上海市部分区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末英语汇编：写作（含解析）

上海市部分区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末英语试题汇编
写作
上海市青浦区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末调研卷英语试题
IV. Guided Writing
49. Directions: Write an English composition in 80-100 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是浦韵中学的高一学生李文(Li Wen), 你们校刊的“Tradition and Culture”栏目正在举办征文活动， 征文主题为“我与中国传统节日(Chinese Traditional Festival and Me)”。你的征文必须包括：
●一个具体节日；
●你的体验和认识。
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上海市徐汇区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末质量调研英语试题
Ⅵ. Guided Writing(10%)
【上教版】
64. Directions: Write an English composition in about 80-100 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
近日，学校正举办主题为“The person I admire”的征文大赛。假设你叫王海，请你写一篇短文， 介绍一位你敬佩的人，内容包括：
1. 描述此人的外貌特征和性格特点；
2. 阐述此人对你的影响。
(注意：文中不得出现具体学校名称或人名。)
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上海市上海市嘉定区2023-2024学年高一上学期1月期末英语试题
66. Directions: Write an English composition in no less than 100 words according to the situation given.
假设你是王明，你的好友李华在暑假里与父母一起去了欧洲旅游。在旅途中，他发邮件给你，说他不喜欢旅游，宁愿在家里玩游戏。回复李华一封邮件，告诉他旅游是非常有意义的。在邮件中，你必须：
1. 指出李华的认识误区;
2. 结合具体例子来说明旅游的好处。
注意：文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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上海市虹口区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末考试英语试卷
65. Directions: Write an English composition in about 80-100 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
近日，校园内流浪猫(homeless cats) 增多，学生会拟设立一个爱心猫舍(shelter)，供师生在此处喂养流浪猫。假设你叫王海，请你写一份邮件给学生会表达你的想法，内容包括：
1. 你是否赞同设立爱心猫舍；
2. 你理由。
(注意：文中不得出现具体学校名称或人名)
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上海市闵行区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末区统考英语试卷
64. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学的学生李华.你和同学们上周末去医院参加了志愿者活动，请按照以下四幅画的先后顾序，给校刊“英语角”版面写一篇英文稿件，介绍此次经历（可合理增加一些细节），并简要说说心得体会。稿件的第一句已给出。
参考词: self-service registration machine自助挂号机 consulting rooms诊室
WeChat Moments朋友圈
Last weekend, my classmates and I worked as volunteers in a hospital…….
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答案
上海市青浦区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末调研卷英语试题
【答案】Chinese Traditional Festival and Me
Of all the Chinese traditional festivals, I love the Spring Festival best, which is considered as the best-known Chinese festival when all Chinese, home and abroad, get together, waving goodbye to the past and greeting the future.
With the approaching of the New Year, everyone is ready to do the house cleaning, preparing new ornaments. On the Spring Festival’s Eve, my family and I gather around the table for a big dinner, after which, we stay up late or all night. What I am most excited about is the red packets I will receive in the following days, including the ones I get from relatives.
Chinese Spring Festival is representative of the spirit of reunion and of great importance to all Chinese.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文，要求以“我与中国传统节日(Chinese Traditional Festival and Me)”为主题写一篇征文活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
在……之中：of→among
认为：consider→regard
装饰：ornament→decoration
激动的：excited→thrilled
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With the approaching of the New Year, everyone is ready to do the house cleaning, preparing new ornaments.
拓展句：As the New Year approaches, everyone is ready to do the house cleaning, preparing new ornaments.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Of all the Chinese traditional festivals, I love the Spring Festival best, which is considered as the best-known Chinese festival when all Chinese, home and abroad, get together, waving goodbye to the past and greeting the future.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和when引导的限制性定语从句和非谓语动词作状语）
【高分句型2】What I am most excited about is the red packets I will receive in the following days, including the ones I get from relatives.（运用了what引导的主语从句和省略关系词的定语从句）
上海市徐汇区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末质量调研英语试题
【答案】范文
The Person I Admire
In my life, I have encountered many remarkable individuals, but one person who particularly stands out is my neighbor, Mr. Smith. He is a man of medium height with a bald head and a pair of sparkling blue eyes.
Mr. Smith never gives up, regardless of the challenges he faces. He faced a tough time in the recent economic downturn, yet he never lost hope. He used the opportunity to learn new skills and started his own small business.
His story of perseverance is an inspiration to me, teaching me that setbacks are temporary and can be turned into opportunities.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“The person I admire”为题写一篇短文，介绍一位敬佩的人。
【详解】1.词汇积累
遇到：encounter→meet
非凡的：remarkable→extraordinary
机会：opportunity→chance
挫折：setback→frustration
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Mr. Smith never gives up, regardless of the challenges he faces.
拓展句：Mr. Smith never gives up, no matter what challenges he faces.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In my life, I have encountered many remarkable individuals, but one person who particularly stands out is my neighbor, Mr. Smith. (运用了who引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] His story of perseverance is an inspiration to me, teaching me that setbacks are temporary and can be turned into opportunities. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
上海市上海市嘉定区2023-2024学年高一上学期1月期末英语试题
【答案】
Dear Li Hua,
I hope this email finds you well. I was disappointed to read your recent email expressing your dislike for traveling. While I understand your preference for staying at home and playing games, I want to shed some light on the value of travel.
Travel is much more than just seeing new places; it’s an eye-opening experience that broadens our horizons. Just think of the countless historical landmarks and cultural artifacts you encountered during your European trip. These experiences help us understand the world better and appreciate its diversity.
For instance, when you visited the Eiffel Tower, didn’t you feel a sense of wonder and excitement That same feeling is what travel is all about. It’s about experiencing new things, meeting new people, and learning about different ways of life.
Moreover, travel is a great way to de-stress and recharge. Getting away from the familiar environment and routine can rejuvenate our minds and bodies. I know you mentioned you would rather stay at home and play games, but I believe the benefits of travel far outweigh the comforts of home.
I hope my words resonate with you, and maybe even inspire you to embrace travel more fully in the future. Remember, the world is a big place full of history, culture, and beauty waiting to be discovered.
Yours,
Wang Ming
【解析】
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你的好友李华在暑假里与父母一起去了欧洲旅游。在旅途中，他发邮件给你，说他不喜欢旅游，宁愿在家里玩游戏，要求考生给他回复一封邮件，告诉他旅游是非常有意义的。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
表达：express→show
欣赏：appreciate→admire
另外：moreover→furthermore
激励：inspire→encourage
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I was disappointed to read your recent email expressing your dislike for traveling.
拓展句：I was disappointed to read your recent email, which expressed your dislike for traveling.
【点睛】[高分句型1]While I understand your preference for staying at home and playing games, I want to shed some light on the value of travel.(while引导的让步状语从句)
[高分句型2]Travel is much more than just seeing new places; it’s an eye-opening experience that broadens our horizons.(that引导的定语从句)
上海市虹口区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末考试英语试卷
【答案】
Dear Student Union,
I strongly support the initiative to establish a shelter for homeless cats on our campus. The presence of these cats not only enriches our campus life but also reminds us of our responsibility towards all living beings.
Providing a safe haven for them will ensure their well-being and also prevent any potential issues arising from their unmanaged presence. Furthermore, such an act of kindness and compassion will set a positive example for the entire community, fostering a culture of care and respect for all life.
I believe that with our collective effort, we can make a significant difference in the lives of these cats and contribute to a more humane and sustainable campus environment.
Thank you for considering my thoughts on this matter.
Sincerely,
A Concerned Student
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。校园内流浪猫(homeless cats) 增多，学生会拟设立一个爱心猫舍(shelter)，供师生在此处喂养流浪猫，要求考生就此事写一份邮件给学生会表达你的想法。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
建立：establish→set up
提供：provide→offer
另外：furthermore→additionally
重要的：significant→important
2. 局势拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Providing a safe haven for them will ensure their well-being and also prevent any potential issues arising from their unmanaged presence.
拓展句：Providing a safe haven for the homeless cats will not only ensure their well-being but also prevent any potential issues that may arise from their unmanaged presence on campus.
【点睛】[高分句型1]The presence of these cats not only enriches our campus life but also reminds us of our responsibility towards all living beings.(运用了not only...but also...句型)
[高分句型2]I believe that with our collective effort, we can make a significant difference in the lives of these cats and contribute to a more humane and sustainable campus environment.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
上海市闵行区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末区统考英语试卷
【答案】 Last weekend, my classmates and I worked as volunteers in a hospital. In the morning, a doctor gave us a lecture, telling us of our roles as volunteers. It was the first time for me to know the daily work in a hospital. In the afternoon, fully prepared, we went to different posts and started our jobs. Together with my classmate, I helped some elderly people how to use the self-service registration machine. What we did helped to save elderly people a lot of trouble. Besides, I also showed people the way to different consulting room. For some elderly patients, we accompanied them all the way until it was their appointment time. They really appreciated our help. Later after this volunteer work, I shared my pictures as a volunteer in the hospital on WeChat Moments. In no time, I received lots of likes from my friends. Some of them expressed their great interest in the voluntary work. ……
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画类作文。要求考生根据图画内容，给校刊“英语角”版面写一篇英文稿件，介绍上周末去医院参加的志愿者活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
此外：besides→in addition
表达：express→convey
感激：appreciate→be grateful for
和……一起：together with→along with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It was the first time for me to know the daily work in a hospital.
拓展句：It was the first time that I had known the daily work in a hospital.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 In the morning, a doctor gave us a lecture, telling us of our roles as volunteers.(运用了现在分词做状语)
【高分句型2】 What we did helped to save elderly people a lot of trouble.(运用了what引导的主语从句)