Unit 7 Abilities 单元话题写作指导与演练（含解析，必做）-2023-2024学年七年级下册英语单元写作深度指导（牛津译林版）

Unit 7 Abilities 单元写作指导与演练
单元写作 早知道 写 作 任 务 本单元的话题是“个人能力”。每个人都有自己的独特之处,在学习和生活中学生们应 善于发现和展现自己的长处。本单元学习了如何写推荐信来推荐某人。在具体的写 作中,学生应做到以下几点: 1.能正确认识并描述自己和他人的能力; 2.能掌握书写推荐信的正确格式; 3.在书写推荐信时,应注意语言简洁得体,条理清晰。
常 用 表 达 常用词汇 1.recommend 推荐 2.hard 努力地 3.clever 聪明的 4.carefully 认真地 5.polite 有礼貌 的 6.helpful 有帮助的 7.kind 善良的 8.a member of ……的一员 9.recommend...for...推 荐 …… 为 ……10.be good at 擅长 ……11.do well in 在 …… 方面做得好 12.take care of 照顾 13.be able to 能 14.make friends with 和…… 交朋友 15.get on well with 与……相 处融洽 16.at the age of... 在 …… 岁时 17.look forward to 期待 18.have a population of... 有……人口
常用句子 1.Jim studies hard and he is good at writing.吉姆学习努力,并且擅长写作。 2.He thinks carefully and plans everything well.他考虑仔细,计划周密。 3.He began to learn to play the piano at the age of five.他 5 岁时开始学习弹钢琴。 4.When he is free,he often visits an old people’s home.他空闲时经常去敬老院。 5.We should study together and help each other.我们应该相互学习,相互帮助。
请你写一封推荐信，推荐你们班的同学林涛获得今年的青年奖，词数 80 左右。要点如下： 1.林涛是一个聪明又诚实(honest)的男孩，他心地善良又勇敢，总是为他人着想；
2.非常乐于助人，乐意和别人分享东西；
3.昨天， 在他回家的路上， 发现一个 8 岁的小男孩迷了路， 花了 2 个小时帮助男孩找到了回家的路， 男孩的 父母很感谢他。
Dear Sir. I would like to recommend Lin Tao for this year's Youth Award.Lin Tao is a clever and honest boy. He is kind and worry about others. He is ready to share things with others and ready to help others at any time. Yesterday, he found an eight-year-old boy lost his way on his way home. He spent two hours helping the boy find his way home. The boy's parents were very grateful to him.We all think Lin Tao should get the award. We hope you agree with us. Yours faithfully, Wang Qiang 这是一篇以第三人称来写的推荐信， 要注意写信的格式。内容很简单，要 点已经给出。时态主要用到一般现在 时和一般过去时。正文分两段，能把 所给的要点全部写出，结尾回应主题。 文章时态使用正确，变化自然
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现在，人们的环保意识有了很大程度的提高，但仍然存在一些不好的行为，我们有义务参与环保的宣传以 及实际行动中去。假如你是 David，请根据表格内所给信息给环保俱乐部（Environment Club）李主席写一 封申请信，希望能成为该俱乐部的志愿者（volunteer），为环境保护尽一份责任。
个人 信息 1.就读于第一中学八（1）班，擅长科学； 2.经常 DIY…… （举例说明）； 3.乐于助人…… （举例说明）；
环保 现状 1.烟雾使空气质量差……； 2.能见度低……；
几点 想法 1.呼吁（call on）政府应采取措施治理空气污 染； 2. … …
要求:
1. 文中不得使用真实姓名和校名；
2. 段落清楚，中心突出，意思连贯；
3. 内容必须包含以上信息，需根据要求适当发挥；
4. 词数不少于 100 词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Li,
I’m writing to you for applying to be a volunteer of Environment Club. It’s our duty to protect the environment and I would like to do something to help.
I hope I can get the chance to help protect the environment.
Yours faithfully,
David
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Li,
I’m writing to you for applying to be a volunteer of Environment Club. It’s our duty to protect the environment and I would like to do something to help.
I’m David from Class 1, Grade 8 of No.1 Middle School. I want to join Environment Club to be a volunteer. I am a polite boy and I am ready to help others. On the bus, I often give my seat to the elderly. I also like DIY. I made a lot of things myself.
Heavy smog hit some areas of our country. The air quality is so poor that it has caused people’s health problems. It has had a bad effect on our study, work and life. Smog weather has low visibility. It often causes traffic accidents. The schools in some areas have to be closed. The government should take measures to control air pollution. People should try to go out by bus rather than by car. Besides, people should plant more trees and flowers. I will take action to protect environment at once! I am looking forward to your reply.
I hope I can get the chance to help protect the environment.
Yours faithfully, David
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态： 一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意要增加 1—2 个想法，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤]
第一步，由于开头已给出，故接下来具体介绍自己；
第二步，具体介绍自己。从“就读学校、所在年级、品质”等方面介绍自己；
第三步，具体阐述环保现状和自己的想法。
第四步，结尾已给出。表示希望能够获得帮助保护环境的机会。
[亮点词汇]
①have a bad effect on...对……有不良影响
②be ready to do sth.准备好做某事
③poor 劣质的
④cause 引起
⑤take measures 采取措施
⑥rather than 而不是
⑦besides 此外
⑧at once 立刻
[高分句型]
①The air quality is so poor that it has caused people’s health problems.（so...that... 引导的结果状语从句） ②I will take action to protect environment at once!（动词不定式作目的状语）
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2023 年 3 月 23 日是第六十三个世界气象日(World Meteorological Day)，主题为“天气气候水， 代代向未来”。 学校本学期会举办“气象日活动推广人”评选活动， 假如你是李华，请你为自己写一封信给校长 (Mr.Brown) 推荐自己，并就“作为中学生，我们可以做些什么来保护我们的地球”谈谈自己的做法和建议。
内容提示：
1.简要介绍你的情况，可包括年龄、喜好等。（请勿出现真实姓名）
2. 你觉得我们可以做些什么来保护我们的地球？
小事做起(start with small things)，比如主动打扫，不乱丢垃圾，节约水电 ……
绿色出行(choose the green travel)，比如步行上下学，坐公共汽车、骑自行车 ……
3……(适当补充)
写作要求：
1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，书写规范；
3. 字数 80 左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr.Brown,
I am writing to you to recommend myself as the activity prompter of World Meteorological Day.
I would appreciate it if you could give me this chance. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours truly, Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr.Brown,
I’m writing to you to recommend myself as the activity prompter of World Meteorological Day.
Allow me to introduce myself first. My name is Li Hua. I am an eleven-year-old middle school student who is interested in protecting our earth. In my opinion, here is something we can do to make our world better.
First of all, the key to this is to start with small things in our daily life. For example, we can offer to do the cleaning actively, stop littering, and start to save water and electricity. What’s more, the way of traveling should also be taken into consideration. To be specific, choosing the green travel is an excellent idea, which means walking or riding a bike to school, as well as taking the bus instead of a car. In addition, if I become the prompter, I will hold events like speech contest to raise people’s awareness.
I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance. Look forward to your early reply.
Yours truly, Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信作文；
②时态：时态主要以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作话题已给出，考生应注意准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己 的思想，进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先直接说明想要推荐自己为气象日活动推广人的人选；
第二步，从兴趣爱好和认为可以做哪些事来保护地球等方面介绍推荐自己的原因；
第三步，总结并希望自己能够有幸被选上。
[亮点词汇]
①In my opinion 在我看来；
②save water and electricity 节约用水和用电；
③as well as 也，以及；
④In addition 除此之外。
[高分句型]
①I am an eleven-year-old middle school student who is interested in protecting our earth.（be interested in 对…… 感兴趣；定语从句）；
②To be specific, choosing the green travel is an excellent idea, which means walking or riding a bike to school, as well as taking the bus instead of a car.（To be specific 具体地说；动名词作主语；定语从句）；
③In addition, if I become the prompter, I will hold events like speech contest to raise people's awareness. （条件
状语从句）
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假如你是 Jack，你在某网站上看到一家志愿者组织招聘志愿者。你对此很感兴趣，请你根据下面的提示， 写一封邮件申请一项志愿者工作。
志愿者工作： 1. To work in an old people’s house2. To help kids in an after-school program
提示问题：
1. Which volunteer job do you want to do (二选一)
2. What are your hobbies
3. What can you do to help people
4. Why do you want to do the volunteer job
5. When are you free to do the job
要求：
1. 大小写，标点书写规范，语句通顺，内容全面，适当发挥，卷面整洁。
2. 70 词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’d like to volunteer to
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Yours, Jack
【答案】例文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’d like to volunteer to work in an old people’s home.
In my free time, I like to dance and sing songs. And I’m also good at playing chess. I can play chess or sing songs to cheer the old people up. I can also wash clothes or clean their rooms. I think when I do something for them, I feel happy. I can do the volunteer job on Friday evening or at the weekends.
I look forward to your reply.
Yours, Jack
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件，申请志愿者工作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要做哪个志愿者工作；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍了你的爱好，你能做什么及可以做志愿者的时间； 第三步，书写结语。表达希望成功入选的美好愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at 擅长
②cheer the old people up 让老人振作起来
③look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
①I can play chess or sing songs to cheer the old people up.（to do 表目的）
②I think when I do something for them, I feel happy. （宾语从句）
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假设你是 Frank，在某英文网站上看到招募一批暑假志愿者 （volunteer），帮助小学生度过一个有意义的暑
假。请根据表格的信息，写一封自荐信。
Personality (性格) kind, helpful...
Abilities ( 能 力) ● know how to talk with children well ● ...
Plans ● teach them to sing English songs ● ...
注意：
1. 文章需包括表格所有内容，并适当拓展；
2. 词数 80 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名或校名。
Dear Smith,
I am Frank, a middle school student. I want to be a volunteer in your project.
【答案】例文
Dear Smith,
I am Frank, a middle school student. I want to be a volunteer in your project.
I am a kind boy. I am helpful because I often help people in need. I am good with others. I know how to talk with children well. So the children all like me. I’m good at English. I often organize English activities, such as English speech contests, English writing contests and so on. As a volunteer, I want to help the teacher do what I can. I plan to teach them to sing English songs.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours, Frank
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格所给信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我叫弗兰克，是一名中学生。 ”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“我的性格，能力和我的计划”重点介绍我的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语。表达“期待您的早日答复。 ”
[亮点词汇]
① be good at 擅长
② and so on 等等
[高分句型]
① I am helpful because I often help people in need.（because 引导的原因状语从句）
② I know how to talk with children well.（ “疑问词+动词不定式”）