【湖北】书面表达 2023--2024年中考英语一模真题分类汇编（含解析）

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【湖北】书面表达 2023--2024年中考一模真题分类汇编（含解析）
1．（2023·湖北武汉·一模）在我们身边，有许许多多的劳动者。他们也许是抗疫的医生，也许是食堂的阿姨，也许是乐于奉献的老师……谁是你心中最美的劳动者呢？请你以“The Most Beautiful Worker”为题，根据下面的问题写一篇作文。
1. Who do you think is the most beautiful worker in your mind
2. Why does he/she have great influence on you
3. What would you learn from him/her
要求：词数为80左右，开头已给出，可适当发挥；文中不能出现自己的姓名跟所在学校的名称。
The Most Beautiful Worker
International Workers’ Day on May 1st is such a festival that belongs to the workers in the whole world.
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2．（2023·湖北黄石·一模）不积跬步，无以至千里；不积小流，无以成江海。在生活和学习中，一些细小的习惯，看似不经意，实则力量无穷。请以“The Power of a Good Habit”为题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇演讲稿，参加学校主题演讲活动。
要点：
1. 你有什么好习惯；
2. 你的好习惯是如何养成的；
3. 你的感受。
要求：
1. 语句通顺，表述连贯，书写工整；
2. 短文须包含要点提示内容，可适当发挥；
3. 词数：80词左右（短文开头部分已给出，且不计入总词数）。
The Power of a Good Habit
Hello, everyone! It’s my pleasure to give a speech called The Power of a Good Habit. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．（2023·湖北十堰·一模）为提高青少年创造能力，积极参与社会实践，学校社团打算举行一次将劳动教育与环保教育相结合的活动——“手绘环保袋（A DIY picture on the bag）”活动。假如你是该学校社团团长，请将这次活动的相关事项通知大家。
内容提示：
时间：本周六下午2:00-6:00；
活动地点：学校体育馆；
活动内容：
在环保袋上绘制精美图画，然后到学校门口发放环保袋，并合影留念；
目的：提高创造能力、增强环境保护意识；
其他：欢迎邀请家人和朋友一起参加。
参考词汇：the environment-friendly bag(环保袋) hand out(分发) awareness(n.意识)
写作要求：
1.语言表达准确，短文连贯、通畅；
2.短文必须包括内容提示，可适当发挥，所给内容提示可变通表达；
3.词数80-100，开头已给出不计入总词数。
Boys and girls, may I have your attention, please
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Thank you for your attention!
4．（2024·湖北襄阳·一模）阅读使人充实，阅读使人明智。某英文报为了了解中学生的课外阅读情况，开展了以“Reading Outside Class”为题的征文活动。请结合下面图示信息写一篇短文，向该英文报投稿。
要求：
(1)短文须包含图中所有信息，可适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名；
(3)词数80词左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Reading Outside Class
As we all know, reading has a lot of advantages.
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5．（2024·湖北孝感·一模）假设你是李辉。初中生活即将结束，学校英语社团发起了毕业感言短视频征集活动，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，为录制视频做准备。要点如下：
1) 回顾过去（表达感谢，难忘的人和事）；
2) 珍惜现在；
3) 展望未来。
要求：
1) 毕业感言必须是正能量，包括三个要点，可适当发挥；
2) 发言稿中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名；
3) 词数 80 以上，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and friends,
I am Li Hui. I am honored to share some of my thoughts and feelings with you.
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6．（2024·湖北黄冈·一模）假如你叫李华，初中生活即将结束，你们的英语老师准备举行一个英语毕业典礼，在典礼上，每个同学都将分享一段为自己好朋友写的毕业留言。请根据以上内容及下面的思维导图写一段毕业留言，内容包括：他/她给你留下的深刻印象、你们在一起的快乐时光以及对他/她最美好的祝愿。
要求：
（1）需包括提示全部内容，可适当增加细节，使行文流畅；
（2）词数80词左右，开头语已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名等信息。
Our middle school life will soon come to an end. But I’ll never forget you _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．（2024·湖北随州·一模）十年树木，百年树人。青少年是国家的希望，少年强则国强。假如你是李华，请你写一篇英语演讲稿，谈谈如何成为一名更好的青少年。
要点：(1)你认为中国当代青少年应该具备什么品质；
(2)你认为怎么做才能成为更好的青少年。
要求：(1)根据要点提示，可以适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名；
(3)词数80词左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：keep one’s promise 遵守诺言；be thankful to sb.对某人心存感激；creative 有创造力的；beauty 美；nature 自然；protect 保护；activity 活动
How to Be a Better Teenager
Boys and girls,
My name is Li Hua. Today I’m glad to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager with you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．（2024·湖北省直辖县级单位·一模）幸福是什么呢？幸福可能是偶得礼物时的欣喜，可能是帮助他人时的愉悦，可能是实现梦想后的欢欣……
你觉得幸福是什么呢？请你根据以下要点和要求，以“Happiness Is Everywhere”为题写一篇英语短文分享你的经历，并谈谈你对幸福的理解。
要点：
(1)你对幸福的理解；
(2)你觉得最幸福的事情是什么(举例说明，并说明原因)；
(3)可适当补充说明。
要求：
(1)短文必须包括所有要点提示，可适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名；
(3)词数80词左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Happiness Is Everywhere
Happiness is everywhere around us. When I get a nice gift from my parents or friends, I feel happy.
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9．（2023·湖北襄阳·一模）缤纷社团，多元发展。你所在的学校为丰富学生的课余生活，发展兴趣爱好，将要开展文学、英语、舞蹈、音乐、体育、烹饪、书法、绘画、讲故事社团活动。假如你叫李琦，你在校园网上看到了学校招募社团团长（Club leader）的海报。请用英文给相关负责人Mr. Li写一封自荐信，介绍自己的基本信息，以及你自荐的理由，详细说明你为什么可以胜任社团团长的工作。
1. 要点提示：
1）你的背景信息是什么；
2）你想加入哪个社团；
3）你为什么想成为社团团长；
4）你能为这个社团做些什么？
2. 注意事项：
1）信件格式正确，包含提示的要点，行文连贯；
2）词数：不少于90词；
3）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
3. 参考词汇：calligraphy /k l gr fi/ n. 书法，literature / l tr t r/ n.文学
competent / k mp t nt/ adj. 能胜任的， be competent for... 胜任
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10．（2023·湖北鄂州·一模）《义务教育课程方案》（2022年版）将劳动、信息技术从综合实践活动课程中独立出来，旨在增强学生的劳动意识和劳动技能。请你以“Doing Chores”为题，谈谈你的看法。
写作要点：
1. Why do you need to do chores
2. What chores do you usually do
3. What’s your feeling after doing chores
写作要求：
1.文中不得出现真实校名和师生姓名。
2.文章必须包括上述写作要点。
3.词数80左右。（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）
Doing Chores
We need to do chores at home.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11．（2023·湖北荆门·一模）疫情，伴随了我们三年的初中生活。我们和自己的家人、老师、同学一起度过了一段难忘的日子。回首这段难忘的岁月，你一定有许多的收获、感想与对未来的憧憬。请你用一篇短文来谈一谈吧！
要点：1. 我知道了如何保持身体健康、过健康的生活；
2. 我体会到家庭的重要性。家人相互陪伴和帮助，才可以克服所有的困难；
3. 感谢伟大的祖国以及我们身边的医务工作者、志愿者，没有他们的努力工作，我们不可能过上安宁的生活；
4. 在即将到来的高中生活，我将坚持锻炼身体，快乐地度过每一天；
5. 我会努力拼搏，以便于让自己有机会为国家和社会做贡献。
要求：1. 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；
2. 要点齐全，内容可适当发挥；
3. 词数：100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
提示词：为……作贡献 make a contribution to… 祖国 motherland
As the epidemic situation is getting much better, our middle-school life is nearly over. In the past three years, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12．（2023·湖北荆州·一模）初中生活即将结束，学校英语俱乐部特邀你写一篇英语短文，给七年级新生的学习生活提几点建议。
内容要点如下： 1.初中科目更多，好的学习方法很重要； 2.锻炼身体，保持健康；
3.参加社团活动，使学校生活丰富； 4.多读书，多交朋友；
5.补充一两点个人想法。
注意：1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； 2.词：60-80；
3.内容连贯，不要逐条翻译; 4.短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：method n.方法；colorful adj.丰富的
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参考答案：
1．例文
The Most Beautiful Worker
International Workers’ Day on May 1st is such a festival that belongs to the workers in the whole world.
I think the most beautiful workers should be the ones who will rush to the forefront no matter what difficulties they encounter. So I think Zhong Nanshan is the most beautiful worker. When the epidemic broke out, we all hid at home in fear, while he led his team to work in Wuhan. He was the one who reassured us about the country and the epidemic. I also want to learn from him and become a doctor in the future to contribute my share to the construction of the country.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作开头以及要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍在自己的眼中的最美工作者——钟南山；
第二步，具体介绍钟南山的事迹以及给自己带来的影响；
第三步，介绍我们可以从钟南山身上学到的东西。
[亮点词汇]
①no matter what不论什么
②break out爆发
③learn from从……学习
[高分句型]
①He was the one who reassured us about the country and the epidemic.（定语从句）
②When the epidemic broke out, we all hid at home in fear.（when引导的时间状语从句）
2．例文：
The Power of a Good Habit
Hello, everyone! It’s my pleasure to give a speech called The Power of a Good Habit. In my opinion, good habits not only make us keep doing something, but also help us grow better.
I have a good habit. If I don’t understand what the teacher teaches in class, I’ll keep asking until I get them. At first, I was so shy that I couldn’t do that. Later my parents encouraged me to ask the teacher for my questions. Finally, I made good progress.
From this experience, I find that my good habit helps me in many ways and I’ll stick to it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题，介绍你有什么好习惯；
第二步，结合具体的事例讲述你的好习惯是如何养成的；
第三步，抒发好习惯带来的感悟并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①not only…but also…不仅……而且……
②make sb do sth使某人做某事
③keep doing sth一直做某事
④encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①If I don’t understand what the teacher teaches in class, I’ll keep asking until I get them.（if引导条件状语从句，what引导宾语从句，until引导时间状语从句）
②At first, I was so shy that I couldn’t do that.（so…that引导结果状语从句）
③From this experience, I find that my good habit helps me in many ways and I’ll stick to it.（that引导宾语从句）
3．例文：
Boys and girls, may I have your attention, please Our school is going to hold an environmental activity—A DIY picture on the bag. Let me tell you something about it.
The activity will be held at 2pm-6pm on this Saturday at school gym. Every student is encouraged to draw beautiful pictures on the environment-friendly bags. You can draw something you like or something related to the theme. Then we can hand out these bags with pictures at the school gate. Finally, we will take a photo together.
It is obvious that we aim at improving creativity and awareness of environmental protection. You can also invite your family and friends to join in.
Thank you for your attention!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，是一篇通知；
②时态：一般将来时和一般现在时；
③提示：考生应注意不要遗漏所给要点，使用正确的词汇和句型，注意表述的逻辑和行文的连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，说明有相关的环保主题活动，需要告知相关内容；
第二步，按照内容提示，介绍活动的时间地点和内容，注意表述的时态会有变化，也可使用被动语态进行表述，可适当补充发挥；
第三步，阐述活动的目的并说明其他内容，最后结尾总结。
[亮点词汇]
①encourage to do sth鼓励做某事
②related to与……相关
③aim at旨在
④awareness of environmental protection环保意识
[高分句型]
①The activity will be held at 2pm-6pm on this Saturday at school gym.（一般将来时的被动语态）
②It is obvious that we aim at improving creativity and awareness of environmental protection.（it作形式主语）
4．例文：
Reading Outside Class
As we all know, reading has a lot of advantages. For one thing, it can help us know more about the world because books are full of knowledge, and it makes us wiser and richer in life. For another, it’s of great importance to do some reading because reading helps us have a better understanding of history.
I like reading newspapers and magazines, from which I get lots of fun and learn about what’s going on around the world. I also read storybooks and novels in my spare time, which makes me relaxed and happy. I seldom read e-books because it’s bad for eyes. On weekends, I usually spend a whole afternoon reading in the library. And I also read for about half an hour before going to bed every night.
Summer vacation is coming, and I plan to do more reading. I am going to read more classics and more English books to improve my language skills. I’m sure reading can make a difference to my life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意短文须包含图中所有信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。说明阅读的好处；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍自己的阅读情况和阅读计划；
第三步，书写结语。表达对阅读的肯定态度。
[亮点词汇]
①know more about 知道更多关于……
②a better understanding 更好的理解
③spare time 业余时间
④on weekends 在周末
[高分句型]
①For another, it’s of great importance to do some reading because reading helps us have a better understanding of history.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②Summer vacation is coming, and I plan to do more reading.（现在进行时表将来）
5．例文
Dear teachers and friends,
I am Li Hui. I am honored to share some of my thoughts and feelings with you. I have been in this school for three years, which will be an unforgettable experience in my memory. The school is beautiful and my school life is really colourful. In the past, I learned a lot from my teachers and classmates and made much progress. I also made a lot of friends who helped me a lot.
I want to thank our teachers and parents for their support and help. Not only do they teach us knowledge, but also they help us shape our character. I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future.
Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述过去的3年生活。
第二步，表达对老师、同学的感谢以及表达美好祝福。
第三步，最后结束文章。
[亮点词汇]
①in the past在过去
②make much progress取得很大进步
③make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
Not only do they teach us knowledge, but also they help us shape our character.（部分倒装句）
6．例文
Our middle school life will soon come to an end. But I’ll never forget you, Wang Ziyuan. You’re my best friend. You’re tall. You’re so smart and so outgoing that everyone wants to be friends with you. I’ll never forget the smile on your face. I always laughed a lot when I was with you. We used to play basketball on the playground and had a good time. At this very moment, I’m saying goodbye to you and giving all my best wishes to you. I hope you will be happy and healthy forever. I wish you great success in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据思维导图进行写作，注意要点齐全，逻辑清晰，可适当增添细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍对朋友现在的印象；
第二步，介绍和朋友过去的经历；
第三步，表达对朋友未来的美好祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①be friends with sb与某人成为朋友
②used to do sth过去常常做某事
③have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①I always laughed a lot when I was with you. (when引导时间状语从句)
②I hope you will be happy and healthy forever. (宾语从句)
7．例文：
How to Be a Better Teenager
Boys and girls,
My name is Li Hua. Today I’m glad to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager with you.
As a teenager, I think we should be healthy, creative, honest and thankful. The most important thing is that we must love our country and home.
How to be a better teenager Firstly, we should work hard to make our country stronger and stronger. Then we need to keep our promises. What’s more, we should be thankful to those who have helped us. At last, it is helpful to take exercise, which keeps us healthy both physically and mentally.
All in all, if we show our love in our daily life, we can be anyone we want to be.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为 “一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍如何成为一个更好的青少年，要适当补充内容，使文章充实。
［写作步骤］
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，简述当代青少年应具有的品质；
第三步，介绍如何成为一个更好的青少年；
第四步，总结与感谢。
［亮点词汇］
①keep our promises 信守承诺
②be thankful to 对……心存感激
［高分句型］
①We should be thankful to those who have helped us. (定语从句)
②At last, it is helpful to take exercise, which keeps us healthy both physically and mentally. (which引导的定语从句)
8．例文
Happiness Is Everywhere
Happiness is everywhere around us. When I get a nice gift from my parents or friends, I feel happy. When I play games with my classmates, I feel happy. When I achieve my dream, of course, I also feel happy. However, I think helping others is the happiest thing in my life.
Last year, my classmate Bob was badly ill because of an accident. He had to be in hospital for a long time and it would cost a lot of money. His family was too poor to afford it. Our head teacher called on us to help him. We organized a yard sale to raise money for him. When we sent all the money to Bob, he was deeply moved. We told him not to worry about money or the schoolwork. We helped him with the schoolwork every weekend. Bob got better day by day and he didn’t fall behind.
Helping others makes me happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：根据提示内容分享你的经历，并谈谈你对幸福的理解，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你对幸福的理解；
第二步，介绍你觉得最幸福的事情是什么；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①because of因为
②too...to...太……而不能
③worry about担心
④fall behind落后
[高分句型]
①When I get a nice gift from my parents or friends, I feel happy. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②However, I think helping others is the happiest thing in my life. (宾语从句，动名词作主语)
9．例文：
Dear Mr. Li,
I’m writing to apply for the English club leader. My name is Li Qi, from Class 1, Grade 3.
I think I’m the right person because I have many strong points. First of all, I do well in English and my oral English is quite good. Besides, I’m always ready to help others and good at working with people. What’s more, I have participated in the English contest three times before and won the second prize. I have also organized many class activities.
I want to do the work because it’s a great chance to improve my English and challenge myself. Most importantly, I think studying with a large group of students who share the same hobby is incredibly beneficial.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Qi
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为自荐信；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据所给的要点提示，介绍自己的基本情况和胜任的理由，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图——申请英语社团团长，及个人的的基本信息；
第二步，具体介绍自己的优势，以及能为这个社团做什么；
第三步，介绍自己为什么想成为团长；
第四步，以期待收到回信结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①First of all首先
②do well in在某方面干的好
③be ready to do sth愿意做某事
④ share the same hobby兴趣相投
⑤look forward to期望
[高分句型]
①I think I’m the right person because I have many strong points. （宾语从句；because引导的原因状语从句）
②I think studying with a large group of students who share the same hobby is incredibly beneficial.（who引导的定语从句）
10．例文：
Doing chores
We need to do chores at home. Doing chores helps to develop our independence. At the same time, we can learn to look after ourselves.
I water the flowers and wash the car for my dad, and I sweep the floor and take out the rubbish for my mom sometimes. On weekends, I even cook a meal for them.
I feel very happy when I see my house become tidy again. I think it’s our duty to share some chores to have a clean and comfortable home.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍做家务的好处；
第二步，具体介绍自己在家做的家务；
第三步，最后介绍做家务的好处。
[亮点词汇]
① look after照顾
② sweep the floor扫地
③ cook a meal做饭
[高分句型]
① Doing chores helps to develop our independence.（动名词作主语）
② I think it’s our duty to share some chores to have a clean and comfortable home.（宾语从句）
11．例文
As the epidemic situation is getting much better, our middle-school life is nearly over. In the past three years, I have learned how to stay fit and live a healthy life. I have also realized the importance of family. Only if family members accompany and help each other can we overcome all the difficulties.
I would like to thank our great motherland as well as the medical workers and volunteers around us, without their hard work, it is impossible for us to have a peaceful life. For the coming high school life, I will insist on exercising and living happily every day. I will work hard so that I can have the opportunity to make a contribution to my country and society.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据所给提示完成写作，不要遗漏信息，人称为第一人称。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要描述伴随疫情，初中生活即将结束；
第二步，从自身、家庭、国家及其工作人员几方面介绍自己的感悟和收获；
第三步，展望自己即将到来的高中生活。
[亮点词汇]
①the importance of ……的重要性
②help each other彼此帮助
③make a contribution to为……作贡献
[高分句型]
①Only if family members accompany and help each other can we overcome all the difficulties.（only if引导的倒装句）
②I will work hard so that I can have the opportunity to make a contribution to my country and society.（so that引导的结果状语从句）
12．例文：
It is very exciting that your junior high school life is coming soon. Here are some tips to help you have a meaningful school life.
Firstly, there will be more subjects in junior high school. So good learning methods are really important, you should find your own study method. Secondly, you should do more exercises to stay healthy and strong. Thirdly, there will also be many clubs in new school, why not join some clubs to make your school life more colorful What’s more, reading is always important, you should read more books as well as make some friends.
The time is school is always quick and fulfilling, don’t be nervous and just be yourself. Everything will be OK!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，要点已经给出；
②时态：一般现在时为主；
③提示：考生应注意不要遗漏，注意表达的逻辑和行文连贯，使用正确的词汇和句型，并适当补充自己的看法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出要提的建议；
第二步，按照提示展开描写，注意逻辑，可使用如firstly，secondly，thirdly和what’s more之类的词语使得行文连贯，层层递进；
第三步，注意发表自己的观点以及总结。
[亮点词汇]
①a meaningful school life有意义的校园生活
②stay healthy and strong保持健康强壮
③What’s more而且
④as well as也，和
[高分句型]
①Why not join some clubs to make your school life more colorful （why not do sth表示“为何不做某事”）
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