2024中考英语模拟题分题型汇编06 书面表达20篇（安徽专用）附答案解析

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
06书面表达20篇
1．（2024·安徽合肥·一模）假定你是李辉，你校将举办国潮文化节 (China-Chic Cultural Festival)。请结合下面图示信息，用英语写一封邀请信，邀请你的外国好友Jim参加。
要求：
1. 短文须包含上述信息，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
2. 文章中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3. 字数80～100（短文开头已给出, 不计入总字数）。
参考词汇：paper cutting (n. 剪纸)
Dear Jim,
Here is good news for you.
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Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】例文
Dear Jim,
Here is good news for you. Our school will hold the China-Chic Cultural Festival at 2:00 p.m. on April 16 in the school playground. During the event, we will watch folk activities such as lantern making and paper cutting. At the same time, we will enjoy Beijing Opera and martial arts performances. We all love the festival because it’s a good chance to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together.
I hope you can come to celebrate it with us. You should bring a camera to take photos and pay attention to safety.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍国潮文化节举行的时间和地点；
第二步，介绍具体的活动安排；
第三步，给出注意事项。
[亮点词汇]
①such as 例如
②at the same time 同时
③look back on 回顾
④pay attention to 注意
[高分句型]
We all love the festival because it’s a good chance to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together.（because引导的原因状语从句）
2．（2024·安徽池州·二模）现在许多人喜欢用短视频晒(share)自己的日常生活，短视频在同学们当中也很受欢迎。请你用了解到的同学们使用短视频的情况，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
要点如下：
1. 短视频的优点：短小，有趣，很受欢迎……
2. 短视频的缺点：质量不一，耗费时间……
3. 你的看法。
注意：
1. 可适当增添细节，使文章通顺、流畅；
2. 文中不要出现真实姓名和地址；
3. 词数80~100。
提示词：short video短视频
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【答案】例文：
Now many people like to use short videos to share their daily life. Short videos are very popular with our classmates. They are mostly short and interesting. We can watch them anywhere at any time we like. We can also feel relaxed as well as getting some useful information from them. As a result, more and more people are crazy about short videos now.
However, not all short videos are meaningful and do good to people. People sometimes get harmful information. Besides, we’ll waste a lot of time if we watch too many short videos. Meanwhile, it is bad for our eyes if we spend long time watching them.
In my opinion, we’d better learn good things from short videos. At the same time, we shouldn’t spend too much time on them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍短视频的优点。
第二步，介绍短视频的缺点。
第三步，谈谈自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①be popular with受到……的欢迎
②be crazy about为……疯狂
③learn…from…从……中学到……
[高分句型]
Meanwhile, it is bad for our eyes if we spend long time watching them. (if引导条件状语从句)
3．（2024·安徽芜湖·一模）同学们都读过《春》这篇散文，作者为我们描绘了五彩缤纷的早春图。正在答题的你看看窗外，眼下正是蓬勃多彩、生机盎然的春天。请用英语写一篇文章，为我们描述你眼中或心中的春天。
内容提示
1. Why do you like spring
2. What can you see in spring
3. What do people usually do in spring
4. How do you feel about spring
要求
1. 必须包含内容提示的要点，并作适当发挥；
2. 表达合理，句子通顺、连贯，语法正确；
3. 词数80—100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Spring in my eyes
Spring is my favourite season.
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That’s what spring is like in my eyes.
【答案】例文
Spring in my eyes
Spring is my favourite season. It’s usually warm and sunny. When spring comes, everything starts to grow. Trees turn green and many flowers come out. Bees and butterflies play among colourful flowers.
In spring, people like to do all kinds of outdoor activities. Children are busy playing games in the playground. The elderly like to go to the park for their morning exercises and evening dances. Sometimes people invite their friends to fly kites in the park when it is windy. Moreover, we can go on a school trip to a hill on sunny days. So, I think spring is great! I like spring best.
That’s what spring is like in my eyes.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容为我们描述你眼中或心中的春天。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍在春天可以看到的场景；
第二步，介绍人们在春天通常做什么事情；
第三步，介绍自己对春天的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①all kinds of各种各样的
②be busy doing sth.忙于做某事
③fly kites放风筝
[高分句型]
①When spring comes, everything starts to grow. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②So, I think spring is great! (宾语从句)
4．（2024·安徽滁州·一模）你们学校英文报纸正在开展以“时间管理”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你根据以下提示及要求，并以“Manage Our Time Wisely”为题写一篇英语短文投稿。
提示：
1.谈谈时间的重要性；
2.你是如何合理安排和规划好你的时间的。
要求：
1.习作包含提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺、语意连贯；
3.100词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Manage Our Time Wisely
Each of us has 24 hours a day and how we spend the time completely depends on ourselves.
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【答案】例文
Manage our Time wisely
Each of us has 24 hours a day and how we spend the time completely depends on ourselves.
Middle school is an important period in our lives. By improving our time management, we can make it more enjoyable. Using our time wisely also helps us develop the habit of getting things done on time.
As a student, I’m trying to manage my time better through the following two ways. Firstly, I create a daily timetable with all the tasks to be done. This helps me organize my time well during the day. Secondly, I do every task with my full attention. For example, I keep away from my storybooks and my smartphone while I’m studying.
I hope everyone can make good use of time and enjoy a colorful life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥，并突出重点写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍时间的重要性；
第二步，介绍自己是如何合理安排及规划好时间的；
第三步，书写结语，号召每个人都利用好时间。
[亮点词汇]
①develop the habit of养成……的习惯
②on time按时
③keep away from远离
④make good use of充分利用
[高分句型]
①Using our time wisely also helps us develop the habit of getting things done on time. (动名词作主语)
②I keep away from my storybooks and my smartphone while I’m studying. (while引导时间状语从句)
③I hope everyone can make good use of time and enjoy a colorful life. (宾语从句)
5．（2024·安徽滁州·一模）每个人的成长过程都不可能一帆风顺。请你结合下面图示信息，以“Growing up”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你在初中三年里遇到的问题，并分享你的解决措施。
注意：
1.短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数 80~100(短文题目与首句已为你写好，不计入总词数)。
Growing up
During the past three years, I have met some problems and I have tried my best to solve them. Let me share some of my experiences with you.
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【答案】例文
Growing up
During the past three years, I have met some problems and I have tried my best to solve them. Let me share some of my experiences with you.
Speaking of schoolwork, I used to be bad at math and got poor grades. To improve my grades, I asked my teacher for help and made great progress. When it comes to relationships, I used to argue with my parents because I thought they didn’t understand me. One day, after trying having a talk with them peacefully, I deeply regretted what I had said before. I said sorry to them and understood them more. As for habits, I used to stay up late. I always felt sleepy during the day. Then I tried listening to some quiet music instead of playing computer games and went to bed early. Now I am always full of energy during the day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，讲述过去遇到的问题以及解决的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth过去常常做某事
②ask sb for help向某人求助
③as for至于
④stay up late熬夜
[高分句型]
①To improve my grades, I asked my teacher for help and made great progress.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②When it comes to relationships, I used to argue with my parents because I thought they didn’t understand me.（when引导时间状语从句，because引导原因状语从句）
6．（2024·安徽·一模）假定你是李华，近日你校英语校报组织了一个主题为“Make True Friends”的征文活动。请你结合以下要点提示，写一篇小短文。
1. Why do we need true friends
2. How can we make true friends
注意：
1. 词数80—100；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
True friends are people who accept you for who you are.
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【答案】例文
True friends are people who accept you for who you are.
We need true friends because they provide support, understanding, and companionship in life’s ups and downs. True friends are there to celebrate our successes and offer comfort during difficult times. They add value to our lives by sharing their wisdom, experiences, and love. To make true friends, we must be authentic, honest and trustworthy. We should respect others, listen attentively, and offer support when needed.
We may need to spend some time building meaningful relationships, but the reward is a lifelong friendship that brings joy and enrichment to our lives.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息”中“我们结交真正朋友的原因和方法”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“真正的朋友是那些接受你的人。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“结交真正朋友的原因和方法”重点介绍结交真正朋友的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“我们可能需要花一些时间建立有意义的关系，但回报是终身给我们的生活带来欢乐和丰富的友谊。”的强烈愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① respect others尊重他人
② offer support提供支持
[高分句型]
①We need true friends because they provide support, understanding, and companionship in life’s ups and downs.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②We may need to spend some time building meaningful relationships, but the reward is a lifelong friendship that brings joy and enrichment to our lives.（that引导的定语从句）
7．（2024·安徽宿州·一模）俗话说“赠人玫瑰，手留余香”。假定你是李华，你校准备举行以“Sharing makes me grow up”为主题的演讲活动。请你写一篇演讲稿，向同学们谈谈你对“分享”的看法。
Sharing makes me grow up
Why help me become outgoing, know more about myself, learn different ideas
How …
注意：
1. 演讲稿须包含以上表格的所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3. 词数80—100 (演讲稿的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：process (n.过程) opinion (n.意见，想法)
Good afternoon, everyone!
It’s my pleasure to stand here and give a speech. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanks for your listening!
【答案】例文：
Good afternoon, everyone!
It’s my pleasure to stand here and give a speech. I’m happy that you are interested in the topic—Sharing makes me grow up. Here are some of my ideas about sharing.
Firstly, sharing helps me become outgoing. Talking with others in sharing will help us change a lot. Secondly, sharing makes me know more about myself. We will understand what we really need by sharing. Thirdly, we can learn different ideas in the process of sharing. We can make wiser decisions after that.
But how should we share Find people who have the same interest. Then communicate honestly with them and listen carefully to their opinions.
In a word, sharing plays an important role in our life. So let’s learn to share and share happily.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇议论文，为演讲稿；
②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：围绕主题“分享使我成长”，从“为什么要学会分享”和“如何分享”进行表达。注意条理清晰，语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，提出演讲主题；
第二步，介绍为什么要学会分享；
第三步，介绍如何分享；
第四步，总结，呼吁学会分享。
[亮点词汇]
①change a lot 改变许多
②make wiser decisions 做出更明智的决定
③communicate honestly 诚实地沟通
④in a word 总之
⑤play an important role 起重要作用
[高分句型]
Find people who have the same interest.（定语从句）
8．（2024·安徽马鞍山·一模）你校计划新建一个图书馆，为更好地满足学生的使用需求，学校英语报以“My School Library”为题向学生征稿。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿，介绍你所设计的图书馆。
要求：1．文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
2．短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．词数80-100（短文题目与句首已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
My School Library
I want to share my design of the new school library.
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【答案】例文
My School Library
I want to share my design of the new school library. It will be greatly different from the present ones. The library is green, blue, white and it is in the shape of spaceships with all kinds of electrical appliances.
It will use solar power and be controlled by computers. Smart and green, isn’t it What’s more, it is made of recyclable materials which are environment-friendly to our Earth.
Thanks to the modern computer system, students can lend the books we are interested in and return them conveniently by scanning our face. The most exciting thing is that you can listen to music in your seat to relax yourself when you feel tired. It is large enough so that you can also rest inside and feel comfortable.
What a wonderful library it is! I can’t wait to experience it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文的主题；
第二步，介绍图书馆的情况；
第三步，表达自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①all kinds of各种各样的
②what’s more并且
③be made of由……制成
④thanks to多亏了
[高分句型]
①The most exciting thing is that you can listen to music in your seat to relax yourself when you feel tired.（表语从句，when引导时间状语从句）
②What a wonderful library it is!（感叹句）
9．（2024·安徽黄山·一模）为落实立德树人根本任务，各学校围绕德育教育举办了一系列的活动，根据下面思维导图内容提示，以“Moral(德育)Education”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍如何践行德育教育。
要求：1.书写认真规范，词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.短文必须包括所有要点提示，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Moral Education
As teenagers, we are the hope of our country. To be excellent teenagers, let me tell you how to improve our moral education. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Moral Education
As teenagers, we are the hope of our country. To be excellent teenagers, let me tell you how to improve our moral education.
At home, we should do some housework. We should also save electricity and water when using them. As for the relationship with our parents, we should have a good communication with them. At school, we should obey the school rules. The harder we study, the better we will be in the future. And we should have more creativity. What’s more, we can take part in some volunteer activities in our free time. We can plant more trees to protect the environment. And we should try our best to save animals. Last but not least, we should love our country. We should try our best to spread our culture and make our dreams come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，说明本文要介绍如何践行德育教育。
第二步，详细介绍如何践行德育教育。
[亮点词汇]
①As for至于
②have a good communication with与……有好的沟通
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
①The harder we study, the better we will be in the future. (the+比较级，the+比较级)
②We can plant more trees to protect the environment. (动词不定式作目的状语)
10．（2024·安徽滁州·一模）同学们，在你的日常生活中有烦恼和学习压力吗？我们应该如何正确面对烦恼，有效缓解压力呢？请根据以下提示和要求，以“How to deal with my stress”为题写一篇90词左右的英语小短文。
提示：
1. Do you have any problems or stress in your life
2. How do you relax in your study
3. Would you like to talk your trouble with your parents, teachers or friends
要求：
1. 包含以上提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 书写清晰规范，表达准确顺畅。
How to deal with my stress
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【答案】例文：
How to deal with my stress
We all have some problems and stress in our life. So do I.
When I have problems and stress in my study, I often take more exercise. Sports can help me to have a healthier body and study better. I can also listen to music and read books. They are good ways to relax myself. Sometimes it’s hard to deal with stress by myself. I’d like to talk with my teachers, parents or friends, and try to tell them about my trouble.
Do you have the same trouble How do you deal with your stress
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料所给提示要点不得遗漏，重点写出“如何放松自己”部分。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，说明自己生活中存在问题和压力；
第二步，具体阐述自己在学习中如何放松，以及如何解决自己的麻烦；
第三步，结尾提出问题，引发思考。
[亮点词汇]
①listen to听
②deal with处理；应对
③try to do sth.尽力做某事
[高分句型]
①When I have problems and stress in my study, I often take more exercise.（时间状语从句）
②They are good ways to relax myself.（不定式作后置定语）
11．（2024·安徽合肥·一模）假如你是李辉。你收到英国朋友Jane的来信。信中就上学带不带手机一事，她和朋友意见不一而争执。请你根据下列提示回复一封电子邮件， 陈述你的意见。
内容：1. 你的观点；2. 陈述理由；3. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 词数80-100；
2. 可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯；
3. 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好， 不计入总词数；
4. 作文中不得出现真实学校， 地址等个人信息。
Dear Jane,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】例文
Dear Jane,
How nice to hear from you! As a student, I think it’s good to have a mobile phone, because mobile phones can offer a lot of convenience. And students can send short messages to their parents when they are in trouble or not at home. In fact, if students use mobile phones in right ways, mobile phones will help us. For example, we can use mobile phones to look up new words. But it can also bring some trouble. For example, many students use their mobiles to listen to music in class. They don’t listen to the teachers carefully. And many students send messages in class.
In my opinion, it’s not right to use mobile phones in school. We should try our best to use mobile phones in right ways.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是电子邮件；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的几个要点均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“很高兴收到你的来信”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——观点、理由、提出建议等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“期望收到你的回复”的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①look up查阅
②For example比如
③hear from收到某人的来信
[高分句型]
①And students can send short messages to their parents when they are in trouble or not at home. (When引导的时间状语从句)
②In fact, if students use mobile phones in right ways, mobile phones will help us. (If引导的条件状语从句)
12．（2024·安徽合肥·一模）假定你是李辉，你的新加坡笔友Peter近期要来你校参加“中国传统文化”研学活动，请你写一封邮件介绍你们学校的计划与安排。
内容包括：
1. 聆听诗词朗诵；
2. 学习中国剪纸；
3. 品尝传统美食；
4. ……
注意：
1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3. 词数80~100(邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇： paper-cutting (n. 剪纸)
Dear Peter,
I am happy to learn that you will come to my school.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
I am happy to learn that you will come to my school. Here are the plans, which may help you know more about the activity.
Chinese poems are of great importance in our traditional culture. You are going to attend a party, where some students will read beautiful Chinese poems. Besides, you will be invited to learn Chinese paper-cutting. In this way, people can express their best wishes. In addition, we will prepare different kinds of delicious Chinese food. It will be an unforgettable experience for you. Certainly, it’s my pleasure to show you around our school.
You will get the best possible experience here. I’m looking forward to your arrival.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已部分给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容包括”中的计划安排，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，补充开头，告诉对方写邮件的目的；
第二步，具体介绍学校的计划安排；
第三步，收尾，表达自己的祝福和期待。
[亮点词汇]
①in addition此外
②be of great importance非常重要
[高分句型]
①Here are the plans, which may help you know more about the activity.（which引导的非限定性定语从句）
②You are going to attend a party, where some students will read beautiful Chinese poems.（where引导的非限定性定语从句）
13．（2024·安徽合肥·一模）随着中国的国际地位日益提高，越来越多的外国友人想要了解中国，为此，China Daily报社正在以“My country”为题向中学生征稿。假如你是李辉，请根据以下要点写一篇短文投稿。
要点：1.地域广阔；
2. 历史悠久；
3. 景点众多；
4………
要求：1. 语句通顺，符合逻辑，可适当发挥；
2. 不可出现真实姓名与学校名称；
3. 词数 80-100。
My country
China is a beautiful and great country. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
My country
China is a beautiful and great country. It’s a big country with a very long and colourful history. It has a vast territory with many high mountains and long rivers. There are many places of interest in China, for example, the Great Wall which draws the attention of people from all over the world. We can visit some ancient capital cities to know about its history and culture. There are different races. Each race has its own culture and customs. My country is becoming stronger and stronger. When foreigners come to my country, they fall in love with the food. I am so proud that I am part of this country.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“信息提示”，以“My country”为题介绍中国。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引言，导入正文；
第二步，介绍中国幅员辽阔、历史悠久、景点众多等；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
① places of interest 名胜
② for example 例如
③ fall in love with爱上……
[高分句型]
① We can visit some ancient capital cities to know about its history and culture.（动词不定式表目的）
② When foreigners come to my country, they fall in love with the food.（when引导时间状语从句）
14．（2024·安徽宿州·一模）假如你是李华，你的好朋友Linda想知道你通常如何在医院做志愿工作，请你根据要点提示，给她写封邮件。要点如下：
1. 学习相关知识；
2. 耐心、仔细；
3. 学会保护自己。
写作要求：
1. 短文内容必须包括以上所有要求的内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3. 词数：80~100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：mask n. 口罩
Dear Linda,
I’m glad to tell you about my volunteer in the hospital.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all. With my best wishes for you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Linda,
I’m glad to tell you about my volunteer in the hospital.
Usually , at first I learn much about how to look after patients in some classes or online. It can help me to know how to be a volunteer in the hospital. Or I may make mistakes while taking care of patients. Next, it’s quite important for me to learn to be patient and careful. Being patient and careful can help patients feel comfortable. If I’m not patient enough, I may make patients angry or mad. It’s similar that if I’m not careful enough, patients might fall badly ill. Last but not least, I must learn to protect myself, so I often wear a mask when I do volunteer jobs. Or I may fall ill because of patients.
That’s all. With my best wishes for you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干提示信息，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己在医院的志愿者工作。
第二步，具体阐述自己在医院如何做志愿者工作的。
第三步，书写结语，表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①look after照顾
②fall ill生病
[高分句型]
If I’m not patient enough, I may make patients angry or mad. (if引导的条件状语从句)
15．（2024·安徽池州·一模）成长不是一帆风顺的，在人生的道路上，任何人都会遇到困难和挫折，就看你能否战胜它，战胜了，你就是生活的强者。请以“The Difficulty I Overcame”为题，写一篇英语短文向我们介绍一下你曾经战胜过的困难吧！
内容包括：
1.你曾经遇到的困难；
2.克服困难的过程；
3.你的收获。
注意：
1.词数 80~100(短文题目已给出，不计入总词数)；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
The Difficulty I Overcame
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【答案】例文
The Difficulty I Overcame
School life is colorful, but not always easy. I used to have some trouble making friends with others. I was so quiet and shy that I found communicating with others really difficult. As a result, I often felt lonely.
But things have changed since my head teacher Ms. Zhang had a long talk with me. She encouraged me to be open and offer my hand to others. I tried and it really worked. Now I have made a few friends and become more confident.
I don’t find it so hard to make friends now. I will not be a closed book any more.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你曾经遇到的困难；
第二步，具体描述克服困难的过程；
第三步，最后谈谈你的收获。
[亮点词汇]
① used to do过去常常做
② communicate with sb和某人沟通
③ encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①I was so quiet and shy that I found communicating with others really difficult.（结果状语从句）
②But things have changed since my head teacher Ms. Zhang had a long talk with me.（时间状语从句）
16．（2024·安徽合肥·一模）假定你是李辉，你所在的学校英文报“School Life”专栏正在征集以课间活动为主题的文章。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文投稿。
1.课间的意义；
2.学校的现状；
3.你的课间建议；
4.……
注意：
1.词数80-100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Break Time in School
Break time is not just a short pause between classes, it plays an important role in students’ health and academic performance.
However, in many schools, break time is often ignored or not used effectively. As a student in this school, I suggest that we use our break time wisely by doing activities that help us relax, like playing outdoor games, doing stretches, or chatting with friends. By including meaningful activities in our break time, we can recharge ourselves and come back to class with a renewed and focused mindset.
Let’s make the most of our break time to have a more productive and enjoyable school day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”
③提示：需注意时态，围绕要点内容完成写作，可适当增加细节，注意行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表述课间的意义；
第二步，描述学校课间的现状并提出自己关于课间的建议；
第三步，总结。
[亮点词汇]
①play an important role in在……中扮演重要角色
②academic performance学术表现
③ignore忽视
④effectively有效地
⑤recharge oneself让某人充电
⑥mindest心态
⑦productive高效的
[高分句型]
①However, in many schools, break time is often ignored or not used effectively.（被动语态）
②As a student in this school, I suggest that we use our break time wisely by doing activities that help us relax, like playing outdoor games, doing stretches, or chatting with friends.（that引导宾语从句）
17．（2024·安徽阜阳·一模）假如你是李辉，你的外国笔友Sam给你发了一封电子邮件，他表示暑假想要来你的家乡旅游。请你根据下面的提示，给他回一封邮件，向他表示欢迎并介绍你家乡的一些情况。
注意：
1.短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3.词数80—100 (书信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：scenery (n. 风景)；whitebait (n. 银鱼)；white shrimp (n. 白虾)
Dear Sam,
I am very glad to receive your letter and know that you want to visit my hometown—Chaohu. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your visit.
Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】例文：
Dear Sam,
I am very glad to receive your letter and know that you want to visit my hometown—Chaohu. Chaohu Lake is the fifth largest freshwater lake in the country. I live in a small village by the lake.
The lake is famous for its beautiful natural scenery. The Mushan Island and Crape Myrtle Cave attract thousands of tourists from all over the country every year. Generally speaking, the weather here is as warm and wet as that in other cities in South China. So there are many wetland parks around the lake.
As for delicious food, Chaohu whitebait and its white shrimp are known far and wide. I’ll cook some for you by myself when you come.
I’m looking forward to your visit.
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要有遗漏，适当增加细节，突出写作的重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，简单介绍巢湖及自己的居住位置；
第二步，具体介绍巢湖的景点、天气情况等；
第三步，介绍巢湖的美食，并表达对笔友的欢迎。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for因……而出名
②generally speaking一般来说
③as for至于
④be known far and wide远近闻名
[高分句型]
①Generally speaking, the weather here is as warm and wet as that in other cities in South China.（“ as+形容词或副词原级+as...”结构）
②I’ll cook some for you by myself when you come.（when引导时间状语从句）
18．（2024·安徽芜湖·一模）假如你是李辉，你的一位英国笔友Kate发来电子邮件，说她下星期来中国，她向你询问中国的餐桌礼仪。请你根据下面提示给她回一封电子邮件，告诉她有关情况。词数80~ 100。参考词汇： toast (vt. 为……举杯敬酒)
提示：
1. 等大家都到齐了再开吃；
2. 让长辈或客人先动筷；
3. 不能用筷子敲碗；
4. 不要将手伸到饭桌对面夹菜；
5. 为主人的健康、成功干杯……
Dear Kate,
I’m glad to receive your email. Now I want to tell you something about the Chinese table manners.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】例文：
Dear Kate,
I’m glad to receive your email. Now I want to tell you something about the Chinese table manners.
In China, we must wait until everyone is at the table. And when the dinner starts, the host doesn’t eat every dish first. He waits for the guests and elders to dig in. We don’t tap bowls with the chopsticks, which is considered impolite. We shouldn’t reach across the table to get something to eat, because in that case, we may break or knock something over. Besides, we usually toast good health or success of the host and thank him for his treat.
Hope to see you in China and everything goes well.
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作的要点提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏任何要点，可适当添加细节，使邮件内容意思完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接已给出的开头，并按照内容提示，一一介绍中国的餐桌礼仪；
第二步，书写结语，表示期待见到Kate，并给予祝福。
[亮点词汇]
① in that case 在那种情况下
② at the table 在餐桌上
③ everything goes well 一切顺利
[高分句型]
① And when the dinner starts, the host doesn’t eat every dish first. (when引导时间状语从句)
② We don’t tap bowls with the chopsticks, which is considered impolite. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
19．（2024·安徽阜阳·一模）上周你去市科技馆进行了参观，你对“未来机器人与人类生活”主题展厅的一款家庭医生机器人很感兴趣，你打算在本周英语课的值日生报告上向你班同学介绍它。请你以“Amazing Robot”为题，根据下面的要点提示写一篇短文。
内容提示：
1. 外观：看起来像一位可爱的女孩；高1.2米；
2. 材料：再生材料，如玻璃、塑料等制成；
3. 功能：能做各种家务，会讲不同外语；在健康方面提建议；治疗普通的疾病（treat common diseases）；照顾老人和孩子。
要求：
1. 内容应包括所有的要点提示，可适当发挥；
2. 语言表达要准确，语句要通顺连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名，词数：80~100。
Amazing Robot
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【答案】例文
Amazing Robot
Last week, I went to the science and technology museum. I was greatly interested in a new kind of robot—Home Doctor. Home Doctor looks like a lovely girl, and it is about 1.2 meters tall. It is made from recycled materials, like glass and plastic. Home Doctor can do all kinds of housework and speak different foreign languages. Home Doctor also has some new functions. It can not only give people lots of advice on health, but also treat common diseases at home. It will help people save a lot of time, because they needn’t go to the hospital whenever they feel sick or get hurt. What’s more, it can help take good care of the old people and babies at home.
I believe Home Doctor will be very popular with people in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：根据实际情况灵活运用时态；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏任何要点，可适当添加细节，使作文内容意思连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头描述背景，引出“家庭医生机器人”这一话题；
第二步，详述机器人的外观、材料和功能；
第三步，点评这款机器人应该会受到欢迎。
[亮点词汇]
①be made from 由……制成
②all kinds of 各种各样的
③not only...but also 不仅……而且
[高分句型]
①It will help people save a lot of time, because they needn’t go to the hospital whenever they feel sick or get hurt. (because引导原因状语从句)
②I believe Home Doctor will be very popular with people in the future. (宾语从句)
20．（2024·安徽亳州·一模）假如你是李华，你的英国好友Linda想了解你过去与现在性格方面的改变。请根据要点内容的提示，给她写封邮件。
要点如下：
1. 过去害羞、喜欢乡村音乐，很少交友；
2. 现在开朗，喜欢古典音乐，有很多朋友：
3. 过去喜欢集邮，现在喜欢看书。
写作要求：1. 短文内容必须包括以上所有要求的内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名：
3. 词数：80—100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Linda.
I’m very glad to tell you something about me.
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That’s all about my characters and hobbies. With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】范文：
Dear Linda,
I’m very glad to tell you something about me.
I used to be too shy to speak to others in public. As a result, I always made few friends. I fear to face others by myself. At that time, I usually like country music which made me feel quiet and peaceful. I also used to like collecting stamps. And this always helped me get rich knowledge. However, I am outgoing so that I make many friends. What’s more, I like classic music that causes me to fall in love with books. So I love reading very much now. In the books, I can learn a lot and know better about our world.
That’s all about my characters and hobbies. With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己过去和现在性格的变化；
第二步，介绍自己爱好上的变化。
[亮点词汇]
①used to be过去是
②as a result因此
③what’s more而且
[高分句型]
①At that time, I usually like country music which made me feel quiet and peaceful.（定语从句）
②However, I am outgoing so that I make many friends.（目的状语从句）
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