押北京卷第44题
应用文写作
年份 体裁 主题
2023年 建议信 策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动
2022年 邀请信 做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流
2021年 道歉信 原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约
1.2021-2023年高考英语试题中，书面表达题依然是应用文写作，分值也从之前的15分提升至20分。
2.应用文写作在体裁上虽然以书信和邮件为主，但不会局限在某种单一的信件形式，而是多种信件形式与语境的巧妙融合。其次，题型设置开放度逐年增大，写作语境取材于日常生活中很可能发生的真实事件，这反映了考试命题者对外语教学规律的认识不断深化。实现了“所学即所考”的命题目标，体现了运用英语的必要性。
3.写作话题的时代性特征
应用文命题在保证语境真实的基础上还需要拓宽题材范围，紧跟时代步伐，关注时事热点，可以将传统文化、前沿科学技术应用作为命题的主题，引导学生树立文化自信和提高科学素养，为教师站在立德树人的高度上实施写作教学提供了一个思路。
2023北京
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1. 活动形式；
2. 活动内容。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version：
Dear Jim,
Knowing that you are planning a club activity named “Green Beijing”, I’m writing to share some suggestions with you.
I suggest you organize a combination of online and offline events. Firstly, it’s a good idea to lead an online discussion which can cover topics such as waste reduction, recycling, and energy conservation. What’s more, offline activities can include planting trees, collecting litter, and creating urban gardens. Finally, you could invite an expert to give a talk at the end of the activity, aiming at calling on everyone to take action!
I hope my suggestions are helpful, and I’m looking forward to participating in your club activity.
Yours,
书信与邮件作为北京高考应用文写作的主要载体，在日常生活中交际性强，使用频率高。纵观高考试题的考查内容，我们可以发现，书信体的格式不是考查的主要方面，评分标准中对纯格式部分没有做重点要求，考查的内容仍然聚焦在书信的内容要点和语言质量上。书信的开头语和结束语，在不同类型的信件交流中，得体的交际表达依然至关重要。因此，学生在日常学习中很有必要积累和掌握不同类型信件的开头语和结束语的一些基本句型。
开头语一般会交代写信的背景及写信的目的，见例1-例6。
例1：I am truly sorry for （道歉信）
例2：I am writing to give you some information about （介绍信）
例3： It gives me the greatest pleasure to invite youth （邀请信）
例4：1 would like to recommend you （推荐信）
例5：I'm writing to express my most sincere appreciation to you and your family.（感谢信）
例6：I am writing to apply for .（申请信）
结束语一般要再次强调写信的目的，并表达祝愿和期待再次联系或者见面的意愿，见例7-例12。
例7：1 wishes you can accept my apologies and under-stand my situation. Best wishes to you and your family.（道歉信）
例8：I hope my introduction will be helpful. If you need more information， don't hesitate to write to me.（介绍信）
例 9：I hope that you won't decline my invitation. Looking forward to seeing you soon.（邀请信）
例10：I hope my suggestions are helpful for you. If there is more I can do to help， please let me know.（推荐信）
例11： Again thank you for.一.Please give my best regards to your mum and papa.（感谢信）
例 12：1 would be very grateful if you could offer menthe opportunity. Looking forward to your early reply.（申请信）
(2024届北京门市头沟区高三一模)
邀请信
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。国际月季节(International Rose Festival) 将于下周在北京举办。你得知你校外教Jim对花卉十分感兴趣，想邀请他一同参加。请你用英文给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 介绍国际月季节基本信息；
2. 介绍其亮点。
注意: 1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Learning you’re interested in flowers, I’m writing to invite you to attend International Rose Festival. It will be held in the Rose Valley next Friday.
This event is a celebration of beauty and culture, aiming to attract people from all over the world to appreciate beautiful roses. It starts with a grand parade and is followed by activities including rose exhibitions, cultural performances and rose cultivation workshops.
As a local student, I’m excited about the International Rose Festival. It not only offers chances to enjoy the pleasure of gardening, but also enlarges your knowledge on various kinds of roses.
I’m sure you will enjoy the festival. Would you like to come with me
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件邀请对花卉十分感兴趣的外教Jim参加下周在北京举办的国际月季节。
【详解】1.词汇积累:对……感兴趣：be interested in→have an interest in和：and→as well as机会：chance→opportunity各种各样的：various→a variety of
2.句式拓展
原句：This event is a celebration of beauty and culture, aiming to attract people from all over the world to appreciate beautiful roses.
拓展句：This event is a celebration of beauty and culture, which aims to attract people from all over the world to appreciate beautiful roses.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning you’re interested in flowers, I’m writing to invite you to attend International Rose Festival. (运用了现在分词作状语和省略that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I’m sure you will enjoy the festival. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)
邀请信2
假设你是红星中学的学生李华。你校交换生Jim对中国的非物质文化遗产非常感兴趣,这个周末在国家博物馆将举办一场非遗文化展。请你给Jim写一封电子邮件,邀请他一同前往。邮件内容包括:
1. 介绍活动;
2. 发出邀请。
注意:1. 词数100左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
提示词:国家博物馆 National Museum of China
非物质文化遗产展览 intangible cultural heritage exhibition
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Jim,
Knowing that you are very interested in China's intangible cultural heritage, I'm writing to invite you to visit an intangible cultural heritage exhibition in the National Museum of China with me.
This exhibition mainly displays some of China's intangible cultural heritage, including Chinese calligraphy, Chinese paper-cutting, Chinese seal cutting and so on, which will let you see the present situation of the precious heritage and their great significance. Visiting this exhibition can give you a deeper understanding of China's intangible cultural heritage. You must be amazed at the depth of Chinese culture.
Would you like to come I'm looking forward to meeting you at the exhibition.
Yours,
Li Hua
推荐信
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你班交换生Jim打算利用寒假在家锻炼身体,发来邮件向你咨询。请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 推荐一款应用程序和推荐理由;
2. 给出运动建议。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Jim,
Knowing that you plan to exercise at home during the winter vacation, I'm writing to recommend an app called Keep. First of all, it will provide you with courses suitable for you according to your needs. What's more, it will urge users to complete daily exercise tasks and allow users to share their exercise status.
In addition, I'd like to give you some advice on how to exercise. You can fit exercise into your busy schedule, making it a part of your daily routine. You can also do some indoor sports, such as sit-ups and push-ups. But you should be careful not to exercise too much.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
建议信
假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校国际部交换生Jim正在策划一次“中西文化交流”活动,作为好友,他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 活动形式;
2. 活动内容。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Jim,
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “cultural exchange between China and the West” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of the theme through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can ask some Chinese to showcase paper cuttings on site, and some foreign students to show Halloween costumes and styling, which will all fit into the theme.
Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
自荐信
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你在学校网站上看到国际部将举办“低碳生活方式”推广活动,正在招募活动宣传大使,请你用英语给相关负责人写一封自荐信,内容包括:
1. 说明对低碳生活的认识;
2. 介绍个人优势。
提示词:宣传大使 ambassador
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to apply to be a school ambassador for the “Low Carbon Life” activity.
In my opinion, the low carbon lifestyle, aiming to achieve carbon neutrality, can contribute to the sustainable development of our earth. I think every individual should raise the awareness of environmental protection and live a green life by saving water, electricity and sorting waste.
I think I am qualified for this position. As president of the Students' Union, I am thought highly of by my teachers and classmates for communication skills and work efficiency. Besides, I practice what I advocate, like refusing to use disposable chopsticks, which shows my better understanding of the low carbon life.
I would appreciate it if you could give me an opportunity. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
(2024届北京市东城区等5区高三下学期一模)
普通邮件1
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Chris想了解不同颜色在中国文化中的涵义。请你用英文给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.颜色及其涵义；
2.生活中的实例。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I hope you are doing great! Knowing that you are interested in the implication of colors in Chinese culture, I am writing to share my ideas with you.
In our culture, many colors hold deep symbolic meanings. For instance, red, the color of celebration and joy, symbolizes good luck and prosperity. Black, on the other hand, embodies a sense of depth and mystery, which often lends a mysterious touch.
These symbolic meanings are reflected in various aspects in our daily lives. Take black for example. In art forms like ink painting and calligraphy, black ink is used skillfully to convey a sense of harmony and balance. In traditional martial arts, black is also a sign of inner exploration.
How do colors play a role in your culture Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Chris回一封邮件，告诉他不同颜色在中国文化中的涵义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣：be interested in→take an interest in
例如：for instance→for example
各种各样的：various→all kinds of
表达：convey→express
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：For instance, red, the color of celebration and joy, symbolizes good luck and prosperity.
拓展句：For instance, red, which is the color of celebration and joy, symbolizes good luck and prosperity.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Knowing that you are interested in the implication of colors in Chinese culture, I am writing to share my ideas with you.（运用了现在分词作状语，that引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2]
Black, on the other hand, embodies a sense of depth and mystery, which often lends a mysterious touch.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）
(2024届北京市西城区高三下学期一模)
普通邮件2
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你和你校交换生Jim准备联合参加学校组织的校园文创设计大赛(Campus Cultural and Creative Design Competition), 请给Jim发邮件，内容包括：
1. 分享你的创意;
2. 询问Jim的建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
How is it going I’ve just had a “light bulb” moment for our entry in the upcoming Campus Cultural and Creative Design Competition, and I can’t wait to share it with you to get your thoughts.
How about creating a series of bookmarks On one side, we’ll have our school motto, and on the flip side, breathtaking illustrations showcase our campus throughout the four seasons. Each bookmark will capture a special moment or scene that perfectly reflects the essence of that particular season. I really think this idea not only nails the competition theme but also offers a practical yet visually stunning product that truly represents the spirit of our school.
What do you think Would love to hear your thoughts and any suggestions you might have!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Jim发邮件，介绍你参加校园文创设计大赛的创意。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛：competition→contest
……怎样：how about→what about
建议：suggestion→advice
本质：essence→nature
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Would love to hear your thoughts and any suggestions you might have!
拓展句：If you have any better thoughts or suggestions, don’t hesitate to contact me.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Each bookmark will capture a special moment or scene that perfectly reflects the essence of that particular season. (运用了that引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] I really think this idea not only nails the competition theme but also offers a practical yet visually stunning product that truly represents the spirit of our school. (运用了not only…but also…句型)
普通邮件3
假设你是红星中学高三(1)班班长李华。近期你班计划开展“信息安全教育”的主题班会,请你给你班交换生Jim写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 班会目的及活动安排;
2. 请他参加并在会后发表感想。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词语:information security
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Jim,
How are you doing Our class is going to hold a class meeting recently, whose theme is “Information Security Education”. I'm writing to share some details with you and invite you to take part in it.
With the increasing popularity of the Internet, the security of it is becoming more and more important, especially for us students. Raising the awareness of information security and learning how to use the Internet safely are the purpose of our class meeting, which will be held at 2:00 pm this Friday in our classroom. To begin with, we'll be provided with some videos to learn about what security problems and threats are and how they do harm to us. In addition, the teacher will instruct us what measures we can take to protect our information security. Last but not least, all the students and teachers involved in the meeting can communicate with each other about their own thoughts. We would appreciate it very much if you can join in the meeting and express your idea after it.
Looking forward to your participation.
Yours,
Li Hua押北京卷第44题
应用文写作
年份 体裁 主题
2023年 建议信 策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动
2022年 邀请信 做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流
2021年 道歉信 原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约
1.2021-2023年高考英语试题中，书面表达题依然是应用文写作，分值也从之前的15分提升至20分。
2.应用文写作在体裁上虽然以书信和邮件为主，但不会局限在某种单一的信件形式，而是多种信件形式与语境的巧妙融合。其次，题型设置开放度逐年增大，写作语境取材于日常生活中很可能发生的真实事件，这反映了考试命题者对外语教学规律的认识不断深化。实现了“所学即所考”的命题目标，体现了运用英语的必要性。
3.写作话题的时代性特征
应用文命题在保证语境真实的基础上还需要拓宽题材范围，紧跟时代步伐，关注时事热点，可以将传统文化、前沿科学技术应用作为命题的主题，引导学生树立文化自信和提高科学素养，为教师站在立德树人的高度上实施写作教学提供了一个思路。
2023北京
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1. 活动形式；
2. 活动内容。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version：
Dear Jim,
Knowing that you are planning a club activity named “Green Beijing”, I’m writing to share some suggestions with you.
I suggest you organize a combination of online and offline events. Firstly, it’s a good idea to lead an online discussion which can cover topics such as waste reduction, recycling, and energy conservation. What’s more, offline activities can include planting trees, collecting litter, and creating urban gardens. Finally, you could invite an expert to give a talk at the end of the activity, aiming at calling on everyone to take action!
I hope my suggestions are helpful, and I’m looking forward to participating in your club activity.
Yours,
书信与邮件作为北京高考应用文写作的主要载体，在日常生活中交际性强，使用频率高。纵观高考试题的考查内容，我们可以发现，书信体的格式不是考查的主要方面，评分标准中对纯格式部分没有做重点要求，考查的内容仍然聚焦在书信的内容要点和语言质量上。书信的开头语和结束语，在不同类型的信件交流中，得体的交际表达依然至关重要。因此，学生在日常学习中很有必要积累和掌握不同类型信件的开头语和结束语的一些基本句型。
开头语一般会交代写信的背景及写信的目的，见例1-例6。
例1：I am truly sorry for （道歉信）
例2：I am writing to give you some information about （介绍信）
例3： It gives me the greatest pleasure to invite youth （邀请信）
例4：1 would like to recommend you （推荐信）
例5：I'm writing to express my most sincere appreciation to you and your family.（感谢信）
例6：I am writing to apply for .（申请信）
结束语一般要再次强调写信的目的，并表达祝愿和期待再次联系或者见面的意愿，见例7-例12。
例7：1 wishes you can accept my apologies and under-stand my situation. Best wishes to you and your family.（道歉信）
例8：I hope my introduction will be helpful. If you need more information， don't hesitate to write to me.（介绍信）
例 9：I hope that you won't decline my invitation. Looking forward to seeing you soon.（邀请信）
例10：I hope my suggestions are helpful for you. If there is more I can do to help， please let me know.（推荐信）
例11： Again thank you for.一.Please give my best regards to your mum and papa.（感谢信）
例 12：1 would be very grateful if you could offer menthe opportunity. Looking forward to your early reply.（申请信）
(2024届北京门市头沟区高三一模)
邀请信
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。国际月季节(International Rose Festival) 将于下周在北京举办。你得知你校外教Jim对花卉十分感兴趣，想邀请他一同参加。请你用英文给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 介绍国际月季节基本信息；
2. 介绍其亮点。
注意: 1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
邀请信2
假设你是红星中学的学生李华。你校交换生Jim对中国的非物质文化遗产非常感兴趣,这个周末在国家博物馆将举办一场非遗文化展。请你给Jim写一封电子邮件,邀请他一同前往。邮件内容包括:
1. 介绍活动;
2. 发出邀请。
注意:1. 词数100左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
提示词:国家博物馆 National Museum of China
非物质文化遗产展览 intangible cultural heritage exhibition
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
推荐信
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你班交换生Jim打算利用寒假在家锻炼身体,发来邮件向你咨询。请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 推荐一款应用程序和推荐理由;
2. 给出运动建议。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
建议信
假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校国际部交换生Jim正在策划一次“中西文化交流”活动,作为好友,他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 活动形式;
2. 活动内容。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
自荐信
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你在学校网站上看到国际部将举办“低碳生活方式”推广活动,正在招募活动宣传大使,请你用英语给相关负责人写一封自荐信,内容包括:
1. 说明对低碳生活的认识;
2. 介绍个人优势。
提示词:宣传大使 ambassador
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Yours,
Li Hua
(2024届北京市东城区等5区高三下学期一模)
普通邮件1
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Chris想了解不同颜色在中国文化中的涵义。请你用英文给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.颜色及其涵义；
2.生活中的实例。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
Yours,
Li Hua
普通邮件2
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你和你校交换生Jim准备联合参加学校组织的校园文创设计大赛(Campus Cultural and Creative Design Competition), 请给Jim发邮件，内容包括：
1. 分享你的创意;
2. 询问Jim的建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
普通邮件3
假设你是红星中学高三(1)班班长李华。近期你班计划开展“信息安全教育”的主题班会,请你给你班交换生Jim写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 班会目的及活动安排;
2. 请他参加并在会后发表感想。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词语:information security
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
