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Unit 2 Neighbours 单元写作指导与演练
单元写作 早知道 写 作 任 务 本单元的话题是“社区环境与邻里关系”。学生主要围绕“社区生活”进行写作。 在具体的写作中,学生应做到以下几点: 1.能描述自己生活的社区的环境和基础设施; 2.能描述一些社区活动及自己的感受; 3.能为社区的发展提供一些建议。
常 用 表 达 常用词汇 1.neighbour 邻居 4.helpful 有用的 7.find 找到 10.manager 经理 13.broken 损坏的 2.neighbourhood 街区;居民区 5.problem 问题,难题 8.lucky 幸运的 11.volunteer 志愿者 14.fix 修理 3.community 社区 6.computer 计算机 9.company 公司 12.share 分享 15.police station 警察局
16.do some shopping/go shopping 购物 18.office worker 办公室职员 20.at the weekend 在周末 22.help sb with sth 帮助某人解决某种困难 munity centre 社区中心 19.all kinds of 各种各样的 21.be ready to...准备……
常用句子 1.There is something wrong with my alarm clock.我的闹钟出问题了。 2.They often meet at the community centre and share their different skills.他们经常在社 区中心集合,并和大家分享各自的一技之长。 3.They help us with all kinds of problems.他们帮助我们解决各种各样的问题。 4.They often visit the old people and do some shopping for them.他们经常拜访老人, 并 为他们买一些东西。 5.You’re lucky to live in a family like that.你生活在这样的家庭很幸运。 6.Don’t worry about what to wear to the party.不要为聚会穿什么而担心。 7.He will welcome the visitors like you.他会很欢迎像你们这样的拜访者。 8.I’m happy to share my story.我很高兴能分享我的故事。 9.Please look at the notice board in the playground.请看一下学校操场上的公告栏。 10.Kathy has to go to school at eleven.凯西 11 点要去学校。
请以“My Neighbourhood”为题，写一篇 50～80 词的短文，可以根据你的社区的实际情况，也可以发挥
想象力。
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【写作框架设计】
【范文赏读】
My Neighbourhood I'm living in a beautiful and quiet neighbourhood, and I have been living here for years. There's a beautiful park near the neighbourhood. I always take a walk in it. And there's a shop in our neighbourhood, so it's very convenient for us to buy things. The best thing is that my neighbours are very friendly. I love my neighbourhood very much. ①首先介绍了社区的总体情况 ②其次介绍了社区的具体情况及邻居 的优秀品质 ③写出自己的感受
一
俗话说“远亲不如近邻” ，邻居对我们的生活非常重要，请以“Good neighbours”为题，用英文写一篇 80 字的
短文。 (开头已给出，不计入总字数)
要点如下：
1. 我们有许多乐于助人的邻居；
2. 当我们遇到困难（meet with some difficulties），志愿者们会帮我们解决各种问题，如： （至少举两
例说明）；
3. 邻居应当友好相处（get on well with each other），互相帮助；
4. 我的邻居 Kitty 与我同龄， 但我们不在同一个班， 她擅长数学， 我擅长英语， 我们经常在学习上相互帮助。
5. 我们住在这个街区的感受。
There is an old saying, “Neighbour is better than a distant relative”. A good neighbour is important in our life.
There is an old saying, “Neighbour is better than a distant relative”. A good neighbour is important in our life.
We all have many helpful neighbours. We often meet with difficulties. When we have good neighbours, they will
always come to help us. For example, people will get help if there is something wrong with their washing machine or fridge. And we can fine volunteers to help us with our homework. Neighbours should get on well with each other
and help each other.
My neighbour Kitty and I are of the same age, but we are not in the same class. In the evening we always do
homework together. She is good at maths and I am good at English. So we often help each other.
It’s lucky for us to live in a neighbourhood.
【详解】[总体分析]
。题材：本文是一篇材料作文，所需要点已经给出；
②时态： 一般现在时；
③提示：考生应注意不要遗漏要点，并适当补充发挥举例，使用正确的词汇和句型，注意行文逻辑和文章
的连贯性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，以“远亲不如近邻” 引出下文关于好邻居的重要；
第二步，结合所给提示要点，举例说明邻居互相帮助的情况，以及说明邻居之间的相处应该是互相帮助的；
第三步，阐述要点中和 Kitty 的例子，最后总结文章，表示“很幸运在同一个社区”。
[亮点词汇]
①meet with difficulties 遇到困难
②something wrong with……有问题
③help sb with sth 帮助某人某事
④be good at 擅长
[高分句型]
①When we have good neighbours, they will always come to help us.（when 引导的时间状语从句）
②People will get help if there is something wrong with their washing machine or fridge. （if 引导的条件状语从
句）
二
假如你是西蒙，住在阳光社区。在那里你结识了一个新邻居，请你根据下面的提示以“My neighbour”为题，
写一篇英语短文。
提示：
（1）我的新邻居叫 Mary，她住在我的隔壁，她住在九楼。
（2）她是一名经理，她在一家离她家很远的饭店工作。每天坐公共汽车上班要花她一个小时。
（3）她热心而且乐于助人。每天她都很忙，经常帮助人们解决各种难题。
（4）我们都喜欢她。我们有她这样的好邻居真是太幸运了。
要求：
（1）包括信息中提及的所有内容，语句通顺，条理清楚。
（2）字数 70 个词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数），可适当加以发挥。
My new neighbour
I have a new neighbour called Mary.
My new neighbour
I have a new neighbour called Mary. She lives next door to me. She lives on the ninth floor. She is a manager.
She works in a restaurant far from her home. It takes her an hour to go to work by bus every day. She is
warm-hearted and helpful. She is very busy every day and often helps people solve all kinds of problems. We all
like her. We are so lucky to have a good neighbour like her.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据提示介绍新邻居的个人信息；
第二步，表明你们大家都喜欢这个新邻居。
[亮点词汇]
①next door 隔壁②far from 远离③help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①It takes her an hour to go to work by bus everyday. （表示“花费” 的固定句型）
②She is very busy every day and often helps people solve all kinds of problems. （and 连接两个并列句子）
三
假如你是 Amy，你的美国朋友 Mike 来信向你询问你的社区情况。请根据以下提示， 写一封电子邮件回复他。
社区情 况 社区很大，位于市中心；社区里有很多志愿者，能帮助我解决各种各样的问题， （至少举一 个例子）
周围环 境 社区周围设备齐全，有超市、餐馆、学校、医院等； 离社区 1 公里处有一个公园， （至少举一个例子）
房子概 况 社区里有 20 多栋建筑；每栋有 9 层；住在 6 楼
内部设 施 有一个客厅、 一个厨房、 一间浴室和 3 间卧室。 最爱…… ，因为 …… （至少两句）
要求： 1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
3. 词数：不少于 100 词（开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Mike,
I’d like to tell you something about my neighbour.
Yours,
Amy
Dear Mike,
I’d like to tell you something about my neighbour.
My neighbourhood is large and centrally located. There are many volunteers in it. They are friendly to each other, and they often help us solve all kinds of problems. Last week, my computer broke down. I asked for help. I
didn’t expect much, but the result was unexpected, thanks to the volunteers there.
The neighbourhood is well equipped with supermarkets, restaurants, schools, hospitals, etc. There is even a
park near it. We can go for a walk and run slowly in the park. We all like it.
There are more than 20 buildings in the neighbourhood, each of which has nine floors and I live on the sixth
floor. Every home is equipped with a living room, a kitchen, a bathroom and three bedrooms. I like the kitchen best
because my mum often makes delicious food there.
Yours,
Amy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料已给出，写作时注意表述清晰，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头；
第二步，介绍社区情况；
第三步，介绍周围环境；
第四步，介绍房子概况和内部设施，以及自己的想法。
[亮点词汇]
①be centrally located 位于市中心
②all kinds of 各种各样
③break down 崩溃
④unexpected 出乎意料的
⑤thanks to 多亏
⑥be equipped with 装备
[高分句型]
①I didn’t expect much, but the result was unexpected, thanks to the volunteers there. ut 连接表转折关系的并列
句）
②There are more than 20 buildings in the neighbourhood, each of which has nine floors and I live on the sixth
floor.（which 引导限制性定语从句）
③I like the kitchen best because my mum often makes delicious food there.（because 引导原因状语从句）
四
习近平总书记在党的二十大报告中指出“打造宜居、韧性、智慧城市”。请以“My Dream Neighbourhood”为主
题，给校刊投稿。
1. What’s around your dream neighbourhood
2. What are your dream neighbours like
3. What do you think of your life in your dream neighbourhood
要求： 1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2.必须包含所给提示，并做适当发挥；
3.行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名 ；
4.词数 80 左右。（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
My Dream Neighbourhood
I’m glad to share my ideas about my dream neighbourhood.
This is my dream neighbourhood, do you like it
My Dream Neighbourhood
I’m glad to share my ideas about my dream neighbourhood.
My dream neighbourhood must be clean. There are many flowers and trees around it so that we can breathe
the fresh air. There is a big square in it for people to exercise.
The neighbours here are very friendly and helpful. They often help each other. For example, young people
often help old people take out the rubbish. I think the life here is great. I not only like the environment here but also
like the people here.
This is my dream neighbourhood, do you like it
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，不要遗漏题干要点，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接书信开头，引出话题；
第二步，详细地介绍自己理想社区的环境、人与人的关系及自己的感受；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①so that 以致于
②take out the rubbish 扔垃圾
[高分句型]
I not only like the environment here but also like the people here. (not only...but also 结构)
单元写作 早知道 写 作 任 务 本单元的话题是“社区环境与邻里关系”。学生主要围绕“社区生活”进行写作。 在具体的写作中,学生应做到以下几点: 1.能描述自己生活的社区的环境和基础设施; 2.能描述一些社区活动及自己的感受; 3.能为社区的发展提供一些建议。
常 用 表 达 常用词汇 1.neighbour 邻居 4.helpful 有用的 7.find 找到 10.manager 经理 13.broken 损坏的 2.neighbourhood 街区;居民区 5.problem 问题,难题 8.lucky 幸运的 11.volunteer 志愿者 14.fix 修理 3.community 社区 6.computer 计算机 9.company 公司 12.share 分享 15.police station 警察局
16.do some shopping/go shopping 购物 18.office worker 办公室职员 20.at the weekend 在周末 22.help sb with sth 帮助某人解决某种困难 munity centre 社区中心 19.all kinds of 各种各样的 21.be ready to...准备……
常用句子 1.There is something wrong with my alarm clock.我的闹钟出问题了。 2.They often meet at the community centre and share their different skills.他们经常在社 区中心集合,并和大家分享各自的一技之长。 3.They help us with all kinds of problems.他们帮助我们解决各种各样的问题。 4.They often visit the old people and do some shopping for them.他们经常拜访老人, 并 为他们买一些东西。 5.You’re lucky to live in a family like that.你生活在这样的家庭很幸运。 6.Don’t worry about what to wear to the party.不要为聚会穿什么而担心。 7.He will welcome the visitors like you.他会很欢迎像你们这样的拜访者。 8.I’m happy to share my story.我很高兴能分享我的故事。 9.Please look at the notice board in the playground.请看一下学校操场上的公告栏。 10.Kathy has to go to school at eleven.凯西 11 点要去学校。
请以“My Neighbourhood”为题，写一篇 50～80 词的短文，可以根据你的社区的实际情况，也可以发挥
想象力。
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【写作框架设计】
【范文赏读】
My Neighbourhood I'm living in a beautiful and quiet neighbourhood, and I have been living here for years. There's a beautiful park near the neighbourhood. I always take a walk in it. And there's a shop in our neighbourhood, so it's very convenient for us to buy things. The best thing is that my neighbours are very friendly. I love my neighbourhood very much. ①首先介绍了社区的总体情况 ②其次介绍了社区的具体情况及邻居 的优秀品质 ③写出自己的感受
一
俗话说“远亲不如近邻” ，邻居对我们的生活非常重要，请以“Good neighbours”为题，用英文写一篇 80 字的
短文。 (开头已给出，不计入总字数)
要点如下：
1. 我们有许多乐于助人的邻居；
2. 当我们遇到困难（meet with some difficulties），志愿者们会帮我们解决各种问题，如： （至少举两
例说明）；
3. 邻居应当友好相处（get on well with each other），互相帮助；
4. 我的邻居 Kitty 与我同龄， 但我们不在同一个班， 她擅长数学， 我擅长英语， 我们经常在学习上相互帮助。
5. 我们住在这个街区的感受。
There is an old saying, “Neighbour is better than a distant relative”. A good neighbour is important in our life.
There is an old saying, “Neighbour is better than a distant relative”. A good neighbour is important in our life.
We all have many helpful neighbours. We often meet with difficulties. When we have good neighbours, they will
always come to help us. For example, people will get help if there is something wrong with their washing machine or fridge. And we can fine volunteers to help us with our homework. Neighbours should get on well with each other
and help each other.
My neighbour Kitty and I are of the same age, but we are not in the same class. In the evening we always do
homework together. She is good at maths and I am good at English. So we often help each other.
It’s lucky for us to live in a neighbourhood.
【详解】[总体分析]
。题材：本文是一篇材料作文，所需要点已经给出；
②时态： 一般现在时；
③提示：考生应注意不要遗漏要点，并适当补充发挥举例，使用正确的词汇和句型，注意行文逻辑和文章
的连贯性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，以“远亲不如近邻” 引出下文关于好邻居的重要；
第二步，结合所给提示要点，举例说明邻居互相帮助的情况，以及说明邻居之间的相处应该是互相帮助的；
第三步，阐述要点中和 Kitty 的例子，最后总结文章，表示“很幸运在同一个社区”。
[亮点词汇]
①meet with difficulties 遇到困难
②something wrong with……有问题
③help sb with sth 帮助某人某事
④be good at 擅长
[高分句型]
①When we have good neighbours, they will always come to help us.（when 引导的时间状语从句）
②People will get help if there is something wrong with their washing machine or fridge. （if 引导的条件状语从
句）
二
假如你是西蒙，住在阳光社区。在那里你结识了一个新邻居，请你根据下面的提示以“My neighbour”为题，
写一篇英语短文。
提示：
（1）我的新邻居叫 Mary，她住在我的隔壁，她住在九楼。
（2）她是一名经理，她在一家离她家很远的饭店工作。每天坐公共汽车上班要花她一个小时。
（3）她热心而且乐于助人。每天她都很忙，经常帮助人们解决各种难题。
（4）我们都喜欢她。我们有她这样的好邻居真是太幸运了。
要求：
（1）包括信息中提及的所有内容，语句通顺，条理清楚。
（2）字数 70 个词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数），可适当加以发挥。
My new neighbour
I have a new neighbour called Mary.
My new neighbour
I have a new neighbour called Mary. She lives next door to me. She lives on the ninth floor. She is a manager.
She works in a restaurant far from her home. It takes her an hour to go to work by bus every day. She is
warm-hearted and helpful. She is very busy every day and often helps people solve all kinds of problems. We all
like her. We are so lucky to have a good neighbour like her.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据提示介绍新邻居的个人信息；
第二步，表明你们大家都喜欢这个新邻居。
[亮点词汇]
①next door 隔壁②far from 远离③help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①It takes her an hour to go to work by bus everyday. （表示“花费” 的固定句型）
②She is very busy every day and often helps people solve all kinds of problems. （and 连接两个并列句子）
三
假如你是 Amy，你的美国朋友 Mike 来信向你询问你的社区情况。请根据以下提示， 写一封电子邮件回复他。
社区情 况 社区很大，位于市中心；社区里有很多志愿者，能帮助我解决各种各样的问题， （至少举一 个例子）
周围环 境 社区周围设备齐全，有超市、餐馆、学校、医院等； 离社区 1 公里处有一个公园， （至少举一个例子）
房子概 况 社区里有 20 多栋建筑；每栋有 9 层；住在 6 楼
内部设 施 有一个客厅、 一个厨房、 一间浴室和 3 间卧室。 最爱…… ，因为 …… （至少两句）
要求： 1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
3. 词数：不少于 100 词（开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Mike,
I’d like to tell you something about my neighbour.
Yours,
Amy
Dear Mike,
I’d like to tell you something about my neighbour.
My neighbourhood is large and centrally located. There are many volunteers in it. They are friendly to each other, and they often help us solve all kinds of problems. Last week, my computer broke down. I asked for help. I
didn’t expect much, but the result was unexpected, thanks to the volunteers there.
The neighbourhood is well equipped with supermarkets, restaurants, schools, hospitals, etc. There is even a
park near it. We can go for a walk and run slowly in the park. We all like it.
There are more than 20 buildings in the neighbourhood, each of which has nine floors and I live on the sixth
floor. Every home is equipped with a living room, a kitchen, a bathroom and three bedrooms. I like the kitchen best
because my mum often makes delicious food there.
Yours,
Amy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料已给出，写作时注意表述清晰，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头；
第二步，介绍社区情况；
第三步，介绍周围环境；
第四步，介绍房子概况和内部设施，以及自己的想法。
[亮点词汇]
①be centrally located 位于市中心
②all kinds of 各种各样
③break down 崩溃
④unexpected 出乎意料的
⑤thanks to 多亏
⑥be equipped with 装备
[高分句型]
①I didn’t expect much, but the result was unexpected, thanks to the volunteers there. ut 连接表转折关系的并列
句）
②There are more than 20 buildings in the neighbourhood, each of which has nine floors and I live on the sixth
floor.（which 引导限制性定语从句）
③I like the kitchen best because my mum often makes delicious food there.（because 引导原因状语从句）
四
习近平总书记在党的二十大报告中指出“打造宜居、韧性、智慧城市”。请以“My Dream Neighbourhood”为主
题，给校刊投稿。
1. What’s around your dream neighbourhood
2. What are your dream neighbours like
3. What do you think of your life in your dream neighbourhood
要求： 1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2.必须包含所给提示，并做适当发挥；
3.行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名 ；
4.词数 80 左右。（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
My Dream Neighbourhood
I’m glad to share my ideas about my dream neighbourhood.
This is my dream neighbourhood, do you like it
My Dream Neighbourhood
I’m glad to share my ideas about my dream neighbourhood.
My dream neighbourhood must be clean. There are many flowers and trees around it so that we can breathe
the fresh air. There is a big square in it for people to exercise.
The neighbours here are very friendly and helpful. They often help each other. For example, young people
often help old people take out the rubbish. I think the life here is great. I not only like the environment here but also
like the people here.
This is my dream neighbourhood, do you like it
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，不要遗漏题干要点，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接书信开头，引出话题；
第二步，详细地介绍自己理想社区的环境、人与人的关系及自己的感受；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①so that 以致于
②take out the rubbish 扔垃圾
[高分句型]
I not only like the environment here but also like the people here. (not only...but also 结构)