Unit 4
Section Ⅳ Integrated skills
【学习目标】
1.通过对教材的理解,了解重要词汇的基本用法。(语言能力)
2.通过阅读熟悉诗歌评论的文体特征,并掌握其写作方法及策略。(语言能力,学习能力)
【合作探究】
新知探究
核 心 单 词
知识点1 claim n.声明;宣称;所有权;索赔 vt.宣称;声称;要求;索取vi.提出要求
(P50)Then took the other, as just as fair, And having perhaps the better claim, Because it was grassy and wanted wear....
然后我选择了另一条路,这条路也许更值得我向往,因为它荒草丛生,人迹罕至……
知识拓展
have a claim on 有对……的要求权
make a claim 索赔;对……提出要求
claim for 索取;要求
claim on 索赔
It is claimed that 据说……; 据称……
经典佳句
Don't be taken in by products claiming to help you lose weight in a week.
不要被那些声称能在一周内帮你减肥的产品给骗了。
融会应用
Ⅰ.单句填空
(1)Mothers with young children have a prior claim funds.
(2)A lot of lost property is never (claim).
(3)You can claim your insurance for that coat you left on the train.
Ⅱ.单句写作
(4) humor not only affects patients' mood, but can actually help them recover faster.
据说,幽默不仅能影响病人的情绪,还能帮助他们早日康复。
答案 (1)on (2)claimed (3)on (4)It is claimed that
知识点2 hence adv.因此;由此
(P50)I shall be telling this with a sigh Somewhere ages and ages hence...
也许多年后在某个地方,我将轻声叹息将往事回顾。
知识拓展
...days/weeks/years hence (从现在开始)……天/星期/年之后
therefore/accordingly/consequently/thus/as a result 因此
经典佳句
Hence they have a harder time adjusting in life and in their careers.
因此,他们会有一段更困难的时间调整生活和职业生涯。
融会应用
单句写作
(1)They've produced 14 movies .
在之后的20年里,他们制作了14部电影。
(2)They grew up in Asia, oriental culture.
他们在亚洲长大,因此对东方文化产生了兴趣。
答案 (1)20 years hence (2)hence their interest in
写作探究
诗 歌 评 论
本单元的写作任务是诗歌评论,属于议论文的写作范畴。
诗歌评论(a poetry review)是关于你对某一篇诗歌的理解的文章。诗歌评论中,一般可以描述一些诗歌中出现的意象和象征性的文字,并写出个人对该诗歌的理解。一篇好的诗歌评论,应该注意把握以下几点:
1.简短地介绍诗人和所给的诗歌;
2.分析并评价诗歌中的意象、押韵、修辞手法等;
3.写出你对该诗歌的理解,若能提及一些个人的生活经历和主观感受将会更好。
探究点1 教材范例提炼
课文范例
素材积累
Ⅰ.常用词汇
1.poem n. 诗歌
2.poet n. 诗人
3.rhyme n. 押韵
4.exaggeration n. 夸张
5.metaphor n. 隐喻
6.image n. 意象
7.literary adj. 文学的
8.conflict n. 冲突
9.reflection n. 沉思
10.exploration n. 探索
11.attractive adj. 吸引人的
12.mood n. 心情
13.consist of 由……组成
14.obligation n. 责任;义务
15.attempt to do sth 尝试做某事
16.recognition n. 认可
17.in particular 尤其;特别
18.the first part 第一节
Ⅱ.话题句式
1.From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first assumption.
在我看来,支持第一种猜想更合理。
2.As for me, I am on the latter part of the poem.
至于我,我更喜欢诗歌的后半部分。
3.To make myself as plain as I can, I should give my standards for an excellent poem.
为了让我的观点更加清楚,我应该给出我关于一首优秀诗歌的标准。
4.For the same reason, it matters to me that reading poems can broaden my horizon.
因为同样的原因,阅读诗歌对拓展我的视野很有意义。
5.I cannot entirely agree with the idea put forward by the poet.
我无法完全同意诗人提出的观点。
6.At an individual level, I feel that the poem is a bit plain.
从我个人的角度来说,我感觉这首诗太平淡了一点。
探究点2 写作应用体验
写作典例
阅读下面这首诗,写一篇诗歌评论。
Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening
By Robert Frost
Whose woods these are I think I know.
His house is in the village though;
He will not see me stopping here
To watch his woods fill up with snow.
My little horse must think it queer
To stop without a farmhouse near
Between the woods and frozen lake
The darkest evening of the year.
He gives his harness bells a shake
To ask if there is some mistake.
The only other sound's the sweep
Of easy wind and downy flake.
The woods are lovely, dark and deep,
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
分步推进
Step 1 审题谋篇
审题 审人称:讲诗歌时用第三人称,结合个人自身经历时用第一人称
审时态:以一般现在时为主
谋篇 Step 1:熟读诗歌,明确其主题; Step 2:了解诗歌的作者的生平、写作手法、意象等; Step 3:由诗歌的主题联想到自身的经历
语言 诗歌评论时应有对诗歌的语言、意象、押韵、修辞等方面客观的描述;在结合自身经历时也应有主观情感上的描写
Step 2 翻译要点
1.词汇翻译
(1) 意义深远的;重大的
(2) 未完成的
(3) 事件;事故
(4) 与……有关
(5) 催促某人做某事
(6) 下定决心
答案 (1)profound (2)unfinished (3)incident (4)be related to (5)urge sb to do sth (6)make up one's mind
2.句子翻译
(1)这首诗是由美国诗人罗伯特·弗罗斯特写的,其绝大多数诗歌都和大自然有关。
This poem Robert Frost and his works .
(2)在这首诗中,他描述了一件发生在雪夜的小事。
In this poem, he describes a little incident .
(3)作为一个旅行者,诗人被林中的美景所吸引。
As a traveler, the poet .
(4)他停下来欣赏美景,但他的内心却催促他前进,因为他面前还有一段长路要走,未完成的任务等待着他。
He stops to enjoy it, but his mind , because there is still a long way ahead of him, .
(5)这首诗语言朴实,但是意义深远。
This poem is plain in words, .
(6)只要我想起这首诗,每次我犹豫的时候都能下定决心。
Every time I hesitate I can as long as .
答案 (1)is written by the American poet;are mostly related to nature (2)happening on a snowy evening (3)is attracted by the beautiful scene in the woods (4)urges him to go on; and an unfinished duty waiting for him (5)but profound in meaning (6)make up my mind; I think of the poem
Step 3 连句成篇
利用以上几个句子,加上恰当的连接词和过渡句,必要时可以改变句式,使之成为一篇连贯的文章。
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参考范文
This poem is written by the American poet Robert Frost whose works are mostly related to nature. In this poem, he describes a little incident happening on a snowy evening.As a traveler, the poet is attracted by the beautiful scene in the woods. He stops to enjoy it, with his mind urging him to go on, because there is still a long way ahead of him, and an unfinished duty waiting for him.This poem is plain in words, but profound in meaning.
The poem is so meaningful to me that every time I hesitate I can make up my mind as long as I think of it.
【随堂检测】
主题写作
《当你老了》是爱尔兰诗人威廉·巴特勒·叶芝(William Butler Yeats)于1893年创作的一首诗歌。请你阅读下面这首诗,写一篇诗歌评论。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
When You Are Old
When you are old and gray and full of sleep,
And nodding by the fire, take down this book,
And slowly read, and dream of the soft look
Your eyes had once, and of their shadows deep;
How many loved your moments of glad grace,
And loved your beauty with love false or true,
But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you,
And loved the sorrows of your changing face;
And bending down beside the glowing bars,
Murmur, a little sadly, how love fled
And paced upon the mountains overhead
And hid his face amid a crowd of stars.
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参考范文
When You Are Old is one of the most famous poems of the Irish poet William Butler Yeats.
In this poem in several lines there are some feet that don't weaken or stress and this arrangement gives some changes to the whole poem, making it more attractive.We can know from the poem that the poet is trying to describe an old lady.The poem has a lonely and chill atmosphere, meanwhile it reminds the lady skillfully that she should seize the opportunity and not let the true love slip away.With the excellent use of rhyme, the poem seems to have been dashed out.
Obviously, the theme of this poem is love and life. I can feel the greatness and holiness of true love and it occurs to me that I should seize the time.
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UNIT 4 Exploring poetry
Section Ⅳ Integrated skills
1.通过对教材的理解,了解重要词汇的基本用法。（语言能力）
2.通过阅读熟悉诗歌评论的文体特征,并掌握其写作方法及策略。（语言能力，学习能力）
核心单词
知识点1 claim n.声明；宣称；所有权；索赔 vt.宣称；声称；要求；索取 vi.提出要求
（P50）Then took the other, as just as fair, And having perhaps the better claim, Because it was grassy and wanted wear....
然后我选择了另一条路，这条路也许更值得我向往，因为它荒草丛生，人迹罕至……
知识拓展
have a claim on 有对……的要求权
make a claim 索赔；对……提出要求
claim for 索取；要求
claim on 索赔
It is claimed that 据说……； 据称……
经典佳句
Don't be taken in by products claiming to help you lose weight in a week.
不要被那些声称能在一周内帮你减肥的产品给骗了。
融会应用
Ⅰ.单句填空
（1）Mothers with young children have a prior claim ____funds.
on
（2）A lot of lost property is never________（claim）.
claimed
（3）You can claim ____your insurance for that coat you left on the train.
on
Ⅱ.单句写作
（4）_________________humor not only affects patients' mood, but can actually help
them recover faster.
据说，幽默不仅能影响病人的情绪，还能帮助他们早日康复。
It is claimed that
知识点2 hence adv.因此；由此
（P50）I shall be telling this with a sigh Somewhere ages and ages hence...
也许多年后在某个地方，我将轻声叹息将往事回顾。
知识拓展
...days/weeks/years hence （从现在开始）……天/星期/年之后
therefore/accordingly/consequently/thus/as a result 因此
经典佳句
Hence they have a harder time adjusting in life and in their careers.
因此，他们会有一段更困难的时间调整生活和职业生涯。
融会应用 单句写作
（1）They've produced 14 movies _______________.
在之后的20年里，他们制作了14部电影。
20 years hence
（2）They grew up in Asia, ____________________ oriental culture.
他们在亚洲长大，因此对东方文化产生了兴趣。
hence their interest in
诗歌评论
本单元的写作任务是诗歌评论，属于议论文的写作范畴。
诗歌评论（a poetry review）是关于你对某一篇诗歌的理解的文章。诗歌评论中，一般可以描述一些诗歌中出现的意象和象征性的文字，并写出个人对该诗歌的理解。一篇好的诗歌评论，应该注意把握以下几点：
1.简短地介绍诗人和所给的诗歌；
2.分析并评价诗歌中的意象、押韵、修辞手法等；
3.写出你对该诗歌的理解，若能提及一些个人的生活经历和主观感受将会更好。
探究点1 教材范例提炼
课文范例
素材积累
Ⅰ.常用词汇
1.poem n． 诗歌
2.poet n. 诗人
3.rhyme n. 押韵
4.exaggeration n. 夸张
5.metaphor n. 隐喻
6.image n. 意象
7.literary adj. 文学的
8.conflict n. 冲突
9.reflection n. 沉思
10.exploration n. 探索
11.attractive adj. 吸引人的
12.mood n. 心情
13.consist of 由……组成
14.obligation n. 责任；义务
15.attempt to do sth 尝试做某事
16.recognition n. 认可
17.in particular 尤其；特别
18.the first part 第一节
Ⅱ.话题句式
1.From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first assumption.
在我看来，支持第一种猜想更合理。
2.As for me, I am on the latter part of the poem.
至于我，我更喜欢诗歌的后半部分。
3.To make myself as plain as I can, I should give my standards for an excellent poem.
为了让我的观点更加清楚，我应该给出我关于一首优秀诗歌的标准。
4.For the same reason, it matters to me that reading poems can broaden my horizon.
因为同样的原因，阅读诗歌对拓展我的视野很有意义。
5.I cannot entirely agree with the idea put forward by the poet.
我无法完全同意诗人提出的观点。
6.At an individual level, I feel that the poem is a bit plain.
从我个人的角度来说，我感觉这首诗太平淡了一点。
探究点2 写作应用体验
写作典例
阅读下面这首诗，写一篇诗歌评论。
Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening
By Robert Frost
Whose woods these are I think I know.
His house is in the village though；
He will not see me stopping here
To watch his woods fill up with snow.
My little horse must think it queer
To stop without a farmhouse near
Between the woods and frozen lake
The darkest evening of the year.
He gives his harness bells a shake
To ask if there is some mistake.
The only other sound's the sweep
Of easy wind and downy flake.
The woods are lovely, dark and deep，
But I have promises to keep，
And miles to go before I sleep，
And miles to go before I sleep.
分步推进
Step 1 审题谋篇
审题 审人称：讲诗歌时用第三人称，结合个人自身经历时用第一人称
审时态：以一般现在时为主
谋篇 Step 1：熟读诗歌，明确其主题；
Step 2：了解诗歌的作者的生平、写作手法、意象等；
Step 3：由诗歌的主题联想到自身的经历
语言 诗歌评论时应有对诗歌的语言、意象、押韵、修辞等方面客观的描述；在结
合自身经历时也应有主观情感上的描写
Step 2 翻译要点
1.词汇翻译
（1）_________意义深远的；重大的
profound
（2）__________未完成的
unfinished
（3）________事件；事故
incident
（4）_____________与……有关
be related to
（5）_________________催促某人做某事
urge sb to do sth
（6）___________________下定决心
make up one's mind
2.句子翻译
（1）这首诗是由美国诗人罗伯特·弗罗斯特写的，其绝大多数诗歌都和大自然有关。
This poem_____________________________Robert Frost and his works
__________________________.
is written by the American poet
are mostly related to nature
（2）在这首诗中，他描述了一件发生在雪夜的小事。
In this poem, he describes a little incident ____________________________.
happening on a snowy evening
（3）作为一个旅行者，诗人被林中的美景所吸引。
As a traveler, the poet ___________________________________________.
is attracted by the beautiful scene in the woods
（4）他停下来欣赏美景，但他的内心却催促他前进，因为他面前还有一段长路要走，
未完成的任务等待着他。
He stops to enjoy it, but his mind ___________________, because there is still a
long way ahead of him, ____________________________________.
urges him to go on
and an unfinished duty waiting for him
（5）这首诗语言朴实，但是意义深远。
This poem is plain in words, _______________________.
but profound in meaning
（6）只要我想起这首诗，每次我犹豫的时候都能下定决心。
Every time I hesitate I can __________________ as long as ___________________.
make up my mind
I think of the poem
Step 3 连句成篇
利用以上几个句子,加上恰当的连接词和过渡句,必要时可以改变句式,使之成为一篇连贯的文章。
参考范文
This poem is written by the American poet Robert Frost whose works are mostly related to nature. In this poem, he describes a little incident happening on a snowy evening. As a traveler, the poet is attracted by the beautiful scene in the woods. He stops to enjoy it, with his mind urging him to go on, because there is still a long way ahead of him, and an unfinished duty waiting for him. This poem is plain in words, but profound in meaning.
The poem is so meaningful to me that every time I hesitate I can make up my mind as long as I think of it.
主题写作
《当你老了》是爱尔兰诗人威廉·巴特勒·叶芝（William Butler Yeats）于1893年创作的一首诗歌。请你阅读下面这首诗，写一篇诗歌评论。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
When You Are Old
When you are old and gray and full of sleep，
And nodding by the fire, take down this book，
And slowly read, and dream of the soft look
Your eyes had once, and of their shadows deep；
How many loved your moments of glad grace，
And loved your beauty with love false or true，
But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you，
And loved the sorrows of your changing face；
And bending down beside the glowing bars，
Murmur, a little sadly, how love fled
And paced upon the mountains overhead
And hid his face amid a crowd of stars.
___________________________________________________________________________
参考范文
When You Are Old is one of the most famous poems of the Irish poet William Butler Yeats.
In this poem in several lines there are some feet that don't weaken or stress and this arrangement gives some changes to the whole poem, making it more attractive. We can know from the poem that the poet is trying to describe an old lady. The poem has a lonely and chill atmosphere, meanwhile it reminds the lady skillfully that she should seize the opportunity and not let the true love slip away. With the excellent use of rhyme, the poem seems to have been dashed out.
Obviously, the theme of this poem is love and life. I can feel the greatness and holiness of true love and it occurs to me that I should seize the time.
