2024届高考英语二轮复习写作提分策略 讲义

2024二轮复习写作提分策略
一、写作中的“高级”词汇
在写作中需恰当使用“高级”词汇，使语言表达准确、贴切自然、多样化，为书面表达打造亮点，赢得阅卷老师的青睐。
名词类
1.chance (机会)→opportunity
2.choice (选择)→alternative
3.person (人)→individual
4.result (结果)→consequence
5.hope (希望)→prospect;expectation;anticipation
6.way (方法)→approach
7.job (工作)→career;profession;employment
8.thanks (感谢)→appreciation;gratitude
9.government (政府)→the authorities concerned
10.grade/score/mark (成绩)→academic performance
11.ability (能力)→capacity;capability
12.pressure (压力)→burden
13.more and more people (越来越多的人)→an increasing number of people
14.all kinds of (各种各样的)→a wide range of
如：
1.这些问题造成的严重后果绝不能忽视。
The severe consequences these problems have caused should never be ignored.
2.我们可以将所学应用于实践来充分发挥我们的才智。
We can put our mental capacity into full play by applying what we’ve learned to practice.
3.作为一个可供选择的方法，演奏乐器有利于培养学生的性格。
As an alternative,playing musical instruments is beneficial to cultivating students’characters.
4.过于强调学习可能会给学生带来沉重的负担，从而剥夺了他们享受学习的机会。
Too much emphasis on study may lead to a heavy burden on students,depriving them of the opportunity to enjoy studying.
5.玩网络游戏必然会消耗学生的时间和精力，因而对他们的学习成绩产生负面影响。
Playing online games is bound to drain students of their time and energy,thus having a negative effect on their academic performance.
动词类
1.solve (解决)→tackle;resolve;address;deal with;cope with
2.cause (导致)→lead to;result in;contribute to;give rise to
3.consider (考虑)→take...into consideration/account
4.encourage (鼓励)→motivate;inspire;stimulate
5.replace (替代)→be a substitute for
6.visit (参观)→pay a visit to
7.attract (吸引)→appeal to;capture one’s attention
8.use (使用)→employ;make good/full use of;take advantage of
9.show (展示)→demonstrate
10.ensure (确保)→guarantee
11.help (帮忙)→do sb.a favour;lend sb.a helping hand
12.face (面对)→be faced with
13.realize (意识到)→be aware of
14.know (知道)→get a picture/an idea of
15.send (送)→deliver
16.have (拥有)→possess
17.get (获得)→be available to;have access to
18.explain (解释)→account for
19.understand (理解)→make sense of;figure out
20.thank (感谢)→appreciate;extend one’s sincere gratitude to
21.save (节省)→set aside (time/money)
22.communicate (交流)→interact
23.like (喜欢)→have an affection for
24.remember (记得)→bear/keep in mind
25.stay up (熬夜)→burn the midnight oil
26.can’t do sth.(不能做某事)→fail to do sth.
27.shouldn’t do (不应该做)→under no circumstances/by no means should sb.do
28.decide to do sth.(决定做某事)→determine to do sth.;be determined to do sth.
29.join in (参加)→be involved in;participate in;engage in
30.prepare for (为……做准备)→make preparations for;pave the way for
31.want to do sth.(想做某事)→intend/desire to do sth.;long to do;would like to do sth.;feel like doing sth.
32.ask sb.for help (向某人寻求帮助)→turn to sb.for help
33.feel comfortable (感到舒心)→feel at ease
34.succeed in doing sth.(成功做某事)→make it
35.try one’s best to (尽力做)→spare no effort to;go to all lengths to;make every effort to
36.think of sth.(想到某事)→sth.occurs to sb.
37.tend to do sth.(倾向于做某事)→have a tendency to do sth.
38.lie in (位于)→be located/situated in
39.hand out (分发)→distribute
40.sb.believes (某人相信)→sb.is fully convinced that;sb.holds a firm belief that
41.I think (我认为)→In my opinion;as far as I’m concerned;from my perspective
42.can’t do sth.(不能做)→have trouble/difficulty doing sth.
43.have to do sth.(不得不做)→cannot help but do sth.;have no alternative/choice/option but to do sth.
44.be made up of (由……组成)→be composed of;consist of
45.can make sb.do (能够使某人做)→allow sb.to do;enable sb.to do
46.be being built (在建造中)→be under construction
47.is a platform (是一个平台)→serve as a platform
如：
1.自信不仅可以激励人进一步学习，而且使人能够不断努力解决难题。
Not only can self-confidence motivate one to study further but also it enables one to keep trying to resolve difficult problems.
2.我们学校的英文报纸是我们学生交流思想，提高英语水平的平台。
Our school English newspaper serves as a platform for students to exchange thoughts as well as to improve English.
3.而且，反馈栏使学生能够与编辑互动，这可能会激发他们的兴趣，增强他们的参与意识。
What’s more,the feedback column enables the students to interact with the editors,which may stimulate their interest and enhance their sense of participation.
4.很明显，在所有可以参加的活动中，最受学生欢迎的是运动，占53%。
Obviously,of all the activities available to students,the most popular one is sports,which accounts for 53 percent.
5.首先，由于设计简单乏味，校服总是不能激发学生的兴趣。
To begin with,on account of the simple and boring design,school uniforms always fail to fuel students’interest.
6.正是看到男孩恳求的眼神，我打赌自己会尽力不让他失望。
It was exactly at the sight of the boy’s pleading look that I bet I would spare no effort not to let him down.
形容词类
1.difficult (困难的)→challenging
2.rich (丰富的)→abundant
3.great (大的)→considerable;enormous
4.good (好的)→outstanding;distinguished;brilliant;beneficial;amazing;favourable
5.be good/bad for (对……有好处/坏处)→have a significant/positive/far-reaching/favourable/negative/unfavourable impact on...
6.most (大多数的)→the majority of
7.various (各种各样的)→comprehensive;extensive;integrated
8.strong (坚强的)→tough
9.careful (小心谨慎的)→cautious
10.whole (全部的)→entire
11.enough (足够的)→adequate;sufficient
12.proper (适当的)→appropriate
13.major (主要的)→dominant;primary
14.sincere (真诚的)→genuine
15.interesting (有趣的)→striking;appealing
16.master (精通)→have a good command of
17.be satisfied with (对……感到满意)→express one’s satisfaction with
18.be interested in (对……感兴趣)→show interest in;be fascinated by;be crazy about; sth. appeals to sb.
19.be better than (比……好)→be superior to
20.be famous for (闻名)→have a reputation for;be well-known for
21.be sure to do (一定会)→be bound to do
22.be busy with/in (忙于)→be occupied with/in;be engaged in;be buried in;bury oneself in
23.be bored with (对……厌倦)→be fed up with
24.be used to sth.(习惯于)→be accustomed to sth.
25.be popular with sb.(受……欢迎)→gain popularity with sb.
26.value (重视)→lay/put/great emphasis on;attach great importance to;give priority to;regard sth.as sb.’s priority
27.important (重要的)→essential;vital;significant
28.be important/useful/beneficial/helpful/valuable→be of importance/use/benefit/help/value
如：
1.我们会不断地沉迷于这些短视频，它们真的很吸引人，但并不能让我们真正地变得快乐。
We will be constantly sucked into these videos which are really appealing but never really make us happier.
2.此外，值得注意的是，手机只是一种通信手段，而且你的旧手机已经可以为你提供足够的功能了。
Also,it’s noteworthy that cell phones only serve as a means of communication.Your old cell phone can already provide you with sufficient functions.
3.每个人都天生渴望有机会接受教育，我认为这是最主要的内在原因。
Everyone is born with a burning desire to have access to education,which I believe is the most dominant internal reason.
4.在父母的真诚鼓励下，孩子们将成长为自信健康的成年人。
With the genuine encouragement from parents,children will grow into confident and healthy adults.
副词类
1.greatly (大大地)→dramatically;sharply
2.finally (最后)→eventually
3.hardly (几乎不)→barely
4.fast (快速地)→rapidly
5.hurriedly (匆忙地)→in a hurry
6.immediately (立即)→without hesitation/delay;in a fiash
7.suddenly (突然)→all of a sudden
8.very (非常)→extremely/more than
9.sometimes (有时)→occasionally;once in a while;from time to time
10.nowadays (如今)→currently
11.more and more popular/severe...→increasingly popular/severe...
如：
1.目前，越来越多的政府正在向博物馆投资。
Currently,an increasing number of governments are investing in museums.
2.最后，黑暗降临，森林里伸手不见五指。更糟糕的是，温度急剧下降。
Eventually,an absolute darkness ruled the forest.Even worse,the temperature suddenly dropped dramatically.
连词类
1.so (因此)→consequently;therefore;as a result/consequence
2.and (和)→as well as
3.if (如果)→supposing;on condition that
4.as long as (只要)→provided/providing that
5.although/though/while (虽然)→despite/in spite of the fact that
如：
1.尽管技术给我们带来了很多便利，但我们不能对它的缺点视而不见。
Despite the fact that technology has brought much convenience to us,we cannot turn a blind eye to its disadvantages.
2.金色的阳光照进艾达的房间，照亮了她的脸，也照亮了她追寻医疗事业梦想的未来之路。
The golden sunlight slid in Ada’s room,lighting her face as well as the future path to follow the dream of pursuing a medical career.
介词类
1.considering (考虑到)→in view of
2.during (在……期间)→in the course of
3.in fact (事实上)→as a matter of fact
4.for example (例如)→for instance
5.because of (因为)→on account of;due to;owing to;thanks to
6.in a word (总之)→to sum up;in conclusion;in summary
7.about (关于)→regarding;concerning;in/with regard to
如：
1.要解决与长江有关的所有问题，我们还有很长的路要走。
We still have a long way to go in solving all the problems in regard to the Yangtze River.
2.总之，可以说技术对我们的日常生活产生了巨大影响。
In conclusion,it can be said that technology has made an enormous impact on our daily lives.
名词前加高级形容词
1.unbearable/intolerable stress/pressure/burden
2.an incredible journey
3.splendid scenery/view/landscape
4.constant/genuine encouragement/support
5.a(an) enormous/remarkable/extraordinary achievement
6.a(an) appealing/beneficial/reasonable/sensible option/approach
7.an apparent/obvious advantage
8.a(an) appropriate/inspiring/optimistic/positive attitude
9.a brilliant/bright/promising future
10.adequate/sufficient/plentiful/precious time/resources
11.a dominant/primary cause/reason/factor
12.comprehensive/extensive/integrated/overall/all-round skills/development/understanding
13.independent life/thinking/space
14.permanent damage
如：
1.海滩上落日的壮丽景色一定会给你留下深刻的印象。
The splendid scenery of sunset on the beach will definitely leave a deep impression on you.
2.要不是你不断的鼓励，我不可能发现自己有这样的潜力。
Had it not been for your constant encouragement,I couldn’t have found myself with such potential.
使用万能单词
万能单词能给句子增添一点色彩，可放在句首，或be动词、助动词、情态动词之后，实义动词之前。
1.undoubtedly (毫无疑问)
2.obviously/apparently (显然)
3.undeniably (不可否认)
4.surely/definitely (一定）
如：
1.毫无疑问/显然/不可否认，课外活动对我们的身体和心理健康起着重要作用。
Undoubtedly/Apparently/Undeniably,extracurricular activities play a significant role in our physical and mental development.
2.你的穿着应该整洁漂亮，而且必须非常合身。
What you wear should be stylish and clean,and definitely fit well.
二、写作中的“高级”句式
在一篇英文写作中，运用较为“高级”的表达方式可以使句子增强感染力，也更容易吸引阅卷老师的眼球。如：
1.After all the students came up with possible solutions,they had an online meeting and made a plan.
2.After coming up with possible solutions,all the students had an online meeting,during which they decided on a specific plan.
相对于句1，句2的句式更加丰富，它不仅用到了高级短语decide on，还用到了非谓语动词、定语从句等高级表达，体现出考生优秀的语言表达能力和深厚的语法功底。
要点强调句式
1.名词性从句
(1)毫无疑问，这是你进一步提高能力和人际沟通技能的绝佳机会。
There is no doubt that this is a golden chance for you to further improve your ability and interpersonal communication skills.
(2)不可否认，坚持不懈的努力会带来持续的进步。
There is no denying that persistent efforts will contribute to continuous progress.
(3)朋友在我们生命中扮演着不可替代的角色，这一点不言而喻。
It goes without saying that friends play an irreplaceable role in our lives.
(4)让我能从其他竞争者中脱颖而出的是我的毅力和领导潜力。
What can make me stand out from other competitors are my perseverance and leadership potential.
(5)但是这些人忽视了国际旅游可能会给环境造成的灾难性影响。
But what these people fail to see is that international tourism may bring about a disastrous impact on the environment.
(6)人们普遍认为应该通过综合素质来评价学生。
It is widely acknowledged that students should be evaluated in terms of overall quality.
2.定语从句
(1)众所周知，词汇是语言的重要组成部分，就像建筑中的砖块一样。
As is known to us all,vocabulary is an important part of language,just like bricks in a building.
(2)我之所以想采访杨立伟，是因为他为中国的发展做出了巨大贡献。
The reason why I want to interview Yang Liwei is that he has made great contributions to the development of China.
3.倒装句
(1)时间是如此珍贵，经不起我们浪费。
So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.
(2)我们绝对不能忽视知识的重要性。
On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.
(3)只有广泛阅读我们才能增长知识、拓宽视野。
Only by reading widely can we gain more knowledge and broaden our minds.
(4)直到你经历挫折你才会成功。
Not until you have experienced setbacks will you succeed.
(5)尽管未来可能充满挑战，但我们仍将全力以赴。
Challenging as the future may be,we will still go all out.
4.双重否定
(1)不同的人娱乐方式不同，这很寻常。
It is not uncommon that different persons entertain themselves in different ways.
(2)我们的网络体验在许多方面仍然远非完美。
Our experience of the internet is still far from perfect in many ways.
5.cannot...too/over-
我们再怎么强调交通安全的重要性都不为过。
The importance of traffic safety cannot be emphasized too much.=The importance of traffic cannot be overemphasized.
6.强调句
是你的努力，而不是你的智力决定你的成功。
It is your efforts,rather than your intelligence,that will determine your success.
7.虚拟语气
如果没有这次经历，我还没有意识到我应该多关心我的母亲。
Without this experience,I wouldn’t have realized that I should care more for my mother.
8.the more...the more...
在我看来，教育是关于学习的，你学的越多，在未来的生活中就越做好了准备。
As far as I am concerned,education is about learning and the more you learn,the more equipped for life you are.
要点整合句式
1.not only/just/merely...but also
(1)事实证明，他们不仅帮助了一个需要帮助的男孩，也让自己尝到了帮助别人的甜头。
It turned out that not only did they help a boy in need,but also gave themselves the sweet taste of helping others.
(2)这次活动不仅为学生们提供了一个展示才能的平台，而且激发了他们探索创造力的兴趣。
Not only did the activity provide the students with a platform to demonstrate their talents,but also it stimulated their interest in exploring their creativity.
2.ranging from...to...
这次展览呈现的是中国传统绘画史以及来自名家的丰富作品，有水墨画、山水画等。
The exhibition presents the history of traditional Chinese painting as well as various vivid works from Chinese artists,ranging from ink washing painting to landscape painting.
3.including/such as/like...
(1)一个小时之后，各种精彩的作品被展示，其中包括栩栩如生的木雕和泥塑动物。
After an hour,a variety of awesome works were presented,including vivid wooden carvings and lifelike clay animals.
(2)此外，将组织各种活动，比如拍照片、录视频、写毕业祝福、送纪念品等等。
What’s more,a variety of activities will be organized,such as taking photos, recording videos,writing graduation wishes,and giving away souvenirs.
4.as well as/besides/apart from/aside from
除了观看展品外，我们还将参加各种互动活动，这将会给我们提供一次有趣又有教育意义的体验。
As well as looking at exhibits,we will have the opportunity to participate a variety of interactive activities,offering us an entertaining and educational experience.
5.not to mention
污染对生活在城市里的每个人的健康有不良的影响，更不必说对环境的破坏。
Pollution has a negative effect on the health of everyone living in the city,not to mention the damage to the environment.
要点扩展句式
多种句式拓展原因、结果、对比等。
1.非限制性定语从句
(1)这次展览以中国国画的发展史为中心，从中你能对中国文化的发展有更深了解。
The exhibition centers on the history of the traditional Chinese painting,through which you are expected to gain a deeper insight into the development of Chinese culture.
(2)过了一会儿，我的鼻子开始感到非常疼痛，这让我的头无法从南瓜里钻出来。
After a short while,I started to feel exceedingly painful on my nose,which just prevented my head getting out of the pumpkin.
(3)读完这些英文小说之后，我积累了更多词汇，转而提高了我的写作技巧。
Having finished reading the English novels,I have built a larger vocabulary,which,in turn,has improved my writing skills.
2.非谓语动词
(1)在好奇心的驱使下，格雷迪踮起脚尖，走近看它。
Driven by curiosity,Grady walked on tiptoe,moving closer to look at it.
(2)此外，这些英文小说使我获得了新的体验和想法，为我提供以前从未了解过的文化和社会的新信息。
Besides,these English novels open me up to new experiences and perspectives,offering me new information about culture and society that I have never knew before.
(3)我努力克制自己，提供了他需要的东西，却发现他害羞地对我微笑。
I tried hard to contain myself and offered what he needed,only to find him smiling shyly back at me.
3.连词for/as/because/since/now that/so that/even though等
(1)要用开放的心胸接受不同的观点，即使你不喜欢。
Be open-minded to different opinions,even though you don’t like them.
(2)通常，无论我们走多远或有多忙，我们会尽力回家庆祝这一节日。
Usually,no matter how far away or how busy we are,we will try to come home for the celebration.
(3)高三学生的睡眠应该有保障，因为它使我们不仅保持健康而且在学习时更有活力。
Sleep should be guaranteed for senior three students,for it not only keeps us healthy but also enables us to be more energetic when studying.
(4)必须具备全面的技能和洞察力，这样我们在找工作时就能比其他候选人有优势。
It is essential to be armed with comprehensive skills and insights so that we can have an edge over other candidates when hunting for jobs.
4.介词短语due to/because of/on account of/in spite of/despite/regardless of/with等
(1)无论收入如何，父母愿意给他们的孩子最好的教育。
Parents are willing to give their children the best education regardless of their income.
(2)尽管路道在大规模建设，但由于近年来车辆日益增多，交通状况仍然有很大的改进空间。
In spite of the large-scale construction of roads,there is still much room for the improvement of traffic condition,because of the ever increasing number of cars these years.
(3)随着在社会实践中开阔了视野，学生可以更容易、更彻底地获得知识，并且他能够了解知识的实际价值。
With their horizons broadened in social practice,students can acquire knowledge more easily and thoroughly and they can get an idea of the practical value of the knowledge.
(4)随着竞争对手的数量越来越多，以及父母对他们的期望越来越高，学生们别无选择，只能埋头于他们的学习中。
With the increasing number of competitors and high expectations from their parents,students have no alternative but to bury themselves in their studies.
5.表示结果consequently/as a result/consequence
然而，我的图书馆账号异常。结果，我无法登录并访问图书馆的资源。
However,my library account isn’t working properly.As a result,I was not able to log in and access the library’s resources.
6.表示对比和转折on the contrary/on the other hand,however等
(1)钱只是一个将来某一天会失去的工具。和钱相比，心灵的财富实际上可以永远保存。
Money is only a tool which can be lost some day.However,compared to money,wealth of mind can actually be kept forever.
(2)这种想法并不能让我们这个团体团结一致。相反，我认为它会导致我们分裂。
It is not an idea around which our community can unite.On the contrary,I see it as one that will divide us.