Unit 1 Dream homes 2023-2024学年七年级下册英语单元写作深度指导（牛津译林版）（必做）含解析
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Unit 1 Dream homes 单元写作指导与演练
单元写作 早知道 写 作 任 务 本单元的话题是“梦想中的家”。家是避风的港湾,是人们不变的牵挂。当然,每个人心 中都有自己梦想的家。在具体的写作中,学生应做到以下几点: 1.能描述梦想中的家的方位、大小以及特点; 2.能使用一些方位词描述梦想中的家的内部结构以及设施; 3.能对梦想中的家进行评价或总结。
常 用 表 达 常用词汇 1.dream 梦想 4.floor 楼层;地板 7.bathroom 浴室 10.kitchen 厨房 2.centre 中心 5.garden 花园 8.balcony 阳台 11.near 靠近 3.house 房屋 6.bedroom 卧室 9.study 书房 12.comfortable 舒适的
13.living room 起居室 14.dinning room 餐厅 15.in the centre of...在…… 中心 16.next to 紧邻;在…… 旁边 17.in front of 在……前面 18.be full of 充满…… 19.be different from 和……不同 20.the same as 和……一样 21.share sth with sb 与某人分享某物 22.of one’s own 属于某人自己的 23.at the foot of 在……脚下
常用句子 1.My dream home lies at the foot of a hill.我梦想的家坐落在山脚下。 2.It has four floors.它有四层楼。 3.There are two sofas in the living room.在客厅里有两个沙发。 4.There’s a big garden behind the house.房子后面有个大花园。 5.I would like to invite my friends to play games with me on the weekend.我想邀请我的 朋友们周末和我一起玩游戏。 6.What a beautiful place it is!这是一个多么漂亮的地方啊! 7.The house looks big and comfortable.那座房子看起来又大又舒适。 8.It is a good place to live in.它是个居住的好地方。
如果让你选择一个梦想中的家， 它会是什么样子呢？跟大家分享一下你梦想中的家吧。请以“My Dream
Home"为题写一篇 80 词左右的短文。
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【写作框架设计】
【范文赏读】
My Dream Home My dream home is in the centre of the city. It has two floors. On the first floor, there is a big and clean kitchen, and there is a large fridge in it. On the second floor, there are four rooms. One of them is a study, and there are many interesting books and a computer in it. I can invite my friends to play in my home. I like my dream home very much. ①这篇短文用了一般现在时且以第一 人称介绍理想的家 ②作者采用三个自然段来写，段落分 明，构思清晰，既注重了外观又注重 了内部结构。最后作者用一句话表达 自己对理想的家的喜爱之情
一
为了激发中学生创意灵感， 提高学生学习英语的热情， 举办了“My dream home”的演讲比赛。请你根据
下面所提供的信息，完成演讲稿。
1. 房子大，有两层，可以和家人住在一起，后面有花园；
2. 房间多，至少有 8 个房间； 一层有厨房、卧室等；二层有浴室、书房等；
3. 很舒适，放学后在书房做作业；早上在花园读书；可以和朋友在家聚会；
4. 其他。
要求：
1. 字数不少于 80 个。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 所写短文必须包括以上要点，省略处适当发挥使短文通顺流畅。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
4. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
Ladies and gentlemen,
I’d like to tell you about my dream home.
That’s all. Thank you.
【答案】
Ladies and gentlemen,
I’d like to tell you about my dream home. It is a large house in the country. It has two floors. My family can
live together. There is a garden behind the house.
There are at least 8 rooms. On the first floor there is a kitchen, a dining room, a sitting room and a bedroom.
On the second floor there are two bedrooms, a bathroom and a study.
My dream home is very comfortable. After school I do my homework in the study. In the morning I read
books in the garden and I can also grow some flowers in it. I can ask my friends to have parties, watch films or play
games together in the house. It is great fun! I love my home.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据开头提示，介绍房子大，有两层，可以和家人住在一起，后面有花园；
第二步，介绍房间多，至少有 8 个房间； 一层有厨房、卧室等；二层有浴室、书房等； 第三步，介绍很舒适，放学后在书房做作业；早上在花园读书；可以和朋友在家聚会；
第四步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth.想做某事。
②do one’s homework 做家庭作业
③at least 至少
④play games 玩游戏
[高分句型]
①On the first floor there is a kitchen, a dining room, a sitting room and a bedroom.（there be 结构）
②I can ask my friends to have parties, watch films or play games together in the house.（ask sb. to do sth.让某人
做某事）
二
每个人都有自己梦想的家园。请根据下列要点提示，写一篇名为 My dream home 的短文。
1.小区在山脚下的一个小镇上，临近大海……
2.公交车站就在附近，小区四周有……
3.我住在九楼，我家有卧室，客厅……
4.邻居友好，各有技艺，大家互相帮助……
注意事项：
1.文章 80 词左右，包含以上全部要点；
2.语句通顺连贯，字迹清晰；
3.文中不得出现真是校名、人名。
My dream home
East or west, home is the best. Everybody knows that. But still we have a dream home in our mind.
【答案】
My dream home
East or west, home is the best. Everybody knows that. But still we have a dream home in our mind.
My dream home is in a small town at the foot of a hill. It is near the sea. The air is fresh. There are many
flowers, trees and green hills. Every morning I can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. There are many buses and undergrounds to the town center. It’s very easy for people to do some shopping. There are many families in our
town. Neighbors here know each other. They are all kind and helpful. They often share their different skills and
help us with all kinds of problems. There are many tall buildings. I live on the ninth floor. There are some rooms in
it, such as bedrooms and living room. I love to sit on the balcony and look out at the sea.
It’s good for me to live in a town like that. I hope to have my dream home one day!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以 My dream home 为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出对梦想家园的介绍；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“位置、周边设施、居室和邻居”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①in our mind 在我们的脑海中
②do some shopping 购物
③each other 彼此
④all kinds of 各种各样的
[高分句型]
①There are many buses and undergrounds to the town center.（There be 句型）
②It’s good for me to live in a town like that.（It 固定句型）
三
请你根据下表中的提示，以“My dream home in the dream neighbourhood”为题，谈谈自己理想社区中的梦想
家园。
社区 情况 社区很大；邻居友善；病有人医，坏有人修，老有人问，学有人 帮……
周围 环境 在一座小山脚下，可以……
房子 概况 两层， 一个花园……
内部 设施 有多个房间、 一个大阳台……
要求：
1. 短文不少于 80 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，字迹工整；
3. 内容必须包括表格中的所有要点，可适当发挥。
My dream home in the dream neighbourhood
My dream home is at the foot of a hill. It has two floors.
【答案】
My dream home in the dream neighbourhood
My dream home is at the foot of a hill. It has two floors. There is a beautiful garden with different kinds of
flowers. There are many rooms and a big balcony in it. I can look out at the hill and trees on the balcony. My dream
home is in a very big neighbourhood and the neighbours are kind to each other. There are many volunteers in my
neighbourhood. Some of them are doctors. They can take good care of the sick people. If there is something wrong
with our things, the engineers here can help us fix them. When we have problems with our study, the college
students will help us. They often help the old clean their houses and do some shopping.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据表格中的提示内容介绍自己理想社区中的梦想家园，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍梦想家园的周围环境和房子概况；
第二步，介绍梦想家园的内部设施；
第三步，介绍梦想家园的社区情况。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of 各种各样的
②be kind to 对某人友好
③take good care of 好好照顾
[高分句型]
①My dream home is in a very big neighbourhood and the neighbours are kind to each other.(and 连接的并列句)
②If there is something wrong with our things, the engineers here can help us fix them.(if 引导的条件状语从句)
单元写作 早知道 写 作 任 务 本单元的话题是“梦想中的家”。家是避风的港湾,是人们不变的牵挂。当然,每个人心 中都有自己梦想的家。在具体的写作中,学生应做到以下几点: 1.能描述梦想中的家的方位、大小以及特点; 2.能使用一些方位词描述梦想中的家的内部结构以及设施; 3.能对梦想中的家进行评价或总结。
常 用 表 达 常用词汇 1.dream 梦想 4.floor 楼层;地板 7.bathroom 浴室 10.kitchen 厨房 2.centre 中心 5.garden 花园 8.balcony 阳台 11.near 靠近 3.house 房屋 6.bedroom 卧室 9.study 书房 12.comfortable 舒适的
13.living room 起居室 14.dinning room 餐厅 15.in the centre of...在…… 中心 16.next to 紧邻;在…… 旁边 17.in front of 在……前面 18.be full of 充满…… 19.be different from 和……不同 20.the same as 和……一样 21.share sth with sb 与某人分享某物 22.of one’s own 属于某人自己的 23.at the foot of 在……脚下
常用句子 1.My dream home lies at the foot of a hill.我梦想的家坐落在山脚下。 2.It has four floors.它有四层楼。 3.There are two sofas in the living room.在客厅里有两个沙发。 4.There’s a big garden behind the house.房子后面有个大花园。 5.I would like to invite my friends to play games with me on the weekend.我想邀请我的 朋友们周末和我一起玩游戏。 6.What a beautiful place it is!这是一个多么漂亮的地方啊! 7.The house looks big and comfortable.那座房子看起来又大又舒适。 8.It is a good place to live in.它是个居住的好地方。
如果让你选择一个梦想中的家， 它会是什么样子呢？跟大家分享一下你梦想中的家吧。请以“My Dream
Home"为题写一篇 80 词左右的短文。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作框架设计】
【范文赏读】
My Dream Home My dream home is in the centre of the city. It has two floors. On the first floor, there is a big and clean kitchen, and there is a large fridge in it. On the second floor, there are four rooms. One of them is a study, and there are many interesting books and a computer in it. I can invite my friends to play in my home. I like my dream home very much. ①这篇短文用了一般现在时且以第一 人称介绍理想的家 ②作者采用三个自然段来写，段落分 明，构思清晰，既注重了外观又注重 了内部结构。最后作者用一句话表达 自己对理想的家的喜爱之情
一
为了激发中学生创意灵感， 提高学生学习英语的热情， 举办了“My dream home”的演讲比赛。请你根据
下面所提供的信息，完成演讲稿。
1. 房子大，有两层，可以和家人住在一起，后面有花园；
2. 房间多，至少有 8 个房间； 一层有厨房、卧室等；二层有浴室、书房等；
3. 很舒适，放学后在书房做作业；早上在花园读书；可以和朋友在家聚会；
4. 其他。
要求：
1. 字数不少于 80 个。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 所写短文必须包括以上要点，省略处适当发挥使短文通顺流畅。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
4. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
Ladies and gentlemen,
I’d like to tell you about my dream home.
That’s all. Thank you.
【答案】
Ladies and gentlemen,
I’d like to tell you about my dream home. It is a large house in the country. It has two floors. My family can
live together. There is a garden behind the house.
There are at least 8 rooms. On the first floor there is a kitchen, a dining room, a sitting room and a bedroom.
On the second floor there are two bedrooms, a bathroom and a study.
My dream home is very comfortable. After school I do my homework in the study. In the morning I read
books in the garden and I can also grow some flowers in it. I can ask my friends to have parties, watch films or play
games together in the house. It is great fun! I love my home.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据开头提示，介绍房子大，有两层，可以和家人住在一起，后面有花园；
第二步，介绍房间多，至少有 8 个房间； 一层有厨房、卧室等；二层有浴室、书房等； 第三步，介绍很舒适，放学后在书房做作业；早上在花园读书；可以和朋友在家聚会；
第四步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth.想做某事。
②do one’s homework 做家庭作业
③at least 至少
④play games 玩游戏
[高分句型]
①On the first floor there is a kitchen, a dining room, a sitting room and a bedroom.（there be 结构）
②I can ask my friends to have parties, watch films or play games together in the house.（ask sb. to do sth.让某人
做某事）
二
每个人都有自己梦想的家园。请根据下列要点提示，写一篇名为 My dream home 的短文。
1.小区在山脚下的一个小镇上，临近大海……
2.公交车站就在附近，小区四周有……
3.我住在九楼，我家有卧室，客厅……
4.邻居友好，各有技艺，大家互相帮助……
注意事项：
1.文章 80 词左右，包含以上全部要点；
2.语句通顺连贯，字迹清晰；
3.文中不得出现真是校名、人名。
My dream home
East or west, home is the best. Everybody knows that. But still we have a dream home in our mind.
【答案】
My dream home
East or west, home is the best. Everybody knows that. But still we have a dream home in our mind.
My dream home is in a small town at the foot of a hill. It is near the sea. The air is fresh. There are many
flowers, trees and green hills. Every morning I can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. There are many buses and undergrounds to the town center. It’s very easy for people to do some shopping. There are many families in our
town. Neighbors here know each other. They are all kind and helpful. They often share their different skills and
help us with all kinds of problems. There are many tall buildings. I live on the ninth floor. There are some rooms in
it, such as bedrooms and living room. I love to sit on the balcony and look out at the sea.
It’s good for me to live in a town like that. I hope to have my dream home one day!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以 My dream home 为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出对梦想家园的介绍；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“位置、周边设施、居室和邻居”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①in our mind 在我们的脑海中
②do some shopping 购物
③each other 彼此
④all kinds of 各种各样的
[高分句型]
①There are many buses and undergrounds to the town center.（There be 句型）
②It’s good for me to live in a town like that.（It 固定句型）
三
请你根据下表中的提示，以“My dream home in the dream neighbourhood”为题，谈谈自己理想社区中的梦想
家园。
社区 情况 社区很大；邻居友善；病有人医，坏有人修，老有人问，学有人 帮……
周围 环境 在一座小山脚下，可以……
房子 概况 两层， 一个花园……
内部 设施 有多个房间、 一个大阳台……
要求：
1. 短文不少于 80 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，字迹工整；
3. 内容必须包括表格中的所有要点，可适当发挥。
My dream home in the dream neighbourhood
My dream home is at the foot of a hill. It has two floors.
【答案】
My dream home in the dream neighbourhood
My dream home is at the foot of a hill. It has two floors. There is a beautiful garden with different kinds of
flowers. There are many rooms and a big balcony in it. I can look out at the hill and trees on the balcony. My dream
home is in a very big neighbourhood and the neighbours are kind to each other. There are many volunteers in my
neighbourhood. Some of them are doctors. They can take good care of the sick people. If there is something wrong
with our things, the engineers here can help us fix them. When we have problems with our study, the college
students will help us. They often help the old clean their houses and do some shopping.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据表格中的提示内容介绍自己理想社区中的梦想家园，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍梦想家园的周围环境和房子概况；
第二步，介绍梦想家园的内部设施；
第三步，介绍梦想家园的社区情况。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of 各种各样的
②be kind to 对某人友好
③take good care of 好好照顾
[高分句型]
①My dream home is in a very big neighbourhood and the neighbours are kind to each other.(and 连接的并列句)
②If there is something wrong with our things, the engineers here can help us fix them.(if 引导的条件状语从句)