Unit 5 Amazing things.教考衔接直击中考（选做）-2023-2024学年七年级下册英语单元写作深度指导（牛津译林版）
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1. 感觉 feeling
3. 欢呼 cheer
5. 哭 cry
7. 羞耻；惭愧 shame
9. 自豪 pride
11. 令人惊奇的 surprising
13. 震惊 shock
15. 遗憾；怜悯 pity
17. 悲伤的 sad
19. 难堪的 embarrassed
经历与感受
2. 担心 worry
4. 笑 laugh
6. 表扬；赞扬 praise
8. 幸福；快乐 happiness
10. 自豪的 proud
12. 惊奇的 surprised
14. 害怕 fear
16. 烦闷的 bored
18. 失望的 upset
20. 生气的 angry
21. 兴奋的 excited
22. 高兴的；快乐的 glad/happy/pleased/enjoyable
23. 成功的 successful 24. 舒服的 comfortable
25. 孤独的 lonely 26. 疯的；生气的 mad
27. 紧张的 nervous 28. 奇怪的 strange
29. 感到遗憾；懊悔 regret 30. 害怕的 afraid
31. 担心的 worried 32. 焦虑的 anxious
33. 疲倦的 tired 34. 意识 sense
35. 期待 expect 36. 想象 imagine
1. After three years' study, I feel tired but very happy.
2. I want to tell you that many students have the same problems as yours.
3. However, it turned out to be a happy experience because later...
4. You have to believe in yourself. That's the secret of success.
5. With your help, I felt much more confident to fight against the difficulties.
6. I really appreciate what you have done for me.
7. Every time I think of my childhood, the sweet memories always make me smile.
8. He expressed his thanks to the people who saved him.
9. We are all with you forever.
10. When life gives you a hundred reasons to cry, show life that you have a thousand reasons to smile.
(2023 年安徽省)
假定你是李辉，你制作的关于家乡变化的海报在某英文网站 展示并获得好评。请结合下面图示信息，用英
语写一篇短文，向该网站浏览者简述你的制作经历。
注意：
1.短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3.词数 80 左右(短文题目与首句已为你写好，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇： poster(n.海报)；design(v.& n.设计)
My Experience of Making a Poster
Last week, I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown.
一、写什么 ——细审题，列要点
1.体裁：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文。
2.时态：以一般过去时为主。
3.提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏图示信息中的各个要
点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
二、怎么写——遣词句，重结构
第一步，承接所给开头，介绍制作海报的目的： The purpose of making it...
第二步，具体阐述制作海报的过程： Firstly, ... ； Then, ... ；Finally, ...
第三步，表达从这次经历中学到的东西以及自己的感悟： This experience helps me know...
三、参考词汇
rapid development 快速发展 living conditions 生活条件
sort the information 分类信息 lead a better life 过上更好的生活
四、参考句型
1.Finally, I sorted the information that I had learned and designed a poster with relevant pictures attached .(that 引
导的定语从句)
2.With its development, people have led better lives and the environment has been improved .(现在完成时的被动
语态)
参考范文：
My Experience of Making a Poster
Last week, I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown.
The purpose of making it is to show the rapid development of my hometown in recent years.Firstly, I asked my grandparents about their past living conditions.Then, I found some old photos online to compare the past and present of my hometown.Finally, I sorted the information that I had learned and designed a poster with relevant
pictures attached.
亲爱的同学，你的生活中有烦恼吗？你有学习方面的压力吗？那我们应该如何正确面对烦恼及有效缓 解压力呢？请根据下列图表信息，以“How to Deal with My Stress”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容包括：你有
何烦恼/压力、你是怎样缓解它们的、呼吁同学们正确面对烦恼及压力。
提示： 1. 短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数不少于 80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Deal with My Stress
Problems_and_stress_are_normal_in_our_life. As a teenager, I have some problems and stress with my schoolwork. I have too much homework every day and I often feel very tired. Then, how can I deal with so much
stress The following are some of my solutions.
To start with, I take more exercise. Sports can help me have a healthier body and study better. What's more, I talk with my teachers, parents and friends when I face problems. They may give me some useful advice. Last but
not least, I listen to music and read books. They're good ways to relax myself.
All in all, we should not be afraid of the stress around us. Instead, we should be optimistic and brave to face
our stress and learn to relax ourselves.
（2023·新疆 · 中考真题）
每个人的成长， 都经历过很多次尝试， 有成功、有失败、有欣喜、有泪水……请以“My First Try”为题，
用英语写一篇短文，记录你成长中的第一次尝试。
要求： 1.语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3.词数 80—120。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My First Try
When it comes to the topic of “My First Try”,
【答案】例文：
My First Try
When it comes to the topic of “My First Try”, I’ll never forget the meaningful experience I had in Grade 7.
It was my first time to be a volunteer. As a member of Animal Helpers, I volunteered to be responsible for washing,
feeding and playing with homeless dogs. At the same time, I took some photos of them and made posters online to call on more people to give a hand. Through my efforts, over eight dogs were lucky to find their new homes. When
I saw them taken good care of and they brought the people much fun, I got such a strong feeling of pride.
I realize that each life is important and the tiny things I do can make a difference.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：要求“My First Try”为题，讲述自己成长中的第一次尝试，注意描述清楚细节，用词要准确，语句
要通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，讲述自己第一的尝试是在什么时候；
第二步，具体介绍第一次尝试做的事情，以及自己的感受；
第三步，书写结语。阐述自己的领悟。
[亮点词汇]
①volunteer to do sth 志愿做某事
②be responsible for 负责
③call on 号召
④take good care of 好好照顾
[高分句型]
①When I saw them taken good care of and they brought the people much fun. (when 引导的时间状语从句)
②I realize that each life is important and the tiny things I do can make a difference. (宾语从句)
3. 欢呼 cheer
5. 哭 cry
7. 羞耻；惭愧 shame
9. 自豪 pride
11. 令人惊奇的 surprising
13. 震惊 shock
15. 遗憾；怜悯 pity
17. 悲伤的 sad
19. 难堪的 embarrassed
经历与感受
2. 担心 worry
4. 笑 laugh
6. 表扬；赞扬 praise
8. 幸福；快乐 happiness
10. 自豪的 proud
12. 惊奇的 surprised
14. 害怕 fear
16. 烦闷的 bored
18. 失望的 upset
20. 生气的 angry
21. 兴奋的 excited
22. 高兴的；快乐的 glad/happy/pleased/enjoyable
23. 成功的 successful 24. 舒服的 comfortable
25. 孤独的 lonely 26. 疯的；生气的 mad
27. 紧张的 nervous 28. 奇怪的 strange
29. 感到遗憾；懊悔 regret 30. 害怕的 afraid
31. 担心的 worried 32. 焦虑的 anxious
33. 疲倦的 tired 34. 意识 sense
35. 期待 expect 36. 想象 imagine
1. After three years' study, I feel tired but very happy.
2. I want to tell you that many students have the same problems as yours.
3. However, it turned out to be a happy experience because later...
4. You have to believe in yourself. That's the secret of success.
5. With your help, I felt much more confident to fight against the difficulties.
6. I really appreciate what you have done for me.
7. Every time I think of my childhood, the sweet memories always make me smile.
8. He expressed his thanks to the people who saved him.
9. We are all with you forever.
10. When life gives you a hundred reasons to cry, show life that you have a thousand reasons to smile.
(2023 年安徽省)
假定你是李辉，你制作的关于家乡变化的海报在某英文网站 展示并获得好评。请结合下面图示信息，用英
语写一篇短文，向该网站浏览者简述你的制作经历。
注意：
1.短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3.词数 80 左右(短文题目与首句已为你写好，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇： poster(n.海报)；design(v.& n.设计)
My Experience of Making a Poster
Last week, I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown.
一、写什么 ——细审题，列要点
1.体裁：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文。
2.时态：以一般过去时为主。
3.提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏图示信息中的各个要
点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
二、怎么写——遣词句，重结构
第一步，承接所给开头，介绍制作海报的目的： The purpose of making it...
第二步，具体阐述制作海报的过程： Firstly, ... ； Then, ... ；Finally, ...
第三步，表达从这次经历中学到的东西以及自己的感悟： This experience helps me know...
三、参考词汇
rapid development 快速发展 living conditions 生活条件
sort the information 分类信息 lead a better life 过上更好的生活
四、参考句型
1.Finally, I sorted the information that I had learned and designed a poster with relevant pictures attached .(that 引
导的定语从句)
2.With its development, people have led better lives and the environment has been improved .(现在完成时的被动
语态)
参考范文：
My Experience of Making a Poster
Last week, I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown.
The purpose of making it is to show the rapid development of my hometown in recent years.Firstly, I asked my grandparents about their past living conditions.Then, I found some old photos online to compare the past and present of my hometown.Finally, I sorted the information that I had learned and designed a poster with relevant
pictures attached.
亲爱的同学，你的生活中有烦恼吗？你有学习方面的压力吗？那我们应该如何正确面对烦恼及有效缓 解压力呢？请根据下列图表信息，以“How to Deal with My Stress”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容包括：你有
何烦恼/压力、你是怎样缓解它们的、呼吁同学们正确面对烦恼及压力。
提示： 1. 短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数不少于 80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Deal with My Stress
Problems_and_stress_are_normal_in_our_life. As a teenager, I have some problems and stress with my schoolwork. I have too much homework every day and I often feel very tired. Then, how can I deal with so much
stress The following are some of my solutions.
To start with, I take more exercise. Sports can help me have a healthier body and study better. What's more, I talk with my teachers, parents and friends when I face problems. They may give me some useful advice. Last but
not least, I listen to music and read books. They're good ways to relax myself.
All in all, we should not be afraid of the stress around us. Instead, we should be optimistic and brave to face
our stress and learn to relax ourselves.
（2023·新疆 · 中考真题）
每个人的成长， 都经历过很多次尝试， 有成功、有失败、有欣喜、有泪水……请以“My First Try”为题，
用英语写一篇短文，记录你成长中的第一次尝试。
要求： 1.语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3.词数 80—120。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My First Try
When it comes to the topic of “My First Try”,
【答案】例文：
My First Try
When it comes to the topic of “My First Try”, I’ll never forget the meaningful experience I had in Grade 7.
It was my first time to be a volunteer. As a member of Animal Helpers, I volunteered to be responsible for washing,
feeding and playing with homeless dogs. At the same time, I took some photos of them and made posters online to call on more people to give a hand. Through my efforts, over eight dogs were lucky to find their new homes. When
I saw them taken good care of and they brought the people much fun, I got such a strong feeling of pride.
I realize that each life is important and the tiny things I do can make a difference.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：要求“My First Try”为题，讲述自己成长中的第一次尝试，注意描述清楚细节，用词要准确，语句
要通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，讲述自己第一的尝试是在什么时候；
第二步，具体介绍第一次尝试做的事情，以及自己的感受；
第三步，书写结语。阐述自己的领悟。
[亮点词汇]
①volunteer to do sth 志愿做某事
②be responsible for 负责
③call on 号召
④take good care of 好好照顾
[高分句型]
①When I saw them taken good care of and they brought the people much fun. (when 引导的时间状语从句)
②I realize that each life is important and the tiny things I do can make a difference. (宾语从句)