人教版八年级下册 Unit 1 -5 期中书面表达复习课件(共24张PPT)

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八下
期中复习课件
unit 1-unit 5
书面表达复习
本单元的话题是“健康和急救”。针对该话题，常见的考查角度是针对健康问题提出建议。体裁以记叙文、说明文为主，时态可能涉及一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时，多采用第二人称。行文中注意灵活运用表达建议的句型，避免句式单一。
话题概述
unit 1
以“健康与急救”为话题,要求学生能够描述病情并给出建议。在具体的写作中,学生应做到以下几点:
1.能够用英语描述疾病或事故发生的时间、地点和相关情况;
2.能够叙述处理问题的经过和结果;
3.能够使用should, had better等情态动词就如何保持健康提供相关的建议。
发生什么事故
什么健康问题
描述症状
提出建议和劝告
养成良好的饮食和生活习惯
单元作文
健康和急救
Let’s practice.
文
体裁
一般 时
时态
第 人称
人称
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话题
①审
应用
现在
一/三
介绍习惯及其影响，并给出建议
Joe由于长时间玩电脑游戏，现在头痛、眼睛不舒服、背疼，并且睡不好，他想要作为校医的你给一些建议。请你根据以下要点写一篇英语短文介绍一下他的情况，并给出你的建议。
要点:1.他平时有什么样的生活习惯；
2.他的不良习惯对他造成了什么影响；
3.你的建议。
要求：1. 结构完整；要点齐全，可适当发挥；
2. 词数80左右。
Find out the main structure to help you plan your writing.
引出话题
提出建议
习惯
症状
建议
愿望
Joe is a student in our school. He is used to playing… / He often sits in the same way… without moving.
Now he has a headache, a sore back …
He doesn’t sleep well at night…
I think he should… He shouldn’t… He should… and…
I think if he has a good rest, he will feel better soon.
表达愿望
Beginning
Body
Ending
Let’s draft
What sentences can we use to describe this paragraph
How to
keep healthy
1.To introduce the habits
2. To describe his problems
3. To give advice
4. To express your hope
He is used to playing…
He spends lots of time on…
He doesn’t …
He also…
He has+a/an/the+疾病
He has+a/an+部位-ache
He has+a+sore+身体部位
He feels + adj.…
He should do…/He is supposed to do…
He’d better do…
/It’s best for him to do …
It’s important for sb. to do sth.
If him...,he should...
I think if he has a good rest, he will feel better soon.
I hope my advice can help him to feel better.
How to make the passage better
习惯和病症可以用因果关系（so/because/ so…that…）的连词合为一句来描述。
多条建议可以增加连接词使文章变得更有逻辑感：
First / Moreover / What’s more / Also / Besides / In addition
One possible version.
Joe is a student in our school. He is used to playing computer games. He spends a lot of time on the computer every day. Besides, he has a headache, a sore back and sore eyes because of sitting in the same way for too long without moving. He doesn’t sleep well at night, so he feels tired every day.
Here is some advice for him. First of all, I think it’s a best way for him to take breaks away from the computer instead of sitting there in the same way for too long. Then, he can also listen to music to relax before going to sleep. What’s more, it’s important to develop a healthy hobby such as playing basketball, reading and so on.
I think if he has a good rest, he will feel better soon.
本单元主要围绕”volunteering”这个话题展开，谈论如何向
别人提供帮助。书面话题表达通常以描述某项自愿的计划或者安排”。
话题分析
unit 2
beginning
body
ending
写作分析
点明主题
描述活动
说明感受
I would like to be a volunteer.
I hope to volunteer in a Children's home.
I'll help to clean their rooms.
I'll not only give away storybook to them but also tell them stories.
I can teach children sing and dance .
I'm sure I will be a good volunteer...
Which表达想做什么样的志愿者工作
What你的兴趣爱好
Why说明你想做这份工作的原因
How他们对你工作的帮助
When你做这份工作的时间
Para 1
Para 2
Para 3
引出话题：志愿者类型；时间；地点
介绍自己能胜任的原因
表达愿望或感受
I want to be a volunteer in the.... every weekend.
(I would like to be a volunteer. I hope to volunteer at/in…)
There are several reasons.
First，I can..... I want to/will help.....
Second, I like..... so I’d like to...
Third, I am good at/am interested in/am strong in ...I hope to...
Please give me a chance and I am sure I can do the job well./I am sure I will be a good volunteer./All in all, volunteering is very meaningful. And I’m sure I am the right person you’re looking for.
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for taking your time to read my letter. My name is Li Hua and I’m a middle school student. I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer in the Olympic Game Beijing 2022.
Now I would like to introduce myself. First of all, I’m warm-hearted and always ready to help others in need. As a result, the friends around me all think highly of me. What’s more, I am strong in English. It’s not difficult for me to talk with people from foreign countries. At the same time, I am an easygoing boy and I am sure I can get on well with everyone and make more friends with the athletes.
If you could give me this chance, I promise I will do this job well. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Li Hua
引出话题
表达愿意
Salutation (称呼语)
胜任原因
Signature(署名)
1.青少年做家务的现状。
2.你对青少年做家务的看法及理由。
（可从以下几个方面来阐述：1. 做家务可以动手动脑，使人更聪明。2. 帮父母做家务可以使父母有更多的时间休息和放松。3. 通过做家务，可以学到基本的生活技能。……）
3.你平时在家是否也会帮忙做家务？做的是哪些家务？
请你就做家务谈谈自己的观点。内容包括：
作文要求：
1.不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯，注意分段，80词左右。
unit 3
这是一篇关于是否应该做家务的议论文，
根据题目提示可考虑采用下面的提纲。
做家务
引出话题
阐明原因
列举例子
I think it's necessary for us…
学会自理:We can learn self-care
保持健康:make our bodies healthy
学到东西:learn a lot of things.
For example,……
写作提纲
Personally speaking, its necessary for us to do chores at home.
In the first place,we can learn self-care by doing chores. What's more, It can make our bodies healthy and strong, isn't it At the same time, doing housework can also help us learn a lot of things. Last but not least, if we can help them ou with housework, they will feel much better
I always help my parents with housework. For example，I often wash the dishes and clothes at home .What a good way to make my parents feel relaxed.Therefore, I strongly believe that middle school students should do some housework.
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假设你是李华，请阅读笔友Mike的邮件并回复。请针对他的烦恼给出合适的建议，帮助他解决困难。词数80左右，开头和结尾已经给出。
Dear Li Hua,
Is everything going well with you I have to share a room with my little brother,and he is driving me mad! he has a habit of playing the guitar when I’m studying, and he always takes my things without asking.I try to keep my room tidy,but he doesn’t. I love my brother,but sometimes he’s making me so angry!
What should I do Would you please give me some advice
Dear Mike,
Don’t worry,I know how you feel. It is not easy to get on well with such a little brother.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________._
unit 4
Reply
Para 1
Para 2
Para 3
Dear Mike,
Don’t worry,I know how you feel. It is not easy to get on well with such a little brother.
I hope things will better for you soon..
表达关心
提出建议
表示祝愿
要点
He has a habit of playing the guitar when I’m studying.
He always takes my things without asking.
I try to keep my room tidy,but he doesn’t.
problem 1
problem 2
problem 3
You should communicate with your brother.
Why don’t you ask your parents for help.
Maybe you could teach him some simple housework.
advice 1
advice 2
advice 3
Dear Mike,
Don’t worry,I know how you feel. It is not easy to get on well with such a little brother._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
You should communicate with your brother to tell him about your feeling.He needs to find another place to practice the guitar.
Second,
First,
Why don’t you ask
your parents for help. I believe they will tell him that it is impolite to take other’s things without asking。
Third,
Your little brother is too young to keep good habits.
Maybe you could teach him some simple housework,such as sweeping the floor,making the bed and so on.
I hope things will better for you soon..
本单元的话题是“难忘的事件”，要求同学们学会描述自己或他人过去经历或发生的一件难忘的事。写作时，首先要点明事情发生的时间、地点、人物等；其次详写事情的发展过程；最后阐明令人难忘的原因或自己的感受及看法。写此类作文时，主要以一般过去时和过去进行时为主，写作时要注意正确使用时态。
话题分析
unit 5
when时间
where地点
event事件
第一段：Introduction (引入)
第二段：
details of the event
(事件的详细过程)
描述当时某事正在进行 was/were doing
做了某事，结果怎样,感受如何 did
第三段：
reasons (原因)
it tells me that...
What an unforgettable/unusual day/event!
难以忘记的/不寻常的一天/事件
The important thing that I will never forget is that…
An important event that I remember well was…
It happened in/on…
When…, I was…
While I was doing…, … was/were doing…
He / She was… when…
It was an unforgettable day.
I will never forget… because…
The event has meaning to me because…
开头句
中间句
结尾句
句型荟萃
An Unforgettable Thing
An unforgettable thing that I remember well was the Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics. It started on February, 4th. The Games ran from Feb. 4 to Feb. 20 as Beijing becomes the first city to host both the Summer and Winter Olympics. This was an important event in Chinese history.
When I heard the news of this event, I was having dinner with my parents. We finished the dinner quickly and watched the opening ceremony together. My friends were doing their homework at that time. And then all of them watched the opening.
It was really exciting to watch such an wonderful show. I will never forget this event. I’m so proud of my country!
Event
Time
Place
Activities
Reasons