2024届高考英语专题复习读后续写-人与自然之野外奇遇 导学案（含答案）

读后续写-人与自然之野外奇遇
教学目标：
了解野外奇遇类解题思路；
掌握野外奇遇类细节描写；
常考案列分析。
野外奇遇之解题思路
思路一：野生动物的凶险描写→害怕→自救成功→脱离危险如释重负→ 作者感悟，主题升华
思路二：野生动物的凶险描写→害怕→自救不成功，他救→ 脱离危险如释重负→ 表达感谢→ 作者感悟， 主题升华
野外奇遇之细节描写
1. 野生动物的凶险描写
①It exposed his sharp teeth, glaring at us as it ran forward.
他露出锋利的牙齿，向前跑时怒视着我们。
②The bear again stood on his back legs and roared repeatedly.
熊再次用后腿站立，不停地咆哮。
③It seemed that his mouth was full of blood, his eyes red with anger and the mouth widely open.他的嘴里似乎满是血，眼睛因愤怒而发红，嘴巴张大了。
2.害怕
①Seeing this， she felt terror welling up in her heart and surging through her.
当她看到这个时，她感到恐惧涌上心头并且涌向全身。
②When she saw the beast，so terrified was she that the throat tightened and the knees weakened.当她看到这只野兽的时候，她是如此害怕以致于喉咙发紧，膝盖发软。
③Extremely frightened，I found my body was trembling and my palms were sweating.
非常害怕，我发现我身体正在发抖，手心正在冒汗。
3．想办法自救（自救可能成功，自救也可能失败，失败后出现他救）
注：描写自救办法前可以加一个句子
Suddenly, a good idea occurred to/hit/struck sb.突然某人想到一个好主意
(1)呼叫求助法
①I shouted for help at the top of my voice but in vain.
我声嘶力竭地喊叫求助，但都是徒劳。
(2)引诱法(扔给动物,比如吃的，引起动物的注意)
①（With）Eyes fixed on the beast, he pulled out the sausages in his backpack, aimed at the furry giant and threw it straight to the fierce animal, hoping the flavor would attract it.
他盯着这个野兽，从包里掏出香肠，瞄准毛乎乎的巨（熊），直接扔向这个凶兽，希望香味能够吸引它的注意力。
②.I picked out some raw meat and threw it to the wolf，hoping the flavor would attract it.
我挑了一些生肉扔给了狼，希望香味能够吸引它的注意力。
(3)直接对抗法：用身边的东西（如文章提到的工具，如stick棍子，gun枪，knife小刀）攻击该动物
①We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air.
我们对着喊大叫，使劲地打罐子，并向空中发射了空猎枪炮弹。
②I picked my courage and tried to frighten him away with the pepper spray .
我不得不采取行动，所以我鼓起勇气，试图用胡椒喷雾把他吓跑。
③I took out a metal bar from the car at once and started a fight with the wolf,
我立刻从车里拿出一根金属棒，开始与狼搏斗。
4．自救成功（野生动物享用美食或者被吓到逃跑）
①Satisfied with what he got, the wolf ran into the woods.
狼对所得到的感到满意，跑进了树林。
②To my great surprise, the bear stopped and bowed down to eat the bread.
令我大为惊讶的是，这只熊停下来弯腰吃面包。
③The wolf jumped up, and rushed towards one of them, but was beaten back. Seeing that he couldn’t win, the wolf ran away down the hill.
狼跳了起来，冲向其中一只，但被击退了。狼看到自己赢不了，就跑下山去了。
④Terrified by the noises of the helicopter and the shot, the bear was startled to leap into the bush and galloped toward the forest like a shot.
这只熊被直升机的噪音和枪声吓了一跳，跳进灌木丛，像枪声一样冲向森林。
5．自救不成功，他救（他救通常是文章已经出现的人）
6．自己感受之如释重负＋拥抱
①Seeing this, all of us gave a sign of relief. Elli and I embraced tightly with still racing hearts.看到这个，我们都松了一口气。我和艾莉紧紧地拥抱在一起，心依然在跳动。
7．表达感谢
①（With） tears filling his eyes, Richard expressed his gratitude in a weak voice
理查德眼里充满泪水，用微弱的声音表达了他的感激之情
②（With） tears of appreciation rolling down his cheeks，peter said thankfully，“you have saved me today. I couldn’t thank you enough
感激的泪水顺着脸颊流下，他感激地说：“今天你救了我，我对你感激不尽”
8.作者感悟，主题升华
①Will I never forget that terrifying experience.
我永远不会忘记那可怕的经历
②Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip was deeply engraved in my mind.
我以前从来没过过这么危险而刺激的假期，这个特殊的旅行深深地留在我脑海中。
③So unforgettable was the night that it would stay in my memory forever.
这晚上是如此难忘以至于它将永留心间。
④Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way. 直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。
⑤It was this terrible experience that taught a valuable lesson in my life, through which I knew the importance of ...
这次可怕的经历给我的人生上了宝贵的一课，通过它我知道了......的重要性。
案例分析（一） 露营遇到大熊后逃生获得爸爸的救助
Grady and his family go camping every summer. As it was becoming hotter, here came the camping time.
Having planned the camp long, the family finally decided the destination --- the Great National Forest. With food, necessity and cookers loaded onto the car, the family squeezed into the car. The car door closed, heat was shut outside.
In the car, Jared, Grady's younger brother was playing with a toy dinosaur, making great noise. Grady's mother talked excitedly with his father. On settling in the car, Grady put on the earphone and turned on the music. He neither wanted to join his brother nor joined any talk. After what seemed to be hours, the car stopped where they headed. Grady threw down his backpack and slammed the car door.
“This will be a lengthy week,“ he said unhappily to no one in particular. He looked around the campground. Hundreds of tall and green fir trees, some as tall as church towers, covered the mountainside like a green carpet. The sun would be setting soon. Grady thought maybe the heat wouldn't be unbearable. But actually now in the mountain, the hot stickiness of July was closely attached to him.
Grady hated camping, but it was something his family stuck to every summer. His father liked cooking over an open air, telling stories about how to survive things like bear attacks and bites of bees. His mother and Jared liked to hike and take pictures of animals. Jared had a collection of bug pictures that he had pinned to the walls in his half of their room. Grady thought they were just scary and proof that Jared was a strange kid.
They set up camp - two tents, one for his parents and one for himself and Jared. While everyone else started preparing dinner, Grady, looking for some place to cool down, set off for the nearby stream, which was deep enough to swim in.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As Grady got close to the stream, an adorable bear cub (幼崽)caught his eye.
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Turning around, he saw an angry bear moving swiftly towards him.
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【答案】
As Grady got close to the stream, an adorable bear cub caught his eye. Though Grady didn’t like animals, he couldn’t resist such a lovely bear cub measuring no more than two feet tall with a cute face. It was playing pretty joyfully at the edge of the stream. So absorbed was the bear cub in playing that it wasn’t aware that someone was approaching. Driven by curiosity, Grady walked on tiptoe, moving closer to have a look at it. Suddenly he heard a sound behind him.
Turning around, he saw an angry bear moving swiftly towards him. Shocked and dumb, Grady was rooted onto the ground for seconds, and then dashed to their camp desperately, shouting for help in the meantime. Fortunately, Grady’s father heard the shout in time to come to his assistance. To their surprise, realizing the danger was away, the furry giant stopped chasing and returned to the stream, picking up her baby, and holding it in arms tightly. In the distance, attracted by the noise, Jared and his mother were trying to take a photo of the bear cub and its mother.
当格雷迪靠近小溪时，一只可爱的熊幼崽吸引了他的目光。虽然格雷迪不喜欢动物，但他无法抗拒这样一只可爱的小熊，身高不到两英尺，还有一张可爱的脸。它在河边演奏得很开心。熊全神贯注地玩耍，以至于没有意识到有人在靠近。出于好奇的驱使，格雷迪踮起脚尖走着，走近他，要看一眼。突然，他听到身后有一个声音。
他转过身来，看见一只愤怒的熊迅速地向他走去。格雷迪震惊而哑口无言，在地上扎根了几秒钟，然后绝望地冲向他们的营地，同时大喊帮助。幸运的是，格雷迪的父亲及时听到了喊来帮助他。令他们吃惊的是，意识到危险已经消失了，毛茸茸的巨人停止了追赶，回到小溪里，抱起她的孩子，紧紧地抱着它。在远处，被噪音所吸引，贾里德和他的母亲试图给熊崽和它的妈妈拍照。
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了格雷迪和他的家人每年夏天都去露营。经过长期的营地计划，这家人最终决定了目的地——大国家森林。格雷迪讨厌野营，帐篷搭好后，当其他人都开始准备晚餐时，格雷迪找了个凉快的地方，向附近的小溪出发，那里足够深，可以游泳。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“格雷迪走近小溪时，一只可爱的小熊引起了他的注意。”可知，第一段可描写格雷迪由于好奇靠近小熊，突然听到有声音。
②由第二段首句内容“他转过身来，看见一只愤怒的熊迅速向他走来。”可知，第二段可描写格雷迪遇到了一只愤怒的大熊后逃生的过程以及获得了爸爸的帮助得救后，对大熊抱住孩子的场景的描述。
2.续写线索：无法抗拒小熊——小熊玩得很开心——小熊聚精会神的玩着——被好奇心驱使，Grady靠近小熊——大熊愤怒地走来——Grady惊得哑口无言——绝望地冲到营地——父亲及时赶来帮忙——为大熊抱住孩子感到惊讶
3.词汇激活
行为类
无法抗拒：couldn’t resist/hard to resist
聚精会神：be absorbed in/devote oneself to
靠近：be close to/approach
冲：rush/dash
赶来帮忙：come to one’s assistance/on one’s way to help
情绪类
高兴地：joyfully/happily/delightedly
绝望地：desperately/in despair
惊讶：to one’s surprise/to one’s amazement
震惊的：shocked/stunned
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
So absorbed was the bear cub in playing that it wasn’t aware that someone was approaching.（so…that…引导结果状语从句，且so置于句首，使用了倒装句）
[高分句型2]
Grady was rooted onto the ground for seconds, and then dashed to their camp desperately, shouting for help in the meantime.（shouting为现在分词作伴随状语）
案例分析（二）户外遇见蛇提醒种小树苗的弟弟脱险
Rebecca stretched her tired back. “That’s the last seedling (树苗), Pa. Have we planted enough ”
Pa walked to the end of the row of cottonwood seedlings. “No,” he said. “We have to plant trees all the way to that rock over there. We’ll need about twenty more seedlings.”
“I’ll get the seedlings,” offered Rebecca. She longed to cool her feet in the shallow river running through the cotton field.
“You’d better let me go, Miss Petticoats,” teased her twin brother, William. “There are dangers all over this prairie (草原).”
“You may both go,” said Pa. “But hurry back. I’d like to finish before sundown.”
They went across the shallow river to a sandbar where small cottonwood seedlings grew.
Gently, they pulled the seedlings from the sand.
“There! That’s twenty, with a few to spare,” said Rebecca.
“OK,” said William. He led the way to the riverbank, and then stopped. “Look! That’s the dugout (防空洞) we had lived in before we moved here last year,” he said, pointing to a hole on the grassy riverbank.
“Come on, let’s go inside.”
“No,” Rebecca said, “Pa is waiting. Besides, it’s hard to tell what’s in it.”
“Then you go back,” said William, handing the seedlings to Rebecca. I’ll catch up.” He ran to the dugout and stepped inside.
Rebecca wrapped the seedlings in her long apron (围裙) and began to walk. Suddenly she froze in her tracks.
A huge rattlesnake (响尾蛇) moved along the riverbank.
It stopped right in front of the dugout and lay still, coiling up on the warm sunny bank.
“William!” Rebecca shouted. “Don’t come out!”
“Huh ” William’s face appeared at a tiny window beside the door of the dugout.
Rebecca pointed at the rattler. William’s face paled when he saw the snake blocking the doorway. He turned desperate eyes toward Rebecca, and then he glanced behind himself. Rebecca knew what he was thinking: “Were there more snakes waiting in the shadowy corners of the dugout ”
Rebecca’s mind raced, trying to think of a way to get William out of there. An idea popped into her head. It was their only hope. It was risky, but it was the only hope.
“Don’t move,” she said to William in a soft voice. “When I say NOW, you run out of there as fast as you can.”
Rebecca removed the skirt-like petticoat (衬裙) from beneath her dress, and then dipped it into the river. She squeezed out some of the water, and then climbed to the top of the bank, directly above the dugout’s opening.
Paragraph 1:
“Get ready to run, William,” she said, keeping an eye on the motionless snake.
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Paragraph 2:
“Are you OK ” he asked, breathing heavily. Rebecca nodded.
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【答案】Paragraph 1：
“Get ready to run, William,” she said, keeping an eye on the motionless snake. Holding her breath, spread the wet petticoat with great caution, which was much heavier soaked with water. Her hands couldn’t help trembling because of great fear and concern for her twin brother as she leaned over the riverbank. “Come on, you can do it! ” she said to herself. Drawing a deep breath, she made a swift movement and cast the heavy petticoat on top of the rattlesnake. “NOW! ” she shouted to William as the snake began to move. Willian jumped over the covered snake and raced as fast as he could before he stopped and turned around. Rebecca was right behind him.
Paragraph 2：
“Are you OK ” he asked, breathing heavily. Rebecca nodded. Her heart almost missed a beat. She was so blessed that they managed to escape. Scooping up Rebecca in his arms, “Thanks, sister. I’d have done the same for you back there,” said William. Rebecca said with a grin, “You couldn’t have, for you don’t wear petticoat! ” Laughing, they headed for the woods, carrying the seedlings.
【导语】本文以小树苗为线索。讲述了Rebecca和她爸爸以及弟弟种植小树苗，但是小树苗不够了，因此Rebecca主动说自己去取，弟弟担心Rebecca的安全，便陪她一起去取。在取完小树苗回来的路上，弟弟看到了一个防空洞，并执意要进去看看。Rebecca阻止不了弟弟，正准备拿着小树苗回去，却看到了一条响尾蛇朝着防空壕爬去，因此Rebecca必须提醒弟弟并将弟弟救出来。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容““准备跑，威廉，”她说，密切关注着蛇。”可知，第一段可描写Rebecca将自己身上的围裙解开，到岸边将围裙打湿，然后将围裙扔到蛇身上，将蛇盖住，给William创造逃跑的机会。
②由第二段首句内容““你还好吗？他喘着粗气问道。丽贝卡点点头。”可知，第二段可描写他们两个逃出来后，William感谢Rebecca想办法救了他，并承诺今后也会像Rebecca今天这样去保护她。
2.续写线索：河边打湿围裙——将打湿了的围裙扔到蛇身上——让William跑出来——William感谢Rebecca——Rebecca开玩笑说William做不到。
3.词汇激活
行为类
①对……大喊：shout at/yell at/exclaim to ②跑：race/run
③设法逃脱：manage to escape/succeed in escaping
情绪类
①害怕：fear/terror
②担心：concern/worry
【点睛】[高分句型1] Holding her breath, spread the wet petticoat with great caution, which was much heavier soaked with water. (由which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] William jumped over the covered snake and raced as fast as he could before he stopped and turned around. (由before引导的时间状语从句)
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