-2024届浙江省绍兴市高三下学期二模读后续写（敬畏大自然的不确定性）讲义
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Kevin woke to the blaring beep of his alarm clock. "Can't wait for that camping trip, "Kevin thought, filled with excitement. As he was leaving home, his dad grabbed him by the hand and said, "Before you go, just tell me the directions on where you and your friends are going to stay. "
凯文被闹钟的嘟嘟声吵醒了。“等不及去露营了，”凯文激动地想。当他正要离开家时，他的父亲抓住他的手说：“在你走之前，告诉我你和你的朋友要住哪里的方向。”
"But dad!" Kevin complained.“但是爸爸！”凯文抱怨道。
"No buts!" Kevin's dad added.“没有但是！”凯文的爸爸补充道。
"Fine. "Kevin told him the directions and left.
“很好。”凯文告诉他方向后离开了。
The three friends, Kevin, Jay and Nathan, had been planning this adventure for weeks, packing their stuff-tents, snacks, and a map------preparing for a 3-day outdoor exploration. Excitement ran through Kevin as they departed for their campsite. "This trip is going to be awesome, " Nathan excitedly yelled as they set off. But little did they know that nature had a surprise in store for them.
这三个朋友，凯文，周和内森，已经计划了好几个星期的冒险，收拾好他们的东西——帐篷，零食和地图——准备进行为期三天的户外探险。当他们出发去露营地时，凯文激动不已。他们出发时，内森激动地喊道：“这次旅行太棒了。”但他们不知道大自然会给他们带来惊喜。
The first day at the campsite was going great, setting up tents, collecting firewood, and sharing stories. "Man, we nailed these tents, " Kevin said. "I know it was easy really, "Nathan replied. The friends were happy.
露营地的第一天过得很好，搭起帐篷，拾柴，分享故事。“伙计，我们把这些帐篷钉好了，”凯文说。“我知道这真的很容易，”内森回答。朋友们都很高兴。
Yet towards night, as the dark clouds gathered overhead, the atmosphere shifted, and a sudden storm erupted with unforgiving anger. Rain poured down from the heavens like a relentless waterfall, transforming the peaceful campsite into a muddy battleground. Worse still, a huge tree was uprooted and crashed down with a deafening crack on their only means of escape --- their car. Kevin's eyes widened in horror as he spotted the damaged wreckage beneath the fallen giant. "Our car!" he screamed over the howling wind, his voice a mix of disbelief and despair. "We're stuck here, " he declared, his words barely audible against the backdrop of thunder and raindrops. They realized that their plans had been violently spoiled by forces beyond their control. The once quiet campsite now stood as a deserted battlefield, the fallen tree serving as a painful reminder of the unpredictable nature of the world around them.
然而，临近夜晚，当乌云聚集在头顶时，气氛发生了变化，一场突如其来的风暴爆发了，伴随着无情的愤怒。雨水像无情的瀑布一样从天空倾泻而下，将宁静的露营地变成了泥泞的战场。更糟糕的是，一棵大树被连根拔起，撞倒在他们唯一的逃生途径——汽车上，发出震耳欲聋的裂缝。凯文惊恐地睁大了眼睛，看到了倒下的巨人身下损毁的残骸。“我们的车！”他在呼啸的风中尖叫，声音中夹杂着难以置信和绝望。“我们被困在这里了，”他宣称，在雷声和雨点的背景下，他的话几乎听不见。他们意识到他们的计划被他们无法控制的力量严重破坏了。曾经安静的露营地现在变成了一个废弃的战场，倒下的树痛苦地提醒人们周围世界的不可预测性。
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: The next day, they found themselves facing the immediate problem of finding water.
Paragraph 2: On the third night, a distant engine sound broke the terrible stillness.
文本分析：
故事大意---凯文要去野外露营，走之前爸爸坚持要他告诉自己去向。露营第一天，凯文和小伙伴们进展顺利。但是随后，一场暴风雨随后爆发了。他们的车被冲走了，于是陷入了困境中。
续写情节发展：
第一段：----寻找水源耗尽了他们的精力----当他们正要放弃时，他们听到了一个轻微的声音-----带来一线希望----顺着声音，找到了一条小溪----这是所有挑战的生命线----更多的挑战出现了----他们的神经几乎崩溃了。
第二段：猜测是爸爸！----看到一辆汽车，有一丝宽慰---凯文的父亲走出来迎接这群人---他们脸上流露出难以置信、感激和喜悦的情绪----这段经历变成了勇气和韧性的故事
读后续写：（官方范文）
The next day, they found themselves facing the immediate problem of finding water. The boys pushed through the bushes, and the search for water soon drained their energy. They were about to give up when they heard a smaLl sound, a splash of some sort. “Wait, did you hear that " Jay's voice sounded hopeful as they followed the faint sound of water. “Me too! Let's keep going,” Kevin encouraged, sounding determined. They ran as fast as they could and found a small stream——a lifeline in all the challenges. However, with time passing by, more challenges emerged limited food, frightful night filled with wilderness sounds, and the uncertainty of survival in the wild.Their nerves were near the edge of breaking down after long hours of uncertainty in the wilderness.
On the third night, a distant engine sound broke the terrible stillness.“It must be my dad!” Kevin yelled.Relief washed over the weary faces as they witnessed the approach of a rugged vehicle, with headlights cutting through the darkness-a beacon of hope amidst the peril. Kevin's dad stepped out to meet the group. The emotions that played across their faces-disbelief, gratitude, and overwhelming joy-mirrored the shared trouble that had forged a deep bond among them. The journey back was filled with survival stories and lessons learned, deepening their understanding of the wilderness. Back home, Kevin's dad said, “Good thing you told me those directions,teaching them the importance of informing someone about plans. The experience turned into tales of courage and resilience,embedded in their memories as lessons for a lifetime.
下水文：
The next day, they found themselves facing the immediate problem of finding water. Day two's mission was to find water. After navigating bushes, The search for water on day two drained their energy. "I'm so thirsty," Jay panted. They were about to give up when they heard a small sound, a splash of some sort. "Wait, did you hear that " Jay's voice sounded hopeful as they followed the faint sound of water "Me too, let's keep going," Kai encouraged, sounding determined. As they ran as fast as they could they found a small stream—a lifeline in all the challenges.As days passed, challenges emerged—limited food, eerie nights filled with wilderness sounds, and the uncertainty of survival in the wild.
On the seventh day, a distant engine sound broke the stillness—a beacon of hope in the form of Kai's dad, arriving to rescue them. Relief washed over the weary faces as they witnessed the approach of a rugged vehicle, headlights cutting through the darkness. Kai's dad, determination etched on his face, stepped out to meet the group, scanning each face with concern.The once-distant hum of the engine became a lifeline, a symbol of deliverance(拯救) that had eluded（达不到） them for days. The emotions that played across their faces—disbelief, gratitude, and overwhelming joy—mirrored the shared ordeal that had forged a deep bond among them. The camp, once a distant dream, now beckoned as a place of safety and security.
Kevin woke to the blaring beep of his alarm clock. "Can't wait for that camping trip, "Kevin thought, filled with excitement. As he was leaving home, his dad grabbed him by the hand and said, "Before you go, just tell me the directions on where you and your friends are going to stay. "
凯文被闹钟的嘟嘟声吵醒了。“等不及去露营了，”凯文激动地想。当他正要离开家时，他的父亲抓住他的手说：“在你走之前，告诉我你和你的朋友要住哪里的方向。”
"But dad!" Kevin complained.“但是爸爸！”凯文抱怨道。
"No buts!" Kevin's dad added.“没有但是！”凯文的爸爸补充道。
"Fine. "Kevin told him the directions and left.
“很好。”凯文告诉他方向后离开了。
The three friends, Kevin, Jay and Nathan, had been planning this adventure for weeks, packing their stuff-tents, snacks, and a map------preparing for a 3-day outdoor exploration. Excitement ran through Kevin as they departed for their campsite. "This trip is going to be awesome, " Nathan excitedly yelled as they set off. But little did they know that nature had a surprise in store for them.
这三个朋友，凯文，周和内森，已经计划了好几个星期的冒险，收拾好他们的东西——帐篷，零食和地图——准备进行为期三天的户外探险。当他们出发去露营地时，凯文激动不已。他们出发时，内森激动地喊道：“这次旅行太棒了。”但他们不知道大自然会给他们带来惊喜。
The first day at the campsite was going great, setting up tents, collecting firewood, and sharing stories. "Man, we nailed these tents, " Kevin said. "I know it was easy really, "Nathan replied. The friends were happy.
露营地的第一天过得很好，搭起帐篷，拾柴，分享故事。“伙计，我们把这些帐篷钉好了，”凯文说。“我知道这真的很容易，”内森回答。朋友们都很高兴。
Yet towards night, as the dark clouds gathered overhead, the atmosphere shifted, and a sudden storm erupted with unforgiving anger. Rain poured down from the heavens like a relentless waterfall, transforming the peaceful campsite into a muddy battleground. Worse still, a huge tree was uprooted and crashed down with a deafening crack on their only means of escape --- their car. Kevin's eyes widened in horror as he spotted the damaged wreckage beneath the fallen giant. "Our car!" he screamed over the howling wind, his voice a mix of disbelief and despair. "We're stuck here, " he declared, his words barely audible against the backdrop of thunder and raindrops. They realized that their plans had been violently spoiled by forces beyond their control. The once quiet campsite now stood as a deserted battlefield, the fallen tree serving as a painful reminder of the unpredictable nature of the world around them.
然而，临近夜晚，当乌云聚集在头顶时，气氛发生了变化，一场突如其来的风暴爆发了，伴随着无情的愤怒。雨水像无情的瀑布一样从天空倾泻而下，将宁静的露营地变成了泥泞的战场。更糟糕的是，一棵大树被连根拔起，撞倒在他们唯一的逃生途径——汽车上，发出震耳欲聋的裂缝。凯文惊恐地睁大了眼睛，看到了倒下的巨人身下损毁的残骸。“我们的车！”他在呼啸的风中尖叫，声音中夹杂着难以置信和绝望。“我们被困在这里了，”他宣称，在雷声和雨点的背景下，他的话几乎听不见。他们意识到他们的计划被他们无法控制的力量严重破坏了。曾经安静的露营地现在变成了一个废弃的战场，倒下的树痛苦地提醒人们周围世界的不可预测性。
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: The next day, they found themselves facing the immediate problem of finding water.
Paragraph 2: On the third night, a distant engine sound broke the terrible stillness.
文本分析：
故事大意---凯文要去野外露营，走之前爸爸坚持要他告诉自己去向。露营第一天，凯文和小伙伴们进展顺利。但是随后，一场暴风雨随后爆发了。他们的车被冲走了，于是陷入了困境中。
续写情节发展：
第一段：----寻找水源耗尽了他们的精力----当他们正要放弃时，他们听到了一个轻微的声音-----带来一线希望----顺着声音，找到了一条小溪----这是所有挑战的生命线----更多的挑战出现了----他们的神经几乎崩溃了。
第二段：猜测是爸爸！----看到一辆汽车，有一丝宽慰---凯文的父亲走出来迎接这群人---他们脸上流露出难以置信、感激和喜悦的情绪----这段经历变成了勇气和韧性的故事
读后续写：（官方范文）
The next day, they found themselves facing the immediate problem of finding water. The boys pushed through the bushes, and the search for water soon drained their energy. They were about to give up when they heard a smaLl sound, a splash of some sort. “Wait, did you hear that " Jay's voice sounded hopeful as they followed the faint sound of water. “Me too! Let's keep going,” Kevin encouraged, sounding determined. They ran as fast as they could and found a small stream——a lifeline in all the challenges. However, with time passing by, more challenges emerged limited food, frightful night filled with wilderness sounds, and the uncertainty of survival in the wild.Their nerves were near the edge of breaking down after long hours of uncertainty in the wilderness.
On the third night, a distant engine sound broke the terrible stillness.“It must be my dad!” Kevin yelled.Relief washed over the weary faces as they witnessed the approach of a rugged vehicle, with headlights cutting through the darkness-a beacon of hope amidst the peril. Kevin's dad stepped out to meet the group. The emotions that played across their faces-disbelief, gratitude, and overwhelming joy-mirrored the shared trouble that had forged a deep bond among them. The journey back was filled with survival stories and lessons learned, deepening their understanding of the wilderness. Back home, Kevin's dad said, “Good thing you told me those directions,teaching them the importance of informing someone about plans. The experience turned into tales of courage and resilience,embedded in their memories as lessons for a lifetime.
下水文：
The next day, they found themselves facing the immediate problem of finding water. Day two's mission was to find water. After navigating bushes, The search for water on day two drained their energy. "I'm so thirsty," Jay panted. They were about to give up when they heard a small sound, a splash of some sort. "Wait, did you hear that " Jay's voice sounded hopeful as they followed the faint sound of water "Me too, let's keep going," Kai encouraged, sounding determined. As they ran as fast as they could they found a small stream—a lifeline in all the challenges.As days passed, challenges emerged—limited food, eerie nights filled with wilderness sounds, and the uncertainty of survival in the wild.
On the seventh day, a distant engine sound broke the stillness—a beacon of hope in the form of Kai's dad, arriving to rescue them. Relief washed over the weary faces as they witnessed the approach of a rugged vehicle, headlights cutting through the darkness. Kai's dad, determination etched on his face, stepped out to meet the group, scanning each face with concern.The once-distant hum of the engine became a lifeline, a symbol of deliverance(拯救) that had eluded（达不到） them for days. The emotions that played across their faces—disbelief, gratitude, and overwhelming joy—mirrored the shared ordeal that had forged a deep bond among them. The camp, once a distant dream, now beckoned as a place of safety and security.