2024届高三英语二轮复习读后续写之情绪描写课件(共39张PPT)

(共39张PPT)
读后续写
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150字（各75+）
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（避免单词句型单一）
（逻辑衔接词）
（化险为夷）
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档次 描述
第五档 （21-25分）
所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理；
内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标有下滑线的关键词语；
所使用语法结构和词汇准确、丰富，可能有些错误，但不影响意义表达；
有效使用了语句间的连接成分，使短文结构紧凑；
第四档 （16-20分）
所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接较为合理；
内容比较丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标有下滑线的关键词语；
所使用语法结构和词汇较为准确、丰富，可能有些错误，但不影响意义表达；
比较有效使用了语句间的连接成分，使短文结构紧凑；
第三档 （11-15分）
所给短文关系较为密切，与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接；
写出了若干有关内容，应用了四个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
应用语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求，虽有一些错误，但不影响意义表达；
应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯；
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划线词
语法、词汇丰富
逻辑关系词
环境描写
人物描写
自然环境
社会环境
外貌
语言
神态
动作
心理
动作、情绪
情绪类高频词汇/短语
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情绪 名词 情绪 名词
高兴 后悔
激动、兴奋 焦虑不安
惊讶、震惊 厌烦
失望 孤独
伤心 痛苦
惊慌失措 沮丧
害怕、恐惧 困惑
绝望 恶心
担心、担忧 生气
内疚 宽慰
delight、joy
excitement
surprise
disappointment
sadness、sorrow
panic
scare
despair
worry
guilt
regret
anxiety
boredom
loneliness
suffering
depression
confusion
disgust
anger
relief
一
词汇积累-快乐
开心(情绪)
高兴的
delighted/cheerful/joyful
内心充满快乐
be wild with joy
be overwhelmed with delight
既兴奋又开心
A mixture of excitement and happiness
狂喜
令某人开心的是
to one’s delight
一阵喜悦涌上心头
a sense of happiness well up inside one’s heart
wear a shining smile on one’s face
开心地哼着小曲
hum a tune merrily
开心[动作]
面带微笑
开怀大笑
smile broadly
喜极而泣
tears of joy roll down /shed tears of joy
面带微笑2.0
a wide smile spreads across one’s face
咯咯笑
giggle
大笑不止
Laugh one’s head off
高兴地跳起来
dance for joy
小试牛刀
1、他喜极而泣，既兴奋又开心。
He shed tears of joy, with a mixture of excitement and happiness.
2、他面带微笑，内心迸发出喜悦。
He wore a shining smile, a sense of joy welling up inside him.
He wore a shining smile with a sense of joy welling up inside him.
3、他狂喜，大笑不止。
He was wild with joy, laughing his head off.
4. 他走在街上，开心地哼着小曲, 既兴奋又开心。
He walked in the street, humming a tune merrily with a mixture of excitement and happiness.
5. 一想/看到这个，她的脸上就露出了灿烂的微笑，既兴奋又开心。
At thought /sight of this，a wide smile spread across her face with a mixture of excitement and happiness.
The instant/The moment/As soon as she thought of /saw this，a wild smile spread across her face with a mixture of excitement and happiness.
二
词汇积累-悲伤
悲忧消沉(情绪)
2. 强烈的失落感
a strong sense of loss well up inside one’s heart
1. 难过的、沮丧的
depressed、discouraged、frustrated
3. 陷入绝望
fall into despair
4. 情绪低落
be down in spirits
5. 沉浸在悲伤中
be immersed in sorrow
6. 心情低沉
with a sinking heart
悲忧消沉(动作)
泪水流过脸颊
tears roll down one’s cheeks
流下悲伤的泪水
shed tears of sorrow
大哭起来
burst into tears/burst out crying
抽泣
choke with sobs
悲痛欲绝
cry one’s heart out
泪流不止
tears break free
小试牛刀
1、他流下悲伤的泪水，一股失落感涌上心头
He shed tears of sorrow with a sense of loss welling up inside his heart.
2、他沉浸在悲伤中，泪水流过他的脸颊
He was immersed in sorrow，tears rolling down his cheeks.
3、他泪流不止，心情低沉
His tears broke free with a sinking heart.
4、听到这个消息，他流下悲伤的眼泪，一股失落感涌上心头
Hearing this news，he shed tears of sorrow with a sense of loss welling up in his heart.
The instant/The moment/As soon as he heard this news, tears of sorrow rolled down his cheeks.
5、被朋友背叛了，他流下悲伤的眼泪，一股失落感涌上心头
Betrayed by his friend，he shed tears of sorrow with a sense of loss welling up in his heart.
三
词汇积累-愤怒
愤怒(情绪)
感到愤怒
feel furious/irritated
怒气冲天
anger boils over sb
充满愤怒
be seized by anger
愤怒(动作)
气得直跺脚
stamp one’s feet in anger
怒视某人
glare at sb
攥紧拳头
clench one’s fists
脸气的通红
flush with anger
皱眉
frown/pucker up one’s brows
怒气涌上心头
a sense of anger welling up inside one’s heart
小试牛刀
1、约翰怒视那个男人，怒气冲天
John glared at that man, anger boiling over him.
John glared at that man with anger boiling over him.
2、约翰攥紧拳头，充满愤怒
Seized by anger, John clenched his fists.
John clenched his fists, seized by anger.
3、一看到他的前女友，他脸就气的通红,感到很生气
At sight of his ex-girlfriend，he flushed with anger, feeling irritated.
1.【2021年新高考真题英语试卷】
A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
　　The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
　　Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
原文呈现
一对双胞胎兴高采烈地要给妈妈在母亲节当天准备早餐
母亲节当天计划有条不紊进行，但第一块面包烤糊了，姐妹俩调小火候，继续做饭
煮粥时候粥漫了出来，扑灭了火，灶台上一塌糊涂，jeff在清理时不小心烫伤了手，另一块面包也烤糊了
续写：分析段首，确定方向
1. 段落分析
①Paragraph 1：As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
②Paragraph 2：The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
父亲帮助两个孩子一起完成了早餐
描写母亲看到早餐后的一系列反应
生气/惊讶
1、看到这个场景，父亲似乎有点生气。
At sight of this，the father seemed to be a little angry.
At sight of this，the father puckered up his brows, with a sense of anger welling up inside his heart .
at sight/thought of 一看见，一想到
When he saw the scene
The instant/moment/As soon as he saw the scene…
一… 就…
2、但是知道他们的计划之后，父亲跪下来，拍拍孩子的肩膀，安慰道：“没关系，还有足够的时间”。
After knowing their plan，the father knelt down，patting their shoulder and said，‘Never mind. Time is enough.’
After knowing their plan，the father knelt down，patting their shoulder .‘Never mind.’ He said.‘Time is enough.’
Having known their plan，the father knelt down，patting their shoulder .‘Never mind.’ He said.‘There is still plenty of time.’
3、没有丝毫犹豫，父亲立刻主动提供帮助
Without any hesitation, The father offered to help them instantly.
without delay、immediately、at once、in no time
Without slightest hesitation, The father offered to help them instantly.
4、不久，早餐就好了. 父子三人都非常开心。
Soon, the breakfast was ready. They are all very happy.
It wasn’t long before…/ shortly afterwards, 不久
It wasn’t lone before the breakfast was ready. They are all very happy.
It wasn’t lone before the breakfast was ready. Wide smiles spread across their faces with a mixture of excitement and happiness.
续写：分析段首，确定方向
1. 段落分析
①Paragraph 1：As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
②Paragraph 2：The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
父亲帮助两个孩子一起完成了早餐
描写母亲看到早餐后的一系列反应
1、他们大声说：“母亲节快乐，这是给你的惊喜”。
‘Happy Mother’s Day! ’They loudly said. ‘A big surprise for you.’
They shouted.
2、妈妈一看到这个场景，就喜极而泣，内心充满着感动和喜悦。
The instant their mother saw this scene，tears of happiness rolled down her cheeks，his mother being overwhelmed with movement and delight.
The instant their mother saw this scene，tears of happiness rolled down her cheeks，his mother seized by movement and delight.
3、但是之后妈妈注意到Jeff受伤的手时，十分心疼。
But then the mother’s heart ached for them when she noticed Jeff’s injured hand.
one’s heart ached for sb 心疼某人
But then the mother’s throat tightened when she noticed Jeff’s injured hand.
one’s throat tightened 某人哽咽了
4、妈妈拥抱了这两个孩子，并表示感谢。
She hugged the twins and show her thanks.
5、最后，妈妈尝了早餐并表扬道这是她吃过的最好吃的早餐.
At last，the mother tasted the breakfast and praised that this was the best breakfast she had ever had.
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. At sight of this，the father puckered up his brows, with a sense of anger welling up inside his heart . Having knowing their plan，the father knelt down，patting their shoulder .‘Never mind.’ He said.‘There is still plenty of time.’ Without slightest hesitation, The father offered to help them instantly. It wasn’t lone before the breakfast was ready. Wild smiles spread across their faces with a mixture of excitement and happiness.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. ‘Happy Mother’s Day! ’They loudly said. ‘A big surprise for you.’ The instant their mother saw this scene， being overwhelmed with movement and delight , tears of happiness flowed down her cheeks. But then the mother’s throat tightened when she noticed Jeff’s injured hand. She hugged the twins and show her thanks. At last，the mother tasted the breakfast and praised that this was the best breakfast she had ever had.
害怕(情绪)
1. 感到害怕的
frightened/scared/terrified
2、害怕地
In panic/terror
3、一阵惧意涌上心头
a surge of fear welling up inside one’s heart
害怕(动作)
1、全身颤抖
tremble from head to toe
2、大脑一片空白
one’s mind goes blank
3、因害怕而哽咽
one’s throat tightens with fear/sb choke with fear
4、脸色发白
one’s face turns pale
惊讶(情绪)
1. 感到惊讶的
astonished/surprised/amazed
2. 惊呆了的
be numb with shock
3. 惊讶地
in astonishment
惊讶(动作)
1. 张大嘴巴
with one’s mouth wide open
2. 扬起眉毛
raise the eyebrows
3. 吃惊地眨眼睛
blink in surprise
4. 目瞪口呆
sb’s jaw dropped/fell
5. 喉咙发紧
one’s throat tightens
紧张焦虑、担心(情绪)
1. 感到紧张的/焦虑的/担心的
nervous/tense/anxious/worried
2. 脸上写满紧张、焦虑、担心
紧张焦虑、担心(情绪)
1. 踱来踱去
pace up and down
2. 坐立不安
get ants in one’s pants
3. 心跳很快
one’s heart beats wildly
4. 手心出汗
one’s palms get sweaty
5. 喉咙发紧
one’s throat tightens with tension/anxiety
with tension/worry written all over our faces
6. 如坐针毡
be on pins and needles
感动(情绪)
1. 一阵暖流涌上心头
a warm current rises in one’s heart
2. 深受感动
be touched/moved profoundly
感动(动作)
1. 热泪盈眶
tears well up in one’s eyes
one’s eyes be brimming(盈满的) with eyes
2. 融化了某人的心
melt one’s heart
困惑(情绪)
1. 感到困惑的
puzzled/confused
2. 迷茫的/不知所措的
at a loss
困惑(动作)
1. 眉头紧锁
pucker up one’s brows/with a frown on one’s face
2. 挠头
scratch one’s head
3. 头脑空白
one’s mind goes blank
尴尬(情绪)
1. 感到尴尬的
embarrassed/awkward
尴尬(动作)
1. 窘红了脸
flush with embarrassment
2. 低下头
lower one’s head
3. 挠挠头
scratch one’s head
4. 咬着嘴唇
bite one’s lip
2. 脸红
feel the blood rush to her face
3. 想找个洞钻进去
hope to find a hole to hide herself
4. 一阵尴尬涌上心头
a sense of embarrassment welling up inside one’s heart.