(共25张PPT)
Summary writing
By the end of the class we will be able to :
1.Learn how to find the key points.
2. Learn how to paraphrase the key points.
Step 1. Read for the topic and structure(确定体裁,明确主题及结构)
Write a summary with the steps& tips
the importance of getting up early
What is the style of the passage
A. Narration B. Exposition C. Argumentation
记叙文 说明文 议论文
What is the main idea of the passage
It’s mainly about__________________________
Step 2. Explore for the key information of each paragraph (划主题句,找关键信息)
Group work
Getting up early is of great importance to us all.
para.1:
para.2:
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para.3:
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para.4:
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para.5:
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Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and get up early, we would be energetic(充满活力的) the whole day. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all.
Para. 1
search for the key points
In fact, morning is the best time of a day. In the morning, the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditions(条件). Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than any other time of the day.
Para. 2
search for the key points
Additionally, if we get up early and do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, without doubt we can build our bodies and become much healthier. That is why many people getting up early do physical exercise year after year.
Para. 3
search for the key points
Additionally,
We also will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. For example, if everyone in the family gets up early, wife will have enough time to prepare the breakfast for the whole family. Children will have enough time to catch the school bus, and husband will never forget to change his dirty shirt. Everything is in order. What a harmonious scene! However, if we get up late, we'll probably have to do everything in a great hurry, making it in a mess.
Para. 4
search for the key points
also
For example
Besides
Let us remember getting up early is a good habit and try our best to keep it. Late risers may find it difficult to form the habit of getting up early. They have to make efforts to do so. If you want to get up early, sleeping earlier the night before expect to be successful. Besides you can set your alarm clock or ask someone whom you know will be awake at that time to call you . If we stick to getting up early every day, we will certainly benefit a lot from it.
Para. 5
search for the key points
Para. Key points
1 Getting up early is of great importance to us all.
2 In the morning, … usually in the best conditions.
3 If we get up early …become much healthier.
4 We will also have …work or study of the day …
5 …sleeping earlier the night before … Besides, …ask someone to call you.
Exposition
(说明文)
topic
reasons
suggestions
Step 2. Explore for the key information of each paragraph (划主题句,找关键信息)
1:Cut out the details.
2. Focus on the signal words.
Methods of searching for the key information
Getting up early is of great importance to us all.
paraphrase
1. Rising early is of great significance to us all.
importance
significance
be of great importance
play an important part
Synonyms
A word or an expression which means the same as another word or expression
2. Getting up early plays an import part in our life.
Step 3. paraphrase (改写)
Getting up
Rising
Getting up early is of great importance to us all.
paraphrase
3. It is important for us to get up early.
importance (n.)
important (adj.)
Change sentence patterns改变句式
4. Getting up early plays an import part in our life.
Change part of the speech改变词性
5. Great importance has been attached to getting up early.
synonyms(近义词)
change sentence
patterns (改变句式)
change part
of speech(改变词性)
Useful methods of paraphrasing
Getting up early is of great importance to us all.
If we get up early …become much healthier.
In the morning, … usually in the best conditions.
…sleeping earlier the night before … Besides, …ask someone to call you.
We will also have …work or study of the day …
while; however; nevertheless; despite the fact that; in spite of; on the contrary…
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转折
therefore; as a result; consequently; because of; accordingly; in this way…
因果
in short; in brief;to sum up; on the whole; in a word …
递进
总结
How to make a passage?
what's more; what's worse; worse still; besides; in addition; moreover; furthermore…
Tip:Add proper transitional words
coherent
logical
Para. Key points
1 Getting up early is of great importance to us all.
2 In the morning, … usually in the best conditions.
3 If we get up early …become much healthier.
4 We will also have …work or study of the day …
5 …sleeping earlier the night before … Besides, …ask someone to call you.
Exposition
(说明文)
topic
reasons
suggestions
Mind map
Step 4. writing and assessment
Write the summary with connectives(连接词) to make it coherent(连贯).
Write a summary with the steps& tips
内容 总分为25分;一个星星代表1分,
5星-好 4星-较好 3星-一般 2星-较差 1星-差
理解准确,涵盖全部要点 ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇 ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
有效使用语句间连接成分,结构紧凑 ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
完全使用自己的语言 ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
字数60左右(不少于40不多于80); 标点规范;拼写正确;书写工整美观 ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
Assessments (评价)
Appreciation in group
Share your compositions in groups and choose the best one in your group to appreciate together.
Since ancient times, great importance has been attached to getting up early, for morning is a fantastic time to enjoy the freshest air and have better memory. What’s more, people who stick to physical exercise in the morning will be increasingly healthy. And the most important thing is that getting up early can enable us to make good preparations for the day. Finally, sleeping earlier and setting an alarm clock or turning to others are the suggestions for the late risers.
A sample writing
The importance of getting up early in the morning can never be too overemphasized. In the first place, our brain works faster and more correctly. What’s more, we can be increasingly healthy by breathing the fresh air and working out in the morning. In addition, it enables us to make good preparations for the day. Finally, sleeping earlier and setting an alarm clock or turning to others are good for the late risers.
Step 1. Read for the style, topic and structure(确定体裁,明确主题及结构)
Step 2. Explore for the key information of each paragraph (划主题句,找关键信息)
Step 3. paraphrase (改写)
Step 4. polish the passage (改良)
Steps for summary writing
Useful methods of paraphrasing
synonyms(近义词)
change sentence patterns (改变句式)
change the part of speech(改变词性)
Complete and further polish your summary after class.
Homework
types key information
记叙文 narration 人物+时间+地点+事件(起因+发展+结果)
说明文 exposition 描写某事物的性质功用。即“对象+性质功用+利好”;
针对某个问题提出解决方法或措施。即“问题+解决方法”;
介绍某现象及其原因和结果。即“现象+原因+结果”
议论文 argumentation 论点+论据(+结论)
1. 确定文体 the types of the passage
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