2024届高考英语二轮复习应用文写作指导：建议信 讲义
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高考二轮复习应用文写作指导---建议信
写作架构
建议信是日常生活中最常见的一种文体，是写信人向收信人对某事提出建议或忠告的书信。建议信要简明扼要、目的明确，具有合理性和说服力。具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或to begin/start with, then, later, last but not least等作为连接词依次陈述建议。通常写作结构为：
第一段：表明写作目的：提出建议；
第二段：具体的建议及理由；
第三段：指出采纳建议的好处、表达愿望。
提分必背句式
1、首段常用语
① Knowing that you have trouble in ... after reading your letter, I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.
在读了你的信后，我知道你在......方面有困难,我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/忠告。
② I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on ...
很高兴收到你的来信，你在信中询问我......
2、主体部分常用语
① The following are my suggestions./ My suggestions are as follows.
下面是我的一些建议。/ 我的建议如下。
② In my opinion/As far as I'm concerned/Personally, it would be wise to take the following suggestions
在我看来/就我而言，采取如下行动是明智的。
3、结尾常用语
① I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. / I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you.
我希望你觉得这些建议对你有帮助。/ 我希望我的建议对你有益。
② I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to to, good luck!
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你一切顺利！
【背诵素材】
一、必备话题词汇及表达
1. 想要做某事: would like to do sth.
2. 主动做某事: offer to do sth.
3. 值得做某事: be worth doing sth.
4. 建议做某事: be suggested to do sth.
5. 某事是个好选择: Sth. is a better choice
6. 某事将有用: Sth will be helpful.
7. 做某事是个好主意: It would be a good idea to do sth.
8. 给某人提建议: give someone advice (on...)
9. 做某事有困难: have difficulty doing sth.
10. 如下: as follows
11. 利用: make use of
12. 认为......有用: find ... helpful / useful / beneficial
13. 把......考虑在内: take ... into account/ consideration
14. 得到改善: get improved
15. 依我看来: In my opinion/ As far as I’m concerned
16. 我建议: I suggest that...
/ My suggestion is that ...
17. 如果我是你，我会: If I were you, I would ...
18. 你最好/ 最好不: You had better (not) ...
二、必备话题句型及表达
1. 已收到你寻求......建议的来信。以下是我个人的建议，我希望它们对你有帮助。
I have received your letter asking me some advice / suggestions ...
The following are my personal suggestions, which I hope can be of great help to you.
2. 听到你在......上有困难很难过。但你如果采纳以下建议，情况很容易改善。
I am sorry to hear that you have difficulty doing sth. However, the situation is easy to change if you take the following advice.
3. 对某人而言做......是重要的/必要的/有益的
It’ s + 形容词 / 名词 （important/ necessary / helpful） for sb to do sth.
4. 做某事是重要的/ 有益的/ 好主意。
Doing sth. is +形容词/ 名词（important/ necessary/ helpful/ a good idea / of great importance / of great help）
5. 在你亲自来之前读一些关于这些地方的书是必要的。
Reading some books about these places before you come to see them with your own eyes is necessary for you.
6. 我建议你应该做...
I suggest / recommend that you should ...
7. 我建议你就他的行为和你朋友
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behavior.
8. 在我看来，你最好停止玩电脑游戏，更多地专注于学校和家庭生活。
From my point of view/ As far as I am concerned/ Personally speaking/ In my opinion，you had better quit playing computer game and concentrate more on school and family life.
9. 在我看来，我认为你应该和同学积极沟通。
From my point of view，I think you’ re supposed to communicate with your classmate.
练习【1】2023年全国新高考I,II卷
假定你是李华，你校外教Ryan要举办口语培训班，将练习口语的所有学生随机挑选两个人分成一组练习，你对此有意见，向外教写一封邮件，内容如下：
1. 说明问题，
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 词数80左右
2. 开头和结尾已经给出。不计入总词数。
Dear Ryan,
I am Lihua, one of your students. ________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【审题分析】
第一步：认真审题
1.审文体：一封建议信（指出问题，提出建议）
2.审时态：一般现在时，一般将来时
3.审对象：写给学校外教Ryan（老师）的一封信，是下级写给上级的信，因此写信措辞语气要委婉有礼貌，表示对老师的尊重。
4.审人称：第二人称、第三人称为主
5.审要点：（1）指出外教Ryan将练习口语的所有学生随机挑选两个人分成一组练习存在的问题；（2）提出建议解决存在的问题。
第二步：篇章布局
第一段：开门见山，指出写信的目的，指出外教Ryan将练习口语的所有学生随机挑选两个人分成一组练习有不妥，想提出建议。
第二段：指出具体存在的问题，并相应提出改善的建议。
第三段：表达希望与期待。
第三步：列出提纲
第四步：成文、修改润色
【参考范文】
Dear Ryan,
I amLi Hua, one of your students. I am so delighted that you create the golden opportunity for us students to practise our spoken English after class. However, it may be ineffective to group the students in pairs randomly. So I am writing to give my advice.
First of all, grouping students in pairs should follow their balanced English ability. It is likely that the English speaking ability of the two partners is extremely imbalanced. As a result, the student who is poor in English has difficulty communicating with the student who is excellent in English, which is not helpful to the improvement of their spoken English. In addition, the students can be grouped in pairs according to their same or similar interest and hobbies. The same interest can promote the communication between them to get along well, which can build up their confidence in speaking English.
Hopefully, you can take my suggestions into consideration. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
练习【2】
假如你是李华，你的朋友Simon写信告诉你他沉迷于打篮球，每天花很多时间打球，结果家庭作业不能准时上交，父母和老师很不满意，要他放弃这个爱好，他很生气、难过。根据下列提示，请你就Simon的问题给他一些有用的建议并给与鼓励：
1. 认真计划好自己的时间
2. 保持学习和爱好之间的平衡
3. 给与鼓励
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Simon,
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Simon,
I was disheartened to hear about the tension between your passion for basketball and your academic duties. However, I believe that with proper time management, you can strike a balance between the two.
It's crucial to prioritize your studies, as they pave the way for your future aspirations. At the same time, your dedication to basketball showcases your commitment and perseverance, qualities that are valuable in any pursuit. I suggest setting aside specific times for practice and homework, ensuring that you allocate your time efficiently.
Remember, success is about making sacrifices and prioritizing. By managing your time effectively, you can excel in both academics and basketball. I have faith in your ability to overcome this challenge and find a harmonious balance.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作架构
建议信是日常生活中最常见的一种文体，是写信人向收信人对某事提出建议或忠告的书信。建议信要简明扼要、目的明确，具有合理性和说服力。具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或to begin/start with, then, later, last but not least等作为连接词依次陈述建议。通常写作结构为：
第一段：表明写作目的：提出建议；
第二段：具体的建议及理由；
第三段：指出采纳建议的好处、表达愿望。
提分必背句式
1、首段常用语
① Knowing that you have trouble in ... after reading your letter, I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.
在读了你的信后，我知道你在......方面有困难,我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/忠告。
② I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on ...
很高兴收到你的来信，你在信中询问我......
2、主体部分常用语
① The following are my suggestions./ My suggestions are as follows.
下面是我的一些建议。/ 我的建议如下。
② In my opinion/As far as I'm concerned/Personally, it would be wise to take the following suggestions
在我看来/就我而言，采取如下行动是明智的。
3、结尾常用语
① I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. / I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you.
我希望你觉得这些建议对你有帮助。/ 我希望我的建议对你有益。
② I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to to, good luck!
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你一切顺利！
【背诵素材】
一、必备话题词汇及表达
1. 想要做某事: would like to do sth.
2. 主动做某事: offer to do sth.
3. 值得做某事: be worth doing sth.
4. 建议做某事: be suggested to do sth.
5. 某事是个好选择: Sth. is a better choice
6. 某事将有用: Sth will be helpful.
7. 做某事是个好主意: It would be a good idea to do sth.
8. 给某人提建议: give someone advice (on...)
9. 做某事有困难: have difficulty doing sth.
10. 如下: as follows
11. 利用: make use of
12. 认为......有用: find ... helpful / useful / beneficial
13. 把......考虑在内: take ... into account/ consideration
14. 得到改善: get improved
15. 依我看来: In my opinion/ As far as I’m concerned
16. 我建议: I suggest that...
/ My suggestion is that ...
17. 如果我是你，我会: If I were you, I would ...
18. 你最好/ 最好不: You had better (not) ...
二、必备话题句型及表达
1. 已收到你寻求......建议的来信。以下是我个人的建议，我希望它们对你有帮助。
I have received your letter asking me some advice / suggestions ...
The following are my personal suggestions, which I hope can be of great help to you.
2. 听到你在......上有困难很难过。但你如果采纳以下建议，情况很容易改善。
I am sorry to hear that you have difficulty doing sth. However, the situation is easy to change if you take the following advice.
3. 对某人而言做......是重要的/必要的/有益的
It’ s + 形容词 / 名词 （important/ necessary / helpful） for sb to do sth.
4. 做某事是重要的/ 有益的/ 好主意。
Doing sth. is +形容词/ 名词（important/ necessary/ helpful/ a good idea / of great importance / of great help）
5. 在你亲自来之前读一些关于这些地方的书是必要的。
Reading some books about these places before you come to see them with your own eyes is necessary for you.
6. 我建议你应该做...
I suggest / recommend that you should ...
7. 我建议你就他的行为和你朋友
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behavior.
8. 在我看来，你最好停止玩电脑游戏，更多地专注于学校和家庭生活。
From my point of view/ As far as I am concerned/ Personally speaking/ In my opinion，you had better quit playing computer game and concentrate more on school and family life.
9. 在我看来，我认为你应该和同学积极沟通。
From my point of view，I think you’ re supposed to communicate with your classmate.
练习【1】2023年全国新高考I,II卷
假定你是李华，你校外教Ryan要举办口语培训班，将练习口语的所有学生随机挑选两个人分成一组练习，你对此有意见，向外教写一封邮件，内容如下：
1. 说明问题，
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 词数80左右
2. 开头和结尾已经给出。不计入总词数。
Dear Ryan,
I am Lihua, one of your students. ________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【审题分析】
第一步：认真审题
1.审文体：一封建议信（指出问题，提出建议）
2.审时态：一般现在时，一般将来时
3.审对象：写给学校外教Ryan（老师）的一封信，是下级写给上级的信，因此写信措辞语气要委婉有礼貌，表示对老师的尊重。
4.审人称：第二人称、第三人称为主
5.审要点：（1）指出外教Ryan将练习口语的所有学生随机挑选两个人分成一组练习存在的问题；（2）提出建议解决存在的问题。
第二步：篇章布局
第一段：开门见山，指出写信的目的，指出外教Ryan将练习口语的所有学生随机挑选两个人分成一组练习有不妥，想提出建议。
第二段：指出具体存在的问题，并相应提出改善的建议。
第三段：表达希望与期待。
第三步：列出提纲
第四步：成文、修改润色
【参考范文】
Dear Ryan,
I amLi Hua, one of your students. I am so delighted that you create the golden opportunity for us students to practise our spoken English after class. However, it may be ineffective to group the students in pairs randomly. So I am writing to give my advice.
First of all, grouping students in pairs should follow their balanced English ability. It is likely that the English speaking ability of the two partners is extremely imbalanced. As a result, the student who is poor in English has difficulty communicating with the student who is excellent in English, which is not helpful to the improvement of their spoken English. In addition, the students can be grouped in pairs according to their same or similar interest and hobbies. The same interest can promote the communication between them to get along well, which can build up their confidence in speaking English.
Hopefully, you can take my suggestions into consideration. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
练习【2】
假如你是李华，你的朋友Simon写信告诉你他沉迷于打篮球，每天花很多时间打球，结果家庭作业不能准时上交，父母和老师很不满意，要他放弃这个爱好，他很生气、难过。根据下列提示，请你就Simon的问题给他一些有用的建议并给与鼓励：
1. 认真计划好自己的时间
2. 保持学习和爱好之间的平衡
3. 给与鼓励
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Simon,
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Simon,
I was disheartened to hear about the tension between your passion for basketball and your academic duties. However, I believe that with proper time management, you can strike a balance between the two.
It's crucial to prioritize your studies, as they pave the way for your future aspirations. At the same time, your dedication to basketball showcases your commitment and perseverance, qualities that are valuable in any pursuit. I suggest setting aside specific times for practice and homework, ensuring that you allocate your time efficiently.
Remember, success is about making sacrifices and prioritizing. By managing your time effectively, you can excel in both academics and basketball. I have faith in your ability to overcome this challenge and find a harmonious balance.
Yours,
Li Hua