中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
07 书面表达10篇
1.假如你是王昆.你的美国网友Tom对中国的传统节日‘.春节”非常感兴趣,请你以“My Favorite Festival”为题.写一封E-mail.,给他做一介绍。
1.要点包括:节日简介、节日准备、节日活动等;
2.字数要求:10。字左右。
3.提示:the Spring Festival, traditional, get together, clean up, be dressed in...
△Subject: My Favorite Festival
From: Wang Kun
Dear Tom,
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【答案】One possible version:
The Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival to the Chinese people.
Several days before the new year, we begin to prepare for it. My parents buy meat, fish and vegetables. Houses are cleaned up.
On the eve of the new year, the whole family get together and have a big dinner. After the meal we watch “the Spring Evening” on TV until twelve o’clock. On the first day of the new year, each of us is dressed in new clothes. When meeting others outside, we say “Happy New Year” to each other. We pay new year calls to friends and relatives. That day my parents and relatives give “Red-bags” (money) to us children. All of us have a great time.
【详解】试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,描述中国的传统节日春节。本题没有给出具体材料, 只给出了几个问题,需要自己先确定写作内容,然后在动笔写作.选取材料时,注意选择自己熟悉的内容.在写作时要注意时态,人称和固定词组的搭配,要注意语言的规范性。结合材料可知本文主要是一般过去时态,人称是第一人称,注意时态与时间状语的搭配问题。写作中适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】本文行文流畅,语言规范。还使用了一些固定句型及短语,为文章增色不少。如prepare for,the whole family get together and have a big dinner等等。
2.(2024·重庆九龙坡·一模) 环保,一个看似简单却意义重大的主题,已经逐渐成为全人类共同关注的焦点。现你校校刊英语专栏以 “保护环境” 为话题面向全体学生征集主题海报宣传稿,请你用英语向大家宣讲环保的意义以及作为中学生应当如何保护环境。请你认真阅读海报,以“Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part!” 为题,用英语给专栏写一篇稿件。
要求:
(1)80—120词;
(2)文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part!
The earth is the only home for everyone on it. It’s crying for our help now.
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【答案】例文:
Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part!
The earth is the only home for everyone on it. It’s crying for our help now. As middle school students, we have the power to make a difference and help save the earth!
To protect the earth, we can start by saving water, planting more trees and reducing pollution. We can also save animals and recycle wastes whenever it is possible. We can also choose to ride a bike instead of driving a car to help stop pollution. We should always throw trash into the proper bins.
By doing our part, we can make a positive impact on the environment and create a better future for ourselves.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为看图作文;
②时态:时态主要为 “一般现在时”;
③提示:根据图示,文章应该包括7个方面的要点,可适当补充,使文章内容充实;尽量多使用短语,写作中要适当使用连接词,使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明主题,通过介绍地球的重要性来引出保护地球的措施;
第二步,介绍保护地球的具体措施;
第三步,书写结语,展望美好的未来。
[亮点词汇]
① make a difference 产生影响
② instead of 而不是
[高分句型]
① To protect the earth, we can start by saving water, planting more trees and reducing pollution. (动词不定式作目的状语)
② We can also save animals and recycle wastes whenever it is possible. (whenever引导让步状语从句)
3.(2024·重庆潼南·一模)泱泱中华,万古江河,文化如水,浸润无声。为讲好中国故事,传播中国声音,推动中国文化更好地走向世界,我校拟定下周举办中华文化节活动(Chinese Culture Festival)。假设你是李华,请给外教Bob写一封邮件,向他简要介绍这次活动,并邀请他参加。
要求:
(1)80—120词;
(2) 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
(3)可适当发挥。
参考信息:
(1) 活动缘由(如背景、意义、原因……);
(2) 活动构想(如时间、地点、 内容……)
Key words:
Chinese Culture Festival
l: 1. enjoy Chinese food
2. read Chinese poems
3. watch Chinese dancing
4. ...
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Dear Bob,
How are you doing I’m writing to invite you to the Chinese Culture Festival in our school. Now let me tell you something about it.
As we know, China is a great country with a long history and rich cultures. In order to tell Chinese stories to more people around the world and spread Chinese voices, our school plan to hold a Chinese Culture Festival next week on the playground. I know you’re very interested in Chinese culture, so you must be excited to join us in this festival. We will have lots of interesting activities during the festival. For example, some students and teachers will read Chinese poems on the stage. You can know a lot of Chinese history and excellent ancient poets from the poems. Besides, you can also watch wonderful Chinese dancing. Dancers will be in beautiful Chinese-style costumes to show fantastic Chinese dancing. What’s more, as you are lost in Chinese culture, you can enjoy delicious Chinese food , such as jiaozi , tangyuan and so on. Last but not least, our headmaster will draw the luckiest one from the lottery box. Would you like to be the lucky dog
I’m looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇电子邮件作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己学校下周举办中华文化节活动并邀请对方参加;
第二步,介绍活动的背景、意义、原因等;
第三步,介绍活动时间、地点、 内容等;
第四步,期待对方的回复。
[亮点词汇]
① in order to为了
② What’s more而且
③ Last but not least最后但同样重要的是
[高分句型]
①In order to tell Chinese stories to more people around the world and spread Chinese voices, our school plan to hold a Chinese Culture Festival next week on the playground.(动词不定式作目的状语)
②I know you’re very interested in Chinese culture, so you must be excited to join us in this festival. (宾语从句)
4.(2024·重庆彭水·一模)假如你是李华, 你有幸作为交流生被邀请下个月去英国某校交流学习, 但你对当地风俗不甚了解。请你给你的英国朋友Jack写一封e-mail向他求助。
要求:
1. 80—120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息:
1. 介绍本次交流活动(时间、内容……);
2. 遇到的问题(如:口语不流利,不了解英国的风俗……);
3. 请求帮助。
Dear Jack,
How’s everything going
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Jack,
How’s everything going I am so glad to be invited to visit a school in the UK as an exchange student next month. However, I am afraid that I can’t get used to the new environment because there are many culture differences. So I am writing to you to ask you for some advice.
First of all, my spoken English is not as fluent as I expect. So I am worried that I will make some mistakes when I communicate with local people. Secondly, I am not familiar with British customs. So I wonder what differences are between England and Chinese on table manners, daily communication, social habits and so on.
I would appreciate it if you could give me some useful suggestions. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:主要是一般现在时;
③提示:写作提示已给出,考生应注意不要漏写去英国的时间,适当发挥,使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,说明被邀请下个月去英国作交流生,想向Jack寻求一些建议;
第二步,阐述你遇到的问题和引起这些问题的原因;
第三步,书写结语。表示期待尽快收到Jack的回信。
[亮点词汇]
①spoken English英语口语
②be glad to do很乐意做某事
③get used to习惯于
④make mistakes犯错
⑤look forward to doing sth.期待做某事
[高分句型]
①However, I am afraid that I can’t get used to the new environment because there are many culture differences.(that引导的宾语从句,because引导的原因状语从句)
②So I am worried that I will make some mistakes when I communicate with local people.(that引导的宾语从句,when引导的时间状语从句)
③I would appreciate it if you could give me some useful suggestions.(if引导的条件状语从句)
5.(2024·重庆大渡口·一模)在即将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中,你将代表学校介绍中国的传统节日,请你从所给的卡片中任选一张,介绍该节日。
the Spring FestivalTime: in January or February Activities: welcome the new year, visit relatives, get together… Meaning: the biggest day of the year, a new start.
the Mid-Autumn FestivalTime: in September or October Activities: express wishes and hopes, have mooncakes, enjoy the moon… Meaning: the symbol of being together, missing family members far away…
注意:1. 发言稿中必须包含卡片上的信息,并适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数80—100;
4. 文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to the Chinese culture tour.
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【答案】范文:
Ladies and gentleman,
Welcome to the Chinese culture tour. Now allow me to introduce one of the Chinese traditional festivals, the Spring Festival.
The Spring Festival falls in January or February. It is Chinese New Year and also the biggest day of the year. So people come back home from different places and get together for a big dinner. Many people stay up late to welcome the new year, hoping they will have a bright new start. During the festival, people visit their relatives and friends and wish each other good luck for the new year. Children can often get hongbao from their elders. Do you think it interesting
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给卡片信息完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,根据卡片信息,介绍中国的传统节日;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①introduce介绍
②get together聚在一起
③stay up late熬夜
④bright有希望的;光明的
⑤wish each other good luck祝彼此好运
[高分句型]
Many people stay up late to welcome the new year, hoping they will have a bright new start.(省略that的宾语从句)
6.自从进入九年级以来,不少同学遇到了困惑、烦恼等麻烦事。面对这些麻烦事,聪明的你是怎么解决的呢?请以“That Day,I Solved a Trouble”(《那天,我解决了一个麻烦》)为题写一篇英语短文,向你校英文专刊投稿。
The following questions are for your reference(参考):
*What trouble did you meet with
*How did you solve the trouble
*What did you learn from this experience
注意:
1. 内容涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥。
2. 词数100左右(已给出的开头不计入总词数)。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
That Day, I Solved a Trouble
Since I became a Grade 9 student, I have had a colourful school life. However, I still meet with some troubles. One day,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:
That Day, I Solved a Trouble
Since I became a Grade 9 student, I have had a colourful school life. However, I still meet with some troubles. One day, it was my grandma’s eightieth birthday. It was really a meaningful day for my family. Since my parents were occupied with the decoration of the house, they asked me to order a cake. However, I was so careless that I left the matter behind my mind when my friends invited me to play basketball that day. I felt sorry for that, but I didn’t lose myself in self-blame. I made a handmade cake with cookies and colourful candies. Grandma was very happy when she saw the special cake.
When terrible things happen, what we should do is not to find fault with others, but to use our intelligent brain to solve them. In our daily life, there are occasions when we are faced with something unpleasant. And self-blame, which is always the first choice of some people, is really of little use in solving the problems.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为投稿作文;
② 时态:时态叙述过去用“一般过去时”,得到的教训/学会的经验部分用“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你遇到了什么麻烦;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。包括你是怎么解决这个麻烦的;
第三步,描述你从这次经历中得到的教训/学会的经验。
[亮点词汇]
① be occupied with忙于
② invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事
③ be faced with面对
④ hate doing讨厌做某事
⑤ mind washing介意做某事
[高分句型]
① Since my parents were occupied with the decoration of the house, they asked me to order a cake.(since引导的原因状语从句)
② However, I was so careless that I left the matter behind my mind when my friends invited me to play basketball that day.(so...that引导的结果状语从句;when引导的时间状语从句)
③ Grandma was very happy when she saw the special cake.(when引导的时间状语从句)
④ When terrible things happen, what we should do is not to find fault with others, but to use our intelligent brain to solve them.(when引导的时间状语从句;what引导的主语从句)
⑤ In our daily life, there are occasions when we are faced with something unpleasant.(when引导的定语从句)
⑥ And self-blame, which is always the first choice of some people, is really of little use in solving the problems.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
7.欣赏音乐是一件非常美妙的事情,你们班就有很多同学喜欢听音乐,你做了一个关于学生喜欢何种音乐的调查。请根据表格提供的内容,以“Music”为题,写一篇短文。
The number of the students Music that they like
12 dance to
11 music that has great lyrics
10 sing along with
4 quiet
2 loud
要求:
1. 内容全面,语言流畅,层次清晰,可适当发挥;
2. 书写规范,卷面整洁,词数80—100词;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Music
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【答案】例文
Music
Most of my classmates like music. Last week we asked our classmates about what kind of music they liked. Here are the results.
Twelve students like music that they can dance to. These students enjoy dancing. Eleven students prefer music that has great lyrics. Ten students love music that they can sing along with. Four students like music that is quiet. I prefer music that is quiet. Before I go to sleep, I always listen to quiet music. It can help me relax and have a good dream. Only two boys enjoy music that is loud.
In all, different people like different kinds of music. What about you What kind of music do you like best
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包括表格所列要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第三人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍调查项目(what kind of music),引出调查结果;
第二步,依据表格要点逐一陈述调查结果,适当拓展;
第三步,书写总结:不同的人喜欢不同的音乐。
[亮点词汇]
①sing along with随着……一起唱
②dance to随着……跳舞
[高分句型]
①Only two boys enjoy music that is loud. (定语从句)
②Before I go to sleep, I always listen to quiet music. (before引导时间状语从句)
8.假如你叫李华,你的外国笔友Bill来信想了解你的学校生活,询问你在学校里能学到什么学科的课程,你最喜欢哪一门学科,以及你喜欢它的原因; 另外在学校还可以参加什么活动以及你从中的收获。请你根据他的问题回复邮件。
写作要求:
1. 写作内容必须包含以上所有内容,词数80个词左右。
2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范。
3. 不得使用真实姓名和学校名。
Dear Bill,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Bill,
I am glad to hear from you. I will tell you something about my school life.
I have ten subjects at school. I have Chinese and math every day. My favourite subject is music because it is so interesting. Besides, there are many interesting activities in my school. We have an English party every month and we can talk with each other in English. I like my school life and I always have a good time.
How about your school life Can you tell me
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据信件中的问题介绍自己的学校生活,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,介绍自己最喜欢的学科以及原因;
第三步,介绍学校的活动。
[亮点词汇]
①hear from收到……的来信
②each other彼此
③have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①My favourite subject is music because it is so interesting. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②Besides, there are many interesting activities in my school.(there be句型)
9.(2023九年级·重庆·专题练习)“孝亲敬长”是中华民族的传统美德,家中老人尤其需要陪伴与关爱。校英语广播站正开展“孝敬祖辈,点滴做起”的好点子征集活动。请推荐一至两个切实可行的点子并讲述理由,以号召更多人孝敬祖辈,传承美德。
要求:
1.80—120词;
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息:
Hello, everyone. Caring for the older persons is the Chinese traditional virtue(美德).
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【答案】例文
Hello, everyone. Caring for the older persons is the Chinese traditional virtue(美德).
The elderly in the family especially need companionship and care. As children, we should honor our elders. First of all, we can often read books with the elderly, so that we can not only spend time with the elderly, but also bring happiness to them. Second, we can take the elderly out regularly to promote physical activity, help them stay healthy, and help them to relieve psychological pressure. Third, we can teach the older persons some new things, which can make them feel young and in a good mental state.
Everyone will be old one day, so let’s take action.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,具体阐述可以孝敬老人的想法;
第二步,介绍这样做的原因;
第三步,最后让大家采取行动。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①First of all, we can often read books with the elderly, so that we can not only spend time with the elderly, but also bring happiness to them. (so that引导的目的状语从句)
②Third, we can teach the older persons some new things, which can make them feel young and in a good mental state.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
10.(2023九年级·重庆·专题练习)团队协作是21世纪人才必备能力之一。信任、配合、包容、沟通、责任、倾听是团队协作中重要的品质。你校校刊英语专栏以“团队协作”为话题发起征文,请你讲述自己团队协作的经历,分享其中令你最受益的品质及你的感悟,以供他人借鉴和学习。
要求:
1. 80—120词;
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息:
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【答案】例文
Working together is important for teenagers.
Last term, Liz, Anne and I entered a science competition. Our task was to create a poster board with information about spaceships. After discussion, each of us got a job. Liz and Anne went to the library to look for more information about spaceships. I searched for the pictures we needed on the internet. The next day, we organized the information and decided what we wanted to put on the board. After that, we spent three days making the poster board. Finally, we won second prize.
When working as a team, I learned how to work well with my partners. I listened to them carefully and I respectfully and confidently expressed my ideas. My communication skills have improved a lot.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“从这次经历中学到什么”,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,指出团队合作很重要;
第二步,具体阐述最难忘的一次团队合作经历;
第三步,书写结语,总结这次经历中的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①look for寻找
②search for搜索
③work as a team团队合作
[高分句型]
①The next day, we organized the information and decided what we wanted to put on the board.(what引导的宾语从句)
②I searched for the pictures we needed on the internet.(省略that的定语从句)
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