人家课标版B5Unit 4 Making the News Writing(课件34张)

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课件34张PPT。人教课标
高二 必修 5
Unit 4新闻报道是关于最近发生的重要而新鲜的事情的报道或评述,写好一篇高质量的新闻报道应注意以下两个方面:即新闻的题目。它是文章的眼睛,既要体现鲜明的个性,又要生动、形象、有美感,才能引人入胜。是新闻报道内容的概括和浓缩,包括五大要素:时间,地点,人物,起因和结果。导语是新闻报道的精华,也是信息传递的集中体现。是导语之后的新闻展开,补充更加充实。新闻报道由于是反映最近所发生的重要而新鲜的事,所以时态以现在时,过去时为主;篇幅一般不长,内容短小精悍,多用动词,长短句交错使用。 5月1日,高二(3)班的学生志愿者去阳光敬老院开展志愿者活动(送水果、打扫、聊天等)。假如你是校报的英语记者,请按下列要点用英语写一则100-120个词的新闻报道。要求:
1. 时间,地点,人物,活动。
2. 老人们的反应。
3. 简短评论。第一步 认真审题(analyze the requirements)
第二步 谋篇布局(draw up an outline)
第三步 联句成篇(organize the sentences)
第四步 锦上添花(get the article polished up)
第五步 查漏补缺 (check the mistakes)审主题
审体裁 ________
审人称 ________
审时态 ____________

审要求
students, ___________________ time, place, persons, activities
reaction of the elderly
brief evaluationdid voluntary worka letterthe thirdthe past tense{标题(headline) Student Volunteers Brought SunshineWhat would be the headline of this
composition?导语 (lead) Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, ________ Sunshine Nursing Home and ________________________.went todid some voluntary work 正文 (body) They _________ the elderly _____ flowers and fruits. Then they started working at once, __________________ and ________________. Everything done, they sat in the yard ____________________________.presented withcleaning the windowssweeping the floorchatting with the elderly people 评语 (evaluation)What they did has brought ____ to others and ________ their own lives. joy enrichedfirst, second, then, finally /at last , soon, immediately, suddenlyhere, there, on one side… on the other side, in front of, at the back of, next tofor one thing, for the other thing, on one hand, on the other handbut, however, while, though, otherwisebecause, since, as, thanks to, as a result (of)as long as, so long as, on condition that, if, unlessthough, as, even if/though, whether, who (what, when, where) everwhat’s more, besides, to make the matter worse, what’s worsein a word, altogether, all in all, in generalThey gave flowers and fruits to the elderly.
They _________ the elderly ____ flowers and fruits. They said the students had done so much for them and they would never forget them.
They said it was _____ a beautiful day _____ they would remember it forever. suchthatWhen they arrived
______ their arrivalUpon They started working at once,
________ the windows and ________
the floor.
2. _______________, they sat in the yard
________ with the elderly people. 巧用分词cleaningsweepingEverything done chatting名词性从句要用得妙 What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives. They presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. _____ they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. _______________, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people. Then Everything done On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work. Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. Then they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people. When It was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness. They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.
LiYue and ZhangHua are very happy. What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.