without cheating or abandonment. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
8.【2024届甘肃省天水市麦积区高三二检试题】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Acts of kindness have the power to not only brighten our day but also restore our faith in humanity. While young children are often reminded to be kind, real-life examples of young people showing charity prove that kindness knows no age limit.
In the busy city of Detroit, 14-year-old twin sisters, Makhia and Makyla Vincent, were on their usual route to school when something caught their attention. On the snow-covered ground lay a wallet, seemingly out of place. “What do you think we should do ” Makyla whispered, her voice low.Makhia bit her lip, her eyes locked on the wallet. “I don’t know, but we can’t just leave it here. What if the owner needs it desperately ” Finally, worry and curiosity got the better of them, and they decided to take a look inside.
Slowly, Makhia reached out and picked it up. As she opened it, the sisters gasped at the same time. To their surprise, they discovered a large amount of cash, bank cards, and a military ID.It was clear that whoever owned this wallet held great value for these possessions. Instantly, the girls knew exactly what they had to ing from a family with a veteran (退伍军人) grandfather, the sisters felt a deep sense of empathy for the person who had lost the wallet.
The girls looked closer to inspect the military ID.It belonged to a Marc Walsh, a middle- aged man who looked serious. “We have to find this Marc Walsh,” Makhia declared, her voice filled with determination. “But how ” Makyla asked. Makhia thought for a moment, “Maybe there’s an address on one of these cards. Let’s see if we can find any clues.”
They carefully examined the bank cards and discovered that one of them had an address on it. It was located not far from where they stood. With a sense of purpose, the twins decided to make their way to the address, wallet in hand.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The address led them to an old apartment building.
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Upon returning home, Marc’s roommate informed him of the discovery.
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【答案】
The address led them to an old apartment building. Upon arriving, Makhia knocked on the door. However, a few moments later, there was still no response. Obviously, the owner of the house was not there at the time. Unwilling to leave in vain, they decided to find a way out and came up with a good idea. Makyla held up the wallet to the home security system, placing it on his front porch before departing.
Upon returning home, Marc’s roommate informed him of the discovery. He found it on their porch—an unexpected return of Marc’s wallet. Curious, Marc quickly reviewed the security video recording and was amazed to witness the act of kindness performed by two young girls. Deeply moved, Marc was eager to thank the two kind girls in person. With this in mind, he posted the video online, which gained wide attention, resulting in a meeting between Marc and the teenage twins. Marc expressed his profound gratitude and emphasized just how much their act of kindness meant to him.
【导语】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了两个14岁的双胞胎姐妹发现、处理并归还一个丢失的钱包的过程,展示了她们善良、有责任感和同情心的品质。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“这个地址把她们引到了一栋旧公寓楼。”以及第二段首句内容“一回到家,马克的室友就把这个发现告诉了他。”可知,第一段可描写她们根据钱包中一张卡上的地址来到了马克家。
②由第二段首句内容“一回到家,马克的室友就把这个发现告诉了他。”可知,第二段可描写马克和自己的室友非常惊讶也充满了感激。
2.续写线索:14岁的双胞胎姐妹在上学的路上看到了一个钱包——她们俩决定将钱包归还给主人——根据钱包中一张卡上提到的地址,她们来到了一个公寓楼——可是敲门后没有人,于是她们决定将钱包放在门口——主人回来后,看到失而复得的钱包非常感动
3.词汇激活
行为类
①决定:decide/make a decision/determine
②提出:come up with/put forward
③放置:place/put
情绪类
①惊叹的:amazed/astonished
②感激:gratitude/thankfulness
【点睛】
【高分句型1】With this in mind, he posted the video online, which gained wide attention, resulting in a meeting between Marc and the teenage twins.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Marc expressed his profound gratitude and emphasized just how much their act of kindness meant to him.(运用了how much引导的宾语从句)
9.【2024届新疆维吾尔自治区塔城地区二模试题】
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July,Jane and her husband,Tom,had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest.Unfortunately,on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel.By the time they reached the lake,Jane was so angry that she said to Tom,“I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away.
With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time.After she had climbed to a high place,she turned around,hoping to see the lake.To her surprise,she saw nothing but forest and,far beyond,a snow-capped mountain top.She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom!”she cried.“Help!”
No reply.If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom.Jane kept moving,but the farther she walked,the more confused she became.As night was beginning to fall,Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night.Lying awake in the dark,Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family.She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day,hungry and thirsty.She could hear water trickling(滴落)somewhere at a distance.Quickly she followed the sound to a stream.To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes.She drank and ate a few berries.Never in her life had she tasted anything better.Feeling stronger now,Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream,Jane heard a helicopter.Is that for me?Unfortunately,the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above.A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead.Jane took off her yellow blouse,thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
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Paragraph 2:
It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
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【答案】Paragraph 1:
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.Amid the dreadful darkness,strange sounds of wild beasts were heard.“If it weren’t for that stupid quarrel,I wouldn’t be trapped here,”she thought to herself,regretful tears clouding her eyes.Surrounded by the fear and tiredness,Jane felt exhausted and finally slid into sleep.“Tom,is that you?”she murmured.“Tom,hep!”In her dream,she saw a man extending his arms towards her at a distance.
Paragraph 2:
It was daybreak when Jane woke up.After a washing,Jane continued to force her way ahead.In the boundless search,she found it impossible to find a way out,which threw her into desperation.Fortunately,a helicopter flew overhead just at that moment.In no time did Jane rush to the rock and climb onto it.She waved her yellow blouse madly to the passing helicopter.To her great joy,this time,the helicopter spotted her.The moment Jane was reunited with her husband,her tears clouded her vision.They hugged each other tightly in the warm light of the setting sun.
【分析】这是一篇读后续写。
【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知,文章讲述了七月一个周末,Jane和她的丈夫Tom在森林露营,因为一个不愉快的话题争吵,最后Jane出走迷路的故事。
续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:但是没有更多的直升机来了,天又黑了。所以后文应该是讲述天黑后Jane在森林中的感受,她反思着和Tom的争吵,后悔的泪水模糊了她的双眼。Jane被恐惧和疲劳包围着,感到筋疲力尽,最后睡着了。第二段开头是:Jane醒来时天已经亮了。本段应当写Jane天亮后继续找路,最后被一架直升机营救最终和丈夫团圆的事情。
续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度,我们要熟悉所给划线词语,恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右;续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当,使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如:be trapped,slid into,to one’s great joy等高级词汇;过去分词的运用Surrounded by the fear and tiredness, Jane felt exhausted and finally slid into sleep.;非限定性定语从句In the boundless search, she found it impossible to find a way out, which threw her into desperation等高级句式。
10.【2024届吉林省吉林市高三二模试题】
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Role Change
It was a Friday night, and I was just picked up from school by my uncle. He told me that my mother had been in a terrible car crash and had been taken to a nearby hospital.When we got to the hospital, my grandmother pulled me aside and said whatever I did, I mustn’t cry in front of my mother.
My mother’s room was right next to the nurses' station. As I turned into the room, I saw her lying on her side, with her tiny back to me and a pillow between her bandaged legs. She struggled to turn around but couldn’t. I slowly inched to the other side of the bed and said “hi” in a calm voice, containing my urge to cry out.
Gently holding my mother’s cold swollen hands, I tried to keep calm. She kept looking straight into my eyes as if trying to tell me how much pain she was in. I turned my face away from her, trying to hide the tears that were rolling down my face. Eventually I had to leave her for a moment because I couldn’t take it anymore. That was when it struck me that I really might lose my mother. Then I went home and cried myself to sleep.
From that night on, my life completely changed. Up to that point, I'd had the luxury of just being a kid, having to deal with my “messy” teenage life and enjoying my mother’s care. My concept of crisis was now forever changed. As my mother struggled first to stay alive and then to relearn to walk, my sense of priorities in life changed completely. My mother needed me. The trials and hardships of my daily life at school, which had seemed so important before, now appeared insignificant. My mother and I had faced death together, and life took on new meaning for both of us.
I visited my mother in the hospital as often as I could for the next two months. Finally, a sort of hospital suite (房间) was set up in our family room, and to my relief and joy, she was allowed to come home.
注意: 续写词数应为150 左右。
Her returning home was a blessing, but it meant some unfamiliar duties for me.
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My mother’s dependence on me changed our relationship.
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【答案】
Her returning home was a blessing, but it meant some unfamiliar duties for me. I would feed her, bathe her, and when she was eventually able to use a toilet, would help her to the bathroom. It struck me that I was pretty much playing the role of mother to my own mother. It wasn’t always much fun, but it felt good to be there when my mother really needed me. The most difficult part for me was trying to always be upbeat, and to keep my mother’s spirits up when she became frustrated with the pain. So, I always had a smile on my face.
My mother’s dependence on me changed our relationship. She was no longer the one who took care but the receiver. To get my mother back, I needed help her regain the strength and ability to continue an independent life. She had to learn to accept my help as well as the fact that I was no longer a child. Being a caregiver of my own mother taught me a lot about being a “parent”: the responsibility and the sweetness of unconditional devotion and love.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。讲述了由于母亲发生意外事故住院,作者的生活角色发生了巨大的变化,从一个无忧无虑的少年成长为照顾母亲的帮手,在这个过程中,作者也更加深刻认识到了作为父母的责任。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“她回家是一件幸事,但这对我来说意味着一些不熟悉的职责。”可知,第一段可描写作者照顾母亲的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“母亲对我的依赖改变了我们的关系。”可知,第二段可描写作者的感悟及对父母责任有了更深刻的理解。
2.续写线索:母亲住院——伤心难过——快速成长——照顾母亲——角色互换——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①我突然意识到:it struck me that/it occurred to me that
②照顾:take care/look after/attend to
③恢复:regain/resume/recover
情绪类
①乐观的:upbeat/optimistic/positive
②沮丧的:frustrated/ depressed/ downcast
【点睛】[高分句型1] It struck me that I was pretty much playing the role of mother to my own mother.(运用了it作形式主语,that引导的主语从句)
[高分句型2] She was no longer the one who took care but the receiver.(运用了关系代词who引导的定语从句)