-2024届高考英语作文复习专项读后续写：莫索普先生的鸡课件(共14张PPT)
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(共14张PPT)
高中英语读后续写：
莫索普先生的鸡
__________
旦
52134 Approach
20+
绿哲私家英语
5 W who+when+where+what+why
·2Plot+Emotion line
。1 Theme/Ending
高考读后续写评分第七档(22~25分)
√创造了丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑
33 Echoes+3 Predictions
性，续写完整，与原文情境融洽度高
√使用了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，
4 C for self-assessment
表达流畅，语言错误很少，且完全不影响
理解；
complete+coherent+
√自然有效地使用了段落间、句间衔接
手段，全文结构清晰，前后呼应，意义连
correct+creative
贯。
202304嘉兴市二模试题呈现
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mosop's Chickens
绿哲私家英
Mr.Mosop had a lot of chickens.But Pili Pili was rare and precious.I remember the day he brought her back to the
village."Her name shall be Pepper--Pili Pili,"he said,gently stroking()her black-and-white feathers.He promised
me,"Next time I get a chicken,you may choose a greater name,"Pili Pili was the pride of our village,but now she was
missing.Everyone in the village joined in the search for her.After school the next day,I ran all the way home."Did they
find Pili Pili "I was out of breath.Mama sighed."Yes,on the other side of the fence,"She nodded at the low fence of
bushes that surrounded our village.Grace,my little sister,opened her eyes wide."hyena()ATE Pili Pili!Only her
FEATHERS are left!”
I ducked into our house.I took my notebook out of my bag as well as my most treasured possession:a box of markers.
On a piece of paper I made a rough picture of our village and the smooth,blue hills all around it.Then I drew Pili Pili,the
famous black-and-white chicken,standing strong and elegant.I was so busy drawing that I didn't notice Grace had joined
me on the floor.She was drawing something,pressing the tip of my purple marker flat.
“No,Grace!”I yelled.,grabbing my marker..“What is that "“A hyena,”Grace said,and then ran outside to show
Mr.Mosop her drawing.I followed.
The old man was weeding.He looked sad,Grace ran over and threw her arms around his neck."Did you cry "Grace
burst out.I rolled my eyes but Mr.Mosop laughed."Me An old man,cry over a chicken "He smiled softly as we
handed him our pictures..“Thank you,girls.”
The following day when I came home from school,Grace met me at the door of our house."Mr.Mosop has gone
market to buy a new chicken!"She pulled at the sleeve()of my school uniform.What do you think he will c.
I suddenly remembered the promise Mr.Mosop had made.
高中英语读后续写：
莫索普先生的鸡
__________
旦
52134 Approach
20+
绿哲私家英语
5 W who+when+where+what+why
·2Plot+Emotion line
。1 Theme/Ending
高考读后续写评分第七档(22~25分)
√创造了丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑
33 Echoes+3 Predictions
性，续写完整，与原文情境融洽度高
√使用了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，
4 C for self-assessment
表达流畅，语言错误很少，且完全不影响
理解；
complete+coherent+
√自然有效地使用了段落间、句间衔接
手段，全文结构清晰，前后呼应，意义连
correct+creative
贯。
202304嘉兴市二模试题呈现
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mosop's Chickens
绿哲私家英
Mr.Mosop had a lot of chickens.But Pili Pili was rare and precious.I remember the day he brought her back to the
village."Her name shall be Pepper--Pili Pili,"he said,gently stroking()her black-and-white feathers.He promised
me,"Next time I get a chicken,you may choose a greater name,"Pili Pili was the pride of our village,but now she was
missing.Everyone in the village joined in the search for her.After school the next day,I ran all the way home."Did they
find Pili Pili "I was out of breath.Mama sighed."Yes,on the other side of the fence,"She nodded at the low fence of
bushes that surrounded our village.Grace,my little sister,opened her eyes wide."hyena()ATE Pili Pili!Only her
FEATHERS are left!”
I ducked into our house.I took my notebook out of my bag as well as my most treasured possession:a box of markers.
On a piece of paper I made a rough picture of our village and the smooth,blue hills all around it.Then I drew Pili Pili,the
famous black-and-white chicken,standing strong and elegant.I was so busy drawing that I didn't notice Grace had joined
me on the floor.She was drawing something,pressing the tip of my purple marker flat.
“No,Grace!”I yelled.,grabbing my marker..“What is that "“A hyena,”Grace said,and then ran outside to show
Mr.Mosop her drawing.I followed.
The old man was weeding.He looked sad,Grace ran over and threw her arms around his neck."Did you cry "Grace
burst out.I rolled my eyes but Mr.Mosop laughed."Me An old man,cry over a chicken "He smiled softly as we
handed him our pictures..“Thank you,girls.”
The following day when I came home from school,Grace met me at the door of our house."Mr.Mosop has gone
market to buy a new chicken!"She pulled at the sleeve()of my school uniform.What do you think he will c.
I suddenly remembered the promise Mr.Mosop had made.