(共17张PPT)
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细节描写专题
(心理描写)
目录
表达“喜乐 happiness”
表达“怒气 anger”
表达“哀伤 sorrow”
表达“尴尬 embarrassment”
表达“害怕 scary”
喜乐Happiness
Her eyes are twinkling with excitement.
Her eyebrows smooth.
Her cheeks beam with a bright smile.
She is …
从五官结合去描述
Happiness
She is so happy, her hands and feet dancing.
She claps her hands and jumps up and down with joy.
从身体动作结合去描述
Happiness
She giggles and squeals with excitement.
She bursts out into laughter from the bottom of her heart.
从声音语言结合去描述
summary
body
voice
face
eyes
eyebrows
cheeks
hands
feet
tone
smooth柔和的
twinkle 闪烁
beam眉开眼笑
clap鼓掌
jump /dance
giggle咯咯笑
/squeal轻声尖叫/
Burst into laughter
happiness
He is …
Anger怒火
His cheeks are peppery hot and his eyebrows narrow.
He glares at me with burning eyes and clenched teeth.
从五官结合去描述
Anger
Boiling with rage(怒火) , he clenched his fists .
He lost his temper , and stood up suddenly with anger.
从身体动作结合去描述
Anger
He growls at me through clenched teeth.
从声音语言结合去描述
summary
body
voice
face
eyes
eyebrows
cheeks
fists
feet
tone
glare at瞪
narrow 拧在一起
peppery hot火辣辣的
clench紧握双拳
stand up站了起来
growl咆哮
teeth
clench咬牙切齿
Anger
Sadness/sorrow
He was sitting silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.
As he looked at the food, great sorrow clouded his eyes.
Part 1: eyes, cheek, face
从五官结合去描述
Sadness/sorrow
His hands and shoulders were shaking without a word.
He buried his face in his hands in sadness.
Part 2: body, hands, shoulders
从身体动作结合去描述
Sadness/sorrow
He sat there in silence, memories of her daughter pouring into his mind.
Memories of her daughter pouring into his mind, finally, he burst into tears .
Part 3: voice
从声音语言结合去描述
Ashamed and embarrassed, she dropped his head, not knowing what to do.
又羞愧又尴尬,他低下了头,不知如何是好。
embarrassment
常见:He was very ashamed and embarrassed.
他又羞愧又尴尬。
用以上各种方法描写尴尬
从五官结合去描述
Feeling deeply ashamed and embarrassed, he dropped his eyes and hid his face in the hands.
感到又羞愧又尴尬,他垂下眼睛,双手捂住了脸。真的是羞愧难当啊!
embarrassment
常见:He was very ashamed and embarrassed.
他又羞愧又尴尬。
用以上各种方法描写害怕
When she saw the huge dog, her face turned pale with her eyes full of horror.当她看到那只巨犬的时候,她面色苍白,眼睛里充满了恐惧。
scary
常见:She was afraid of the dog.
她怕狗
用以上各种方法描写尴尬
从五官结合去描述
She was afraid of the dog. Seeing the huge dog, she was too frightened to move an inch.看到这只巨犬,他吓得一动都不敢动了。
scary
常见:She was afraid of the dog.
她怕狗
用以上各种方法描写尴尬
从肢体动作结合去描述