2024届3月杭州市二模英语读后续写--Girl can be anything女孩坚持打鼓 讲义
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试题呈现：
“I’ll bet Anjali knows. Right, Anjali Why don't you show us since you' re the star student,” Deepak taunted(奚落).
Anjali was confused. She wasn't trying to show off. She was just playing tabla (印度塔不拉鼓)，like everyone else. And why was Deepak being so mean lately Is it because tabla is a boy's thing She didn't care that people thought it was a boys’ instrument. Anjali knew there was no such thing. She dance her fingers across the tabla to perform the composition in confusion.“Ugh! ”Anjali heard someone groan and she stopped playing.
“I guess I don’t know it that well after all,” Anjali said sheepishly to the teacher, Mr. Zakir. Her stomach was doing flip-flops. That wasn’t true. Not even a little. Mr. Zakir's eyes narrowed. He looked like he was about to say something, but changed his mind. “The recital(演奏会) is next week, everybody. Keep practicing. I will be announcing who will get to perform onstage with me at my next concert!” Anjali had dreamed of a moment like that. She wanted to win the opportunity, but she needed to sort things straight with Deepak first.
As the class was dismissed, Anjali hurried over to Deepak. When she finally made eye contact with him, he purposely looked and walked off. The next day at school, Anjali overheard Deepak whispering to Mary. “People are only interested because she’s the only girl in tabla class and they want her to feel special. She’s not that good-” Anjali was furious. She excused herself and went to the bathroom. She took some deep breaths but couldn’t relax. Her heart was pounding.
“It's not my fault that people make a big deal about a girl playing tabla. I make mistakes too, but I work really hard. Maybe he should too. He should be less mean and practice more. ”
“If I play in this concert, no one will talk to me again. He will turn everyone against me.”
“I don’t want to see a tabla or hear a tabla or play a tabla EVER AGAIN!!” Anjali yelled at the mirror. It was quiet for a moment. She believed it was one of her darkest days ever.
注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Stepping out of the bathroom, Anjali saw some inspiring posters on the wall.
After the recital, Deepak walked up to Anjali.
文本分析：
这篇文章很好地写出了一个女孩子在一个领域优秀的情况下受到无端诋毁时，是选择“毁了毁了”，还是继续勇敢前行呢？这场内心的斗争，以及海报上的一剂”强心剂“如何在此次经历中发挥作用？要注意的是，本文的重点是Anjali内心的battle，而不是感化Deepak。所以同学们不需要给予反派担当Deepak过多笔墨。
关键概念阐述
1. **性别偏见**：Anjali面临的挑战不仅仅是在音乐上的技能展示，而是打破性别对某项活动的传统看法。
2. **同龄人压力**：Deepak的态度反映了同龄人的影响力和个体如何面对这种压力。
3. **自我肯定**：Anjali通过克服内心的犹豫，肯定了自己的热情和才能，这是青少年发展中的一个关键时刻。
情节梳理
- 主要人物：Anjali, Deepak, Mr. Zakir
- 视角：第三人称
- 时空线：高中的音乐课堂和演奏会前夕。
- 情节线：Anjali 在性别偏见和同龄人压力下保持自尊，并在演奏会上展现自我肯定。
段首句解读及解题思路
段首句一：
“Stepping out of the bathroom, Anjali saw some inspiring posters on the wall.” 这句暗示了Anjali需要从外部的激励中找到内心的力量。
段首句二：
“After the recital, Deepak walked up to Anjali.” 这句预示了一种可能的和解或者至少是一次对话的机会。
每段大意
1.Anjali在情绪低谷后找到了灵感，决定面对Deepak和挑战，而不是逃避。
2. Anjali在演奏会后得到了Deepak的一种间接认可，并提出了建设性的提议以化解紧张气氛。
下水作文1：126+120
Stepping out of the bathroom, Anjali saw some inspiring posters on the wall. On each poster was a portrait of a distinguished master in his/her chosen field, with a spirit-lifting quote attached below. While looking through, Anjali found that one poster in particular arrested her attention. It was Zakir Hossain, a tabla master and also her idol. Gazing at the poster, Anjali felt the desire to play tabla once again burning/ignited inside. Gone was the idea that tabla was the boys’ thing! Gone were Deepak’s bad words about her tabla talent! All in her mind was devoted/diligent practice for Mr Zakir’s recital. Luckily, Anjali’s efforts paid off! She did an amazing job and was chosen to play with her teacher in the concert, which had been her dream and was as a recognition of her talent and efforts.
After the recital, Deepak walked up to Anjali. With a mixture of shame and unease, he apologized for his bias against girls and mean words about her. Also, he offered congratulations to Anjali on her stunning performance with Mr. Zakir. Quite surprised at the changes in Deepak’s attitude, Anjali couldn’t believe what she heard and saw but still she accepted his congratulations and apology. Finally accepted and recognized in this male-dominated field, Anjali found her world immediately lit up and her ideas began to fly. “Maybe I can start a tabla band with Deepak. Maybe I can have more girls play tabla. Maybe we can introduce our national essence worldwide this way. Maybe...” Sometimes, it only takes a little courage and insistence to make it to our dreams.
下水作文2：
Stepping out of the bathroom, Anjali saw some inspiring posters on the wall. In golden letters were the words - “when the world tells you to shrink, expand." She had to tear her eyes away from(不舍得移开眼神)the girls striving for excellence indifferent fields on the posers, even those that used to be male preserves(男性专属领域),until she memorized the powerful mantra(口号).Clenching her fist, Anjali was determined to sit through this class, even with all those mean whispers and eyes and do her best. Anjali, as it turned out, was the first name to be announced by Mr. Zakir. The mantra saw her through the following practices, the doubting voice(both from Deepak and herself and the grand recital. A loud tide of applause when Mr.Zakir introduced to the audience Anjali, the tabla player confirmed her talents.(123w)
参考范文：103+103
Stepping out of the bathroom, Anjali saw some inspiring posters on the wall. One of them illustrated with several instruments and a quote “Never dim your light.” For that very moment, Anjali thought about how she was mesmerized the first time she saw somebody playing tabla, by the beautiful sounds he was creating with his hands. She knew that fabla was meant for her. When the day of the recital finally arrived, Anjali was determined to do her very best, regardless of the outcome. She was not going to let anyone make her feel bad, whether it was for being good at something or for being a girl. And as expected, she delivered a flawless performance.
After the recital, Deepak walked up to Anjali. He remarked awkwardly that he was just jealous because tabla should be a boy's instruments. Anjali shrugged, “You know there is no such thing.” As Anjali took one last look at the stage, she felt such a relief. Under the spotlight was the set of tabla, glittering on the stage just she did a few minutes earlier. Among countless compliments and congratulations from the audience, Anjali heard a little sweet voice, “Bravo, Anjali!” she turned to find a little looking up at her. “I didn’t know I could play tabla,” she said. “Girls can do everything boys do,” Anjali beamed, “Never dim your light.”
“I’ll bet Anjali knows. Right, Anjali Why don't you show us since you' re the star student,” Deepak taunted(奚落).
Anjali was confused. She wasn't trying to show off. She was just playing tabla (印度塔不拉鼓)，like everyone else. And why was Deepak being so mean lately Is it because tabla is a boy's thing She didn't care that people thought it was a boys’ instrument. Anjali knew there was no such thing. She dance her fingers across the tabla to perform the composition in confusion.“Ugh! ”Anjali heard someone groan and she stopped playing.
“I guess I don’t know it that well after all,” Anjali said sheepishly to the teacher, Mr. Zakir. Her stomach was doing flip-flops. That wasn’t true. Not even a little. Mr. Zakir's eyes narrowed. He looked like he was about to say something, but changed his mind. “The recital(演奏会) is next week, everybody. Keep practicing. I will be announcing who will get to perform onstage with me at my next concert!” Anjali had dreamed of a moment like that. She wanted to win the opportunity, but she needed to sort things straight with Deepak first.
As the class was dismissed, Anjali hurried over to Deepak. When she finally made eye contact with him, he purposely looked and walked off. The next day at school, Anjali overheard Deepak whispering to Mary. “People are only interested because she’s the only girl in tabla class and they want her to feel special. She’s not that good-” Anjali was furious. She excused herself and went to the bathroom. She took some deep breaths but couldn’t relax. Her heart was pounding.
“It's not my fault that people make a big deal about a girl playing tabla. I make mistakes too, but I work really hard. Maybe he should too. He should be less mean and practice more. ”
“If I play in this concert, no one will talk to me again. He will turn everyone against me.”
“I don’t want to see a tabla or hear a tabla or play a tabla EVER AGAIN!!” Anjali yelled at the mirror. It was quiet for a moment. She believed it was one of her darkest days ever.
注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Stepping out of the bathroom, Anjali saw some inspiring posters on the wall.
After the recital, Deepak walked up to Anjali.
文本分析：
这篇文章很好地写出了一个女孩子在一个领域优秀的情况下受到无端诋毁时，是选择“毁了毁了”，还是继续勇敢前行呢？这场内心的斗争，以及海报上的一剂”强心剂“如何在此次经历中发挥作用？要注意的是，本文的重点是Anjali内心的battle，而不是感化Deepak。所以同学们不需要给予反派担当Deepak过多笔墨。
关键概念阐述
1. **性别偏见**：Anjali面临的挑战不仅仅是在音乐上的技能展示，而是打破性别对某项活动的传统看法。
2. **同龄人压力**：Deepak的态度反映了同龄人的影响力和个体如何面对这种压力。
3. **自我肯定**：Anjali通过克服内心的犹豫，肯定了自己的热情和才能，这是青少年发展中的一个关键时刻。
情节梳理
- 主要人物：Anjali, Deepak, Mr. Zakir
- 视角：第三人称
- 时空线：高中的音乐课堂和演奏会前夕。
- 情节线：Anjali 在性别偏见和同龄人压力下保持自尊，并在演奏会上展现自我肯定。
段首句解读及解题思路
段首句一：
“Stepping out of the bathroom, Anjali saw some inspiring posters on the wall.” 这句暗示了Anjali需要从外部的激励中找到内心的力量。
段首句二：
“After the recital, Deepak walked up to Anjali.” 这句预示了一种可能的和解或者至少是一次对话的机会。
每段大意
1.Anjali在情绪低谷后找到了灵感，决定面对Deepak和挑战，而不是逃避。
2. Anjali在演奏会后得到了Deepak的一种间接认可，并提出了建设性的提议以化解紧张气氛。
下水作文1：126+120
Stepping out of the bathroom, Anjali saw some inspiring posters on the wall. On each poster was a portrait of a distinguished master in his/her chosen field, with a spirit-lifting quote attached below. While looking through, Anjali found that one poster in particular arrested her attention. It was Zakir Hossain, a tabla master and also her idol. Gazing at the poster, Anjali felt the desire to play tabla once again burning/ignited inside. Gone was the idea that tabla was the boys’ thing! Gone were Deepak’s bad words about her tabla talent! All in her mind was devoted/diligent practice for Mr Zakir’s recital. Luckily, Anjali’s efforts paid off! She did an amazing job and was chosen to play with her teacher in the concert, which had been her dream and was as a recognition of her talent and efforts.
After the recital, Deepak walked up to Anjali. With a mixture of shame and unease, he apologized for his bias against girls and mean words about her. Also, he offered congratulations to Anjali on her stunning performance with Mr. Zakir. Quite surprised at the changes in Deepak’s attitude, Anjali couldn’t believe what she heard and saw but still she accepted his congratulations and apology. Finally accepted and recognized in this male-dominated field, Anjali found her world immediately lit up and her ideas began to fly. “Maybe I can start a tabla band with Deepak. Maybe I can have more girls play tabla. Maybe we can introduce our national essence worldwide this way. Maybe...” Sometimes, it only takes a little courage and insistence to make it to our dreams.
下水作文2：
Stepping out of the bathroom, Anjali saw some inspiring posters on the wall. In golden letters were the words - “when the world tells you to shrink, expand." She had to tear her eyes away from(不舍得移开眼神)the girls striving for excellence indifferent fields on the posers, even those that used to be male preserves(男性专属领域),until she memorized the powerful mantra(口号).Clenching her fist, Anjali was determined to sit through this class, even with all those mean whispers and eyes and do her best. Anjali, as it turned out, was the first name to be announced by Mr. Zakir. The mantra saw her through the following practices, the doubting voice(both from Deepak and herself and the grand recital. A loud tide of applause when Mr.Zakir introduced to the audience Anjali, the tabla player confirmed her talents.(123w)
参考范文：103+103
Stepping out of the bathroom, Anjali saw some inspiring posters on the wall. One of them illustrated with several instruments and a quote “Never dim your light.” For that very moment, Anjali thought about how she was mesmerized the first time she saw somebody playing tabla, by the beautiful sounds he was creating with his hands. She knew that fabla was meant for her. When the day of the recital finally arrived, Anjali was determined to do her very best, regardless of the outcome. She was not going to let anyone make her feel bad, whether it was for being good at something or for being a girl. And as expected, she delivered a flawless performance.
After the recital, Deepak walked up to Anjali. He remarked awkwardly that he was just jealous because tabla should be a boy's instruments. Anjali shrugged, “You know there is no such thing.” As Anjali took one last look at the stage, she felt such a relief. Under the spotlight was the set of tabla, glittering on the stage just she did a few minutes earlier. Among countless compliments and congratulations from the audience, Anjali heard a little sweet voice, “Bravo, Anjali!” she turned to find a little looking up at her. “I didn’t know I could play tabla,” she said. “Girls can do everything boys do,” Anjali beamed, “Never dim your light.”