(共44张PPT)
Unit 3 War and peace
Section Ⅲ Developing ideas & Presenting ideas
1.了解课文大意，培养略读和查读等阅读能力。（语言能力，思维品质）
2.理解并能够自主运用重要语言点,如单词、短语和句式等的用法。（语言能力）
3.通过阅读，熟悉介绍英雄人物的文体特征,并掌握其写作方法及策略。（语言能力，学习能力）
Step 1 文本整体理解，关注布局谋篇
Match each paragraph with its main idea according to the passage on Pages 32-33.
A.Lianda's conditions were very tough.
B.In Lianda, the nation's intellectual heritage was not only protected but also fortified.
C.The students at Lianda took up their responsibilities.
D.Lianda's spirit is the blueprint for all universities in China in the modern era.
E.Real war brings suffering and immense challenges.
F.Lianda has become the crowning glory of China's modern universities.
G.Lianda was made up of Peking University, Tsinghua University and Nankai University.
1.Para.1 ( )
E
2.Para.2( )
G
3.Para.3( )
A
4.Para.4( )
B
5.Para.5( )
C
6.Para.6( )
F
7.Para.7( )
D
Step 2 细读课文，明确教材细节
Read the passage on Pages 32-33 and choose the best answers.
1.Where did Peking, Tsinghua and Nankai University join together ( )
C
A.In Beijing. B.In Tianjin. C.In Kunming. D.In Shanghai.
2.Why couldn't the students of Lianda have classes on time ( )
B
A.Because the university was very remote.
B.Because there were fierce air attacks from Japan.
C.Because there were too many people in a room.
D.Because they had to walk on foot.
3.Who wrote a poem about the contributions of his peers ( )
A
A.Zha Liangzheng. B.Xu Yuanchong. C.Yang Zhenning. D.Li Zhengdao.
4.Why has Lianda become the crowning glory of China's modern universities ( )
B
A.Because of a product of the war. B.Because of its spirit of perseverance.
C.Because of its collective memory. D.Because of the honour of the nation.
核心单词
知识点1 emerge v.出现；显露 ＊emergence n.出现；兴起 ＊emergency n.紧急情况；突发事件 ＊emerging adj.新兴的；发展初期的
（P32）It is no wonder that many,if not most,of China's leading scholars and scientists emerged at Lianda,including the two Nobel Prize-winning physicists,Yang Zhenning and Li Zhengdao.难怪即使不是大多数,但也有许多中国顶尖的学者和科学家出自联大,包括两位诺贝尔物理学奖得主——杨振宁和李政道。
知识拓展
emerge from 从……中出现或显露
emerge out of 来源于
emerge as 作为……出现
图解释义
The moon emerged from behind the clouds.月亮从云层后露出。
融会应用
Ⅰ.单句填空
（1）Several facts started to emerge ______my investigation.
from
（2）The musical forms emerged out ___the American black experience.
of
（3）The Pacific region has rapidly emerged ___a leading force on the world stage.
as
Ⅱ.单句写作
（4）（2023·四省适应性考试）The Downtown Mesa Festival of the Arts features the
work of established and_______________.梅萨市中心艺术节以知名和新兴艺术家的作
品为特色。
emerging artists
（5）It is important to__________________________.在紧急情况下保持镇静是重要的。
keep calm in an emergency
知识点2 representative n.代表 ＊represent v.代表；象征；表示；作为……的代表
（P33）In 2017,representatives from Peking University,Tsinghua University,Nankai University and Yunnan Normal University gathered to commemorate the 80th anniversary of its founding.2017年,来自北京大学、清华大学、南开大学和云南师范大学的代表们齐聚一堂,纪念联大建校80周年。
知识拓展
a representative of ……的代表
a representative for 为……行事的代表
a representative from 来自……的代表
经典佳句
The association is sending representatives to the conference.协会将派代表出席大会。
When asked by officials to select five representatives to negotiate their demands，the crowd began to shout，“We don't want to be represented.”当官员要求人们选出五名代表来商谈他们的要求时，人们开始大喊：“我们不想被代表。”
融会应用 单句填空
（1）He was in no way a representative ___dog-trainers in general.
of
（2）He is a representative ____a large steel company.
for
（3）The _____________（represent） from New Zealand spoke for the Pacific
Islands Forum.
representative
知识点3 sum n.金额；款项；总数；总和 v.共计；计算……的总数
（P35）In 1938，the Japanese army offered a large sum of money for Yang's head and a large number of troops surrounded his men. 1938年，日本军队出了一大笔钱买杨靖宇的人头，大批军队包围了他的部下。
知识拓展
a large sum of money一大笔钱
the sum of sth 总和；总数；全部
be greater/more than the sum of its parts个体相加不如集体的力量大
in sum大体上；总之
do a sum计算；简单计算
sum （sth） up总结；概括
to sum up概括起来说；简而言之
经典佳句
The appeal of this little town is hard to sum up.这座小镇的魅力三言两语难以讲明。
融会应用
Ⅰ.单句填空
（1）___sum， the two countries are now true economic partners.
In
（2）She summed it____as “the most brilliant lecture I've ever attended”.
up
Ⅱ.单句写作
（3）______________________________________for buying new books for the library.
已划拨一大笔款项给图书馆购买新书。
A large sum of money has been allocated
知识点4 relevant adj.有关的；切题的 ＊relevance n.相关性 ＊irrelevant adj.不相干的；无关紧要的
（P36）Prepare a short presentation on one of the topics from Activity 2 or think of another relevant topic. 准备一份关于活动2中某个主题的简短报告，或者思考另一个相关的主题。
知识拓展
be relevant/irrelevant to...与……有关/无关
totally/completely/largely irrelevant 完全/绝对/基本上无关紧要
irrelevant remarks 不相关的言论
经典佳句
Museums should play a more involved or relevant role in public life.博物馆应扮演一个更具有参与性或与公众生活更相关的角色。
融会应用
Ⅰ.单句填空
（1）Her appearance is not relevant___whether she can be a good teacher.
to
（2）Many people consider politics_________（relevant） to their lives. That's why
they tend not to pay attention to it.
irrelevant
Ⅱ.单句写作
（3）（2023·四省适应性考试）But it does not specify what those symbols mean.
Indeed, to a computer,____________________.但它并没有具体说明这些符号的含义。
事实上，对于计算机来说，意义是无关紧要的。
meaning is irrelevant
介绍英雄人物
对英雄人物的介绍属于记叙文的范畴，它以写人记事为主要内容，以叙述和描写为主要表达方式。一篇好的人物描写一般分为三大部分，即生平介绍、事迹叙述和简短评论。时态的选择可视情况而定。
探究点1 教材范例提炼
课文范例
素材积累
Ⅰ.常用词汇
1.at the age of four 4岁时
2.a boy of sixteen一个16岁的男孩
3.make friends with her和她交朋友
4.be ready to help others乐于助人
5.a lively and smart girl一个活泼聪明的女孩
6.be warm-hearted and good-looking热心肠而且漂亮/俊朗
7.learn from each other and help each other相互学习和相互帮助
8.be highly praised by the teachers and students得到老师和同学的高度称赞
9.participate in the Eighth Route Army参加八路军
10.be born in a poor peasant family出生于一个贫苦的农民家庭
Ⅱ.话题句式
1.He has fair hair and blue eyes.他有金色的头发和蓝色的眼睛。
2.Abraham Lincoln， the son of a poor family， was born in Kentucky on February 12，1809.亚伯拉罕·林肯，一个贫苦家庭的儿子，1809年2月12日出生于肯塔基州。
3.She is an ordinary girl， but her kindness and consideration impress me most.她是一个普普通通的女孩，但她的善良和体贴使我印象深刻。
4.He is a good-looking， kind-hearted man.他是一个俊朗且好心肠的人。
5.He went to college，during which he showed great interest in folk music.他上了大学，在这期间他对民间音乐表现出极大的兴趣。
6.When he was still a boy，he showed great interest in literature.当他还是个孩子的时候，他对文学表现出极大的兴趣。
7.We regard him as our model.我们把他视为榜样。
8.The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader.人们把他作为一个鼓舞人心的领袖而开始爱戴他。
9.Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit.雷锋因他的共产主义精神而受到称赞。
探究点2 写作应用体验
写作典例
请用英语写一篇80词左右的短文简要介绍雷锋。主要内容如下：
雷锋,1940年12月18日生于湖南省望城县，7岁成了孤儿，1962年8月15日逝世。虽
然生命只有短暂的22年，但他作为一名解放军战士，努力工作，乐于助人，一生做好
事无数，一直被视为每个公民的英雄和楷模。
______________________________________________________________
分步推进
Step 1 审题谋篇
Step 2 要点翻译
1.翻译词汇
（1）___________出生于
be born in
（2）_______v.使成为孤儿
orphan
（3）_______________________人民解放军
People's Liberation Army
（4）____________做好准备
be ready to
（5）______________做好事
do good deeds
2.翻译句子
（1）雷锋1940年12月18日出生于湖南望城县，1962年8月15日逝世。
___________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________
Lei Feng was born in Wangcheng County，Hunan Province， on December 18，1940 and passed away on August 15，1962.
（2）作为一名人民解放军，他工作努力，并且总是乐于助人。
___________________________________________________________________________
______________
He worked hard and was always ready to help others as a soldier in the People's Liberation Army.
（3）他的生命很短，只有22年。
____________________________________
He lived a short life of only 22 years.
（4）他在短短的一生中做了无数好事，一直被视为每个公民的英雄和楷模。
___________________________________________________________________________
________________________________
He did countless good deeds in his short life and has been regarded all the time as a hero and model for every citizen.
Step 3 句式升级
用although连接上题中的句（2）和句（3）
___________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
Although he lived a short life of only 22 years， as a soldier in the People's Liberation Army， he worked hard and was always ready to help others.
Step 4 连句成篇
利用以上几个句子,加上恰当的连接词和过渡句,必要时可以改变句式,使之成为一篇连贯的文章。
参考范文
Lei Feng was born in Wangcheng County，Hunan Province， on December 18， 1940 and passed away on August 15， 1962.He was orphaned at 7 years old. Although he lived a short life of only 22 years， as a soldier in the People's Liberation Army，he worked hard and was always ready to help others. He did countless good deeds in his short life and has been regarded all the time as a hero and model for every citizen.
In a word，Lei Feng was an example of the soldiers of the People's Liberation Army in China.
主题写作
假定你是李华，请你以“My hero”为题，写一篇介绍你心目中的英雄——周恩来的英语短文。内容要点如下：
1.周恩来是新中国的第一位总理；
2.他参加了抗日战争和解放战争；
3.……
注意： 1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.标题已给出，不计入总词数。
My hero
参考范文
My hero
My hero is Zhou Enlai， who was the first premier of the People's Republic of China.
He was a great revolutionary who had devoted all his life to the cause of the liberation of China. He took part in the War of Resistance Against Japanese Aggression and the War of Liberation. He fought bravely against the enemies in order to save the people from great suffering. He was such a man who cared more about the people than himself. He put all the people in his heart except himself.
I admire him so much, though he has been away from us for a long time. I like him best and believe that he will always be alive in the minds of Chinese people.
1.The sight of that old ragged doll recalled my childhood to me.看到那个破旧的玩具娃娃, 我想起了我的童年。
2.In England, a new music form emerged called trip hop, a mixture of jazz, hip hop and electronic music （for example, music played on computers）．在英国，一种被称为迷幻舞曲的新音乐形式出现了，它融合了爵士乐、嘻哈和电子音乐（例如电脑上播放的音乐）。
3.A number of nations have already been in armed conflict over water, and reduced rainfall in the west of the US has resulted in huge forest fires.许多国家已经在水的问题上发生武装冲突，而美国西部由于降水减少导致了森林大火。
4.Light and bright colors make people not only happier but more active.浅色和鲜艳的颜色不但使人心情更愉悦，而且使人更加活泼。
美篇导读
《格列佛游记》是英国作家乔纳森·斯威夫特创作的一部长篇游记体讽刺小说，首次出版于1726年。作品以里梅尔·格列佛船长的口气叙述周游四国的经历。这部小说通过格列佛在利立浦特、布罗卜丁奈格、飞岛国、慧骃国的奇遇，反映了18世纪前半期英国统治阶级的腐败和罪恶，还以较为完美的艺术
形式表达了作者的思想观念。作者用了丰富的讽刺手法和虚构的幻想写出了荒诞而离奇的情节，深刻地反映了当时的英国议会中毫无意义的党派斗争，以及统治集团的昏庸腐朽和唯利是图，对殖民战争的残酷暴戾进行了揭露和批判，同时它在一定程度上歌颂了殖民地人民反抗统治者的英勇斗争。
美篇呈现
Gulliver's Travels （Excerpt）
My gentleness and good behaviour had gained so far on the emperor and his court， and indeed upon the army and people in general， that I began to conceive hopes of getting my liberty in a short time. I took all possible methods to cultivate this favourable disposition. The natives came， by degrees， to be less apprehensive of any danger from me. I would sometimes lie down， and let five or six of them dance on my hand； and at last the boys and girls would venture to come and play at hide-and-seek① in my hair. I had now made a good progress in understanding and
speaking the language. The emperor had a mind one day to entertain me with several of the country shows， wherein they exceed all nations I have known， both for dexterity and magnificence. I was diverted with none so much as that of the rope-dancers， performed upon a slender white thread， extended about two feet， and twelve inches from the ground. Upon which I shall desire liberty， with the reader's patience， to enlarge a little.
This diversion② is only practised by those persons who are candidates for great employments， and high favour at court. They are trained in this art from their youth， and are not always of noble birth， or liberal education. When a great office is vacant③， either by death or disgrace （which often happens，） five or six of those candidates petition the emperor to entertain his majesty and the court with a dance on the rope； and whoever jumps the highest， without falling， succeeds in the office. Very often the chief ministers themselves are commanded to show their skill， and to convince the emperor that they have not lost their faculty. Flimnap， the treasurer④， is allowed to cut a caper on the straight rope， at least an inch
higher than any other lord in the whole empire. I have seen him do the summerset several times together， upon a trencher fixed on a rope which is no thicker than a common packthread in England. My friend Reldresal， principal secretary for private affairs， is， in my opinion， if I am not partial， the second after the treasurer； the rest of the great officers are much upon a par.
格列佛游记（节选）
皇帝和朝臣们对我的君子风范和善良举止很是欢喜。事实上，军队和人民也普遍对我怀有好感，这样我开始希望在短期内重获自由。我用一切可能的办法来讨好他们，渐渐地，当地人不太害怕我对他们会有什么威胁了。有时我枕地而卧，伸手让五六个人在上面跳舞，最后男孩女孩们也敢跑进我的头发里玩捉迷藏了。在听懂和说他们的语言上，我现在也进步颇大。一日，皇帝召我去看他们国内的几种表演，这些演出的精彩恢宏程度超过了我所知的任何国家。我看得最开心的是绳上跳舞表演，他们在一根长约两英尺、离地十二英寸的白色细绳上表演。我打算详细地叙述这件事，请读者不要着急。
只有那些正在候补重要职位或者希望获得朝廷恩宠的人，才有资格表演这种技艺。为了表演这种技艺，他们从小就开始接受训练。这些人并非都是贵族出身，也不一定受过良好教育。每当有重要官职空缺，不论是原官辞世还是失宠撤职（这种事常常发生），就会有五六位候补人员呈请皇帝准许他们给皇帝陛下及朝廷百官表演一次绳上跳舞，谁跳得最高，并且不掉下来，谁就接任这个职位。此外大官们也常常奉命表演这种技艺，以使皇帝相信他们并未忘却自己的本领。在拉直的绳上跳舞，财政大臣福林纳浦跳得比国内任何一位大臣至少要高出一英寸。我曾看到，在一只固定在绳子上的木盘里，他一连翻了好几个跟头，那根绳子只有英国常见的包扎绳那么细。要我不偏袒地说，在我看来，我的朋友内务大臣瑞尔德里沙的本领仅次于财政大臣，至于其余大臣，本领都在伯仲之间。
知识积累
①hide-and-seek n.捉迷藏
②diversion n.消遣；娱乐；转向；转移；转移注意力的事物；分心的事物
③vacant adj.（地方）空着的；无人用的；（职位、工作）空缺的；茫然的；失神的
④treasurer n.会计；司库；财务主管；出纳员
素养链接
乔纳森·斯威夫特（1667~1745）是18世纪英国著名文学家、讽刺作家、政治家，被高尔基誉为“世界文学创造者之一”。其代表作品是《格列佛游记》，其他作品有《一只桶的故事》《书的战争》，另有大量的政论和讽刺诗以抨击英国殖民主义政策，受到读者热烈欢迎。Unit 3 Section Ⅲ Developing ideas & Presenting ideas
【学习目标】
1.了解课文大意,培养略读和查读等阅读能力。(语言能力,思维品质)
2.理解并能够自主运用重要语言点,如单词、短语和句式等的用法。(语言能力)
3.通过阅读,熟悉介绍英雄人物的文体特征,并掌握其写作方法及策略。(语言能力,学习能力)
【合作探究】
语篇研读
Step 1 文本整体理解,关注布局谋篇
Match each paragraph with its main idea according to the passage on Pages 32-33.
( )1.Para.1 ( )2.Para.2
( )3.Para.3 ( )4.Para.4
( )5.Para.5 ( )6.Para.6
( )7.Para.7
A.Lianda's conditions were very tough.
B.In Lianda, the nation's intellectual heritage was not only protected but also fortified.
C.The students at Lianda took up their responsibilities.
D.Lianda's spirit is the blueprint for all universities in China in the modern era.
E.Real war brings suffering and immense challenges.
F.Lianda has become the crowning glory of China's modern universities.
G.Lianda was made up of Peking University, Tsinghua University and Nankai University.
答案 1~7 EGABCFD
Step 2 细读课文,明确教材细节
Read the passage on Pages 32-33 and choose the best answers.
1.Where did Peking, Tsinghua and Nankai University join together
A.In Beijing. B.In Tianjin.
C.In Kunming. D.In Shanghai.
2.Why couldn't the students of Lianda have classes on time
A.Because the university was very remote.
B.Because there were fierce air attacks from Japan.
C.Because there were too many people in a room.
D.Because they had to walk on foot.
3.Who wrote a poem about the contributions of his peers
A.Zha Liangzheng. B.Xu Yuanchong.
C.Yang Zhenning. D.Li Zhengdao.
4.Why has Lianda become the crowning glory of China's modern universities
A.Because of a product of the war.
B.Because of its spirit of perseverance.
C.Because of its collective memory.
D.Because of the honour of the nation.
答案 1~4 CBAB
新知探究
核 心 单 词
知识点1 emerge v.出现;显露 *emergence n.出现;兴起 *emergency n.紧急情况;突发事件 *emerging adj.新兴的;发展初期的
(P32)It is no wonder that many,if not most,of China's leading scholars and scientists emerged at Lianda,including the two Nobel Prize-winning physicists,Yang Zhenning and Li Zhengdao.难怪即使不是大多数,但也有许多中国顶尖的学者和科学家出自联大,包括两位诺贝尔物理学奖得主——杨振宁和李政道。
知识拓展
emerge from 从……中出现或显露
emerge out of 来源于
emerge as 作为……出现
图解释义
The moon emerged from behind the clouds.月亮从云层后露出。
融会应用 Ⅰ.单句填空
(1)Several facts started to emerge my investigation.
(2)The musical forms emerged out the American black experience.
(3)The Pacific region has rapidly emerged a leading force on the world stage.
Ⅱ.单句写作
(4)(2023·四省适应性考试)The Downtown Mesa Festival of the Arts features the work of established and .梅萨市中心艺术节以知名和新兴艺术家的作品为特色。
(5)It is important to .在紧急情况下保持镇静是重要的。
答案 (1)from (2)of (3)as (4)emerging artists (5)keep calm in an emergency
知识点2 representative n.代表 *represent v.代表;象征;表示;作为……的代表
(P33)In 2017,representatives from Peking University,Tsinghua University,Nankai University and Yunnan Normal University gathered to commemorate the 80th anniversary of its founding.2017年,来自北京大学、清华大学、南开大学和云南师范大学的代表们齐聚一堂,纪念联大建校80周年。
知识拓展
a representative of ……的代表
a representative for 为……行事的代表
a representative from 来自……的代表
经典佳句
The association is sending representatives to the conference.协会将派代表出席大会。
When asked by officials to select five representatives to negotiate their demands,the crowd began to shout,“We don't want to be represented.”当官员要求人们选出五名代表来商谈他们的要求时,人们开始大喊:“我们不想被代表。”
融会应用 单句填空
(1)He was in no way a representative dog-trainers in general.
(2)He is a representative a large steel company.
(3)The (represent) from New Zealand spoke for the Pacific Islands Forum.
答案 (1)of (2)for (3)representative
知识点3 sum n.金额;款项;总数;总和 v.共计;计算……的总数
(P35)In 1938,the Japanese army offered a large sum of money for Yang's head and a large number of troops surrounded his men. 1938年,日本军队出了一大笔钱买杨靖宇的人头,大批军队包围了他的部下。
知识拓展
a large sum of money一大笔钱
the sum of sth 总和;总数;全部
be greater/more than the sum of its parts个体相加不如集体的力量大
in sum大体上;总之
do a sum计算;简单计算
sum (sth) up总结;概括
to sum up概括起来说;简而言之
经典佳句
The appeal of this little town is hard to sum up.这座小镇的魅力三言两语难以讲明。
融会应用 Ⅰ.单句填空
(1) sum, the two countries are now true economic partners.
(2)She summed it as “the most brilliant lecture I've ever attended”.
Ⅱ.单句写作
(3) for buying new books for the library.已划拨一大笔款项给图书馆购买新书。
答案 (1)In (2)up (3)A large sum of money has been allocated
知识点4 relevant adj.有关的;切题的 *relevance n.相关性 *irrelevant adj.不相干的;无关紧要的
(P36)Prepare a short presentation on one of the topics from Activity 2 or think of another relevant topic. 准备一份关于活动2中某个主题的简短报告,或者思考另一个相关的主题。
知识拓展
be relevant/irrelevant to...与……有关/无关
totally/completely/largely irrelevant 完全/绝对/基本上无关紧要
irrelevant remarks 不相关的言论
经典佳句
Museums should play a more involved or relevant role in public life.博物馆应扮演一个更具有参与性或与公众生活更相关的角色。
融会应用 Ⅰ.单句填空
(1)Her appearance is not relevant whether she can be a good teacher.
(2)Many people consider politics (relevant) to their lives. That's why they tend not to pay attention to it.
Ⅱ.单句写作
(3)(2023·四省适应性考试)But it does not specify what those symbols mean. Indeed, to a computer, .但它并没有具体说明这些符号的含义。事实上,对于计算机来说,意义是无关紧要的。
答案 (1)to (2)irrelevant (3)meaning is irrelevant
写作探究
介绍英雄人物
对英雄人物的介绍属于记叙文的范畴,它以写人记事为主要内容,以叙述和描写为主要表达方式。一篇好的人物描写一般分为三大部分,即生平介绍、事迹叙述和简短评论。时态的选择可视情况而定。
探究点1 教材范例提炼
课文范例
素材积累
Ⅰ.常用词汇
1.at the age of four 4岁时
2.a boy of sixteen一个16岁的男孩
3.make friends with her和她交朋友
4.be ready to help others乐于助人
5.a lively and smart girl一个活泼聪明的女孩
6.be warm-hearted and good-looking热心肠而且漂亮/俊朗
7.learn from each other and help each other相互学习和相互帮助
8.be highly praised by the teachers and students得到老师和同学的高度称赞
9.participate in the Eighth Route Army参加八路军
10.be born in a poor peasant family出生于一个贫苦的农民家庭
Ⅱ.话题句式
1.He has fair hair and blue eyes.他有金色的头发和蓝色的眼睛。
2.Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12,1809.亚伯拉罕·林肯,一个贫苦家庭的儿子,1809年2月12日出生于肯塔基州。
3.She is an ordinary girl, but her kindness and consideration impress me most.她是一个普普通通的女孩,但她的善良和体贴使我印象深刻。
4.He is a good-looking, kind-hearted man.他是一个俊朗且好心肠的人。
5.He went to college,during which he showed great interest in folk music.他上了大学,在这期间他对民间音乐表现出极大的兴趣。
6.When he was still a boy,he showed great interest in literature.当他还是个孩子的时候,他对文学表现出极大的兴趣。
7.We regard him as our model.我们把他视为榜样。
8.The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader.人们把他作为一个鼓舞人心的领袖而开始爱戴他。
9.Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit.雷锋因他的共产主义精神而受到称赞。
探究点2 写作应用体验
写作典例
请用英语写一篇80词左右的短文简要介绍雷锋。主要内容如下:
雷锋,1940年12月18日生于湖南省望城县,7岁成了孤儿,1962年8月15日逝世。虽然生命只有短暂的22年,但他作为一名解放军战士,努力工作,乐于助人,一生做好事无数,一直被视为每个公民的英雄和楷模。
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分步推进
Step 1 审题谋篇
Step 2 要点翻译
1.翻译词汇
(1) 出生于
(2) v.使成为孤儿
(3) 人民解放军
(4) 做好准备
(5) 做好事
答案 (1)be born in (2)orphan (3)People's Liberation Army
(4)be ready to (5)do good deeds
2.翻译句子
(1)雷锋1940年12月18日出生于湖南望城县,1962年8月15日逝世。
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(2)作为一名人民解放军,他工作努力,并且总是乐于助人。
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(3)他的生命很短,只有22年。
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(4)他在短短的一生中做了无数好事,一直被视为每个公民的英雄和楷模。
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答案
(1)Lei Feng was born in Wangcheng County,Hunan Province, on December 18,1940 and passed away on August 15,1962.
(2)He worked hard and was always ready to help others as a soldier in the People's Liberation Army.
(3)He lived a short life of only 22 years.
(4)He did countless good deeds in his short life and has been regarded all the time as a hero and model for every citizen.
Step 3 句式升级
用although连接上题中的句(2)和句(3)
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答案 Although he lived a short life of only 22 years, as a soldier in the People's Liberation Army, he worked hard and was always ready to help others.
Step 4 连句成篇
利用以上几个句子,加上恰当的连接词和过渡句,必要时可以改变句式,使之成为一篇连贯的文章。
参考范文
Lei Feng was born in Wangcheng County,Hunan Province, on December 18, 1940 and passed away on August 15, 1962.He was orphaned at 7 years old.Although he lived a short life of only 22 years, as a soldier in the People's Liberation Army,he worked hard and was always ready to help others.He did countless good deeds in his short life and has been regarded all the time as a hero and model for every citizen.
In a word,Lei Feng was an example of the soldiers of the People's Liberation Army in China.
【随堂检测】
夯实基础
主题写作
假定你是李华,请你以“My hero”为题,写一篇介绍你心目中的英雄——周恩来的英语短文。内容要点如下:
1.周恩来是新中国的第一位总理;
2.他参加了抗日战争和解放战争;
3.……
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.标题已给出,不计入总词数。
My hero
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参考范文
My hero
My hero is Zhou Enlai, who was the first premier of the People's Republic of China.
He was a great revolutionary who had devoted all his life to the cause of the liberation of China.He took part in the War of Resistance Against Japanese Aggression and the War of Liberation.He fought bravely against the enemies in order to save the people from great suffering. He was such a man who cared more about the people than himself.He put all the people in his heart except himself.
I admire him so much, though he has been away from us for a long time.I like him best and believe that he will always be alive in the minds of Chinese people.
【课外拓展】
视野拓展
1.The sight of that old ragged doll recalled my childhood to me.看到那个破旧的玩具娃娃, 我想起了我的童年。
2.In England, a new music form emerged called trip hop, a mixture of jazz, hip hop and electronic music (for example, music played on computers).在英国,一种被称为迷幻舞曲的新音乐形式出现了,它融合了爵士乐、嘻哈和电子音乐(例如电脑上播放的音乐)。
3.A number of nations have already been in armed conflict over water, and reduced rainfall in the west of the US has resulted in huge forest fires.许多国家已经在水的问题上发生武装冲突,而美国西部由于降水减少导致了森林大火。
4.Light and bright colors make people not only happier but more active.浅色和鲜艳的颜色不但使人心情更愉悦,而且使人更加活泼。
英美文化
美篇导读
《格列佛游记》是英国作家乔纳森·斯威夫特创作的一部长篇游记体讽刺小说,首次出版于1726年。作品以里梅尔·格列佛船长的口气叙述周游四国的经历。这部小说通过格列佛在利立浦特、布罗卜丁奈格、飞岛国、慧骃国的奇遇,反映了18世纪前半期英国统治阶级的腐败和罪恶,还以较为完美的艺术形式表达了作者的思想观念。作者用了丰富的讽刺手法和虚构的幻想写出了荒诞而离奇的情节,深刻地反映了当时的英国议会中毫无意义的党派斗争,以及统治集团的昏庸腐朽和唯利是图,对殖民战争的残酷暴戾进行了揭露和批判,同时它在一定程度上歌颂了殖民地人民反抗统治者的英勇斗争。
美篇呈现
Gulliver's Travels (Excerpt)
My gentleness and good behaviour had gained so far on the emperor and his court, and indeed upon the army and people in general, that I began to conceive hopes of getting my liberty in a short time. I took all possible methods to cultivate this favourable disposition. The natives came, by degrees, to be less apprehensive of any danger from me. I would sometimes lie down, and let five or six of them dance on my hand; and at last the boys and girls would venture to come and play at hide-and-seek① in my hair. I had now made a good progress in understanding and speaking the language. The emperor had a mind one day to entertain me with several of the country shows, wherein they exceed all nations I have known, both for dexterity and magnificence. I was diverted with none so much as that of the rope-dancers, performed upon a slender white thread, extended about two feet, and twelve inches from the ground. Upon which I shall desire liberty, with the reader's patience, to enlarge a little.
This diversion② is only practised by those persons who are candidates for great employments, and high favour at court. They are trained in this art from their youth, and are not always of noble birth, or liberal education. When a great office is vacant③, either by death or disgrace (which often happens,) five or six of those candidates petition the emperor to entertain his majesty and the court with a dance on the rope; and whoever jumps the highest, without falling, succeeds in the office. Very often the chief ministers themselves are commanded to show their skill, and to convince the emperor that they have not lost their faculty. Flimnap, the treasurer④, is allowed to cut a caper on the straight rope, at least an inch higher than any other lord in the whole empire. I have seen him do the summerset several times together, upon a trencher fixed on a rope which is no thicker than a common packthread in England. My friend Reldresal, principal secretary for private affairs, is, in my opinion, if I am not partial, the second after the treasurer; the rest of the great officers are much upon a par.
格列佛游记(节选)
皇帝和朝臣们对我的君子风范和善良举止很是欢喜。事实上,军队和人民也普遍对我怀有好感,这样我开始希望在短期内重获自由。我用一切可能的办法来讨好他们,渐渐地,当地人不太害怕我对他们会有什么威胁了。有时我枕地而卧,伸手让五六个人在上面跳舞,最后男孩女孩们也敢跑进我的头发里玩捉迷藏了。在听懂和说他们的语言上,我现在也进步颇大。一日,皇帝召我去看他们国内的几种表演,这些演出的精彩恢宏程度超过了我所知的任何国家。我看得最开心的是绳上跳舞表演,他们在一根长约两英尺、离地十二英寸的白色细绳上表演。我打算详细地叙述这件事,请读者不要着急。
只有那些正在候补重要职位或者希望获得朝廷恩宠的人,才有资格表演这种技艺。为了表演这种技艺,他们从小就开始接受训练。这些人并非都是贵族出身,也不一定受过良好教育。每当有重要官职空缺,不论是原官辞世还是失宠撤职(这种事常常发生),就会有五六位候补人员呈请皇帝准许他们给皇帝陛下及朝廷百官表演一次绳上跳舞,谁跳得最高,并且不掉下来,谁就接任这个职位。此外大官们也常常奉命表演这种技艺,以使皇帝相信他们并未忘却自己的本领。在拉直的绳上跳舞,财政大臣福林纳浦跳得比国内任何一位大臣至少要高出一英寸。我曾看到,在一只固定在绳子上的木盘里,他一连翻了好几个跟头,那根绳子只有英国常见的包扎绳那么细。要我不偏袒地说,在我看来,我的朋友内务大臣瑞尔德里沙的本领仅次于财政大臣,至于其余大臣,本领都在伯仲之间。
知识积累
①hide-and-seek n.捉迷藏
②diversion n.消遣;娱乐;转向;转移;转移注意力的事物;分心的事物
③vacant adj.(地方)空着的;无人用的;(职位、工作)空缺的;茫然的;失神的
④treasurer n.会计;司库;财务主管;出纳员
素养链接
乔纳森·斯威夫特(1667~1745)是18世纪英国著名文学家、讽刺作家、政治家,被高尔基誉为“世界文学创造者之一”。其代表作品是《格列佛游记》,其他作品有《一只桶的故事》《书的战争》,另有大量的政论和讽刺诗以抨击英国殖民主义政策,受到读者热烈欢迎。
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