2024届高考英语应用文写作优质模拟好题手拉手主题:周末徒步 讲义

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名称 2024届高考英语应用文写作优质模拟好题手拉手主题:周末徒步 讲义
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2024年高考英语备考指南真题风向标
精选模拟优题:周末徒步
精选模拟优题,拓展写作主题内容,积累相关词组搭配,不局限于写作,同时能拓展相关主题的阅读词汇搭配知识面!
Directions: Write an English composition in about 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是李华。前几日,你邀请好友吴新下周六前往郊野公园徒步。因为路途通远、交通不便、担心体力等原因,吴新犹豫不决。写封邮件说服吴新与你一同前往。在邮件中,你必须:
1) 对吴新的顾虑提出解决办法;
2) 说明周末徒步的理由。
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【任务一】
开头:
1) As we embark upon planning our excursion to the countryside, I am cognizant of your reservations, dear Wu Xin. (我知道你对此行有所顾虑,亲爱的吴新。)
2) Encountering your hesitancy about our upcoming hike, I feel compelled to address your concerns promptly. (面对你对即将到来的徒步之旅的犹豫,我感到有必要及时解决你的顾虑。)
3) Deliberating over the impending trek to the countryside, I understand the apprehensions lingering in your mind, Wu Xin. (考虑到即将前往郊野徒步的行程,我理解你心中的顾虑,吴新。)
中间行文:
1) Firstly, regarding the arduous journey, we can arrange for transportation well in advance to ensure a seamless travel experience. (首先,关于漫长的旅程,我们可以提前安排好交通,确保旅途顺利。)
2) Secondly, to alleviate concerns about physical stamina, we can plan our hike with ample rest stops and moderate pacing. (其次,为了减轻对体力的担忧,我们可以安排充足的休息时间,并控制适度的步伐。)
3) Lastly, considering the inconvenience of transportation, we can explore carpooling options or utilize public transportation to simplify our journey. (最后,考虑到交通不便,我们可以探索拼车选项或利用公共交通工具简化我们的行程。)
结尾:
1) In essence, embarking on this adventure together will not only rejuvenate our spirits but also foster a deeper bond between us. (总之,一起踏上这次冒险,不仅会让我们精神焕发,还会加深我们之间的纽带。)
2) With meticulous planning and mutual support, I am confident that we can overcome any challenges and create lasting memories on this journey. (凭借周密的计划和相互支持,我相信我们可以克服任何挑战,在这次旅程中留下永恒的回忆。)
3) Let us seize this opportunity to embrace nature's splendor and embark on an unforgettable adventure that will etch itself into the annals of our friendship. (让我们抓住这个机会,拥抱大自然的壮丽,踏上一段让人难忘的冒险之旅,这将铭刻在我们友谊的史册上。)
【任务二】
范文:
Dear Wu Xin,
I hope this email finds you well. I understand your hesitance about joining me for a hike in the countryside next Saturday. However, I assure you that with careful planning, we can address your concerns effectively.
First and foremost, regarding the long journey, we can arrange for transportation in advance to ensure convenience. Secondly, to alleviate worries about physical endurance, we'll plan our hike with ample rest stops and a moderate pace. Lastly, regarding transportation inconvenience, we can explore carpooling or public transportation options.
In essence, this weekend hike offers us a chance to reconnect with nature and strengthen our friendship. With meticulous planning and mutual support, I am confident we can make this an unforgettable experience.
Looking forward to your positive response.
Warm regards,
Li Hua
高级词组搭配:
1. seamless travel experience - 旅行无缝体验
2. foster a deeper bond - 培养更深的纽带
3. meticulous planning - 周密的计划
4. embrace nature's splendor - 拥抱大自然的壮丽
5. etch into the annals - 铭刻在史册上
6. reconnect with nature - 重新与大自然联系
点评:
这篇作文用词准确、表达清晰。通过针对吴新的顾虑提出解决方案,展现了作者的体贴与周到,增强了信任感。同时,作者用词地道,句式多样,有助于提升文章的整体档次。建议作者在结尾部分再加上一句期待未来的愿景,使得文章更具感染力。