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Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came
Section B 3a-self check
人教新目标版 八年级下册
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CONTENTS
目录
01
Review
03
While-writing
05
Summary
07
Exercises
02
Pre-writing
04
Post-writing
06
Self check
08
Homework
复习本单元的重点词组，谈论并讲述一件你记忆深刻的事情, 能恰当运用过去进行时结构进行提问和叙述，提升语言表达能力。
Language competence
通过3a,把学过的语言用回答问题的形式进行梳理，再按照3b的写作框架提示，完整地描写难忘且重要的事，使学生逐步掌握写作技巧，学会写“身边的感人故事的经过与感受”类作文，提高写作能力。
Learning ability
通过分析写作范例的内容并总结出结构，提升自己的分析和总结的思维能力，并在文章中加入自己的想法，提升自己的创新能力。
Thinking quality
通过写过去的故事激励自己关心生活，能辩证地积极地看待它们，形成正确的价值观。。
Cultural awareness
Learning objectives
Part. 01
Review
Can you still remember this picture.
Let's make some notes and talk about it later.
Let’s review.
On April 4, 1968
Dr. Martin Luther King was killed.
Robert was eating dinner wiht his family when he heard the news
His parents were completely shocked and and finished the dinner in silence
Let’s review.
On September 11, 2001
The World Trade Center was taken down.
Kate was working in her office when she heard the news.
She was so scared that she could hardly think clearly after that.
Can you still remember this picture.
Let's make some notes and talk about it later.
Events happen every day.
What were you doing when you heard the news
Let’s talk.
on January 23, 2020, Wuhan was locked down because of COVID-19
I was__________________________ when I heard the news on TV.
People were scared and nervous but also brave and united. Chinese people had an unforgettable Lunar New Year.
preparing for the Spring Festival
What were you doing when you heard the news
Let’s talk.
on May 22, 2021, Yuan Longping passed away in Changsha.
I felt really sad to hear this news. My parents were completely shocked.
I was_____________________ when I saw the news on the Internet.
having an English class
What were you doing when you heard the news
Let’s talk.
on August 24, 2023, Japan started releasing nuclear-contaminated water (核废水)into the Pacific Ocean.
I was______________________when I heard the news from on TV.
I felt really angry to hear this news. My parents were worried and upset.
cleaning the living room
Part. 02
Pre-writing
3a
Make notes about an event you remember well.
What was the event
When did it happen
Where did it happen
What were you doing
What were your friends doing
Why was it important
Why do you remember this event
Listen and make notes about the event.
What was the event
When did it happen
Where did it happen
What were you doing
What were your friends doing
Why was it important
Why do you remember this event
Wenchuan earthquake
5,12th,2008
Wenchuan, Sichuan
looking after my baby
having classes in the classroom
many people died,the people needed help.
my baby was born in May,2008
Read this listening script.
An important event that I remember well was the Wenchuan Earthquake. it happened on May 12th, 2008 in Wenchuan, Sichuan Province. When I heard the news of this event, I was looking after my baby. My friends were teaching in the classroom. This event is very important to me. Because many people died in the earthquake. The people needed help. I remember this event well. Because my baby was born in may, 2008.
3a
Make notes about an event you remember well.
What was the event
When did it happen
Where did it happen
What were you doing
What were your friends doing
Why was it important
Why do you remember this event
Facts
Activities
Reasons
Para. 1
Para. 2
Para. 3
an event
整体采用一般过去时和过去进行时态，以第一人称为主。
Facts
Activities
Reasons
开门见山陈述这件最令你难忘的事件(What, Where, When)
An important event that I remember well was________________________. It happened in/on ______________ at/in ________________.
描述当事件发生时你和你的一些朋友正在做什么和感受。(Where, When, What, feelings)
When I heard the news of this event/When this event happened, I was______________________. My friends were_______________________.
写出这件事为什么重要的原因。(Why)
This event is very important to me because _______________________________. I remember this event well because ______________________.
the Wenchuan earthquake
May 12th, 2008
Wenchuan, Sichuan
looking after my baby
teaching in the classroom
many people died in the earthquake
my baby was born in may, 2008
How to describe an event
Para. 1
Para. 2
Para. 3
An important event that I remember well was the Wenchuan earthquake. It happened in/on May 12th, 2008 at/in Wenchuan, Sichuan.
When I heard the news of this event, I was looking after my baby. My friends were teaching in the classroom. This event is very important to me. Because many people died in the earthquake. The people needed help.
I remember this event well. Because many people died in the earthquake. In addition, because my baby was born in may, 2008.
A possible version
Part. 03
While-writing
本单元的话题是“难忘的事件(Unforgettable events)”，要求同学们学会描述自己或他人过去经历或发生的一件难忘的事。写作时，首先要点明事情发生的时间、地点、人物等；其次详写事情的发展过程；最后阐明令人难忘的原因或自己的感受及看法。写此类作文时，主要以一般过去时和过去进行时为主，写作时要注意正确使用时态。
Let’s write.
每个人都经历过令自己难忘的事情。那么，最令你难忘的事情是什么呢 请根据下面的表格提示，展开合理想象，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。
What was the event ...when I knew I won first prize in the speech contest
When did it happen 10:00 a.m., June 7th
What were you doing doing homework
What were your parents doing cleaning up the house
Why was it important my first time to win a prize
审题干：正确审题，确定写作基本模式。
定人称
定时态
定体裁
记叙文
一般现在时/过去进行时
第一、三人称
思路点拨
What was the event
When did it happen
Where did it happen
What were you doing
What were your parents doing
Why was it important
Why do you remember this event
an event
Facts
Activities
Reasons
Para. 1
Para. 2
Para. 3
实用句型
Facts
Para. 1
An important event that I remember well was…
It happened on…in ...
The important thing that I will never forget is that…
I will never forget that day when I…
实用句型
Activities
Para. 2
When I heard the news of this event/When this event happened, I was... My parents were...
When…, I was…
While I was doing…, … was/were doing…
My parents were… when…
实用句型
Reasons
Para. 3
It was an unforgettable day.
I will never forget… because…
The event has meaning to me because…
This event was very important to me because...
I remember this event well because...
It was so … that …
Part. 04
Post-writing
A possible version
I will never forget the day when I knew I won first prize in the speech contest. It happened at 10:00 a.m. on June 7th.
I was doing homework in my room when the phone rang suddenly. My parents were busy cleaning up the house at that time. The phone was from my head teacher. She told me I won first prize in the contest. I was so excited that I couldn't say a word.
The prize was very important to me because it was my first time to win a prize.
Show time
Talk about your passages according to the following assessments.
Let’s check.
Evaluation Sheet评价表 Structure （结构）2分 Do you have a clear structure(Facts,Activities and Reasons)
Content （内容）5分 Do you write all the details stated (用“ ”划出)
Are there any good expressions (用“ ”划出)
Do you use the past continuous tense (用“ ”划出)
Language （语言）6分 Are there any grammatical or spelling mistakes (用“ ”划出)
Are there any good phrases or sentences (用“ ”划出)
Handwriting 2分 Is the handwriting good
Part. 05
Summary
Summary
What was the event
When did it happen
Where did it happen
What were you doing
What were your parents doing
Why was it important
Why do you remember this event
an event
Facts
Activities
Reasons
Para. 1
Para. 2
Para. 3
Part. 06
Self check
1. Fill in the blanks with when or while.
Self Check
______ I was walking home from school, I saw a strange light in the sky. But ______ I pointed it out to my friend, it went away.
when
While
3. ______ my brother was laughing, the television news reported that other people had seen the light as well.
While
2. ______ I told my older brother about the strange light in the sky, he just laughed and didn’t believe me.
When
Language points
1. But when I pointed it out to my friend, it went away. (教材P40 1)
point out 意为“指出”，是“动词+副词”型短语，人称代词作宾语时应放在动词与副词之间。
eg：There is a mistake in this sentence. Can you point it out
这个句子中有一处错误，你能把它指出来吗？
The teacher pointed out many mistakes in my homework.
老师指出了我作业中的许多错误。
【拓展】point to意为“指向”，所指的物体较远，point at意为“指着”，所指的物体较近。
Language points
2. the television news reported that other people had seen the light as well. (教材P40 1)
eg：I am going to London and my sister is going as well（＝going, too）.
我要到伦敦去, 我妹妹也要去。
I not only play the guitar, I sing as well（＝I also sing）.
我不但弹吉他, 而且还演唱。
as well常用作状语, 意为“又；也”，相当于too或also，常位于句末，无须用逗号与句子分开。
【拓展】as well 在口语中也可用于句中，意为“也好，也行”或“倒不如”，用来缓和语气。
eg：You may as well go. 你去也好。
Language points
as well as常用来连接两个并列的成分,意为“也，还”,它强调的是前一项，后一项只是顺便提及。因此连接并列主语时,谓语动词与前一项一致；而用not only ...but also...连接时,谓语动词与后一项一致。
eg：Your wife as well as you is friendly to me.
不仅你而且你的妻子也对我很友好。
＝Not only you but also your wife is friendly to me.
Electric energy can be changed into light energy as well as into sound energy.
电能既可以被转变成声能, 又可以被转变成光能。
as well as 用来表示同级比较, 指“一样好”。
eg：You look as well as you did ten years ago.
你的身体看起来还和十年前一样好。
He plays the guitar as well as you. 他的吉他弹得和你一样好。
Self Check
2. Fill in the blanks with the correct forms of the words in brackets.
When I ____ (be) in the sixth grade, I ______ (join) a piano competition. I _________ (practice) for four hours every day and my piano teacher _____ (come) three times a week to _____ (help) me. Then the big day finally _______ (arrive). I ____ (be) so nervous when they ______ (call) my name. I _____ (go) up and ______ (start) to play.
was
joined
practiced
came
help
arrived
was
called
went
started
Self Check
2. Fill in the blanks with the correct forms of the words in brackets.
While I ___________ (play), everyone _____ (sit) still and listened. I played the song without any mistakes. Then I ______ (wait) for them to call out the winner. When I ______(hear) my name, my heart __________ (beat) so quickly I thought I would stop breathing. I couldn’t believe it. I ______ (win)! It _____ (be) the happiest day of my life!
was playing
sat
waited
heard
was beating
won
was
Part. 07
Exercise
一、用括号中所给词的适当形式填空。
Take a deep breath and calm down, and you will fall ______ (sleep).
Can you tell me the ______(true) of the accident
Look! It's raining _______ (heavy). You'd better take an umbrella with you.
We were __________ (complete) surprised when we heard the news.
They argued with each other. In the end, they said nothing and went home in _______ (silent).
asleep
heavily
truth
completely
silence
1.I bought a magazine ____ I was waiting for the train.
A. as soon as B. after C. until D. while
2.Diana is so careful that she always look over her exercises to_____ there are no mistakes.
A. find out B. make sure C. come up with D. look for
3.—Mary won first prize in the competition.
—_____ She said she made several terrible mistakes.
A. I think so. B.You're welcome.
C. You must be kidding. D. It doesn't matter.
二、单项选择
三、完成句子。
1.午夜时分，风渐渐变弱了。
The wind was ______ _____ at the midnight.
2.这座房子太旧了。我们决定把它拆除。
The house is too old. We decide to _____ ____ ______.
3.你能指出这家旅馆在地图上的位置吗？
Can you _____ _____ the hotel on this map
4.起初，我并不赞同他的观点。
____ ______, I didn't agree with him.
5.听了老师的话后，他们无声地离开了办公室。
After listening to the teacher， they left the office in silence
take it down
in
silence
dying down
point out
At first
Part. 08
Homework
书面表达
2022年2月6日，中国女足在印度夺得亚洲杯冠军。得知这个消息，你和爸爸妈妈都很开心。请根据以下表格写一篇英语短文，可适当补充细节。内容包括：
1.事件及发生的时间、地点；
2.当时你和家人正在做什么：
你：做家庭作业
爸爸：打扫房间
妈妈：看书
3.你记住这件事的原因。
One possible version.
An important event that I remember well was that the Chinese women’s football team won the Asian Cup. It happened on on February 6, 2022 in India.
When I heard the news of this event, I was doing my homework in my bedroom. My dad was cleaning the room. My mum was reading books in the living room. We were really excited.
I remember this event well because the Chinese women’s football team is a great team. Their victory makes me believe that we can make our dream come true if we work hard.
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