八年级下册Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came 作文学案
A篇
【写作题目】
难忘的事件
下列图片描述的是上周日下午王雷和张鹏所经历的一件事,请根据这些图片写一篇作文。
要求:1.字迹工整,语法正确,意思连贯,合乎逻辑,可适当发挥;
2.词数 80 左右。
【范文】
Wang Lei and Zhang Peng are good friends. They both like playing soccer very much. Last Sunday, they decided to play soccer to relax in their neighborhood in the afternoon. They were both good at soccer and they played happily. Suddenly, Wang Lei kicked the ball so hard that it flew to the window of Granny Li's house and made the window broken. The pieces of the window fell onto the ground. Wang Lei and Zhang Peng felt very sorry, so they went to Granny Li's house and said sorry to her. Although they did something wrong, they were still good boys because they were honest. Everyone should try to be an honest person. 人称:第三人称 时态:一般过去时 第一段:简要介绍王雷和张鹏的爱好 第二段:描述两人因踢球导致玻璃损坏并赔礼道歉的过程 第三段:强调诚实做人的重要性 【高分亮点】 decide to do sth. 决定做某事 be good at...擅长... so...that...太...以至于... fall onto落在……上 say sorry to sb.向某人道歉 try to do尝试做某事
【译文】
王磊和张鹏是好朋友。他们都非常喜欢踢足球。
上周日下午,他们决定在附近踢足球放松一下。他们都擅长足球,踢得很开心。突然,王磊把球踢得太用力了,球飞到李奶奶家的窗户上,把窗户打破了。窗户的碎片掉在地上。王磊和张鹏感到很抱歉,所以他们去李奶奶家向她道歉。
虽然他们做错了,但他们仍然是好孩子,因为他们是诚实的。每个人都应该努力做一个诚实的人。
B篇
【写作题目】
过去发生的一些事情,有的令人记忆深刻,有的令人震惊不已,有的令人深深感动...,请你记录一件过去发生的事情。
内容包括:
(1)事情发生的时间、地点、起因等;
(2)你当时的状态;
(3)你对这件事的感受。
作文要求:
(1)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名、地点和考生的真实姓名;(2)语句连贯,词数80个左右。作文的标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
【范文】
An Unforgettable Event An unforgettable event happened when I was in Grade Seven.That day was Teachers’ Day. We were preparing a surprise for our head teacher. The bell rang. Our head teacher was coming to the classroom. When the teacher started the lesson, all of us stood up and said loudly, “Happy Teachers’ Day, Miss Xie!” And then, I walked up to her excitedly and gave her a bunch of flowers. Our teacher was moved. This event was unforgettable because I learned that we should express our love to the people we care about. 人称:第一人称 时态:一般过去时 第一段:事情发生的时间、地点、起因等 第二段:你当时的状态 第三段:你对这件事的感受。 【高分亮点】 unforgettable event 难忘的事 prepare sth. for sb. 为某人准备某事 walk up to sb. 走向某人 a bunch of flowers 一束花 express sth. to sb. 向某人表达某事
【译文】
难忘的一件事
七年级时发生了一件难忘的事。那天是教师节。我们正准备给班主任一个惊喜。
铃响了。我们的班主任正走进教室。当老师开始上课时,我们都站起来大声说:“谢老师,教师节快乐!”然后,我兴奋地走向她,给了她一束花。我们的老师很感动。
这件事是难忘的,因为我学到了我们应该向我们关心的人表达我们的爱。
C篇
【写作题目】
假设你是王芳,你家附近有一家工厂发生了爆炸。你的朋友Helen得知这件事之后给你发来邮件表示关心,并询问爆炸时的情况以及你和你的家人当时的活动。请你根据以下思维导图给她回一封邮件。
参考词汇:explosion 爆炸
注意:
(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计人总词数。
【范文】
Dear Helen, Thanks for your last e-mail. Don't worry about me. I am very fine. Now let me tell you something about the explosion. When it happened, I heard a huge noise and could feel the ground shaking. And at that time, I was doing my homework in my own room. My father was surfing the Internet while my mother was watching TV. We were very shocked and didn't know what was happening. The next day we learned the accident from the TV news. Luckily, nobody was hurt in the accident. How re you these days I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Yours , Wang Fang 人称:第一人称 时态:一般过去时为主 第一段:描述爆炸时的情况以及我和我的家人当时的活动和事故的结果 第二段:表示问候并期待受到回信 【高分亮点】 1.Don't worry about sb. 不要为某人担心。 2.let me tell you something about 让我告诉你一些关于... 3.surfing the Internet 上网冲浪 4. in the accident 在事故中 5.looking forward to doing sth.盼望着做某事 6.hear from sb. 得到(某人)的消息,接到(某人)的信
【译文】
亲爱的海伦,
谢谢你的上一封邮件。别为我担心。我很好。现在让我告诉你一些关于爆炸的事情。当它发生的时候,我听到一声巨响,并能感觉到地面在晃动。那时,我正在自己的房间里做作业。我爸爸在上网,我妈妈在看电视。我们非常震惊,不知道发生了什么。第二天,我们从电视新闻中得知了这起事故。幸运的是,没有人在事故中受伤。
你最近好吗 我期待着你的消息。
你的,
王芳