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人教新目标版 八年级(下)
Unit 6 An old man tried to move the mountains
写作课优质课
3a-Self check
SectionB
1.掌握下列词汇： plan to do sth.; send... to...; show sb. sth.
掌握句型：We will be late unless...
Bill opened his book as soon as...
The movie was so touching that...
2. 能够提炼故事的关键词，并以此复述故事内容。
3.能试着用自己的语言叙述故事或者叙写一个故事的摘要。
4. 能够了解外国文学作品，开阔自己的眼界，提升自己的鉴赏力和创新能力。
Can you list some traditional Chinese stories
Free talk
Yu Gong Moves
a Mountain
Journey to
the West
Chang’ e Flies
to the Moon.
Free talk
Hou Yi Shoots the Suns
Nu Wa Repairs the Sky
Nezha Conquers the Dragon King
Can you list some traditional Chinese stories
What other stories do you know from Andersen’s Fairy Tales
Free talk
The Ugly Duckling
The Little Match Girl
The Emperor's New Clothes
(1) When and where did the story happen (时间和地点)
(2) Who is the main character (人物)
(3) How does the story begin (起因)
(4) What happened next Why did that happen (经过)
(5) What is the end of the story (结果)
故事六要素：时间、地点、人物、起因、经过和结果
The simple past tense
一般过去时
How to tell
a story
3a
Write some key words from each scene. Then discuss your answers with your partner.
Scene 1: plan, kill, save, outside, moonlight
Scene 2: _____________________________
Scene 3: _____________________________
Scene 4: ______________________________
Scene 5: _____________________________
Scene 6: _____________________________
Scene 7:______________________________
lazy, forest, get wood
white stones, be lost, moon, bright
slept, back, forest again, moon, can’t
no more, bread, moon rises, follow
bread, ground, birds, walking, find
lost, song, follow, house, eat
3b
Complete the summary of the play.
Gretel heard that their __________ planned to ____ her and her brother. But Hansel had a plan to _____ himself and his sister. He went to get some white ______ before he went to bed that night. The next day, the wife sent the children to the ________. Hansel ________ the stones as they walked.
Later that night, they could see the stones because of the shining _________. The stones showed them the way home. Hansel wanted to get more stones, but his stepmother did not let him go out. The next morning, the wife sent the children to the forest again. Hansel had no stones, so he dropped _______ of _______. But the _______ ate them, so Hansel and Gretel were_______ in the forest. They walked until they saw a _______ made of food. Hansel wanted to ______ the house, but then they heard the voice of an old _______ coming from the house.
kill
stepmother
save
dropped
forest
stones
moon
pieces
bread
birds
lost
house
eat
woman
Gretel heard that their stepmother planned to kill her and her brother. But Hansel had a plan to save himself and his sister. He went to get some white stones before he went to bed that night. The next day, the wife sent the children to the forest. Hansel dropped the stones as they walked. Later that night, they could see the stones because of the shining moon. The stones showed them the way home. Hansel wanted to get more stones, but his stepmother did not let him go out. The next morning, the wife sent the children to the forest again. Hansel had no stones, so he dropped pieces of bread. But the birds ate them, so Hansel and Gretel were lost in the forest. They walked until they saw a house made of food. Hansel wanted to eat the house, but then they heard the voice of an old woman coming from the house.
What's the outline of the passage
Beginning
Development
When
Where
Climax & Ending
What & How
(details)
What happened to Gretel and Hansel next
Who & What
本单元的话题是“传说和故事”。写作任务通常是要求叙述一个经典故事，在进行相关写作时，可以按照故事的开头、经过和结果的顺序来叙述。最后要简要总结该故事或传说的寓意并阐述自己的观点或看法。注意写作时的主要时态是一般过去时。
话题概述
1. 人称: 主要用第三人称；
2. 时态: 一般过去时为主；
3. 文体：记叙文
4. 常用表达：
① Once upon a time, there was a /an...
② One day, he/she ...
③ Finally/As a result, …
5. 写作思路:
首先，根据所给提示. 介绍故事的人物故事发生的时间、地点等；
其次，按照提示，详细介绍故事的起始经过，如有能力，可适当拓展；
最后，介绍故事的结果，并可表达自己对故事的看法。
写作指导
写作大纲
Beginning：总起
Body:tell the story
Ending:What can we learn from the story
故事的开头：Once upon a time, there was...
故事的经过：One day, ...
故事的结尾：
积累词汇：
indomitable(不屈服的，不气馁的)、firm（坚定的）、insistent(坚持不懈的)、struggling(努力的，奋斗的)、unyielding（不屈的，倔强）、indefatigable(不屈不饶的，不懈)、untiring(不知疲倦的，不懈的)
表达储备
连接词：
句子：
unless, as soon as, so...that..., if...not... although/though, however, and, because
1) Once upon a time, there was a /an...
2) How does the story begin
3) What happened next
4) I think it’s really interesting.
5) I think it’s a little bit silly.
6) But the story is trying to show us that…
7) This story is about a/an…
8) What a funny story!
Do you know the story of Snow White It’s my favorite fairy tale. It’s about a beautiful girl.
Snow White was the most beautiful girl in the kingdom! However, her stepmother, the queen is so jealous that she wanted to put her in jail to hide her beauty. So Snow White ran to the forest home of seven little dwarfs. The seven little dwarfs became her good friends, and all of them liked her very much.
Unluckily, the ugly queen found her! She dressed up like an old beggar woman and gave Snow White an enchanted apple. She took one bite and fell into a deep sleep. The little dwarfs cried because they couldn’t make Snow White wake up. So the dwarfs put her in a glass case and prayed for help.
One day, a handsome prince cane by. As soon as he gave a magic kiss to her, Snow White woke up. Snow White was so happy, and all the dwarfs yelled “Hooray!”. At last, Snow White and the prince got married, and they lived together happily forever!
What a great story! Do you like it
范文欣赏
根据图片提示写一篇英语作文。
hare
crop
stump
field
hoe
内容包括: 1. 讲述成语故事； 2. 成语故事带给你的启示。
要求: 1. 内容要紧扣图片；2. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；
3. 词数不少于80，演讲稿的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
Good afternoon, everyone. I’m going to tell you a story named Staying by a Stump Waiting for More Hares.
1. 三部分：开头、经过、结尾
2. 人称：第三人称
3. 时态：一般过去时
4.可使用下列关联词：unless, as soon as, so...that...,
if...not... although/though, however, and, because
5.结构设计:
(1)______________________________________；
(2)______________________________________；
(3)______________________________________。
第一段引出将要讲的故事
第二段描述主要的人物及故事情节
第三段描述故事的结尾及自己简单的评论
细心审题
谋篇布局
引出话题
讲述故事
阐述启示
Good afternoon, everyone. I’m going to tell you...
Once upon a time, a farmer...
One day, while he was... he...
The hare ran so quickly that...
From that day on, he...
He finally realized...
The story reminds us that...
Only through hard work can we get success.
积句成篇
1. 有点儿；稍微 __________
2. 代替；反而 __________
3. 捡起；拾起 __________
4. 放弃 ___________
5. 等待 ___________
a little bit
instead of
pick up
give up
wait for
6. 从前 _____________________
7. 如此……以至于…… _____________________
8. 从那天起 _____________________
9. 中国传统故事 _____________________
10. 禁/忍不住做某事 _____________________
11. 某人尽全力做某事 ____________________
once upon a time
so... that...
from that day on
traditional Chinese stories
can’t stop doing sth.
try one’s best to do sth.
积句成篇
Let me/I’m going to tell you...
I am very happy that you are interested in...
Do you know the story about...
Once upon a time, there was...
At that time, ...
It seems impossible to...
One day, while he..., he saw...
From that day on, ...
开头句
中间句
The story is trying to show us...
The story reminds us that...
What do you think of...
Only through... can we...
结尾句
No pain, no gain.
Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.
经典名句
范文欣赏
Good afternoon, everyone. I’m going to tell you a story named Staying by a Stump Waiting for More Hares.
Once upon a time, a farmer worked hard in the fields every day. One day, while he was working, he saw a hare. The hare ran so quickly that its head hit a stump. And it died. The farmer picked up the dead hare and took it home happily. From that day on, he gave up farming. He threw away his hoe and stayed by the tree,waiting for hares to come again. But he never saw another hare. Finally he realized his mistake and went back to work in his fields, but the whole crops were dead.
The story reminds us that “No pain, no gain.” Only through hard work can we get success.
Self Check
1. We’ll be late unless _______________
2. You won’t be successful unless____________________
3. As soon as I got to the bus stop___________________________
4. Bill opened his book as soon as____________________________
5. The movie was so touching that_________________________
6. The boy was so excited that______________________________
we take a taxi.
I called my uncle to meet me there.
you work hard on all the subjects.
Miss Miller came into the classroom.
some girls couldn’t hold their tears.
he could hardly go to sleep all night.
1.Use your own ideas to complete the sentences.
Self Check
2.Fill in the blanks with the correct forms of the words in brackets.
Once upon a time, there ______ (be) an emperor. He _______ (love) buying and looking at clothes. One day, two brothers ______ (come) to the city. They ______ (tell) the emperor that they could make beautiful clothes for him, but he must ______ (give) them silk and gold. The brothers _____ (be) bad people. They ______ (keep) all the silk and gold for themselves. They told the emperor the clothes they made _____ (be) special because only clever people could _____ (see) them. When the emperor ______ (put) on the clothes, all he could see was his underwear. But he didn’t want people to _______ (think) he was stupid, so he _____ (say) the clothes were beautiful. Then he _______ (walk) around the city in his new clothes until one boy _______ (shout), “The emperor isn’t wearing any clothes!”
was
came
loved
told
give
were
kept
were
see
put
think
said
walked
shouted
I.根据句意及首字母提示完成单词。1.The doctor tried his best to s the sick boy and he succeeded. 2.—Where do tigers live —They usually live in the f _______ and mountains. 3.—Where is your grandfather —He is taking a walk a_______ the park. 4.—Can you look after my little sister when I go out —Don’t worry.I will stay here u you come back. 5.The TV play was so t that all of us cried.
save
forest
around
until
touching
II.用括号内所给单词的适当形式填空。1.I some ________ (west) countries, the song is very popular.2.The T-shirt is _________ (make) of cotton.3.When I passed the classroom last night, I heard someone
_________ (talk) loudly.4.After graduation from the University, he got _______ (marry) to a girl.5.He only laughed at us instead of ________ (give) us a hand.
western
made
talking
married
giving
III.根据汉语提示完成句子,每空一词。1.那天晚上在睡觉之前,他出去找了一些白石头。He went to some white stones he went to bed that night. 2.韩塞尔没有石头了,所以他丢了一些面包屑。Hansel had no stones, he pieces of bread. 3.从前,有一位皇帝。他喜欢买衣服看衣服。 ,there was an emperor.He loved and_______ at clothes. 4.他们告诉皇帝他们制作的衣服很特殊,因为只有聪明的人才能看到它们。They told the emperor the clothes were special____ ______clever people ____ see them. 5.你们一醒来就必须和你们的父亲一起去森林。 you wake up,you must go to the forest with your father.
get before
so dropped
Once upon a time
buying looking
because only could
As soon as
Homework
Use your own words to retell a story.
Practice more exercises about unless,
as soon as and so that.
