2024年江苏省苏州中考书面表达真题类型一 记叙文讲义

2024年苏州中考书面表达整合（教师版）
类型一 记叙文
鼓励宛如融融春风, 温暖着每个人的心灵。
某英文网站正在开展主题为" The Power of Encouragement"的征文活动。假如你是李华, 请你用英语写一篇短文投稿, 介绍一次你受到鼓励的经历, 并谈 谈这次经历对你的影响。
提示词语：improve, confident, effort, hope
提示问题：
What was the experience
What have you learnt from it
Everyone needs to be encouraged now and then.
要点一：
step1认真审题，确定结构
①确定作文体裁： ②确定人称和时态 ③注意作文格式
要点二：短语集合
1.向某人分享某物 2.与...斗争
3.放弃 4.保持积极
5.取得巨大的进步 6.犹豫去做某事
7.休息一下 8.积极参加...
9.害怕做某事 10.付出你的努力
11.让我更有决心 12.努力练习
13....的重要性 14.面对挑战
15.传递积极的力量 16.鼓励某人做某事
17.保持镇静 17.成就感
要点三：句子整合
去年，我积极参加了一个辩论赛。我很害怕面对公众，并与自己做了很久的斗争。
但是在竞赛的那一天，我感到特别紧张站在观众面前时。
幸运的是，观众和主持人给了我很多鼓励，让我充满力量。
他们仿佛在告诉我，要相信自己，并且付出努力就可以获得巨大的进步。
我努力练习，并获得了一等奖。
这次经历教会了我鼓励的重要性，要在面对挑战时保持镇静。
从现在开始，我会尽力去鼓励更多的人并且传递积极的力量。
要点四：全篇整理，自然过渡
2024年苏州中考书面表达整合（学生版）
类型一 记叙文
鼓励宛如融融春风, 温暖着每个人的心灵。
某英文网站正在开展主题为" The Power of Encouragement"的征文活动。假如你是李华, 请你用英语写一篇短文投稿, 介绍一次你受到鼓励的经历, 并谈 谈这次经历对你的影响。
提示词语：improve, confident, effort, hope
提示问题：
What was the experience
What have you learnt from it
Everyone needs to be encouraged now and then.
要点一：
step1认真审题，确定结构
①确定作文体裁： ②确定人称和时态 ③注意作文格式
要点二：短语集合
1.向某人分享某物 share sth with sb 2.与...斗争 struggle with ...
3.放弃 give up 4.保持积极 stay positive
5.取得巨大的进步 make great progress 6.犹豫去做某事 hesitate to do sth
7.休息一下 have/take a rest 8.积极参加... take an active part in
9.害怕做某事 be afraid of doing sth 10.付出我的努力 put in my efforts
11.让我更有决心 make me more determined 12.努力练习 practise hard
13....的重要性 the importance of 14.面对挑战 face challenges
15.传递积极的力量 pass on the positive energy 16.鼓励某人做某事 encourage sb to do
17.保持镇静 keep calm 18.成就感 a sense of achievement
要点三：句子整合
1.去年，我积极参加了一个辩论赛。我很害怕面对公众，并与自己做了很久的斗争。
Last year, I took a active part in a debate competition. However, I was afraid of public and struggle with myself for a long time.
2.但是在竞赛的那一天，我感到特别紧张,大脑一片黑，当站在观众面前时。
But on the day of the competition, I felt nervous and my mind went blank when I stood before the audience.
3.幸运的是，观众和主持人给了我很多鼓励，让我充满力量。
Luckily, the audience and host gave me a lot of encouragement and make me full of strength.
4.他们仿佛在告诉我，要相信自己，并且付出努力就可以获得巨大的进步。
They seemed to tell me to trust myself and make great progress by putting in my efforts.
5.我努力练习，并获得了一等奖。
I practised hard and won first prize.
6.这次经历教会了我鼓励的重要性，要在面对挑战时保持镇静。
This experience has taught me the importance of encouragement.We need to keep calm while facing challenges.
7.从现在开始，我会尽力去鼓励更多的人并且传递积极的力量。
From now on, I will try my best to encourage more people and pass on the positive energy.
要点四：全篇整理，自然过渡
Dear website editor,
I'm Li Hua, a student from China. I heard about your website's theme "The Power of Encouragement" and I'd like to share my experience with encouragement.
Last year, I took a active part in a debate competition. However, I was afraid of public and struggle with myself for a long time. But on the day of the competition, I felt nervous and my mind went blank when I stood before the audience.Luckily, the audience and host gave me a lot of encouragement and make me full of strength. They seemed to tell me to trust myself and make great progress by putting in my efforts. I practised hard and won first prize.
This experience has taught me the importance of encouragement.We need to keep calm while facing challenges. It's a lesson that has stayed with me and helped me in many situations since then.From now on, I will try my best to encourage more people and pass on the positive energy.