(共13张PPT)
Unit5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came
Section B 3a-Self Check
Lead in
There are many
important events
that I will never
forget.
Lead in
Event：
the lockdown of Wuhan
When：
on February 23rd,2020
Where：
in Wuhan, Hubei
What：
I was watching TV.
How：
At first, I couldn’t believe it.
Then I felt scared and helpless.
What events do you remember well I remember…
What about you
Lead in
What were you doing when you heard the news
When I heard the news, I was________________________________.
I felt__________________________________________________.
on May 22 ,2021
on November 30,2022
Pre-writing
How to talk about an unforgettable event in the past
What was the event
When did it happen
Where was the event
What were you doing
What were your friends doing
Why was it important
Why do you remember this event
Event
Time
Place
Activities
Activities
Reasons
Reasons
Para.1
Introduction
Para.2
Details
Para.3
Reasons
Pre-writing
Try to write an outline of your article
Para.1
Introduction
First,write about the event（ when and where it happended）.
An important thing that I remember well was ___________. It happened in/ on_____ at/in _____.
Para.2
Details
When I heard the news of this event/ When this event happened, I was ______.My friends were________.
Next,write about what you and some of your friends were doing when this event happened.
Para.3
Reasons
Then, write about
why this event was important.
This event is very important to me because_______./ I remember this event well because____________.
3b
While-writing
写
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记叙文
第一人称
一般过去时
过去进行时
体裁
人称
时态
审题
（三审）
While-writing
写
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指
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What was the event
When did it happen
Where was the event
What were you doing
What were others doing
Why was it important
Time
Place
Activities
Activities
Reasons
Why do you remember this event
Event
Reasons
On May 22, 2021.
Yuan Longping passed away.
In Changsha
I was reading books.
My parents were cooking lunch.
Yuan Longping spend all his life helping farmers grow rice.
He is such a great hero that we will remember him forever.
People often remember what they were doing when they heard the news of important news in history.An important event that I remember well was that the great man Yuan Longping passed away in Changsha on May22,2021.
When I heard the news,I was reading books while my parents were making lunch. We were completely shocked and thought it was unbelievable. Later, we saw the report on the Internet. All of us felt very sad and finished the rest of lunch in silence. On hearing the news, hundreds of people came to the hospital in Changsha to see him off and cried.
As we all know,Yuan Longping spent all his life helping farmers grow rice, he is such a great hero that we will remember him forever.
As a teenager, I will pass on his spirit and try my best to build our country.
Time
Event
Place
Activities
Reasons
While-writing
写
作
指
导
What was the event
When did it happen
Where was the event
What were you doing
What were friends doing
Why was it important
Why do you remember this event
On Spring Festival in 2020
The lockdown of the county of Zigui
Zigui
I was watching spring gala [ ɡɑ l (春晚).
Lucy were sleeping.
Many people were losing their
lives because of the virus[ va r s].
We felt scared and we had to stay at home until the virus went away.
An important event that I remember well was the lockdown of the county of Zigui. It happened at 12 o’clock in the midnight on Spring Festival in 2020.
When I heard the news of this event, I was watching Spring Gala with my family，we all felt scared and realized how dangerous it is! We were in silent for a long time after hearing the news. I called my friend Lucy. She was sleeping at that time, after hearing the news， she was completely shocked!
This event is very unforgettable for everybody because many people were losing their lives and we can’t spend Spring Festival as usual. I remember this event well because we had to stay at home all the time until the virus went away. Chinese people were working together to fight against the virus and it brought our Chinese people closer together.
Self Check
1. Fill in the blanks with when or while.
1. ______ I was walking home from school, I saw a strange light in the sky.
But ______ I pointed it out to my friend, it went away.
2. ______ I told my older brother about the stange light in the sky, he just
laughed and didn't believe me.
3. _______my brother was laughing, the television news reported that other
people had seen the light as well.
While
when
When
While
指出
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Self Check
2. Fill in the blanks with the correct forms of the words in brackets.
When I ____ (be) in the sixth grade, I ______ (join) a piano competition. I ________ (practice) for four hours every day and my piano teacher _____ (come) three times a week to _____ (help) me. Then the big day finally _______ (arrive). I ____ (be) so nervous when they _____ (call) my name. I _____ (go) up and _______ (start) to play. While I _______________ (play), everyone ____ (sit) still and listened. I played the song without any mistakes. Then I ______ (wait) for them to call out the winner. When I ______ (hear) my name, my heart ____ (beat) so quickly I thought I would stop breathing. I couldn’t believe it. I ____ (win)! It ____ (be) the happiest day of my life!
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