-2024届高三英语二轮复习2024年杭州4月二模英语读后续写安贾莉的打鼓之路讲义
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2024年4月杭州二模英语读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
"I'll bet Anjali knows. Right, Anjali Why don't you show us since you're the star student," Deepak taunted(奚落).
Anjali was confused. She wasn't trying to show off. She was just playing tabla(印度塔不拉鼓),like everyone else. And why was Deepak being so mean lately Is it because tabla is a boy's thing She didn't care that people thought it was a boys’instrument. Anjali knew there was no such thing. She danced her fingers across the tabla to perform the composition in confusion. "Ugh!” Anjali heard someone groan and she stopped playing.
“I guess I don't know it that well after all." Anjali said sheepishly to the teacher, Mr. Zakir.Her stomach was doing flip-flops. That wasn't true. Not even a little. Mr. Zakir's eyes narrowed. He looked like he was about to say something, but changed his mind. “The recital(演奏会) is next week, everyone. Keep practicing. I will be announcing who will get to perform onstage with me at my next concert!" Anjali had dreamed of a moment like that. She wanted to win the opportunity, but she needed to sort things straight with Deepak first.
As the class was dismissed, Anjali hurried over to Deepak. When she finally made eye contact with him, he purposely looked away and walked off. The next day at school, Anjali overheard Deepak whispering to Mary. “People are only interested because she's the only girl in tabla class and they want her to feel special. She's not that good-" Anjali was furious. She excused herself and went to the bathroom. She took some deep breaths but couldn't relax. Her heart was pounding:
"It's not my fault that people make a big deal about a girl playing tabla. I make mistakes too, but I work really hard. Maybe he should too. He should be less mean and practice more.”
"If I play in this concert, no one will talk to me again. He will turn everyone against me.”
"I don't want to see a tabla or hear a tabla or play a tabla EVER AGAIN!!” Anjali yelled at the mirror. It was quiet for a moment. She believed it was one of her darkest days ever.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Stepping out of the bathroom, Anjali saw some inspiring posters on the wall.
After the recital, Deepak walked up to Anjali.
重点词句解析
1.gender性别n
2.bias歧视 偏见n
3.On their faces is shining confidence and from the audiences are sight and applause of recognition.使用倒装，表语提前的完全倒装
4.recognition认可n
5.sweep away扫除 清除
6.fury生气 愤怒n
7.determine下定决心做...v
8.put aside 将...搁置一边
9.ceaseless不断的
10.polish改进 完善v
11.The following days witnessed her unprecedentedly diligent practice.使用无灵主语
12.unprecedentedly前所未有地
13.diligent勤奋的
14.anticipate预期 期望v
15.astonish使震惊v
16.breathtaking令人惊叹的
17.Never had they imagined...使用倒装
18.feature特点是...v
19.captivating迷人 有魅力的
20.A mixture of shock and admiration still surging in his heart 使用独立主格结构
21.he squeezed a smile, thumbed up and murmured动作链描写
22.mixture混合n
23.shock 震惊n v
24.admiration钦佩n
25.surge涌动涌起v
26.squeeze挤出v
27.murmur轻声说v
28.convince使确信v
29.in some sense在某种程度上 在某个角度上
30.It is because of you that...使用强调句
31.encounter遇到v
32.enlighten启发v
33.reminder提醒n
34.inclusive包容开放的 无歧视的
参考范文：
段落一
Anjali从浴室出来，受到墙上鼓舞人心的海报的启发，她决定不再逃避问题，而是直面挑战和Deepak的偏见。她勇敢地返回排练室，向Deepak表明她的立场，重新投入到对音乐的热爱中去。
Stepping out of the bathroom, Anjali saw some inspiring posters on the wall. "Face the music, create your rhythm," one read. It struck a chord. Yes, tabla was not just a rhythm, it was her voice. She couldn't just give up because of Deepak's words or anyone's perception. Anjali knew she had to confront the situation, not run from it. With renewed determination, she walked back into the practice room. She didn't avoid Deepak but instead approached him, "I heard what you said. But I won't let it stop me. I'm here to play because I love music, not to prove anything to anyone." She saw a flicker of surprise in his eyes before she went back to her tabla, her hands confidently tapping out the familiar beats.
第一段使用的从句和写作手法：
1. **简单句**：用来描述行动和直接的观察，如 "It struck a chord."
2. **复合句**：使用并列连词“but”连接两个独立子句，如 "I heard what you said. But I won't let it stop me."
3. **情感描述**：通过形容词和副词来描述Anjali的内心状态和行动的动机，如 "with renewed determination" 和 "her hands confidently tapping out."
4. **直接引语**：用来描绘对话和角色间的互动，增强故事的真实感，如 "I'm here to play because I love music, not to prove anything to anyone."
段落二
演奏会结束后，Deepak向Anjali表示了尊重，尽管不是直接道歉，但已是一个和解的开始。Anjali提议他们在音乐中合作而不是竞争，表明了她愿意超越之前的紧张关系，推动两人关系的进一步发展。
After the recital, Deepak walked up to Anjali. There was an awkward silence before he muttered, "You were good out there." It wasn't an apology, but Anjali took it as an olive branch. "Music speaks louder than words," she replied, offering a small smile. "Maybe next time, you could join me in a duet instead of a duel." Deepak looked at her, a mixture of emotions crossing his face, then finally nodded. "Maybe," he said. It was a start, and for Anjali, that was enough. She realized that her performance had not just been about the music; it had been about standing up for herself and what she believed in. And perhaps, she had also shown Deepak that the true spirit of music lies in harmony, not discord.
第二段使用的从句和写作手法：
1. **间接引语**：用于表达角色之间的对话，但不是直接引用，如 "There was an awkward silence before he muttered."
2. **情景描写**：用于创造环境氛围和描绘角色之间的非言语交流，如 "offering a small smile."
3. **假设语气**：用于表达可能发生的情况或建议，如 "Maybe next time, you could join me."
4. **省略句**：省去某些成分（主语、谓语等）来增强句子的节奏和强调效果，如 "Music speaks louder than words."
5. **反身代词的使用**：强调Anjali的自主行动，如 "She realized that her performance had not just been about the music."
6. **比喻**：通过 “olive branch” 和 “duet instead of a duel” 使用比喻，来表达和解与合作的概念。
精彩作文示例
P1: Stepping out of the bathroom,Anjali saw some inspiring posters on the wall.
Players of different ages, colors and genders are playing different instruments without any limitation and bias. On their faces is shining confidence and from the audiences are sight and applause of recognition, which completely touched Anjali and swept away all her confusion and fury. She determined to put aside others’ mean action and ceaseless doubt and just to focus on her own practice to polish her skill and to win the opportunity to play with Mr.Zakir. The following days witnessed her unprecedentedly diligent practice. As she anticipated, her breathtaking performance at the recital astonished everyone, including Mr.Zakir, who announced her to be the lucky one for the concert. Never had anyone imagined that was done by a girl tabla player featuring captivating smile of confidence, eyes of determination and mature and solid skills.
P2: After the recital, Deepak walked up to Anjali.
A mixture of shock and admiration still surging in his heart, he squeezed a smile, thumbed up and murmured, “it’s all my fault. I apologize for everything. You are really amazing today. You convinced me that tabla is not just a boy’s instrument.” “It’s ok. In some sense, I should thank you. It is because of you that I encountered the posters and got enlightened about what I should do.” Anjali replied with a calm smile. Since then, no one has taunted Anjali or doubted girl players again. Instead, the tabla team has witnessed a growing number of girls joining the team and showcasing their passion and talent. And Anjali regularly came to the posters and introduced them to new members, which seemed to be a perfect reminder that the world is colorful and inclusive and nothing is impossible.
精彩范文重点词句自测
1.在他们脸上的是闪亮的自信，来自观众的是认可的眼神和鼓掌，这非常触动Anjali，扫除了她心中所有困惑和愤怒。
2.接下来的日子里，她异常勤奋地练习。
3.如她所愿，她惊人的表现让大家震惊，包括老师，老师就宣布她为参加音乐会的幸运儿。
4.大家从来没有想到过 一个女生player（拥有自信的笑容 坚定的眼神 成熟扎实的技巧）竟然完成了这样的事。
5.内心依然震惊和钦佩，他挤出一丝笑容，竖起大拇指，轻声说道：“你让我相信了....”
6.从某种意义上说，我应该感谢你，因为你 我遇见了那些海报，知道了该做什么。
7.越来越多的女生加入这个团队。
8.她经常来到海报前 将其介绍给新成员，这似乎在很好地提醒大家，世界是多彩的 是开放包容的，一切皆有可能。
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
"I'll bet Anjali knows. Right, Anjali Why don't you show us since you're the star student," Deepak taunted(奚落).
Anjali was confused. She wasn't trying to show off. She was just playing tabla(印度塔不拉鼓),like everyone else. And why was Deepak being so mean lately Is it because tabla is a boy's thing She didn't care that people thought it was a boys’instrument. Anjali knew there was no such thing. She danced her fingers across the tabla to perform the composition in confusion. "Ugh!” Anjali heard someone groan and she stopped playing.
“I guess I don't know it that well after all." Anjali said sheepishly to the teacher, Mr. Zakir.Her stomach was doing flip-flops. That wasn't true. Not even a little. Mr. Zakir's eyes narrowed. He looked like he was about to say something, but changed his mind. “The recital(演奏会) is next week, everyone. Keep practicing. I will be announcing who will get to perform onstage with me at my next concert!" Anjali had dreamed of a moment like that. She wanted to win the opportunity, but she needed to sort things straight with Deepak first.
As the class was dismissed, Anjali hurried over to Deepak. When she finally made eye contact with him, he purposely looked away and walked off. The next day at school, Anjali overheard Deepak whispering to Mary. “People are only interested because she's the only girl in tabla class and they want her to feel special. She's not that good-" Anjali was furious. She excused herself and went to the bathroom. She took some deep breaths but couldn't relax. Her heart was pounding:
"It's not my fault that people make a big deal about a girl playing tabla. I make mistakes too, but I work really hard. Maybe he should too. He should be less mean and practice more.”
"If I play in this concert, no one will talk to me again. He will turn everyone against me.”
"I don't want to see a tabla or hear a tabla or play a tabla EVER AGAIN!!” Anjali yelled at the mirror. It was quiet for a moment. She believed it was one of her darkest days ever.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Stepping out of the bathroom, Anjali saw some inspiring posters on the wall.
After the recital, Deepak walked up to Anjali.
重点词句解析
1.gender性别n
2.bias歧视 偏见n
3.On their faces is shining confidence and from the audiences are sight and applause of recognition.使用倒装，表语提前的完全倒装
4.recognition认可n
5.sweep away扫除 清除
6.fury生气 愤怒n
7.determine下定决心做...v
8.put aside 将...搁置一边
9.ceaseless不断的
10.polish改进 完善v
11.The following days witnessed her unprecedentedly diligent practice.使用无灵主语
12.unprecedentedly前所未有地
13.diligent勤奋的
14.anticipate预期 期望v
15.astonish使震惊v
16.breathtaking令人惊叹的
17.Never had they imagined...使用倒装
18.feature特点是...v
19.captivating迷人 有魅力的
20.A mixture of shock and admiration still surging in his heart 使用独立主格结构
21.he squeezed a smile, thumbed up and murmured动作链描写
22.mixture混合n
23.shock 震惊n v
24.admiration钦佩n
25.surge涌动涌起v
26.squeeze挤出v
27.murmur轻声说v
28.convince使确信v
29.in some sense在某种程度上 在某个角度上
30.It is because of you that...使用强调句
31.encounter遇到v
32.enlighten启发v
33.reminder提醒n
34.inclusive包容开放的 无歧视的
参考范文：
段落一
Anjali从浴室出来，受到墙上鼓舞人心的海报的启发，她决定不再逃避问题，而是直面挑战和Deepak的偏见。她勇敢地返回排练室，向Deepak表明她的立场，重新投入到对音乐的热爱中去。
Stepping out of the bathroom, Anjali saw some inspiring posters on the wall. "Face the music, create your rhythm," one read. It struck a chord. Yes, tabla was not just a rhythm, it was her voice. She couldn't just give up because of Deepak's words or anyone's perception. Anjali knew she had to confront the situation, not run from it. With renewed determination, she walked back into the practice room. She didn't avoid Deepak but instead approached him, "I heard what you said. But I won't let it stop me. I'm here to play because I love music, not to prove anything to anyone." She saw a flicker of surprise in his eyes before she went back to her tabla, her hands confidently tapping out the familiar beats.
第一段使用的从句和写作手法：
1. **简单句**：用来描述行动和直接的观察，如 "It struck a chord."
2. **复合句**：使用并列连词“but”连接两个独立子句，如 "I heard what you said. But I won't let it stop me."
3. **情感描述**：通过形容词和副词来描述Anjali的内心状态和行动的动机，如 "with renewed determination" 和 "her hands confidently tapping out."
4. **直接引语**：用来描绘对话和角色间的互动，增强故事的真实感，如 "I'm here to play because I love music, not to prove anything to anyone."
段落二
演奏会结束后，Deepak向Anjali表示了尊重，尽管不是直接道歉，但已是一个和解的开始。Anjali提议他们在音乐中合作而不是竞争，表明了她愿意超越之前的紧张关系，推动两人关系的进一步发展。
After the recital, Deepak walked up to Anjali. There was an awkward silence before he muttered, "You were good out there." It wasn't an apology, but Anjali took it as an olive branch. "Music speaks louder than words," she replied, offering a small smile. "Maybe next time, you could join me in a duet instead of a duel." Deepak looked at her, a mixture of emotions crossing his face, then finally nodded. "Maybe," he said. It was a start, and for Anjali, that was enough. She realized that her performance had not just been about the music; it had been about standing up for herself and what she believed in. And perhaps, she had also shown Deepak that the true spirit of music lies in harmony, not discord.
第二段使用的从句和写作手法：
1. **间接引语**：用于表达角色之间的对话，但不是直接引用，如 "There was an awkward silence before he muttered."
2. **情景描写**：用于创造环境氛围和描绘角色之间的非言语交流，如 "offering a small smile."
3. **假设语气**：用于表达可能发生的情况或建议，如 "Maybe next time, you could join me."
4. **省略句**：省去某些成分（主语、谓语等）来增强句子的节奏和强调效果，如 "Music speaks louder than words."
5. **反身代词的使用**：强调Anjali的自主行动，如 "She realized that her performance had not just been about the music."
6. **比喻**：通过 “olive branch” 和 “duet instead of a duel” 使用比喻，来表达和解与合作的概念。
精彩作文示例
P1: Stepping out of the bathroom,Anjali saw some inspiring posters on the wall.
Players of different ages, colors and genders are playing different instruments without any limitation and bias. On their faces is shining confidence and from the audiences are sight and applause of recognition, which completely touched Anjali and swept away all her confusion and fury. She determined to put aside others’ mean action and ceaseless doubt and just to focus on her own practice to polish her skill and to win the opportunity to play with Mr.Zakir. The following days witnessed her unprecedentedly diligent practice. As she anticipated, her breathtaking performance at the recital astonished everyone, including Mr.Zakir, who announced her to be the lucky one for the concert. Never had anyone imagined that was done by a girl tabla player featuring captivating smile of confidence, eyes of determination and mature and solid skills.
P2: After the recital, Deepak walked up to Anjali.
A mixture of shock and admiration still surging in his heart, he squeezed a smile, thumbed up and murmured, “it’s all my fault. I apologize for everything. You are really amazing today. You convinced me that tabla is not just a boy’s instrument.” “It’s ok. In some sense, I should thank you. It is because of you that I encountered the posters and got enlightened about what I should do.” Anjali replied with a calm smile. Since then, no one has taunted Anjali or doubted girl players again. Instead, the tabla team has witnessed a growing number of girls joining the team and showcasing their passion and talent. And Anjali regularly came to the posters and introduced them to new members, which seemed to be a perfect reminder that the world is colorful and inclusive and nothing is impossible.
精彩范文重点词句自测
1.在他们脸上的是闪亮的自信，来自观众的是认可的眼神和鼓掌，这非常触动Anjali，扫除了她心中所有困惑和愤怒。
2.接下来的日子里，她异常勤奋地练习。
3.如她所愿，她惊人的表现让大家震惊，包括老师，老师就宣布她为参加音乐会的幸运儿。
4.大家从来没有想到过 一个女生player（拥有自信的笑容 坚定的眼神 成熟扎实的技巧）竟然完成了这样的事。
5.内心依然震惊和钦佩，他挤出一丝笑容，竖起大拇指，轻声说道：“你让我相信了....”
6.从某种意义上说，我应该感谢你，因为你 我遇见了那些海报，知道了该做什么。
7.越来越多的女生加入这个团队。
8.她经常来到海报前 将其介绍给新成员，这似乎在很好地提醒大家，世界是多彩的 是开放包容的，一切皆有可能。