应用文---建议信
Part 1 必备表达
1. 征求某人的建议 ask sb for advice/suggestions
2. 在…方面给某人建议 give sb. advice/ suggestions on….
3. 提出一些建议 make/offer some suggestions/advice
4. 接受我的建议 adopt/accept/follow/ take up my advice/ suggestions
5. 在我看来,就我而言 in my opinion/as far as I’m concerned/personally
6. 表达某人的观点 express one’s views/opinions
7. 实用的建议 practical/helpful/useful advice/suggestions
8. 关于 concerning/as to/regarding/with regard to
9. 建议某人做某事 suggest sb. doing sth/advise/recommend sb. to do sth
10.对某人有益 be beneficial/be of benefit to sb.
11.考虑我的建议 take my advice/suggestions into consideration/ account
12.觉得我的建议有益/实用 find my suggestions/advice helpful/practical
13.如下 as follows
14.有了某人的共同努力 with the joint efforts of sb.
15.开阔我们的视野 broaden our horizon
16.掌握英语 master English/ have a good command /knowledge of English
17.意识到 be aware of
18.一个有效的方式 an effective way
19.保持乐观 remain optimistic about
20.记住 keep… in mind
21.振奋某人的精神 lift one’s spirits
22.习惯于这个现象 get used/ accustomed to the phenomenon
23.对…有坏影响 have a bad effect/ influence on
24.制定具体的制度 set up specific rules
25.培养好的习惯 develop good habits
26.涵括各种各样的… cover a wide variety of
Part 2 必备句型
1.Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.
很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.
2.I'm writing to you to present what I think on…
我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法,以吸引更多顾客。
I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients(顾客).
3.You’ve asked me for advice with regard to/ regarding/concerning…
关于…你向我征求建议,在此,我尽量提出一些建议性的建议。
You’ve asked me for advice with regard to/ regarding/concerning…and I’ll try to make some constructive suggestions.
4.it would be wise to take the following action.
在我看来,采取如下行动是明智的。
In my opinion/ As far as I’m concerned/Personally, it would be wise to take the following action.
5.it would be beneficial/of benefit if…
我认为如果你…,将会受益
I think it would be beneficial/of benefit if you…
6.I will be glad if…
如果你能认真考虑我的建议我将会非常高兴。
I will be glad if you take my advice into account/consideration.
my suggestions/advice will be beneficial/of benefit to you.
我希望我的建议对你有益。
I do hope that my suggestions/advice will be beneficial/of benefit to you.
Part 3范文赏析
(1)你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行, 有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信, 内容包括:
1.你建议的线路;2.你的理由;3.你的祝愿。
Dear Jim,
I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
Hope you’ll have a good time in China.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
(2)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。 (1) 参加中文学习班;(2) 看中文书刊、电视;(3) 学唱中文歌曲;(4) 交中国朋友。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions which I hope will be of some help to you.
To begin with, it is a good idea to take a Chinese course, where you can follow the teacher and get help from your classmates. Next, reading some Chinese books and magazines will help you to improve your reading ability. You can also watch some Chinese programs on TV, which will improve your listening ability. To make sure that learning Chinese isn’t too dull, it would be a good idea to learn to sing some Chinese songs. Last but not least, if possible, make some Chinese friends, so that you can learn languages from each other.
I hope you will find my suggestions beneficial and make great progress in Chinese. Looking forward to receiving your letter written in Chinese.
Best wishes.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
(3)假如你是李华,收到澳大利亚表弟(Harry)的电子邮件,邮件中提到他父母想看他的微信朋友圈(WeChat Moments),他对是否同意和父母分享微信感到犹豫。请你给他回信,要点如下:1. 说明赞成或反对的观点;2. 主要理由;3. 提出个人的建议。
Dear Harry,
How surprised and pleased to receive your email today! You told me that your parents asked to see your WeChat Moments and that you’re hesitating about whether to share it with them. As I see it, it’s understandable for your parents to do so.
Blood is thicker than water. Parents are our most believable persons in the world. As parents, they have responsibility to make sure we make right friends and won’t be harmed or misled by bad information. As teenagers, we do need parents’ guidance, especially in terms of social experience. Moreover, sharing your Moments will bring your whole family closer to each other. Therefore, you ‘d better give them a place in your own world so that you can communicate easily.
Please remember me to your parents.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
(4) 为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下:
1).表示理解并给予安慰;2).提出建议并说明理由。
Dear Worried,
I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, I quite understand how you are feeling now and there is no need to worry about it so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips.
First of all, talk to someone you trust about the trouble you’re faced with, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. Last but not least, remain optimistic about your future. Having a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.
I hope my suggestions will be of great benefit to you and you'll soon become calmer and better.
Yours,
Jamie
Part 4随堂练习
假如你是李华,近年来很多大城市交通拥堵严重,影响了人们的生活和经济发展,请针对此现状用英语给英语报社写封信,谈谈你的看法和建议。
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书写要求:1.不连笔 2.横竖笔直,圆饱满 3.所有字母朝一个方向保持平行 4.大小一致
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Dear editor,
I’m writing to you to talk about the heavy traffic. Recent years has seen great traffic congestion in big cities negatively influencing people's life and economic development. As for it, I'd like to share my opinions and provide some possible solutions.
To my mind, this issue was mainly caused by big cities' dense population which leaves little space for rapidly growing vehicles to travel through. Besides, heavy traffic arose partly because of poor traffic awareness of citizens', drivers and pedestrians included. Consequently, governments are supposed to keep control of population moving to big cities and encourage non-local working population to make their living in their hometown, relieving city's stress to some extent and making contributions to a thrived hometown. Additionally, efforts must be made to regulate citizens' travelling habits. Legislation and education working jointly makes a difference.
I do hope my suggestions will be taken.
Yours,
Jamie