Unit5 Why do you like pandas
一 (基础篇)
写作话题
本单元以动物为话题,描述自己喜欢的动物及原因。
写作要求
根据下面表格的内容,以A Trip to the Zoo写一篇60词左右的短文介绍一下动物园新来的两只动物。
优秀满分范文
A Trip to the Zoo
Welcome to the zoo. There are two new animals. The panda’s name is Feifei. She is from China. She likes eating bamboo. She is lovely and shy. She is only two years old. The other animal is a lion. His name is Karl. He is from Africa. He likes eating meat. He is very dangerous and strong. He is three years old. We all like them.
一.审核作文题材 说明文 描写食物的外观,名字,喜好,年龄 二.确定时态 一般现在时 三.正文 (body段落):只需要简单的用图表所给单词组成一个句子。
二.(提高篇)
你昨天你参加了学校组织的动物园1日游,你参观了很多动物,请给你的外国朋友写一封信,告诉他你昨天一天的经历!比如,你参观了哪些动物,他们的外貌颜色特征等等,你喜欢哪些动物,你对动物了解多少等等……
Dear Lisa,
How's everything I went on a school trip yesterday, I really had a great time visiting Beijing Zoo in Xiangyang. It was really fun.
In the morning, we took the bus to the zoo. It took us 3 hours to get to the zoo. it was never boring when we were on the bus. Because we could play cards and many interesting games with each other. when we got there, it was 12 o'clock. So we ate at the restaurant in the zoo. The food was delicious, we had a really good lunch. In the afternoon, we saw a lot of animals, like lions, giraffes, and pandas. My favorite animal is pandas. Because the panda is one of China's symbols. Besides, pandas are white and black, they are really cute. We also went to the gift shop. The things in the gift shop were really cheap. That's why I bought many lovely model animals for my little sister. She would like the gifts.
All in all, it was an exciting day. l really enjoyed the trip. And I am interested in all the animals.
题材 记叙文 时态 主题时态 一般过去时 +少部分一般现在时(描写动物的外观和特点) 全文构思 三个段落 1.首段问候寒暄,直接带入主题(我什么时候在哪个地方做了某事,感受)。 2.第二段--正文 记叙文常见可以用连接词和时间线讲述做了那些具体的事情。 3.末段 首尾呼应 突出我的感受,以及我对动物的着迷。
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Xiamen Zoo
I visit Xiamen zoo with my family today. I have a good time there. I learn more about animals. Let me tell you in detail.
There are many different kinds of animals in Xiamen zoo . Such as elephants are from Africa. They are exciting and friendly. They like water best, so they have a swimming pool. Pandas are from China, and they are very friendly, cute and shy. Lots of children like them very much. Tigers are exciting but scary. So most of the children are afraid of them. Monkeys are interesting and smart. Most children like them best. I like pandas best because they are cute and friendly. And because the panda is one of the symbols of China.
What a nice day I spend!
课后练习
Keys: I go to the zoo with my parents today. First we see elephants. I like elephants best, because I think they are smart and friendly. They eat grass and leaves. After that, we go to see many other animals. I have a happy day in the zoo.
每个人都会有自己喜欢的动物,请用约80字描述一下你喜欢的动物。
The Animal I Like
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Keys;
The Animal I Like
There are many kinds of animals in the world. What animal do I like Let’s know her.
Many people like her very much. I also like her. She is from China. She is very cute. She doesn’t eat grass and meat at all. She eats bamboo every day. She is so nice. She is black white. She has two big black ears and eyes. And she also has black legs and arms.
What animal is she She is a panda. I like panda very much. Do you like her What animal do you like