2024届浙江省台州市高三二模英语读后续写---初来炸的新手，避免犯同样的错误讲义
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2024届浙江省台州市高三二模英语读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I stood in the restaurant kitchen, my eyes wide, arms hanging awkwardly, ready to work but unsure of what to do. “You will be trained first, ” my manager Aaron said, “and do remember to check every detail! ” With these words, he walked away.
我站在餐厅的厨房里，睁大眼睛，笨拙地垂着手臂，准备工作，但不确定该做什么。“你会先接受培训，”我的经理亚伦说，“记住检查每一个细节！”说完，他走开了。
A workmate threw me a dish brush and said, “Let's get started. ” He introduced me to the basics of washing dishes and demonstrated the process. This was the beginning of my part-time job, a new stage where I was both eager to learn and anxious about the challenges ahead.
一位同事扔给我一把洗碗刷，说：“我们开始吧。”他向我介绍了洗碗的基本知识，并演示了这个过程。这是我兼职工作的开始，在这个新阶段，我既渴望学习，又对未来的挑战感到焦虑。
On a Friday night, Aaron swiftly entered the kitchen. “Who has just bused（收拾）the back right table ” he shouted, his voice sharp with urgency. My hands, slippery with bubbles from the bowl I was washing, nearly let it slip through my fingers. I wanted to say I was guilty, but Aaron's cold stare didn't promise a happy reward for the guy who admitted. Finally, a mix of fear and my own conscience pushed the response out of my mouth.
一个星期五的晚上，亚伦迅速走进厨房。“谁刚刚坐公共汽车(收拾）右边后面的桌子？”他喊道，声音急促而尖锐。我的手被洗碗里的气泡弄得很滑，差点从手指间溜走。我本想说我有罪，但亚伦冷酷的眼神并不能保证给那个承认的人一个愉快的奖励。最后，恐惧和我自己的良心交织在一起，把我的反应从嘴里说了出来。
“I did, Aaron. ”“我做到了，亚伦。”
“What were you thinking Get back out here and look at what you missed!” His words forced me forward. I grabbed a rag（抹布）and followed him out to table twenty-two. As we made our way through the restaurant, he said something about rags, but I didn't hear clearly with other conversations going on around us.
“你在想什么？回到这里，看看你错过了什么！”他的话迫使我向前走。我抓了块抹布(抹布）跟着他走到二十二号桌。当我们穿过餐厅时，他说了一些关于抹布的话，但我听不清我们周围正在进行的其他对话。
I quickly realized the true issue was the mess beneath the table. A nearly full cup of beer had tipped over, creating a small lake on the floor. It was a significant mistake on my part. “Take care of it! ” Aaron tuned and stormed off to the front of the restaurant.
我很快意识到真正的问题是桌子下面一团糟。一杯几乎满了的啤酒倒了，在地板上形成了一个小湖。这是我的一个重大错误。“保重！”亚伦调整了一下，怒气冲冲地走到餐厅前面。
I dropped down to clean up the beer. That was when another problem occurred. I had brought only one rag. One already wet rag. It did nothing but increase the size of the lake. “More rags, ” I thought. Immediately, I rushed into the kitchen and hurriedly grabbed five dry rags, hoping Aaron wouldn't notice my brief absence.
我倒下来清理啤酒。那是另一个问题发生的时候。我只带了一块抹布。一块已经湿了的抹布。它什么也没做，只是增加了湖面的大小。“更多的破布，”我想。我立刻冲进厨房，匆匆抓了五块干抹布，希望亚伦不会注意到我短暂的缺席。
注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I had just rushed out when I found Aaron standing in my way. After cleaning up the mess, I reflected on Aaron's words.
主题
文章的主题是关于个人的成长，特别是在面对挑战、犯错和解决问题时的适应与学习过程。它强调了勇气、责任感、学习适应能力和解决问题的能力对于职业发展的重要性，并展示了通过这些经历获得的个人成长和成就感。
伏笔：
1.细节检查的强调:"do remember to强调了细节的重要性
2.湿抹布的使用:主人公在洗碗时手上滑滑泡沫。这个细节在后来清理啤酒洒落时做铺垫
，湿滑的地面，反而让情况要得更糟糕。
主人公的紧张状态，由于是新手，缺乏经验，在面对询问时，更加手足无措，紧张之下让手中的碗滑落。
忙碌的周五夜晚
Aron语气中的紧迫感
主人公内心的冲突 I wanted to say I was guilty, but Aaron's cold stare didn't promise a happy reward for the guy who admitted.
下水文：
I had just rushed out when I found Aaron standing in my way. His stern look suggested he was about to comment on my earlier absence, but to my relief, he simply moved aside, allowing me to rectify my mistake. With the fresh rags in hand, I got to work, sopping up the spilled beer and mopping the floor until it was as good as new. Despite the initial panic, I managed to clean the mess thoroughly, and this small victory helped restore a bit of my shaken confidence.
After cleaning up the mess, I reflected on Aaron’s words. They were harsh but fair. It was a fast-paced environment and attention to detail was paramount; this slip-up served as a stark reminder. Over time, I became more meticulous in my duties, double-checking every task before considering it complete.In the subsequent weeks, I noticed a shift in my relationship with my colleagues and even with Aaron. They saw my commitment to learning from my mistakes and recognized my dedication to the job. As the weeks turned into months, the awkward uncertainty I had felt on that first day was replaced by a sense of belonging and competence. This was not just another part-time job; it was a lesson in responsibility and personal growth, a lesson I would carry with me into the future.
参考范文：
I had just rushed out when 1 found Aaron standing in my way. “What's up " he asked sharply, his eyes fixed on me.Feeling the weight of my mistake. I stammered nervously,. “1 need dry rags..t..clean" Upon hearing this. Aaron let out a heavy sigh. “You should have checked every detail," he remarked, a hint of disappointment in his voice. “This job isn't just about reacting, it's also about being careful. Now, go clean that up!" Avoiding his gaze, I dashed towards table twenty-two.With an ample supply of rags, I threw myself into the task, tirelessly mopping, scrubbing, and wiping.After cleaning up the mess, I reflected on Aaron's words. They were sharp but absolutely right. My inexperience and initial anxiety in this new job had led me to overlook crucial details, and I should have been more mindful of my work.Taking a deep breath, I returned to my duties, bearing Aaron's words in mind. Withe very dish washed and every table cleared., I made sure to double-check my work. Everything went well and soon I realized this carefulness would not just apply to cleaning:, it would influence every aspect of my job, preparing me embrace any challenge with responsibility and confidence.
语篇素材积累
我的眼睛瞪得大大的my eyes wide
手臂尴尬地垂下arms hanging awkwardly
他的声音急促尖锐his voice sharp with urgency
从我嘴里挤出回应push the response out of my mouth
抓起一块抹布通过grab a rag to make our way through
打翻tip over
蹲下，降下storm off to
掉下来drop down
清理clean up
冲进rush into
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I stood in the restaurant kitchen, my eyes wide, arms hanging awkwardly, ready to work but unsure of what to do. “You will be trained first, ” my manager Aaron said, “and do remember to check every detail! ” With these words, he walked away.
我站在餐厅的厨房里，睁大眼睛，笨拙地垂着手臂，准备工作，但不确定该做什么。“你会先接受培训，”我的经理亚伦说，“记住检查每一个细节！”说完，他走开了。
A workmate threw me a dish brush and said, “Let's get started. ” He introduced me to the basics of washing dishes and demonstrated the process. This was the beginning of my part-time job, a new stage where I was both eager to learn and anxious about the challenges ahead.
一位同事扔给我一把洗碗刷，说：“我们开始吧。”他向我介绍了洗碗的基本知识，并演示了这个过程。这是我兼职工作的开始，在这个新阶段，我既渴望学习，又对未来的挑战感到焦虑。
On a Friday night, Aaron swiftly entered the kitchen. “Who has just bused（收拾）the back right table ” he shouted, his voice sharp with urgency. My hands, slippery with bubbles from the bowl I was washing, nearly let it slip through my fingers. I wanted to say I was guilty, but Aaron's cold stare didn't promise a happy reward for the guy who admitted. Finally, a mix of fear and my own conscience pushed the response out of my mouth.
一个星期五的晚上，亚伦迅速走进厨房。“谁刚刚坐公共汽车(收拾）右边后面的桌子？”他喊道，声音急促而尖锐。我的手被洗碗里的气泡弄得很滑，差点从手指间溜走。我本想说我有罪，但亚伦冷酷的眼神并不能保证给那个承认的人一个愉快的奖励。最后，恐惧和我自己的良心交织在一起，把我的反应从嘴里说了出来。
“I did, Aaron. ”“我做到了，亚伦。”
“What were you thinking Get back out here and look at what you missed!” His words forced me forward. I grabbed a rag（抹布）and followed him out to table twenty-two. As we made our way through the restaurant, he said something about rags, but I didn't hear clearly with other conversations going on around us.
“你在想什么？回到这里，看看你错过了什么！”他的话迫使我向前走。我抓了块抹布(抹布）跟着他走到二十二号桌。当我们穿过餐厅时，他说了一些关于抹布的话，但我听不清我们周围正在进行的其他对话。
I quickly realized the true issue was the mess beneath the table. A nearly full cup of beer had tipped over, creating a small lake on the floor. It was a significant mistake on my part. “Take care of it! ” Aaron tuned and stormed off to the front of the restaurant.
我很快意识到真正的问题是桌子下面一团糟。一杯几乎满了的啤酒倒了，在地板上形成了一个小湖。这是我的一个重大错误。“保重！”亚伦调整了一下，怒气冲冲地走到餐厅前面。
I dropped down to clean up the beer. That was when another problem occurred. I had brought only one rag. One already wet rag. It did nothing but increase the size of the lake. “More rags, ” I thought. Immediately, I rushed into the kitchen and hurriedly grabbed five dry rags, hoping Aaron wouldn't notice my brief absence.
我倒下来清理啤酒。那是另一个问题发生的时候。我只带了一块抹布。一块已经湿了的抹布。它什么也没做，只是增加了湖面的大小。“更多的破布，”我想。我立刻冲进厨房，匆匆抓了五块干抹布，希望亚伦不会注意到我短暂的缺席。
注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I had just rushed out when I found Aaron standing in my way. After cleaning up the mess, I reflected on Aaron's words.
主题
文章的主题是关于个人的成长，特别是在面对挑战、犯错和解决问题时的适应与学习过程。它强调了勇气、责任感、学习适应能力和解决问题的能力对于职业发展的重要性，并展示了通过这些经历获得的个人成长和成就感。
伏笔：
1.细节检查的强调:"do remember to强调了细节的重要性
2.湿抹布的使用:主人公在洗碗时手上滑滑泡沫。这个细节在后来清理啤酒洒落时做铺垫
，湿滑的地面，反而让情况要得更糟糕。
主人公的紧张状态，由于是新手，缺乏经验，在面对询问时，更加手足无措，紧张之下让手中的碗滑落。
忙碌的周五夜晚
Aron语气中的紧迫感
主人公内心的冲突 I wanted to say I was guilty, but Aaron's cold stare didn't promise a happy reward for the guy who admitted.
下水文：
I had just rushed out when I found Aaron standing in my way. His stern look suggested he was about to comment on my earlier absence, but to my relief, he simply moved aside, allowing me to rectify my mistake. With the fresh rags in hand, I got to work, sopping up the spilled beer and mopping the floor until it was as good as new. Despite the initial panic, I managed to clean the mess thoroughly, and this small victory helped restore a bit of my shaken confidence.
After cleaning up the mess, I reflected on Aaron’s words. They were harsh but fair. It was a fast-paced environment and attention to detail was paramount; this slip-up served as a stark reminder. Over time, I became more meticulous in my duties, double-checking every task before considering it complete.In the subsequent weeks, I noticed a shift in my relationship with my colleagues and even with Aaron. They saw my commitment to learning from my mistakes and recognized my dedication to the job. As the weeks turned into months, the awkward uncertainty I had felt on that first day was replaced by a sense of belonging and competence. This was not just another part-time job; it was a lesson in responsibility and personal growth, a lesson I would carry with me into the future.
参考范文：
I had just rushed out when 1 found Aaron standing in my way. “What's up " he asked sharply, his eyes fixed on me.Feeling the weight of my mistake. I stammered nervously,. “1 need dry rags..t..clean" Upon hearing this. Aaron let out a heavy sigh. “You should have checked every detail," he remarked, a hint of disappointment in his voice. “This job isn't just about reacting, it's also about being careful. Now, go clean that up!" Avoiding his gaze, I dashed towards table twenty-two.With an ample supply of rags, I threw myself into the task, tirelessly mopping, scrubbing, and wiping.After cleaning up the mess, I reflected on Aaron's words. They were sharp but absolutely right. My inexperience and initial anxiety in this new job had led me to overlook crucial details, and I should have been more mindful of my work.Taking a deep breath, I returned to my duties, bearing Aaron's words in mind. Withe very dish washed and every table cleared., I made sure to double-check my work. Everything went well and soon I realized this carefulness would not just apply to cleaning:, it would influence every aspect of my job, preparing me embrace any challenge with responsibility and confidence.
语篇素材积累
我的眼睛瞪得大大的my eyes wide
手臂尴尬地垂下arms hanging awkwardly
他的声音急促尖锐his voice sharp with urgency
从我嘴里挤出回应push the response out of my mouth
抓起一块抹布通过grab a rag to make our way through
打翻tip over
蹲下，降下storm off to
掉下来drop down
清理clean up
冲进rush into