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(共21张PPT)
读后续写技能提升
——遣词造句
Step1 Lead-in
Louisa Cantoni became aware of a young man leaning against the side of her house, a cigarette hanging from his mouth. He looked to be 13 or 14 years old with threatening, dark brown eyes. When she was younger, the little ones would flock around her. They loved her Italian accent and flowers and always stayed nearby when it was tomato season, popping her sweet tomatoes into their mouths. Those sweet memories were just that. So much had changed in the neighborhood. The Italian section of the downtown area had been turned into low-rent housing and overgrown yards. New renters had just moved in and worn her out with all the rudeness, the shouting, and the sad faces of the grannies.One day, Louisa was harvesting the last of her vegetables when a shadow appeared from behind her. She knew it was the boy. “What, what do you want from me ” She asked in a tired tone. The boy stood silent for a while. “My momma, she likes flowers, show me how ” he offered. “Show you what, how to be a nice person ” Louisa had no interest in showing this boy anything. “Show me how to grow those.” He pointed to the flowers. Louisa sighed. “Just go on away and leave me alone.” “You ain’t gotta be so mean,” Jevon murmured and left. The next day, the boy came as usual, but she noticed he was different, younger, innocent and beautiful with smooth brown skin and broad shoulders. “What is your name, young man ” She asked. “My name Jevon.” “Thank you, I am Louisa. Miss Louisa to you.” She stuck out her hand which he reluctantly shook. “What is it you want from me You stare at me; you steal my zinnias（百日菊）. That’s not nice, Jevon.”“I want to learn how to grow a flower for my momma.” He sounded like a little boy.“I have rules, Jevon. No rudeness, no hoodie（连帽衫）, pull your pants up, and no cigarettes, ever.”“You’re not my momma. I don’t have to do any of that,” he responded.
九江市2024年高考英语第二次模拟试题读后续写
注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Five days later, Jevon showed up in a clean T-shirt and belted pants. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Time flying, Jevon became a Harvard freshman, eager to see Miss Louisa. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
状语
定语
名词性
从句
倒装
虚拟
强调
特殊句
to do
done
doing
非谓语
百日菊zinnias
高级句型
___ _made Louisa surprised and satisfied was Jevon’s changes.
(1) Adverbial clause 状语从句
(2) Attributive clause 定语从句
(3) Noun clause 名词性从句
What
Louisa felt surprised and satisfied_____ she noticed
Jevon’s changes.
Louisa noticed Jevon’s changes.
She felt surprised and satisfied.
when
1. Clauses 从句
Louisa noticed Jevon’s changes, _____ made she surprised and satisfied.
which
emotions + reactions
Step2 Presentation
Relatives 关系词
①She felt surprised and satisfied when she noticed his changes.
She noticed his changes,______ (make) her surprised and
satisfied.
2. Non-finite verb 非谓语动词
(notice) his changes, she felt surprised and satisfied.
②She noticed his changes, which made her surprised and
satisfied.
(1) Non-finite verb Attributive /adverbial Clauses
emotions + reactions
Noticing
making
n
2. Non-finite verb 非谓语动词
(2) with 复合结构
(3)独立主格结构
高三（1）班李鑫怡
S
V
O
S
V
O
S
be fixed on
With＋sth＋doing sth, Sb do sth.
With＋sth＋done sth, Sb do sth.
Sth＋doing sth, Sb do sth.
Sth＋done sth, Sb do sth.
O
With
高三（1）班朱瑞奇
②never; not until;not... only, but...; no sooner... than 等
(1)Inverted sentence 倒装句
她是如此惊讶以至于她不敢相信她的眼睛。
① So +adj.+be +sb +that...
So surprised was she that she could not believe her eyes.
3. Special sentence patterns 特殊句型
③only+状语
emotions + reactions
topic sentence
直到这时,Louisa才意识到她小小的善举给他带来了大大的不同。
her small act of kindness made a great difference to the boy.
Only then did Louisa realize that
② Without/But for sth, sb would have done sth;
3. Special sentence patterns 特殊句型
(2) Subjunctive mood 虚拟语气
If it had not been for Louisa’s guidance and care, he would not have grown in a right track.
高三（1）班李鑫怡
Without/But for Louisa’s guidance and care, he would not have grown in a right track.
①If引导虚拟条件句
If Sb did sth, Sb would do sth.现在
If Sb had done sth, Sb would have done sth.过去
3. Special sentence patterns 特殊句型
(3) Emphatic sentence强调句：
Topic sentence
高三（4）班汪倩楠
It is / was ... that / who ...
The little match girl died on Christmas Eve.
It was on Christmas Eve that the little match girl died.
Atmosphere
好奇地问
毫不犹豫地回答
耐心地解释
兴奋地尖叫
4.Words and phrases
①笼统词 具体词
②Sb ~ +adv.
③Sb ~ +prep.+n.
④Sb~ +in a +adj. + voice/in a voice of+n.
say
explain patiently
scream excitedly
ask with curiosity
respond without hesitation
ask in a polite voice/ in a voice of politeness
礼貌地问
3. (他如此礼貌)she could hardly believe it.
2. (既开心又满足)
she accepted the bouquet.
1. (令她惊讶的是)
he brought her a bunch of zinnias.
Step3 Summary
1.Emotions
④With +n., Sb do sth.
①To one’s +n., Sb do sth.
②What +v.+ sb+ be+ that...
③adj. and adj., Sb do sth.
⑤So +adj. +be+ sb that...
To her surprise,/What surprised her was that
Joyed and Satisfied / With joy and satisfaction，
So polite was he that
4.A sense /feeling/wave of （自豪感）flooded / swept over her.
pride
⑥无灵主语
Personification拟人
2. Reactions
① Sb do sth, do sth and do sth.
②Doing sth, Sb do sth, doing sth. (主动doing/ having done)
③Done, Sb do sth, doing sth. (被动/状态)
They ______ the seeds, _______them every day and ______ for them to grow up.
the seeds, they watered them every
day, for them to grow up.
他们种下种子，每天浇水，等着他们长大。
Having planted
waiting
d
Parallelism排比
planted
watered
waited
Step3 Summary
be overwhelmed with
状态
①无灵主语
②以景衬情
3. Atmosphere
S
V
O
高三（2）班邱仔岩
Personification拟人
kindness and
warmth embarked
embark on doing 开始做
花园中弥散着香气，善良和温暖的花朵在他们心中绽放。
Step3 Summary
witness
④情感升华
4. Topic
①名言式结尾
③修辞结尾
Step3 Summary
Only then did sb realize the true meaning of +名言
②氛围结尾
From then on, Sb (never) do sth.
Only then did sb.realize that…
...floated in the air/be bathed in...“飘在空中/沉浸在”
Metaphor比喻
无灵主语
Personification拟人
as/like/as if...
Step4 Practice
Group 1:
Group 2:
Group 3: Topic sentence:
Finally, he took a bunch of zinnias to visit her. He was excited and joyed. He rushed to Louisa’s house. “Here you are. Thank you.”Jevon said. “You saved me from the dark. I cannot become a nice person today if you didn’t help me.” he said again. When Louisa saw the pretty flowers, she cannot help crying. She didn’t realize her small act should make a great difference to him.
“Madam could you please tell me how to grow a flower ” Jevon said. Louisa stared at the boy in front of her.
She realized his determination and perseverance. She was excited and satisfied. She smiled and said, “What a nice boy. Let’s learn to do it.” Later, Jevon learned how to plant a flower. He also leaned to be a nice man.
“Madam, could you please tell me how to grow a flower ” Jevon uttered in a warm tone. Staring at the innocent and adorable boy in front of her, Louisa realized his determination and perseverance. With smile of excitement and satistaction lightening up Louisa’s face, she said, “What a nice boy ! Let’s commence to learn how to do it.” After that, to Louisa’s credit, not only did Jevon learn how to plant a flower, but also learn how to be a nice man.
doing sth, Sb do sth.
With＋sth＋doing sth, Sb do sth.
not only..., but also....倒装
Excited and overjoyed, he packed a bunch of zinnas seriously and rushed towards Louisa’s house. He uttered and beamed, “Here you are, thank you for all you have done.” No sooner had Louisa spotted the pretty flowers than tears welled up in her eyes. “It was you who saved me from the dark. But for your help, I would not have been who I am today.” Only then did Louisa realize her small act of kindness made a great difference to the boy. Eminent scent lingering in the garden, the flower of kindness and friendship embarked upon blossoming in both of their hearts.
no sooner...than ...倒装
无灵主语
but for...虚拟
only then...倒装
sth＋doing sth, Sb do sth.
adj.+adj.状语
强调
1. Please polish your writing.
2. Share your writings with your classmates.
Step5 Homework
Thank you!
读后续写技能提升
——遣词造句
Step1 Lead-in
Louisa Cantoni became aware of a young man leaning against the side of her house, a cigarette hanging from his mouth. He looked to be 13 or 14 years old with threatening, dark brown eyes. When she was younger, the little ones would flock around her. They loved her Italian accent and flowers and always stayed nearby when it was tomato season, popping her sweet tomatoes into their mouths. Those sweet memories were just that. So much had changed in the neighborhood. The Italian section of the downtown area had been turned into low-rent housing and overgrown yards. New renters had just moved in and worn her out with all the rudeness, the shouting, and the sad faces of the grannies.One day, Louisa was harvesting the last of her vegetables when a shadow appeared from behind her. She knew it was the boy. “What, what do you want from me ” She asked in a tired tone. The boy stood silent for a while. “My momma, she likes flowers, show me how ” he offered. “Show you what, how to be a nice person ” Louisa had no interest in showing this boy anything. “Show me how to grow those.” He pointed to the flowers. Louisa sighed. “Just go on away and leave me alone.” “You ain’t gotta be so mean,” Jevon murmured and left. The next day, the boy came as usual, but she noticed he was different, younger, innocent and beautiful with smooth brown skin and broad shoulders. “What is your name, young man ” She asked. “My name Jevon.” “Thank you, I am Louisa. Miss Louisa to you.” She stuck out her hand which he reluctantly shook. “What is it you want from me You stare at me; you steal my zinnias（百日菊）. That’s not nice, Jevon.”“I want to learn how to grow a flower for my momma.” He sounded like a little boy.“I have rules, Jevon. No rudeness, no hoodie（连帽衫）, pull your pants up, and no cigarettes, ever.”“You’re not my momma. I don’t have to do any of that,” he responded.
九江市2024年高考英语第二次模拟试题读后续写
注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Five days later, Jevon showed up in a clean T-shirt and belted pants. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Time flying, Jevon became a Harvard freshman, eager to see Miss Louisa. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
状语
定语
名词性
从句
倒装
虚拟
强调
特殊句
to do
done
doing
非谓语
百日菊zinnias
高级句型
___ _made Louisa surprised and satisfied was Jevon’s changes.
(1) Adverbial clause 状语从句
(2) Attributive clause 定语从句
(3) Noun clause 名词性从句
What
Louisa felt surprised and satisfied_____ she noticed
Jevon’s changes.
Louisa noticed Jevon’s changes.
She felt surprised and satisfied.
when
1. Clauses 从句
Louisa noticed Jevon’s changes, _____ made she surprised and satisfied.
which
emotions + reactions
Step2 Presentation
Relatives 关系词
①She felt surprised and satisfied when she noticed his changes.
She noticed his changes,______ (make) her surprised and
satisfied.
2. Non-finite verb 非谓语动词
(notice) his changes, she felt surprised and satisfied.
②She noticed his changes, which made her surprised and
satisfied.
(1) Non-finite verb Attributive /adverbial Clauses
emotions + reactions
Noticing
making
n
2. Non-finite verb 非谓语动词
(2) with 复合结构
(3)独立主格结构
高三（1）班李鑫怡
S
V
O
S
V
O
S
be fixed on
With＋sth＋doing sth, Sb do sth.
With＋sth＋done sth, Sb do sth.
Sth＋doing sth, Sb do sth.
Sth＋done sth, Sb do sth.
O
With
高三（1）班朱瑞奇
②never; not until;not... only, but...; no sooner... than 等
(1)Inverted sentence 倒装句
她是如此惊讶以至于她不敢相信她的眼睛。
① So +adj.+be +sb +that...
So surprised was she that she could not believe her eyes.
3. Special sentence patterns 特殊句型
③only+状语
emotions + reactions
topic sentence
直到这时,Louisa才意识到她小小的善举给他带来了大大的不同。
her small act of kindness made a great difference to the boy.
Only then did Louisa realize that
② Without/But for sth, sb would have done sth;
3. Special sentence patterns 特殊句型
(2) Subjunctive mood 虚拟语气
If it had not been for Louisa’s guidance and care, he would not have grown in a right track.
高三（1）班李鑫怡
Without/But for Louisa’s guidance and care, he would not have grown in a right track.
①If引导虚拟条件句
If Sb did sth, Sb would do sth.现在
If Sb had done sth, Sb would have done sth.过去
3. Special sentence patterns 特殊句型
(3) Emphatic sentence强调句：
Topic sentence
高三（4）班汪倩楠
It is / was ... that / who ...
The little match girl died on Christmas Eve.
It was on Christmas Eve that the little match girl died.
Atmosphere
好奇地问
毫不犹豫地回答
耐心地解释
兴奋地尖叫
4.Words and phrases
①笼统词 具体词
②Sb ~ +adv.
③Sb ~ +prep.+n.
④Sb~ +in a +adj. + voice/in a voice of+n.
say
explain patiently
scream excitedly
ask with curiosity
respond without hesitation
ask in a polite voice/ in a voice of politeness
礼貌地问
3. (他如此礼貌)she could hardly believe it.
2. (既开心又满足)
she accepted the bouquet.
1. (令她惊讶的是)
he brought her a bunch of zinnias.
Step3 Summary
1.Emotions
④With +n., Sb do sth.
①To one’s +n., Sb do sth.
②What +v.+ sb+ be+ that...
③adj. and adj., Sb do sth.
⑤So +adj. +be+ sb that...
To her surprise,/What surprised her was that
Joyed and Satisfied / With joy and satisfaction，
So polite was he that
4.A sense /feeling/wave of （自豪感）flooded / swept over her.
pride
⑥无灵主语
Personification拟人
2. Reactions
① Sb do sth, do sth and do sth.
②Doing sth, Sb do sth, doing sth. (主动doing/ having done)
③Done, Sb do sth, doing sth. (被动/状态)
They ______ the seeds, _______them every day and ______ for them to grow up.
the seeds, they watered them every
day, for them to grow up.
他们种下种子，每天浇水，等着他们长大。
Having planted
waiting
d
Parallelism排比
planted
watered
waited
Step3 Summary
be overwhelmed with
状态
①无灵主语
②以景衬情
3. Atmosphere
S
V
O
高三（2）班邱仔岩
Personification拟人
kindness and
warmth embarked
embark on doing 开始做
花园中弥散着香气，善良和温暖的花朵在他们心中绽放。
Step3 Summary
witness
④情感升华
4. Topic
①名言式结尾
③修辞结尾
Step3 Summary
Only then did sb realize the true meaning of +名言
②氛围结尾
From then on, Sb (never) do sth.
Only then did sb.realize that…
...floated in the air/be bathed in...“飘在空中/沉浸在”
Metaphor比喻
无灵主语
Personification拟人
as/like/as if...
Step4 Practice
Group 1:
Group 2:
Group 3: Topic sentence:
Finally, he took a bunch of zinnias to visit her. He was excited and joyed. He rushed to Louisa’s house. “Here you are. Thank you.”Jevon said. “You saved me from the dark. I cannot become a nice person today if you didn’t help me.” he said again. When Louisa saw the pretty flowers, she cannot help crying. She didn’t realize her small act should make a great difference to him.
“Madam could you please tell me how to grow a flower ” Jevon said. Louisa stared at the boy in front of her.
She realized his determination and perseverance. She was excited and satisfied. She smiled and said, “What a nice boy. Let’s learn to do it.” Later, Jevon learned how to plant a flower. He also leaned to be a nice man.
“Madam, could you please tell me how to grow a flower ” Jevon uttered in a warm tone. Staring at the innocent and adorable boy in front of her, Louisa realized his determination and perseverance. With smile of excitement and satistaction lightening up Louisa’s face, she said, “What a nice boy ! Let’s commence to learn how to do it.” After that, to Louisa’s credit, not only did Jevon learn how to plant a flower, but also learn how to be a nice man.
doing sth, Sb do sth.
With＋sth＋doing sth, Sb do sth.
not only..., but also....倒装
Excited and overjoyed, he packed a bunch of zinnas seriously and rushed towards Louisa’s house. He uttered and beamed, “Here you are, thank you for all you have done.” No sooner had Louisa spotted the pretty flowers than tears welled up in her eyes. “It was you who saved me from the dark. But for your help, I would not have been who I am today.” Only then did Louisa realize her small act of kindness made a great difference to the boy. Eminent scent lingering in the garden, the flower of kindness and friendship embarked upon blossoming in both of their hearts.
no sooner...than ...倒装
无灵主语
but for...虚拟
only then...倒装
sth＋doing sth, Sb do sth.
adj.+adj.状语
强调
1. Please polish your writing.
2. Share your writings with your classmates.
Step5 Homework
Thank you!