2024年河南中考英语高频写作话题——理想打算
一、话题概括
该话题要求学生能够介绍自己的梦想及如何实现梦想,能够介绍自己对未来职业的选择及理由,还能够阐明如何规划高中学习生活或人生。分析河南近10年中招真题书面表达可知,“理想打算”这一话题并未进行考查。但是,“理想打算”这一话题在全国中考真题中属于高频考查话题。
二、思路点拨
(1)开篇点题,照应题目;
(2)梦想介绍,方面齐全;
(3)表达感受,总结全文。
注意:围绕一个梦想/理想,明确主题,注意人称及时态。
三、高分素材
(1)提分好词
梦想/ 职业 future, dream, job, goal, cook, nurse, policeman, policewoman, doctor, engineer, musician, pilot, scientist, teacher, writer, reporter, inventor, travel around the world, a key university...
梦想 实现 plan, practice, study, believe, achieve/realize/come true, stick to/keep on, make a promise/promises, make a decision/decisions, make preparation for, make up one's mind, from now on...
高中 规划 improve, expect, make plans, study hard, make progress, get knowledge, take notes, improve oneself, do enough exercise, keep healthy, develop hobbies, take up, take part in, make friends, get along well with...
(2)出彩好句
梦 想 / 职 业 1.I want to be a doctor because I want to save patients' lives and help them keep healthy. 2.I'm going to be a teacher as I like to communicate and get along with children. 3.My dream job is to be a cook, for I expect to cook more delicious and healthy food for people. 4.In order to make contributions to our country, my brother hopes to become a scientist. 5.My parents want me to be a doctor, but I'm not sure about it.
梦 想 实 现 1.I will practise speaking English as much as possible and try to talk with foreigners. 2.He will search for more information about science on the Internet. 3.In order to make my dream come true, I will make up my mind to study hard at school from now on. 4.As long as we have a detailed and clear plan for every period, we can realize our dreams finally. 5.I do believe that if I stick to it, I can achieve my dream.
高 中 规 划 1.Before entering the high school, I will make a plan ahead of the term. 2.In order not to fall behind others, I will listen to the teachers and take notes more carefully. 3.Reading books is a good way to get knowledge, so I want to read more books to improve myself. 4.I'm going to take up a new hobby. I think singing is a great activity so I'm going to learn to sing. 5.I'm thirsty for taking part in many activities to enrich my high school life.
谚 语 1.A good beginning is half done. 2.No pain, no gain. 3.Nothing is impossible to a willing mind. /Where there's a will, there's a way. 4.Practice makes perfect. 5.Great hopes make a great man.
四、典型例题
2022年令世人瞩目,在过去的半年里,涌现出了很多为了梦想拼搏奋斗的人物。例如,圆梦航天,胜利返航的神舟十三的三名宇航员;开场失利,永不言弃,最终夺得亚洲杯冠军的中国女足运动员……正是这种对梦想执着追求的精神,使得他们为祖国做出了突出贡献。作为新时代的青少年,你的梦想是什么?请以“My Dream”为题,写一篇短文。
要点:1.你的梦想是什么?
2.原因是什么?
3.为此你会怎么做?
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不允许出现自己的真实姓名和学校。
【满分范文】
题目: My Dream
分析:本文属于材料作文写作,要求以“My Dream”为题,介绍自己的梦想。本文主要采用第一人称。
例文:
Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor.
When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I am very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard. I'll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.
To be a doctor is really good. I think my dream will come true one day.
结构 第一段说明“梦想是什么”用一般现在时;第二段讲述拥有这个梦想的事件时,用一般过去时;而在讲述为了实现梦想“会做什么事”这一部分时用一般将来时;第三段提出展望,期待梦想成真。
语言 首段言简意赅,直接点题。中间段落通过with the help of, in order to, as much as possible等短语,以及when引导的时间状语从句等的使用使整段内容层次分明,条理清晰。尾段提出展望。整篇文章详略得当,内容完整,一气呵成。
逻辑 按照题干要求,首段开篇点题;中间段介绍如何实现梦想;尾段表明决心,总结全文。
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